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Post by ♡ Bun ♡ on Nov 25, 2017 4:38:22 GMT -5
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Post by ♡ Bun ♡ on Nov 25, 2017 4:48:34 GMT -5
>> Ooc << I already have a name his name is fernstripe. >> RP <<
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Post by ♡ Bun ♡ on Nov 25, 2017 4:52:04 GMT -5
>> Ooc << I thought so too but if you look at him the rest of his fur is like ticked... and not really tabby like, i was thinking that his tabby stripes would be more defined on his legs and forehead and tail and the rest of his body is a dark brown ticked. >> RP <<
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Post by ♡ Bun ♡ on Nov 25, 2017 4:53:28 GMT -5
>> Ooc << I just don't know how to word it right. >> RP <<
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Post by Winona on Nov 25, 2017 8:19:54 GMT -5
You could work it like "A brown Tom with tabby stripes on his head, legs, and tail, and then dark specks along his flanks"?
Also, do you want me to make the LilyClan deputy so you're not managing all the important ranks in your Clan?
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Post by Maplestone360 on Nov 25, 2017 8:44:37 GMT -5
>> Ooc << I thought so too but if you look at him the rest of his fur is like ticked... and not really tabby like, i was thinking that his tabby stripes would be more defined on his legs and forehead and tail and the rest of his body is a dark brown ticked. >> RP << I think that's the definition of a ticked tabby. Like, they're still tabbies, but the markings on their backs aren't stripes, but very fine speckles. As if the stripes have been broken up into tiny flecks, or ticks. But they're still considered a tabby, because of the M on their forehead. If you get what I'm saying? cx Take this cat for example: See? So, if that's the pattern you want your cat to have, then you could say something like, "Fernstripe is a brown ticked tabby tom with a white chest and paws and pale green eyes," for his description. :3 I hope I helped out enough.
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Post by Aphelyon on Nov 25, 2017 10:42:58 GMT -5
True, but I tend to avoid technical terms in descriptions because people might not always know what they mean. I would probably describe him as a light brown tom with pale green eyes and tabby markings on his forehead, legs, and tail. His muzzle, chest, and paws are white, while his back and tail are dusted with a darker color.
That's just me though lol.
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Post by Winona on Nov 25, 2017 11:02:25 GMT -5
Yeah, I agree with staying away from technical terms.
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Post by Maplestone360 on Nov 25, 2017 11:08:25 GMT -5
But, if they have the picture too, they might be able to see what you mean, but that's just my opinion. You can describe him how you like. He's a nice looking cat either way. :3
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Post by ♡ Bun ♡ on Nov 25, 2017 14:05:40 GMT -5
>> Ooc << thanks I think i'll just go with one of your guys description, thanks for all the help! >> RP <<
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Post by ♡ Bun ♡ on Nov 25, 2017 15:26:51 GMT -5
>> Ooc << My warrior cats are almost done! But the deputy Fernstripe is done Goblin, i just have to age the virtues and the personalities to their descriptions. >> RP <<
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Post by Aphelyon on Nov 25, 2017 15:56:39 GMT -5
Mostly looks good, just a few things. First don't forget they need a negative trait; currently Fernstripe doesn't have one. Secondly, you don't have to but I would ask you to consider changing Dovepetal's prefix since there is already Dovesong in YarrowClan. And finally I hope you don't mind if I fix some of your grammar mistakes when I add?
Also idk if you had seen my question, but I had asked if you were still intending on claimingn one of Dovesong's kits.
