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Post by ❅Maplefrost❅ on Jul 12, 2017 17:09:45 GMT -5
Fox and Rosepetal, interesting. Who will you pair Bumble with then? I actually like Fox x Rose, but I've noticed a lot of people ship Rose with Bumble. I'm not even sure. I might just make it Dovewing since I'm not planning on adding DovexTiger (SedgexTiger on the other hand... XD) This is also assuming Millie's kits will even be the same cats in canon, since I might change that too. Or he could just be single. Hmm if that's the case, can I suggest this since you're doing Rose x Fox: Bumblestripe x Cherryfall: They both seem optimistic and perky, so they might work well together. Stormcloud x Dovewing: He's not originally from the clans, and has a different outlook on life, maybe he and Dovewing can bond over being "different". Now if you're not going to make the Gray x Millie kits a thing, I was wondering on what you'll do with Silverstream? If Silverstream lived, she'd most likely move to ThunderClan to be with Graystripe, meaning Stormfur and Feathertail would stay in TC too, different cats would be chosen for the journey, different romance possibility, etc. I think Silverstream living has one of the best potentials with changing most of the plot, from the original series, through out the second one.
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Post by 𝓣𝓲𝓷𝓾𝓿𝓲𝓮𝓵 on Jul 12, 2017 17:30:51 GMT -5
I'm not even sure. I might just make it Dovewing since I'm not planning on adding DovexTiger (SedgexTiger on the other hand... XD) This is also assuming Millie's kits will even be the same cats in canon, since I might change that too. Or he could just be single. Hmm if that's the case, can I suggest this since you're doing Rose x Fox: Bumblestripe x Cherryfall: They both seem optimistic and perky, so they might work well together. Stormcloud x Dovewing: He's not originally from the clans, and has a different outlook on life, maybe he and Dovewing can bond over being "different". Now if you're not going to make the Gray x Millie kits a thing, I was wondering on what you'll do with Silverstream? If Silverstream lived, she'd most likely move to ThunderClan to be with Graystripe, meaning Stormfur and Feathertail would stay in TC too, different cats would be chosen for the journey, different romance possibility, etc. I think Silverstream living has one of the best potentials with changing most of the plot, from the original series, through out the second one. I'm not even sure what I'm going to do with Silverstream, just that her relationship with Graystripe will be way more developed than it was in the series. However, I will have her live longer than she did in canon. I mean, I might just keep Dovewing and Bumblestripe single, but I'll consider those as possibilities. Do you have any more questions or suggestions?
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Post by ❅Maplefrost❅ on Jul 12, 2017 18:48:35 GMT -5
Hmm if that's the case, can I suggest this since you're doing Rose x Fox: Bumblestripe x Cherryfall: They both seem optimistic and perky, so they might work well together. Stormcloud x Dovewing: He's not originally from the clans, and has a different outlook on life, maybe he and Dovewing can bond over being "different". Now if you're not going to make the Gray x Millie kits a thing, I was wondering on what you'll do with Silverstream? If Silverstream lived, she'd most likely move to ThunderClan to be with Graystripe, meaning Stormfur and Feathertail would stay in TC too, different cats would be chosen for the journey, different romance possibility, etc. I think Silverstream living has one of the best potentials with changing most of the plot, from the original series, through out the second one. I'm not even sure what I'm going to do with Silverstream, just that her relationship with Graystripe will be way more developed than it was in the series. However, I will have her live longer than she did in canon. I mean, I might just keep Dovewing and Bumblestripe single, but I'll consider those as possibilities. Do you have any more questions or suggestions? Let's see... I know you don't care for Thorn x Blossom right? So what do you think of Blossomfall x Toadstep? I know she had a crush on him before and what not. What do you think about MV? Do you think it should be redone, Maple's bg, I feel like, even though I love her a lot, it needs to be worked on a lot more. Especially concerning how she died, etc. When it comes to Yellowfang, will you change her around too? I know a lot of her issues could have been avoided if it weren't for Sagewhisker. I'm curious to know if you're going to do anything concerning Tigerstar's love life? With the whole Golden, Sasha, Leopard debacle, and even implied Spotted too, etc. I always liked the idea of Tiger siring kits because he wanted his bloodline to live on, but he has true feelings for Spottedleaf, and it's underlying tension, similar to Spotted and Crow, but it's more one-sided on Tiger's part? Or maybe Spotted becomes an evil medicine cat because of him? Speaking of which, there's a part in the POT where Tiger offers to train Jayfeather, while Hollyleaf was still a medicine cat apprentice...what if they stayed that way? Jayfeather becoming a blind warrior, and learning from Tiger and Broken, while Hollyleaf remained a medicine cat?
