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Post by Toothless on Oct 22, 2017 19:59:36 GMT -5
I also like the third image. It seems like it fits your intentions well, but the second image above it could work as well. Either way, they are all pretty. Those sound pretty interesting, but there is one part in the kit part that confuses me. What are they being accepted for? Like if they are worthy enough for clan life?
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Post by ♡ Bun ♡ on Oct 22, 2017 20:40:45 GMT -5
>> Ooc << Its more of being blessed than accepted, if they dont have the gods blessing basically they are fit for clan life but we can always make it to where every kit is accepted except for the people who would like to have one of there kits casted out >> RP << Credit goes to Wildcard for the cloud
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Post by ♡ Bun ♡ on Oct 22, 2017 20:42:07 GMT -5
>> Ooc << Or if there not accepted it could be a bad omen like the ying and yang kits >> RP << Credit goes to Wildcard for the cloud
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Post by GayDragon on Oct 22, 2017 23:47:53 GMT -5
Hmmm I thought her eyecolor in the third picture was a bit too dark. I can always photoshop it of course, because it is a good picture I think.
but yeah those customs sound really cool. What if instead of being cast out, they're given a different rank, like lower than warrior? Also would the kits know they're going to be cast out, or would they just find out on the day that would have been their warrior ceremony or something?
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Post by ♡ Bun ♡ on Oct 23, 2017 1:21:19 GMT -5
>> Ooc << They would have prepared them, but giving them a lower rank is better. >> RP << Credit goes to Wildcard for the cloud
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Post by ♡ Bun ♡ on Oct 23, 2017 1:34:57 GMT -5
>> Ooc << kinda want different titles than leader and warrior. Maybe Cheif Or overseer for leader, Subordinate for deputy, Healer Or shaman for medicine cat, Guardian for warriors, Tenderfoot or Pupil for apprentice, Empress for queen and kits and elders stay the same... star clan is known as the ancients which is the gods, the abyss for the darkforest cause it always dark there and its evil. >> RP << Credit goes to Wildcard for the cloud
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Post by GayDragon on Oct 23, 2017 2:04:12 GMT -5
Well, casting out would make for more ~drama~. Maybe if a leader chooses to keep a kit that was rejected, the kit stays but the leader has to step down and let the deputy take over?
dUUDE what if one god is good and one is evil, and the prophecy cats are reincarnations of each of the gods???
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Post by GayDragon on Oct 23, 2017 2:06:21 GMT -5
Oh also I tried photoshopping the eyes, and I decided I might as well photoshop the whole cat to look more like I wanted. It's a bit lazy cuz I'm tired, but how does this look compared to before? Does it look natural enough?
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Post by GayDragon on Oct 23, 2017 2:11:45 GMT -5
Also for the yin yang kits, the whole spiritual idea of yin and yang is kind of a balance between good and evil, and that all good has some evil and all evil has some good, if I remember correctly(if I don't please give me the death I deserve and shoot me because I'm dumb). Maybe we should incorporate that into the prophecy cats somehow? Maybe there's a redemption arc for the evil cat or something like that? Edit: Wow I posted 3 times in a row I'm sorry lmao xD Edit 2: I found a really good picture for the yin-yang cats hahaaa
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Post by ♡ Bun ♡ on Oct 23, 2017 12:37:07 GMT -5
>> Ooc <<
That god plot its a good idea we are so totally doing that >> RP << Credit goes to Wildcard for the cloud
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Post by ♡ Bun ♡ on Oct 23, 2017 12:38:26 GMT -5
>> Ooc << Well i had planned that the good cat was actually evil and the evil cat was actually good, they are just seen that way. >> RP << Credit goes to Wildcard for the cloud
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Post by GayDragon on Oct 23, 2017 14:55:30 GMT -5
Yeah, I know what you mean. Were you talking about including the part about leaders stepping down if they let a kit stay when they were rejected?
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Post by ♡ Bun ♡ on Oct 23, 2017 15:09:49 GMT -5
>> Ooc << yeah we can do that! It seem interesting enough. >> RP << Credit goes to Wildcard for the cloud
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Post by ♡ Bun ♡ on Oct 23, 2017 15:10:03 GMT -5
>> Ooc << yeah we can do that! It seem interesting enough. >> RP << Credit goes to Wildcard for the cloud
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Post by GayDragon on Oct 23, 2017 15:18:16 GMT -5
Coolio!
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Post by GayDragon on Oct 23, 2017 15:18:46 GMT -5
I also photoshopped more of the pictures of Yarrowstar lmao
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Post by ♡ Bun ♡ on Oct 23, 2017 15:23:18 GMT -5
>> Ooc << I made a map let me up load it >> RP << Credit goes to Wildcard for the cloud
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Post by ♡ Bun ♡ on Oct 23, 2017 15:27:05 GMT -5
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Post by ♡ Bun ♡ on Oct 23, 2017 15:27:49 GMT -5
>> Ooc << sorry its really bad, i was trying to just get an idea of what my territory would be like so i could edit the territory places ghostling did. >> RP << Credit goes to Wildcard for the cloud
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Post by Toothless on Oct 23, 2017 15:28:40 GMT -5
Sounds exciting! I do like the idea about the leader stepping down if they decide to keep the rejected kit. Maybe we can figure out how the ceremony goes when a kit is being blessed? It could be interesting if we did something to have the elders be more involved. Maybe they can help the medicine cat somehow when the kit is being presented like carrying them or helping get things set up. Nah I think it looks great. I can use this as a reference to figure out some better ideas for Algaeclan.
