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Post by ♡ Bun ♡ on Aug 8, 2017 20:15:22 GMT -5
[ Ooc: ] Damp could you actually help me with that? or 5 am that's like the one thing im bad is making my cat description short but still getting in all i wanted to say. lol
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Post by ᴍɪsᴛғᴀʟʟ » on Aug 8, 2017 20:49:16 GMT -5
Yes, I did code this! Im glad you like it, I worked very hard to try to get the proper coding haha c:
I can certainly try to help you out, Milk! As Ink said, its easiest to shorten physical description- I always find clever ways to weasel in attributes as I go along. If you'd like I could look at your forms when you're finished and see if there is anything I can do! Images not mine
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Post by ♡ Bun ♡ on Aug 8, 2017 20:51:56 GMT -5
[ Ooc: ] Sure that would be a big help! Thank you! cause the way my mind works i wouldn't be able to see things that could be taken out.
my whisperclan cats are done, i just have to do my faithclan cats which i've been a bit lazy about.
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Post by ᴍɪsᴛғᴀʟʟ » on Aug 8, 2017 20:53:57 GMT -5
Those traditions look gr8t ink! I like them a lot c: I always love tradition stuff. Good luck Damp!
Okay, I'll certainly take a look at them and let you know what I think c: Images not mine
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Post by ♡ Bun ♡ on Aug 8, 2017 21:00:40 GMT -5
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Post by ᴍɪsᴛғᴀʟʟ » on Aug 8, 2017 21:08:57 GMT -5
I'll just use one of your characters for example:
Original
CITRUSPETAL ➣ 29 MOONS ➣ FEMALE This she cat has soft, pearl white fluffy fur. she has a pale ginger face which get's darker along her nose, she has two darker brown vertical lines along her forehead. Her ears, tail and paws are all like this but slightly fade into her glowing white fur. Citruspetal's fur sticks out in a way that give her a glowing appearance, she has bright yellow eyes that grow greener towards the pupil. Just like this she cat's name she can be super sour, when she is not agitated and annoyed she is friendly and energetic. She isn't afraid to speak her mind, but does so with a thoughtful manner. Although she is firm and somewhat lenient, but never makes fast or rash decisions. [ Straight ] . R O L E P L A Y E D B Y ✦ Milk tea ✦
My EditCITRUSPETAL ➣ 29 MOONS ➣ FEMALE This she cat has soft, pearl white fluffy fur. She has pale ginger points that's darker at her nose and forehead. Citruspetal's fur sticks out in a way that give her a glowing appearance and she has bright yellow-green eyes. Just like this she cat's name she can be sour and firm, unafraid to speak her mind. She can be friendly and energetic, never making fast or rash decisions and speaks thoughtfully. [ Straight ] . R O L E P L A Y E D B Y ✦ Milk tea ✦
Quick lesson I use for short descriptions!
Avoid unneeded words such as "super", "slightly", etc. These can fill up space you need for other needed description! Avoid a lot of detailed description- that is for your actual roleplay posts to create the unique allure of your character! In line-limit descriptions, be as simple and concise as possible.
When we are not under a line limit, you can be super detailed in your descriptions as I do. However, when you are limited, you want to use as little words as possible to get an image across. Your description has a long line of expressing that her legs, tail, and paws fade into her fur as does her face. In a much simpler way, all you need to say is "She has points"! See how many words that gets rid of?
Regarding personality under a line limit, try to avoid being very description and using a line for each trait. Instead, be in the habit of creating a list when you have a limit, ex. instead of saying "Just like this she cat's name she can be super sour, when she is not agitated and annoyed she is friendly and energetic. She isn't afraid to speak her mind, but does so with a thoughtful manner. Although she is firm and somewhat lenient, but never makes fast or rash decisions.", you can clump negative and positive traits together into two separate sentences, using only the name of the trait itself instead of describing that word.
Hope this helps! Let me know if you need any more help c:
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yo i like cats
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Post by exceed on Aug 8, 2017 21:14:30 GMT -5
am,,, your lil explanation just. made me so happy haha it looks so nice aaaaaaaaaaa and the explaining behind it <3333
i'm absolutely hopeless at coding though uwu i've always wanted to have one like that bc it just,,, looks so elegant,,, but i will stick to my smol neat fonts
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Post by ᴍɪsᴛғᴀʟʟ » on Aug 8, 2017 21:18:46 GMT -5
Ah, thank you! Im glad you think do, I like to help c:
I understand! Sometimes it gets a little cumbersome because I like to parrot the coding that other people do, but I've created this coding that I like a lot! I would certainly be willing to figure out a simple thing for you, if you wanted one and if I have time. Images not mine
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Post by [ ᴅᴀᴍᴘʀᴇᴇᴅ ] on Aug 8, 2017 21:22:47 GMT -5
Omg Astro, I flippin love the name Mackenziestrike! It's so cute!!
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Post by ᴍɪsᴛғᴀʟʟ » on Aug 8, 2017 21:33:35 GMT -5
I did find my pictures! I made sure they were free to use, and I found them big enough so they filled up the space and aren't repeating pictures over and over again, although for some coding that looks nice c:
I can certainly see if I can construct something like mine- it won't be exact of course, but I can try. Most of the images I use are nature-based, particularly using Studio Ghibili art. I'll see if I can find something similar or the sort c:
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Post by ᴍɪsᴛғᴀʟʟ » on Aug 8, 2017 21:43:37 GMT -5
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Just google my friend! There is a function on google to search for pictures that are unlicensed or free to use, so I would use that option. You can give me the picture you want and I can see what I can do for you c:
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Post by lozi on Aug 9, 2017 7:30:59 GMT -5
Omg Astro, I flippin love the name Mackenziestrike! It's so cute!! Thank you <3
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Post by ᴍɪsᴛғᴀʟʟ » on Aug 9, 2017 16:48:25 GMT -5
WORDS
help I can't stop coding
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Post by ᴀʟᴀɴᴀ » on Aug 9, 2017 16:55:40 GMT -5
v v excited to get this started
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yo i like cats
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Post by exceed on Aug 9, 2017 16:58:36 GMT -5
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Post by ᴍɪsᴛғᴀʟʟ » on Aug 9, 2017 16:59:45 GMT -5
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I'm glad ya'll like my work haha! Let me know if you want anything changed (i.e scroll box, etc.)
I'm also super excited for everything! It'll look great c:
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Post by ᴍɪsᴛғᴀʟʟ » on Aug 9, 2017 17:19:59 GMT -5
WORDS
I find widened easier to work with, even if it does get in the way of the images haha
Im using a scroll box on this particular code and what I did was I copied and pasted a regular roleplay post I would typically type and configured my coding around what looked the most aesthetically pleasing!
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Post by ᴍɪsᴛғᴀʟʟ » on Aug 9, 2017 18:16:06 GMT -5
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Good good, Im happy! I'll use mine for chat and roleplay, makes everything colorful. And when Im searching for my own posts on previous pages, I can find them easy enough haha! I have many characters, I need a scrollbox for every reply...
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Post by ᴍɪsᴛғᴀʟʟ » on Aug 10, 2017 7:15:50 GMT -5
WORDS
I did see that, which is why I chose Tempest instead so it is not the exact same thing c: Avoids confusion regarding all the storms. I haven't edited the prefix itself, but it is the name of the cat's particular form.
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