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Post by 𝓣𝓲𝓷𝓾𝓿𝓲𝓮𝓵 on Jul 12, 2017 19:02:46 GMT -5
I'm not even sure what I'm going to do with Silverstream, just that her relationship with Graystripe will be way more developed than it was in the series. However, I will have her live longer than she did in canon. I mean, I might just keep Dovewing and Bumblestripe single, but I'll consider those as possibilities. Do you have any more questions or suggestions? Let's see... I know you don't care for Thorn x Blossom right? So what do you think of Blossomfall x Toadstep? I know she had a crush on him before and what not. What do you think about MV? Do you think it should be redone, Maple's bg, I feel like, even though I love her a lot, it needs to be worked on a lot more. Especially concerning how she died, etc. When it comes to Yellowfang, will you change her around too? I know a lot of her issues could have been avoided if it weren't for Sagewhisker. I'm curious to know if you're going to do anything concerning Tigerstar's love life? With the whole Golden, Sasha, Leopard debacle, and even implied Spotted too, etc. I always liked the idea of Tiger siring kits because he wanted his bloodline to live on, but he has true feelings for Spottedleaf, and it's underlying tension, similar to Spotted and Crow, but it's more one-sided on Tiger's part? Or maybe Spotted becomes an evil medicine cat because of him? Speaking of which, there's a part in the POT where Tiger offers to train Jayfeather, while Hollyleaf was still a medicine cat apprentice...what if they stayed that way? Jayfeather becoming a blind warrior, and learning from Tiger and Broken, while Hollyleaf remained a medicine cat? Yeah, BlossomxToad could work. I completely forgot she had a crush on him, but then again, I only remember it being brought up once. YES! Yes, yes, yes! I will most definitely be redoing MV! I'm sorry, but I just really hate that novella with the passion of a thousand suns. I'll even give it the length of an SE if I have to. And yes, I will also be changing Yellowfang's story, especially as far as becoming a medicine cat is concerned. Honestly, I have no idea what I'm going to do with Tigerstar. Although if you saw my joke topic on Mothwing's parentage, I actually am considering of making Mothwing and maybe Hawkfrost too as Leopardstar's kits with Tigerstar, if I decide to include them, that is. I'm not even sure if Sasha is going to be in this at all, but I do know that Tigerstar wi) still be Goldenflower's mate. I'm not even sure about Spottedleaf. If I do decide to have Hawkfrost and Mothwing in this (and maybe Tadpole), then there will be a personality swap between Hawkfrost and Mothwing. And I've considered expanding on the Jayfeather thing, I'm just not entirely sure yet.
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Post by Sησω on Jul 12, 2017 20:41:27 GMT -5
This is a neat idea. I would totally read it if you did this.
