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Post by prophet on Oct 25, 2017 17:43:28 GMT -5
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Post by ~Sapphire~ on Oct 27, 2017 12:24:45 GMT -5
Pas de problem! Je celebre parfois... mais pas cette annee. J'ai du aller a ma bande (C'est tres cool, parler en francais x'D)
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Post by prophet on Oct 28, 2017 15:56:31 GMT -5
~Sapphire~ - Ah, bande de l'école ou un bande... ?
(Ouais, je suis d'accord XD)
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Post by ~Sapphire~ on Oct 28, 2017 16:28:54 GMT -5
ᴛᴜᴇsᴅᴀʏAHH I'M SORRY Thank you! <3 And yes, it's a horrible situation... (Also, it's nice to see you back!) prophetUne bande de brass (?) de communauté. Pas une bande célèbre xDD (Merci beaucoup!)
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Post by prophet on Oct 28, 2017 16:46:18 GMT -5
~Sapphire~ - Ah, ok. Je comprends? XD Quels les chansons tu joues?
(non, de rien XD)
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Post by Dingoleap on Oct 28, 2017 18:50:35 GMT -5
Hey Sapp! So I just read this all in one sitting, and I have to say that I am enjoying it immensely. It's really quite intriguing, and I adore the character dynamic between Ivypaw and Dovepaw. In fact, your character interactions are all really good. You've managed to take such easily recognisable and solid characters and put your own unique spin on them while ensuring than none of them break character. Your language is also fantastic - I can practically feel Ivypaw's resentment burning through my computer screen!
I can't wait for more! Fan me!
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Post by ~Sapphire~ on Oct 30, 2017 13:47:17 GMT -5
prophetDesole, c'est difficile d'expliquer meme en anglais xD Nous jouons beaucoup de choses, les marches, les bandes de sonore, les chansons pop... C'est tres interessant DingoleapHey! Thank you so much, I'm glad you're enjoying it! Resentful Ivypaw is the best Ivypaw. Added
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Post by ~Sapphire~ on Oct 30, 2017 16:54:19 GMT -5
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Post by foxdance on Oct 30, 2017 18:13:52 GMT -5
That was a great chapter!! Fantastic writing: I loved all the build up that you had to get to the conversation between Holly and Ivypaw. I got me super excited for the outcome, and I wasn't disappointed. It looks like Holly and Ivypaw are going to go on a Sol -searching journey.
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Post by prophet on Oct 30, 2017 19:55:37 GMT -5
~Sapphire~ - Haha, de rien. Ah, je comprends. C'est très cool~
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Post by prophet on Oct 31, 2017 19:22:59 GMT -5
@ - I loved the new chapter~
I feel like Sol has some kind of power. I suspected this when he first appeared, but I'm convinced now XD And I felt Ivypaw's frustration when nobody remembered him x3
Also, how you portray Ivypaw; her interaction with her sister and Hawkfrost, I just love, it's very realistic. It made me so mad in OoS how the characters felt very 2D and plain, but your versions show the depth they were missing and it actually makes me like these characters XD
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Post by mintedstar/fur🦇 on Oct 31, 2017 23:51:57 GMT -5
🎃 *stumbles in and falls over* I still exist! I am 99% sure this page is waiting on my phone for tomorrow, so I can read the new chapters.
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Post by ~Sapphire~ on Nov 2, 2017 16:50:47 GMT -5
foxdanceThank you!! I'm glad you enjoyed the build-up section. And yes, there might be some sol-searching (or soul-searching? ) coming up soon prophetMerci cx Tu joue dans une bande? I'm afraid we're still at the 'wait and see' stage with that Dx But yes! Holly can try and explain away her memories of Sol, but Ivypaw's are so clear that they're impossible to ignore That's... quite a compliment o.o Thank you! mintedstar/fur🦇And I was just about to send out a search party... Hey, take your time cx I've been pretty inactive anyway ᴛᴜᴇsᴅᴀʏThat's the intention
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Post by prophet on Nov 2, 2017 19:25:03 GMT -5
東 京 喰 種 { c h a t } ~Sapphire~ - Non, j'etait un enfant chorale
I expected that XD Ugh, it's so good I'm so excited to see how nobody remembers him! I felt sorry for her when everyone basically treated her like she was just in shock, lol.
Aw, you're welcome! I just felt you should know XD As a writer myself, I understand the need for feedback ;3
{ r o l e p l a y } - exe
what's 1000 - 7?
coding
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Post by mintedstar/fur🦇 on Nov 3, 2017 0:21:18 GMT -5
Oh, please do send out a search party if I disappear for any length of time.
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Post by ~Sapphire~ on Nov 5, 2017 16:11:29 GMT -5
prophetTres cool aussi! x'D it'll happen, I promise. Agreed - being patronised is honestly the worst thing for her. Well, thanks again :3 If I can recruit anyone over to Team Ivy I guess this fic is a success mintedstar/fur🦇Never fear Or maybe if I shout 'free books' really loud?
