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Post by πβππ π£π on Dec 23, 2017 1:03:46 GMT -5
OOC go for it, Iβm fairly frazzled right now, so things probably wonβt be all that accurate as far as grammar goes.
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Post by Silverfall on Dec 23, 2017 1:06:40 GMT -5
Ok, sounds good. I may or may not be able to finish all coding tonight and read over the entire thing, but I should be able to get everything in a rough draft state and then tomorrow I'd like both of us to read through the entire thing for errors, but we should be able to post it tomorrow with or without a banner.
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Post by Silverfall on Dec 23, 2017 1:11:24 GMT -5
Just reposting everything in one post so I won't be going crazy looking for every thing.
Dotty is 25, Cas is 26. Double check ages are added to joining form section. A < B (A likes B ) A >< B (A and B like each other) A + B (A and B are together) A + B = C (A and B are married, and C is their child.) Then for friends and family, we can just be like: A is Bβs cousin. A and B are friends. A and B are enemies.
Intro
The Justice Leauge.
Guardians of this world, keepers of peace.
Heroes.
They were a beacon of hope to everyone, and believe me when I say that Earth needed them. With so many crazed super villains and a surprising amount of aliens attacks, the world needed the Justice Leauge, and we had them, for years. They became a stable in our world. They even had their own merchandise. The Justice Leauge became such an integrated part of our world, that we could hardly imagine what we did without them.
Then we didnβt have to imagine, because they were gone.
It happene in a fight, they were attacking a ship of alien invaders and then poof, in a burst of light, they were gone. Gone, without a trace, without a clue as to what happened to them. They were just...gone.
That, was two years ago, and now, our world is left without the Justice Leauge, without keepers of peace and guardians of Earth, our world is left without heroes. Perhaps we shouldnβt have gotten so used to our cozy, protected life with the Justice Leauge watching over us, maybe we should have been more alert. Because no hero will stand forever.
And when heroes fall, the world falls with it, and weβre left powerless.
Or are we?
Maybe itβs time for new heroes to step up, to be a new beacon of light and hope for the world. For when the old will fall, new heroes will rise.
Thats why weβre here. Iβm Gadget, and Iβm one of a few new heroes that have been popping up all around the world. We might not be the Justice Leauge, and I may not actually know any of them personally...But I know that theyβre heroes, we all are, and maybe its time for a new Justice Leauge, and with the help of my cousin, weβre going to make that possible. The only question now is...
Are you up for the task?
About
Hello there everyone, and welcome to: When Heroes Rise. Basically, this is a role-play set in the DC comic world, where the Justice League has vanished, and after two years, a group of new heroes arise, and unite together to form their own makeshift Justice League, it starts out as just a way to protect the world, but what really unites them, is when the Dominators come back, this time, working with a new, dangerous ally, and this new Justice League will really have to step up, work together, and find a way to beat the Dominators. There will be no canon characters in this role-play, only Original characters, but mentioning canon characters is obviously, welcomed, as itβs impossible not to mention some of them.
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Post by πβππ π£π on Dec 23, 2017 1:24:57 GMT -5
OOC What about this, for a banner? I used a picture of the metropolis city from the actual comics.
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Post by Silverfall on Dec 23, 2017 1:30:04 GMT -5
It just depends on the vibe you're going for(pun not intended.) If you're going for a more artsy/less serious vibe, then I think that's perfect.
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Post by πβππ π£π on Dec 23, 2017 1:33:35 GMT -5
OOC I also have this version.
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Post by πβππ π£π on Dec 23, 2017 1:34:52 GMT -5
OOC And this one:
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Post by Silverfall on Dec 23, 2017 1:35:53 GMT -5
I like the second one better.
I think the layout is pretty much done, I just have to do the power section.
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Post by πβππ π£π on Dec 23, 2017 1:36:44 GMT -5
OOC The one without the blue and yellow background? That one is a bit more simple.
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Post by πβππ π£π on Dec 23, 2017 1:37:29 GMT -5
OOC Here, you just pick which one you like best and add that one in, because I like them all.
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Post by Silverfall on Dec 23, 2017 1:38:52 GMT -5
You don't have a preference between two?
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Post by πβππ π£π on Dec 23, 2017 1:39:22 GMT -5
OOC Nah, I like both. You pick.
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Post by Silverfall on Dec 23, 2017 1:42:03 GMT -5
Ok. Mind taking a look over the layout, and looking for any glaring errors over the entire thing, besides the power section?
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Post by πβππ π£π on Dec 23, 2017 1:44:48 GMT -5
OOC Yeah, sure, lay it on me.
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Post by Silverfall on Dec 23, 2017 1:46:07 GMT -5
It's all on the lower part of the 5th page.
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Post by Silverfall on Dec 23, 2017 1:47:27 GMT -5
Carp... I need to change everything to when heroes rise..
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Post by Silverfall on Dec 23, 2017 1:50:28 GMT -5
Do you like the banner in the black or in the white?