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Post by ❅Maplefrost❅ on Jul 12, 2017 20:53:04 GMT -5
Let's see... I know you don't care for Thorn x Blossom right? So what do you think of Blossomfall x Toadstep? I know she had a crush on him before and what not. What do you think about MV? Do you think it should be redone, Maple's bg, I feel like, even though I love her a lot, it needs to be worked on a lot more. Especially concerning how she died, etc. When it comes to Yellowfang, will you change her around too? I know a lot of her issues could have been avoided if it weren't for Sagewhisker. I'm curious to know if you're going to do anything concerning Tigerstar's love life? With the whole Golden, Sasha, Leopard debacle, and even implied Spotted too, etc. I always liked the idea of Tiger siring kits because he wanted his bloodline to live on, but he has true feelings for Spottedleaf, and it's underlying tension, similar to Spotted and Crow, but it's more one-sided on Tiger's part? Or maybe Spotted becomes an evil medicine cat because of him? Speaking of which, there's a part in the POT where Tiger offers to train Jayfeather, while Hollyleaf was still a medicine cat apprentice...what if they stayed that way? Jayfeather becoming a blind warrior, and learning from Tiger and Broken, while Hollyleaf remained a medicine cat? Yeah, BlossomxToad could work. I completely forgot she had a crush on him, but then again, I only remember it being brought up once. YES! Yes, yes, yes! I will most definitely be redoing MV! I'm sorry, but I just really hate that novella with the passion of a thousand suns. I'll even give it the length of an SE if I have to. And yes, I will also be changing Yellowfang's story, especially as far as becoming a medicine cat is concerned. Honestly, I have no idea what I'm going to do with Tigerstar. Although if you saw my joke topic on Mothwing's parentage, I actually am considering of making Mothwing and maybe Hawkfrost too as Leopardstar's kits with Tigerstar, if I decide to include them, that is. I'm not even sure if Sasha is going to be in this at all, but I do know that Tigerstar wi) still be Goldenflower's mate. I'm not even sure about Spottedleaf. If I do decide to have Hawkfrost and Mothwing in this (and maybe Tadpole), then there will be a personality swap between Hawkfrost and Mothwing. And I've considered expanding on the Jayfeather thing, I'm just not entirely sure yet. Ya know, I never considered that, Mothwing and Hawkfrost being Leopardstar and Tigerstar's kits? Would make sense considering Mothwing's coat. Also Mothwing having Hawk's personality would be interesting, but if Hawk had Moth's then wouldn't he be more like Bramble? They'd probably get along together, him and Bramble. I wonder if he'd still go to the DF...? And thank goodness, I mean, Maple deserves more justice than that awful MV, I actually would have loved and SE on her whole life instead. Seriously, done in by an apprentice? C'mon Erins.
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Post by 𝓣𝓲𝓷𝓾𝓿𝓲𝓮𝓵 on Jul 12, 2017 22:30:39 GMT -5
Yeah, BlossomxToad could work. I completely forgot she had a crush on him, but then again, I only remember it being brought up once. YES! Yes, yes, yes! I will most definitely be redoing MV! I'm sorry, but I just really hate that novella with the passion of a thousand suns. I'll even give it the length of an SE if I have to. And yes, I will also be changing Yellowfang's story, especially as far as becoming a medicine cat is concerned. Honestly, I have no idea what I'm going to do with Tigerstar. Although if you saw my joke topic on Mothwing's parentage, I actually am considering of making Mothwing and maybe Hawkfrost too as Leopardstar's kits with Tigerstar, if I decide to include them, that is. I'm not even sure if Sasha is going to be in this at all, but I do know that Tigerstar wi) still be Goldenflower's mate. I'm not even sure about Spottedleaf. If I do decide to have Hawkfrost and Mothwing in this (and maybe Tadpole), then there will be a personality swap between Hawkfrost and Mothwing. And I've considered expanding on the Jayfeather thing, I'm just not entirely sure yet. Ya know, I never considered that, Mothwing and Hawkfrost being Leopardstar and Tigerstar's kits? Would make sense considering Mothwing's coat. Also Mothwing having Hawk's personality would be interesting, but if Hawk had Moth's then wouldn't he be more like Bramble? They'd probably get along together, him and Bramble. I wonder if he'd still go to the DF...? And thank goodness, I mean, Maple deserves more justice than that awful MV, I actually would have loved and SE on her whole life instead. Seriously, done in by an apprentice? C'mon Erins. I'll think of something. I was actually thinking of making Hawkfrost a red herring. And not just her death, everything about MV annoyed me. It honestly kind of hurts that this was the best Vicky could come up with, especially since it's one dedicated to the fans, and I think she even asked people what they would like to see in the novella.
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Post by 𝓣𝓲𝓷𝓾𝓿𝓲𝓮𝓵 on Jul 12, 2017 22:31:07 GMT -5
This is a neat idea. I would totally read it if you did this. Thanks!
