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Post by 𝖘𝖆𝖚𝖈𝖎 𝖘𝖕𝖆𝖌𝖍𝖊𝖙𝖙𝖎 on Mar 27, 2018 19:34:49 GMT -5
~Who wants to help me write a story? Will fill in plot/details if anyone agrees.~ WILL PAY FM
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Hawkbreath of WindClan
Hawkbreath of WindClan from WCF. I have a PlayStation now! Feel free to add me, ScarletComanche
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Post by Hawkbreath of WindClan on Mar 27, 2018 20:37:53 GMT -5
A story about what? I might me interested.
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Post by 𝖘𝖆𝖚𝖈𝖎 𝖘𝖕𝖆𝖌𝖍𝖊𝖙𝖙𝖎 on Mar 28, 2018 10:56:38 GMT -5
I seem to see you a lot around forums haha
So... it would be a warriors fan novel. I originally named it The Forgotten Warrior but then Omen Of The Stars came out and I was like damn.
It's about a cat name Mistyrose. She was born a rogue in the name Mist. Her father is Sol (Yes the real Sol) and her mother was originally a BloodClan cat but then I realized it was too much of a time difference so her mom was a cat name Gold who went into the clan with Mist and got her warrior name Goldstrike. Mist had a brother named Blaze (Later Blazefire/star).
Mist never knew her father so she always was kinda sad about that. One day Sol traveled into the woods and met his daughter. He had later received a prophecy that he would meet her one day but she instantly attempted to drive him of their territory. It worked, though. Later he came back and asked to see the clan leader. He requested to take his kits away from FrostClan, and he didn't say how long. Lionstar, being the nice leader she was, agreed and sent them off.
Snowshimmer was a best friend of Mistyrose's, even though Snowshimmer was clan-born. She was almost perfect in every way, having the tom fawn over her and the she-cats cling to her words. Yet, she still befriended Mistyrose.
The story switches from Mistyrose's, Snowshimmer's, Redpaw's (Which you'll find out about later if I get more in depth), and Sol's (But not that much).
Okay, then Mist decides to become evil but the clan cats don't know that she's forced. The rogues (and there's a lot let me just say that haha) charge into battle with the FrostClan cats. To make this clear, the rogues want the territory for their group.
That's all I got. If you have any questions just ask. I will pay $20-100 per page, depending on what your thinking. Also, now I have some questions for you:
~What do you consider to be your literacy? ~What grade are you in (If you're comfortable answering) ~In roleplays, how many paragraphs do you typically write?
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Post by tigercry on Mar 28, 2018 11:35:42 GMT -5
I'm interested Light! I can give you examples of my writing if you'd like so you can preview it and all that! I've written Warriors Fanfictions before and am currently writing a book to be published!
Answers To The Given Questions
1. I scored around a 1500 out of 1600 on the PSAT (A practice test for the SAT) so pretty literate 2. I'm a junior in an academically advanced high school 3. They vary, but on average 2 to 3 with three to four lines average while if I'm really feeling the inspiration then I can write up to 6 paragraphs 4 - 8 lines each for the rps Between the collar camera disguised as a button of Ciliana’s collar, the overridden security cameras, speaker system, and even the guests’ cellphones, Hiaka could see everything.
“Mhmm,” Ciliana responded in a hum before she smiled at the young man acting as a waiter and took one of the glasses. “Thank you,” She thanked him and her sunset-colored eyes, which covered by baby blue contacts and rimmed by dark blue nearly black prescription glasses, gleamed inwardly with mirth as the young man smiled and hurried away. Ah what it’s like to be young and free, let loose to find your place in the world. That’s something I will never know. She lightly chuckled to herself, At least I didn’t have to go through three years of high school and any college, I skipped that hurtle and I never intend to go back to it. For an assassin of her reputation, it surprised most people, those who actually knew who she was anyway, that she had a very basic education yet could pull off acting highly versed in education without having experienced almost any of it herself. Ciliana brought the glass up toward her collar, hesitating there for half a second to let Briley’s specialized camera decode the chemical makeup of the liquid inside before pretending to take a sip yet drinking none.
“No poison,” Jayson’s lower and rather rough voice crackled through her ear as the camera broke the drink down via an image. “But be careful anyway. It looks like high-quality stuff and the camera detected traces of a high alcohol level liquid other than the champagne itself. It’ll make you at least tipsy if not inebriated if you’re not careful Ciliana.” I also have a collection of short stories on line (although start from the newest ones to judge my writing) that I can upload a link to if you want to see those!
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Post by 𝖘𝖆𝖚𝖈𝖎 𝖘𝖕𝖆𝖌𝖍𝖊𝖙𝖙𝖎 on Mar 28, 2018 11:43:50 GMT -5
I love your writing style! I'll give you a try, eh?