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Post by prophet on Nov 5, 2017 16:34:40 GMT -5
東 京 喰 種 { c h a t } ~Sapphire~ - Je suis études le piano (je travaille le piano?) aussi, mais je suis une chanteuse ;3
I suspected :3 And you definitely converted me XD I look forward to reading more~ C:
{ r o l e p l a y } - exe
what's 1000 - 7?
coding
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Post by mintedstar/fur🦇 on Nov 5, 2017 21:33:16 GMT -5
Shout 'free books' and I shall come. There is also rumors that the same thing will happen if you shout 'library' or 'myrnin', but these are pure rumors, I assure you.
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Post by ~Sapphire~ on Nov 7, 2017 12:42:02 GMT -5
prophet(Etudie? je pense?) Je voudrais jouer du piano, mais je suis nulle xp Je joue seulement de la cornette, c'est comme la trompette mintedstar/fur🦇Free books! Library! Myrnin!How to summon a Mint... Just like a demon, but using a pile of books as encouragement
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Post by mintedstar/fur🦇 on Nov 7, 2017 14:39:42 GMT -5
*puts on a set of horns left over from Halloween* If it gets me free books I'll pretend to be anything. :3 I actually looked it up. If the forums know anything about Myrnin, it would be my fault. I searched the name and I and my RPs/people I've requested art from/friends are the only one who has ever talked about him. Therefor, it would be a valid way to summon me.
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Post by prophet on Nov 11, 2017 21:08:31 GMT -5
東 京 喰 種 { c h a t } ~Sapphire~ - (etudie, probablement) Ah ouais, la trompette. J'aime la trompette en la orchestra de opera. Combien d'année avec la trompette?
{ r o l e p l a y } - exe
what's 1000 - 7?
coding
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Post by ѕωιƒтƒαℓcση on Nov 15, 2017 19:22:57 GMT -5
Okay, I love this. I can't believe that someone didn't write this AU before now because it seems so perfect, and it is. You're handling this so well; the characterization is spot-on, with the little quirks and changes that come from this changed timeline (like the more tempermental Squirrelflight, and the mildly less intense Holly). Basically, I love it. Please fan me?
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Post by ~Sapphire~ on Nov 16, 2017 17:09:43 GMT -5
*puts on a set of horns left over from Halloween* If it gets me free books I'll pretend to be anything. :3 I actually looked it up. If the forums know anything about Myrnin, it would be my fault. I searched the name and I and my RPs/people I've requested art from/friends are the only one who has ever talked about him. Therefor, it would be a valid way to summon me. Very wise :3 That's kind of awesome. You are now officially the number one Myrnin expert on these forums cx
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Post by ~Sapphire~ on Nov 16, 2017 17:19:01 GMT -5
東 京 喰 種 { c h a t } ~Sapphire~ - (etudie, probablement) Ah ouais, la trompette. J'aime la trompette en la orchestra de opera. Combien d'année avec la trompette?
{ r o l e p l a y } - exe
what's 1000 - 7?
codingOui, elle a un voix fort. Est-ce que tu es fanatique de opera? Moi, je n'écoute pas beaucoup, mais je pense que ça peut être très émouvant. Sept années, j'ai fait le niveau 5 il y a quelques années.
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Post by ~Sapphire~ on Nov 16, 2017 17:22:54 GMT -5
Okay, I love this. I can't believe that someone didn't write this AU before now because it seems so perfect, and it is. You're handling this so well; the characterization is spot-on, with the little quirks and changes that come from this changed timeline (like the more tempermental Squirrelflight, and the mildly less intense Holly). Basically, I love it. Please fan me? Ahh thank you! (Probably someone has, but I'm glad you like my version!) Those changes are some of the most fun things to work out - it's really nice when people pick eon them c: And of course! I'm so happy you're enjoying it
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Post by mintedstar/fur🦇 on Nov 16, 2017 17:44:20 GMT -5
I'm the only expert. But then, no one to contradict me. Ah, writing for NaNo. Word Wars, word sprints, ah save mes.
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Post by ~Sapphire~ on Dec 21, 2017 17:45:16 GMT -5
I'm the only expert. But then, no one to contradict me. Ah, writing for NaNo. Word Wars, word sprints, ah save mes. You have ultimate control of all the headcannons! Ah yes, how did that go? (Or do you just want to put those horrors behind you?)
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Post by mintedstar/fur🦇 on Dec 22, 2017 12:21:55 GMT -5
Very true and very important. No one better counteract how I remember Daylighters going.
(Nah, it was awesome!!) I FINISHED!!! The official draft (it's the second one, but this one actually went the way I wanted it to) of Will to Live, the first book featuring Will C. Morgen is completed!!! It is also the longest book I've ever written at 50k +50 words!
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