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Post by Darkfang ☾ on Jul 13, 2017 10:56:49 GMT -5
I love the idea! I'll definitely read it when you finish. Like others have said, you have a really good understanding of the books and characters so I think it will turn out really well. Plus your ideas sound really cool like multiple mates etc.
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Post by 𝓣𝓲𝓷𝓾𝓿𝓲𝓮𝓵 on Jul 13, 2017 11:53:41 GMT -5
I love the idea! I'll definitely read it when you finish. Like others have said, you have a really good understanding of the books and characters so I think it will turn out really well. Plus your ideas sound really cool like multiple mates etc. Thanks.
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Post by 𝓣𝓲𝓷𝓾𝓿𝓲𝓮𝓵 on Jul 13, 2017 20:23:11 GMT -5
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Post by Pyropelt on Jul 14, 2017 9:07:40 GMT -5
Woah all of these ideas about rewriting the series sound so great! Can't wait to read it!
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Post by Rainstorm1026 on Jul 14, 2017 12:09:58 GMT -5
I agree, that would be really fascinating.
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Post by 𝓣𝓲𝓷𝓾𝓿𝓲𝓮𝓵 on Jul 14, 2017 20:32:37 GMT -5
I agree, that would be really fascinating. Thanks. If not Jayfeather, then maybe Lionblaze or Hollyleaf could be an antagonist, or maybe even all three.
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Post by 𝓣𝓲𝓷𝓾𝓿𝓲𝓮𝓵 on Jul 14, 2017 20:33:01 GMT -5
Woah all of these ideas about rewriting the series sound so great! Can't wait to read it! Thanks!
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Post by 𝓣𝓲𝓷𝓾𝓿𝓲𝓮𝓵 on Jul 14, 2017 20:43:52 GMT -5
Much as I love DotC and AVoS, I will probably be remaking those as well. If any of you remember that fake plot I typed for TaS, I'll be including that in the remake if I go that far.
Now if only I didn't have writer's block. Even with this original series I'm trying to write, I can't think of a good beginning, and in terms of the rewrite, I don't want to feel like I'm copying off the original book either. It's like that one Spongebob clip where he's trying to write an essay, and it just has THE on the paper. That's pretty much me right now. ^^"
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Post by ❅Maplefrost❅ on Jul 14, 2017 20:44:46 GMT -5
I agree, that would be really fascinating. I always loved the idea of this concept, because it would mean we'd get a blind warrior, and Hollyleaf would find her talent in healing, even if she's not one of the three. I also like the idea of Jayfeather becoming an antagonist, because he hates how he's treated and looked down upon for being blind, Tiger and Broken take advantage of this too. Jayfeather has always had a pretty nasty temper, and I feel like, if possible, he could have been a pretty decent villain, if written properly. Especially considering he seems to have the most influence and power of the three, he'd be a very prime cat to have on the side of the Dark Forest. Imagine how much easier it would be to influence cats in the dreams using Jayfeather's abilities? I think Tigerstar, since he made the offer, would be a great mentor for him, especially when it comes to tricking opponents in battle. And Brokenstar, because he was once blind, and probably knows a thing or two about how to fight that way. But on the other hand, Hollyleaf has potential of being a good villain too. As a medicine cat, her word could practically be law, and even out power the leader. She could use her influence and be a false prophet, while trying to get revenge on Ashfur and Leafpool, like in canon when she's pretty much off the hinge insane. What if she actually did kill Leafpool with those deathberries, and she becomes the sole medicine cat? What if she does run off, then TC without a medicine cat would be hectic, I think it would fun to read.
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Post by Dancing_Totodile on Jul 14, 2017 20:49:40 GMT -5
I like this idea.
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Post by 𝓣𝓲𝓷𝓾𝓿𝓲𝓮𝓵 on Jul 14, 2017 20:51:56 GMT -5
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Post by 𝓣𝓲𝓷𝓾𝓿𝓲𝓮𝓵 on Jul 14, 2017 20:58:14 GMT -5
If any of you have any suggestions on how I should start this thing, please do so. I really have no clue on how to begin at the moment and like I said, I don't want to feel like I'm copying off the original book either, if I can avoid it.