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Post by tigercry on Mar 28, 2018 11:57:16 GMT -5
Thanks! I've been told I have an unusual writing style
Alrighty! When and where do you want me to start? And do you have a place already set up for it's going to be written? I'm ready to start whenever, although I will disappear in about three hours for a bit, gotta do some stuff with my parents
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Post by 𝖘𝖆𝖚𝖈𝖎 𝖘𝖕𝖆𝖌𝖍𝖊𝖙𝖙𝖎 on Mar 28, 2018 12:00:13 GMT -5
Haha, I'll disappear for about three hours, too. I wrote this prologue when I was 13, try not to cringe:
"A pure white cat looked over the side of the looming cliff, hidden by shadows. His pure blue eyes shone as he peered down upon the sleeping FrostClan. A mouse stirred nearby, but the stargazing warrior ignored the juicy prey. Another cat emerged from the fog. His sleek-furred pelt caught the gaze of the moon as if StarClan themselves were staring down at these two cats. “Spike,” The calico began, his voice like water trickling down a mountainside, “FrostClan is here.” Spike turned to face the skinny cat, the white cat’s eyes giving away nothing. He sat down, back to the humongous drop of the cliff. “Yes, Sol, everything is ready,” Spike purred. Sol stepped forward and placed his muzzle on top of Spike’s. “When Mist finds me, the prophecy will be complete,” Sol murmured, untamed determination flashing in his eyes."
Can you edit this, maybe even make an entire different prologue, just the same idea?
That would be great while I'm gone haha.
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Post by tigercry on Mar 28, 2018 12:12:53 GMT -5
Totally! (Getting lazy with my fancy text crap ) Should I make a new thread on the Writing part of the forum? And can you give me a basic description of what happens in the prologue? This way I can make sure I follow exactly what you want
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Post by 𝖘𝖆𝖚𝖈𝖎 𝖘𝖕𝖆𝖌𝖍𝖊𝖙𝖙𝖎 on Mar 29, 2018 9:44:24 GMT -5
Alrighty~ Here you go: There's a cat named spike (Pure white fur and two scars on his left shoulder. Icy blue eyes). He's standing on a cliff looking down on FrostClan. I guess probably don't mention that it's FrostClan until it's explained by either of the cats. I guess you should add some landscape description. It's basically in the mountains and the camp is nestled in between two giant pines. It's also very windy so you could have. "The wind buffeted the pure white cat's fur" but probably better than that haha. Then Sol steps out. You should probably know what Sol looks like, and take a minute to describe him. Then have him speak with Spike. You can switch up the dialogue but the main idea is in the OLD example I showed you. I kinda want to leave some of this up to you, though. A new thread would be fine . Also, I do think that you should make this stinkin' prologue longer because it's honestly so short haha. Also, if you're wondering, I am going to write. I'm going to write the next chapter (So if you didn't already guess we switch off.)
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Post by tigercry on Mar 29, 2018 9:55:48 GMT -5
This all sounds good to me, let me write the prologue really quick! Btw, the prologue is usually only one page, so it's supposed to be shorter than the average chapter Oh, and do you want me to design a cover? I'm thinking of a frozen background with Mistyrose somewhere likely hunting something.
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Post by 𝖘𝖆𝖚𝖈𝖎 𝖘𝖕𝖆𝖌𝖍𝖊𝖙𝖙𝖎 on Mar 29, 2018 9:57:28 GMT -5
Ooh. And we still need to think of a name because the Forgotten Warrior is taken.
THEY STOLE IT
I HAD IT BEFORE THEM.
THE ERINS LIE.
I actually really like that idea. Maybe we could call it A New Era.
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Post by tigercry on Mar 29, 2018 10:02:58 GMT -5
is Spike a starclan cat? Or is he a normal cat? I had the impression that he was a member of StarClan but I wanted to make sure
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Post by 𝖘𝖆𝖚𝖈𝖎 𝖘𝖕𝖆𝖌𝖍𝖊𝖙𝖙𝖎 on Mar 29, 2018 10:10:38 GMT -5
Oh my god. He originally wasn't but maybe he could be and have some connection with Sol. I also kinda want to make him a dark forest cat because that would be so cool to draw omg. Whatever you want
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Post by tigercry on Mar 29, 2018 10:12:31 GMT -5
Ooh. And we still need to think of a name because the Forgotten Warrior is taken. THEY STOLE IT
I HAD IT BEFORE THEM.
THE ERINS LIE.I actually really like that idea. Maybe we could call it A New Era. hmm... what if the series is called A New Era, and the book's title is something like... the Whispering Frost a Frost Covered Mist Darkness From Within A Force (Shorter titles tend to be more eye catching) the Evil Within Sudden Chaos
Just some ideas ^_^ The warrior related books I'm currently writing (I'm rewriting the Power of Three and Omen of Stars arcs) are called An Apprentice's Keen (The Sight) The Beginning (Dark River) and Prophecy's Reveal (the Fourth Apprentice)
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Post by tigercry on Mar 29, 2018 10:14:57 GMT -5
Oh my god. He originally wasn't but maybe he could be and have some connection with Sol. I also kinda want to make him a dark forest cat because that would be so cool to draw omg. Whatever you want Ooh, now I have an idea! Okay, what if he's caught between them? A cat that strays between the Dark Forest and StarClan? That would be really cool! 𝖘𝖆𝖚𝖈𝖎 𝖘𝖕𝖆𝖌𝖍𝖊𝖙𝖙𝖎
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Post by 𝖘𝖆𝖚𝖈𝖎 𝖘𝖕𝖆𝖌𝖍𝖊𝖙𝖙𝖎 on Mar 29, 2018 10:17:29 GMT -5
Or we could make this sorta like a super edition. Like... Mistyrose's Fear. Mistyrose's Betrayal, Mistyrose's Heart, Mistyrose's Storm, e.c.t.