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Post by Silverfall on Dec 23, 2017 1:51:03 GMT -5
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Joining Please copy and paste the form exactly as formatted. It may be easier to quote the post and then copy the form.
First and last name and then personality, description, and history, {though history is optional} in paragraph format. Then in a separate paragraph please describe your character in hero/villain mode. ||&amp;nbsp;Other || What side you are on? Yellow for villians and Blue for Hero and white for Neutral/Civilian || Alias || Screen name
~When Heroes Fall~-
Introduction
First and last name and then personality, description, and history, {though history is optional} in paragraph format. Then in a separate paragraph please describe your character in hero/villain mode. ||&amp;nbsp;Other || What side you are on? Yellow for Hero and white for Neutral/Civilian || Alias || Screen named then personality, description, and history, {though history is optional} in paragraph format. Then in a separate paragraph please describe your character in hero/villain mode. ||&amp;nbsp;Other || What side you are on? Yellow for villians andfor Hero and white for Neutral/Civilian || Alias || Screen name dsfjsdlfjslfjsldjkf dof dfsdjfwoeifj wodndjar0hgoerhywdncskbvorihw As astra per aspera d then personality, description, and history, {though history is optional} in paragraph format. Then in a separate paragraph please describe your character in hero/villain mode. ||&amp;nbsp;Other || What side you are on? Yellow for villians andfor Hero and white for Neutral/Civilian || Alias || Screen name dsfjsdlfjslfjsldjkf dof dfsdjfwoeifj wodndjar0hgoerhywdncskbvorihw As astra per aspera
About
First and last name and then personality, description, and history, {though history is optional} in paragraph format. Then in a separate paragraph please describe your character in hero/villain mode. ||&amp;nbsp;Other || What side you are on? Yellow for villians andfor Hero and white for Neutral/Civilian || Alias || Screen name dsfjsdlfjslfjsldjkf dof dfsdjfwoeifj wodndjar0hgoerhywdncskbvorihw As astra per aspera d then personality, description, and history, {though history is optional} in paragraph format. Then in a separate paragraph please describe your character in hero/villain mode. ||&amp;nbsp;Other || What side you are on? Yellow for villians andfor Hero and white for Neutral/Civilian || Alias || Screen name dsfjsdlfjslfjsldjkf dof dfsdjfwoeifj wodndjar0hgoerhywdncskbvorihw As astra per aspera d then personality, description, and history, {though history is optional} in paragraph format. Then in a separate paragraph please describe your character in hero/villain mode. ||&amp;nbsp;Other || What side you are on? Yellow for villians andfor Hero and white for Neutral/Civilian || Alias || Screen name dsfjsdlfjslfjsldjkf dof dfsdjfwoeifj wodndjar0hgoerhywdncskbvorihw As astra per aspera
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Post by πβππ π£π on Dec 23, 2017 2:26:51 GMT -5
OOC Sorry for poofing!
Anyways, it all looks great, all Iβd suggest is making the spaces in the introduction, smaller so itβs easier to read.
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Post by πβππ π£π on Dec 23, 2017 2:27:30 GMT -5
OOC Also, I personally really like it in the black, because it kind of fades away and looks really cool, although with the white you get to see more of the black smoke stuff and thatβs cool too...idk, you decide.
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Post by πβππ π£π on Dec 23, 2017 2:33:40 GMT -5
OOC Ah, never mind, you fixed that.
It all looks great, and once we write up the main plot going on, get the powers section up and running, and add in the main villain, Iβd say weβll be good to go.
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Post by πβππ π£π on Dec 23, 2017 2:37:09 GMT -5
OOC Alright, Iβm tired and am gonna crash now. Night Silver!
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Post by Silverfall on Dec 23, 2017 3:09:39 GMT -5
Yea, I'll look it over tomorrow and I think we can open it tomorrow. Night.
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Post by πβππ π£π on Dec 23, 2017 12:32:34 GMT -5
OOC Morning!
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Post by Silverfall on Dec 23, 2017 13:58:52 GMT -5
Morning.
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Post by πβππ π£π on Dec 23, 2017 14:20:18 GMT -5
OOC Hi Silver!
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Post by Silverfall on Dec 23, 2017 14:39:45 GMT -5
Hi there.
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Post by Silverfall on Dec 23, 2017 16:02:58 GMT -5
Here what do you think about this for the power section.
Powers. Since this will be for the most part a small group rp, we ask that you come up with different powers for your characters. Meaning for the most part, you shouldn't have the exact same set of powers for your character as a fellow role-player's. The only exceptions are super strength.
Majors powers that have been taken
Super speed Technopath
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Post by πβππ π£π on Dec 23, 2017 23:12:30 GMT -5
OOC That sounds great!
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Post by Silverfall on Dec 23, 2017 23:23:30 GMT -5
Ok. I'll just have to code it real quickand then are we ready to post this this?
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