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Post by ♡ Bun ♡ on Nov 25, 2017 16:01:30 GMT -5
>> Ooc << Ohh yes i am! And about fixing the grammer or spelling go right a head, oh oops i'll add one in there now. I can change it... but wasn't there at least two cats with the same prefix in the warriors books i know it didn't happen often but i really like her name and i don't usually like dove for a prefix. So this is my first time using a cat withe the Dove prefix. >> RP <<
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Post by ♡ Bun ♡ on Nov 25, 2017 16:06:17 GMT -5
>> Ooc << I changed it. >> RP <<
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Post by Aphelyon on Nov 25, 2017 17:00:55 GMT -5
Yeah it did, so that's why I only asked you to consider XD don't, if you're very attached. I would only say you can't if they're less than let's say 10 moons apart in age. Because if so that would mean at one point there might have been 2 Dovepaws in the Clan lol
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Post by Winona on Nov 25, 2017 19:06:50 GMT -5
So are we going to start without Dragon? Or wait a few more days?
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Post by Aphelyon on Nov 25, 2017 19:41:23 GMT -5
We can start without. I will add Fernstripe when I get home and then we can open. Just a couple more hours.
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Post by Winona on Nov 25, 2017 20:18:00 GMT -5
How exciting!
I will have to update my page and add characters later.
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Post by Aphelyon on Nov 25, 2017 20:30:30 GMT -5
Off work now. Will be home in about 30 min
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Post by ♡ Bun ♡ on Nov 25, 2017 20:39:31 GMT -5
>> Ooc << Yay im so excited to rp Snowshimmer! >> RP <<
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Post by Aphelyon on Nov 25, 2017 21:06:00 GMT -5
I'm home. Go ahead and open your Clan's, YarrowClan will open shortly.
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Post by Aphelyon on Nov 25, 2017 21:26:21 GMT -5
For Fernstripe, though, I still need a negative trait, as well as an age. I also can't (or rather, won't) start adding the rest until I have ages for them, since I always put my cats in order of age within the same rank.
Also, would you want to make Cinderwing related to Blackfeather somehow? They have very similar facial features (they're probably the same breed). I'm also thinking that maybe Sandshade could be an elder sibling of Tawnyheart and Hollyberry? Which would make Applepaw & Honeypaw their niece and nephew.
Ooh I just noticed another thing too. You have Dawnkit as your YarrowClan kit but I thought Dawnkit was gonna be one of the JuniperClan mischief-makers?
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Post by Winona on Nov 25, 2017 22:21:32 GMT -5
o.O I also thought Dawnkit was going to be one, and possibly related to Duskkit? XD
Anyway, I opened up JuniperClan! I'm just fixing the allegiances with everyone that needs to be added. ^.^
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Post by ♡ Bun ♡ on Nov 25, 2017 22:41:43 GMT -5
>> Ooc << Oh yeah dawnkit is supposed to be duskits sibling i couldnt remember what clan she was for, im at work tight now so ill have to change those things when i get home >> RP <<
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Post by Winona on Nov 25, 2017 22:42:49 GMT -5
Alright, that's fine!
I hate code so much. I'm trying to add characters and it's just deleting stuff. -.- Like, I copied it exactly with the font, and then I go to preview it and it deletes a box and the font.
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Post by ♡ Bun ♡ on Nov 27, 2017 3:17:07 GMT -5
For Fernstripe, though, I still need a negative trait, as well as an age. I also can't (or rather, won't) start adding the rest until I have ages for them, since I always put my cats in order of age within the same rank.
Also, would you want to make Cinderwing related to Blackfeather somehow? They have very similar facial features (they're probably the same breed). I'm also thinking that maybe Sandshade could be an elder sibling of Tawnyheart and Hollyberry? Which would make Applepaw & Honeypaw their niece and nephew.
Ooh I just noticed another thing too. You have Dawnkit as your YarrowClan kit but I thought Dawnkit was gonna be one of the JuniperClan mischief-makers?
>> Ooc << For a negative trait lets do Impatient and he can be 36 Moons old.
About Cinderwing being related to Blackfreather sure! They can be related.. Cinderwing is a nebelung cat and im assuming Blackfeather is a maine coon but those breeds almost look the same. Sandshade can be an elder sibling of the two! >> RP <<
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