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Post by 𝖘𝖆𝖚𝖈𝖎 𝖘𝖕𝖆𝖌𝖍𝖊𝖙𝖙𝖎 on Mar 29, 2018 10:18:31 GMT -5
Oh my god. He originally wasn't but maybe he could be and have some connection with Sol. I also kinda want to make him a dark forest cat because that would be so cool to draw omg. Whatever you want Ooh, now I have an idea! Okay, what if he's caught between them? A cat that strays between the Dark Forest and StarClan? That would be really cool! 𝖘𝖆𝖚𝖈𝖎 𝖘𝖕𝖆𝖌𝖍𝖊𝖙𝖙𝖎 AHHHHH. Sometimes other people have the best ideas. Yes we must do this now haha
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Post by tigercry on Mar 29, 2018 10:32:16 GMT -5
I like the Mistyrose's Storm one, it gives off a fitting aura for the book ^_^ I'm writing the prologue right now, but I'm also in math class now for about an hour and a half so I'm probably going to be really busy for that amount of time.
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Post by 𝖘𝖆𝖚𝖈𝖎 𝖘𝖕𝖆𝖌𝖍𝖊𝖙𝖙𝖎 on Mar 29, 2018 10:37:55 GMT -5
That's fine.
(You're in math class? It's 7:00 AM here and it's spring break)
I think that was my favorite along with Mistyrose's Fear. I also came up with Snowshimmer's Heartbreak?
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Post by 𝖘𝖆𝖚𝖈𝖎 𝖘𝖕𝖆𝖌𝖍𝖊𝖙𝖙𝖎 on Mar 29, 2018 11:48:14 GMT -5
Making art because why not:
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Post by tigercry on Mar 29, 2018 11:54:04 GMT -5
(Lucky! It's about 10:50 AM over here and my spring break is in three days, friday and the weekend ) Hmm.. I still like Mistyrose's Storm better, it sounds like Mistyrose is the main character and she has a lot of stuff going on inside the book. It also adds a sense of foreboding like there's something major and unexpected going to happen
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Post by 𝖘𝖆𝖚𝖈𝖎 𝖘𝖕𝖆𝖌𝖍𝖊𝖙𝖙𝖎 on Mar 29, 2018 11:58:42 GMT -5
Yeah. I might save some of those for another book hehe. Did you get any start on the prologue?
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Post by tigercry on Mar 29, 2018 12:11:43 GMT -5
Making art because why not: I can't see it
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Post by tigercry on Mar 29, 2018 12:13:16 GMT -5
Yeah. I might save some of those for another book hehe. Did you get any start on the prologue? Yes, I started it and will be finishing it right now since I have a half an hour of free time for lunch and psychology which is just notes so I can do the prologue at the same time
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Post by tigercry on Mar 29, 2018 12:17:53 GMT -5
Bushes rustled softly in the growing wind which flowed over the thick pelt of a white tom who's form glittered with the light and wisdom of the stars itself. White starlit mist wound around him and into the sky from around the right paws of the white cat's body, the mist gently faded the higher it went, turning into faint glittering stars before it was swallowed by the dark indigo sky.
(This is what I have so far, I didn't have enough time with math to do much more )
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Post by 𝖘𝖆𝖚𝖈𝖎 𝖘𝖕𝖆𝖌𝖍𝖊𝖙𝖙𝖎 on Mar 29, 2018 12:32:02 GMT -5
I like that a lot! Sorry, I poofed.
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Post by tigercry on Mar 29, 2018 12:34:38 GMT -5
don't worry, I'm not worried about it I'll be changing the font to Times New Roman and size 12 because that's the professional font type and size for a story, but I'm still working on it
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Post by 𝖘𝖆𝖚𝖈𝖎 𝖘𝖕𝖆𝖌𝖍𝖊𝖙𝖙𝖎 on Mar 29, 2018 12:37:41 GMT -5
Okay, mind if I put in some pointers?
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Post by 𝖘𝖆𝖚𝖈𝖎 𝖘𝖕𝖆𝖌𝖍𝖊𝖙𝖙𝖎 on Mar 29, 2018 12:41:44 GMT -5
I honestly just want to say this is kinda a run on sentence. Maybe you could just make this into two sentences. Like, "Bushes rustled softly in the growing wind which flowed over the thick pelt of a white tom. His form glittered with the light and wisdom of the star itself." I think this is fine
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Post by tigercry on Mar 29, 2018 12:47:02 GMT -5
true, the first one is a run on sentence which I can fix, but keep in mind that I haven't proofread this yet so there will be errors If you know so much about writing how come you wanted help writing this? I'm just curious, please don't take offense
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