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Post by Deleted on Jun 6, 2018 20:45:16 GMT -5
It's widely known that Omen of The Stars has many problems. What would you change about it?
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#a3c5e6
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𝓣𝓲𝓷𝓾𝓿𝓲𝓮𝓵
Warrior Fanatic
All hail me, the flower-flushing queen of Prague
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Post by 𝓣𝓲𝓷𝓾𝓿𝓲𝓮𝓵 on Jun 6, 2018 20:50:10 GMT -5
Everything.
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Post by wolfcry32 on Jun 7, 2018 6:03:45 GMT -5
85% of it.
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Post by Showers on Jun 7, 2018 10:15:06 GMT -5
It shouldn't exist, nothing important happens until the very last book.
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Sailor
My avatar is from the internet (currently seeking another one).
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Post by Sailor on Jun 7, 2018 17:05:12 GMT -5
If I were to rewrite OOTS I would: - Give Hollyleaf’s return more foreshadowing - have a lot more cats train in the dark Forest and give them actual reasons - give Ivypool and Dovewing’s relationship more dynamic and development - same with Dovewing and Bumblestripe and Dovewing’s and Tigerheart - wait until Dovewing is a warrior to go on the water quest - make the tree falling have much more of an effect on the clan - possible have stories told about Sol and so when they meet him they’re scared but he proves I’m self by “saving” mole and cherry. And then have them find out sol didn’t save them and then they find Hollyleaf - throw out the Cinderheart/pelt thing Just some ideas
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Post by ivypool92287 on Jun 9, 2018 2:48:18 GMT -5
I think there should be some chapters from the PoV of the evil cats (Tigerstar, Brokenstar?). And Ivypool should be a bit more evil and turns against the DF only in the middle of the battle. Also, WHAT HAPPENED TO FIRESTAR!!???
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