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Post by ♡ Bun ♡ on Oct 23, 2017 15:31:53 GMT -5
>> Ooc << I was thinking that Algaeclan camp is a bunch of boulders that make a tiny cave, that is not to close to the water but far enough away so the tide doesn't reach it. Gaydragon you might have a different idea... Im just trying to get this clan going as soon as possible which is why i wanted to to be simple but complex. >> RP << Credit goes to Wildcard for the cloud
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Post by ♡ Bun ♡ on Oct 23, 2017 15:35:48 GMT -5
>> Ooc << For the blessing ceremonie i was thinking that the mom and one of the divine cat (chosen cats who can talk to the gods) would go with them so the divine cat can interpret what the kits name will be and if they are accepted or not.
although we'll put in the joining form if they want their kits to be blessed or not then we can go from there. >> RP << Credit goes to Wildcard for the cloud
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Post by ♡ Bun ♡ on Oct 23, 2017 16:17:15 GMT -5
>> Ooc << Toothless would you mind doing all the writing? Im not saying like come up with everything on your own, but just writing it out? can that be your job? Cause Im trying to write the about and History and I just can't figure out how to write it out so that it sounds good. It would be a great help, Im not as creative right now.
I got the customs, intro and maybe about. >> RP << Credit goes to Wildcard for the cloud
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Post by ♡ Bun ♡ on Oct 23, 2017 16:31:14 GMT -5
>> Ooc <<
Even with the complexity on the outside, Mosslcan is actually a very simple and somewhat traditional clan. Their main purpose is to serve the ancients or gods; They try to spread the faith of following the gods to every cat that is willing , any cat who is not willing to believe in the gods is to be banished no matter who they once were. The clan takes the warrior code very seriously, any crime made by a cat is punishable by being shunned; which is a light punishment. One of Mossclan's rules is to treated equally with respect. Cats of Mossclan are very simple minded, which can be their downfall, the clan mostly consists of dark pelts and thick fur, to camouflage into the undergrowth and keep warm from the Ocean winds.
How does this look for the about? >> RP << Credit goes to Wildcard for the cloud
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Post by Toothless on Oct 23, 2017 19:12:36 GMT -5
Regarding the ceremony, sound like a plan. I think it would be interesting to explore more about the divine cats. Since divine cats are chosen by the Gods, what if they were rare and special? A cat who is divine has no special traits (at least physically) that sets them apart from others and some could be chosen at birth whereas others might discover their powers later. As a possible twist, there could be some divines that are born that speak to the Abyss instead. This does not mean that a cat is evil, but if it was ever uncovered that a cat could speak to the Abyss, they would be shunned and deemed as a terrible curse. There is also an increase chance of being kicked out no matter how loyal a cat has been shown to be. If they are a kit, it would be the same as the typical rejected kit ceremony unless the leader sticks up for them. Of course, not only would the leader have to step down like normal, but their reputation would be ruined and there is a chance of being kicked out for siding with the Abyss and endangering the clan. Even then, I can't say that the kit would be entirely safe from being kicked out later on unlike normal rejected kits. Right now, I have no current ideas about what conditions would make a cat divine.
Now I thought that our good cat could be a divine, but could speak with the Abyss. They could lie about this trait claiming that they can speak with their ancestors in fear of what the clan would do if they ever found out. The evil cat, however, might be a divine. If they are, I feel they could speak with their ancestors, but if not, it is possible that they could lie about being a divine and sound convincing enough to be one. Eventually, both cats’ secrets would be found out if we went with this route.
I would love to! We can figure out some things about the history, but I don’t mind writing the about, history, and anything else we need. As far as the about you put, that sounds pretty good. It tells what the clan is about and some of their beliefs, so I can focus on Algaeclan and showing it to you all once more things are set in stone. If I have any suggestions that could added to Mossclan’s about, I can post them here and see what you think.
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Post by ♡ Bun ♡ on Oct 23, 2017 19:42:25 GMT -5
>> Ooc << I like that abyss twist... like a lot, what if we tied that into the ying and yang kits where the 'evil' cat is the one who is able to talk to the abyss but i wanted him/her to actually be good and then the 'good' cat could speak to the gods but be the evil cat. >> RP << Credit goes to Wildcard for the cloud
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Post by Toothless on Oct 23, 2017 19:50:29 GMT -5
Yep pretty much read my mind!
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Post by ♡ Bun ♡ on Oct 23, 2017 22:44:18 GMT -5
>> Ooc << Toothless I ended up doing the about and history for my clan... since the clans are the same.
But since you did the territory want to do the camp as well >> RP << Credit goes to Wildcard for the cloud
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Post by Toothless on Oct 23, 2017 23:03:18 GMT -5
Alright and sure. I shall have it posted here soon.
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Post by ♡ Bun ♡ on Oct 23, 2017 23:31:02 GMT -5
>> Ooc << What I want the camp in the forest with the most moss, oh i could always add another stream cause i want the clan to be like a really tiny pile of rocks that are under a tree covered with ferns, and of course moss, they put rocks in the cracks to keep the water out. I can also draw it. Maybe lol >> RP << Credit goes to Wildcard for the cloud
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