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Post by ❅Maplefrost❅ on Jul 14, 2017 21:05:09 GMT -5
If any of you have any suggestions on how I should start this thing, please do so. I really have no clue on how to begin at the moment and like I said, I don't want to feel like I'm copying off the original book either, if I can avoid it. Why not start with Rusty and who he'll encounter first? It doesn't have to be Graystripe, it can be a different cat completely and be much more significant. Maybe he goes into the forest, his collar gets stuck on something and snaps and breaks. He doesn't make a big deal of it and keeps exploring, then a patrol finds him. They capture him and bring him back to ThunderClan, they think he's from another clan, a spy or something. But he says he's not and has no idea what they mean. Eventually they realize he's a kittypet, and he's taken back to where he lives, but he's so curious about their way that he's a bit hesitant. One of the cats on the patrol, one that met him first, finds him interesting and talks with Bluestar about him. Everyday after that Rusty hopes to get a glimpse of the cats again, one day he finds an apprentice wondering around. They're not paying attention and a fox is tracking them, Rusty, jumps in and saves the apprentice, and they go back to TC to hide from the fox. When the apprentice tells the others how brave he was, they're in awe about it, and then Bluestar offers him to join their clan. There's mixed opinions, in the end Rusty says yes and that he's waited so long for the offer, and stays with the clan from then on.
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Post by 𝓣𝓲𝓷𝓾𝓿𝓲𝓮𝓵 on Jul 14, 2017 21:11:12 GMT -5
If any of you have any suggestions on how I should start this thing, please do so. I really have no clue on how to begin at the moment and like I said, I don't want to feel like I'm copying off the original book either, if I can avoid it. Why not start with Rusty and who he'll encounter first? It doesn't have to be Graystripe, it can be a different cat completely and be much more significant. Maybe he goes into the forest, his collar gets stuck on something and snaps and breaks. He doesn't make a big deal of it and keeps exploring, then a patrol finds him. They capture him and bring him back to ThunderClan, they think he's from another clan, a spy or something. But he says he's not and has no idea what they mean. Eventually they realize he's a kittypet, and he's taken back to where he lives, but he's so curious about their way that he's a bit hesitant. One of the cats on the patrol, one that met him first, finds him interesting and talks with Bluestar about him. Everyday after that Rusty hopes to get a glimpse of the cats again, one day he finds an apprentice wondering around. They're not paying attention and a fox is tracking them, Rusty, jumps in and saves the apprentice, and they go back to TC to hide from the fox. When the apprentice tells the others how brave he was, they're in awe about it, and then Bluestar offers him to join their clan. There's mixed opinions, in the end Rusty says yes and that he's waited so long for the offer, and stays with the clan from then on. Thanks. I was actually thinking of doing something like that, but I actually meant the prologue, if there should even be one at all, that is. Or a prophecy, for that matter. Heck, I'm still not sure whether to even keep the afterlife ambiguous in this remake or not.
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Post by ❅Maplefrost❅ on Jul 14, 2017 21:15:55 GMT -5
Why not start with Rusty and who he'll encounter first? It doesn't have to be Graystripe, it can be a different cat completely and be much more significant. Maybe he goes into the forest, his collar gets stuck on something and snaps and breaks. He doesn't make a big deal of it and keeps exploring, then a patrol finds him. They capture him and bring him back to ThunderClan, they think he's from another clan, a spy or something. But he says he's not and has no idea what they mean. Eventually they realize he's a kittypet, and he's taken back to where he lives, but he's so curious about their way that he's a bit hesitant. One of the cats on the patrol, one that met him first, finds him interesting and talks with Bluestar about him. Everyday after that Rusty hopes to get a glimpse of the cats again, one day he finds an apprentice wondering around. They're not paying attention and a fox is tracking them, Rusty, jumps in and saves the apprentice, and they go back to TC to hide from the fox. When the apprentice tells the others how brave he was, they're in awe about it, and then Bluestar offers him to join their clan. There's mixed opinions, in the end Rusty says yes and that he's waited so long for the offer, and stays with the clan from then on. Thanks. I was actually thinking of doing something like that, but I actually meant the prologue, if there should even be one at all, that is. Or a prophecy, for that matter. Heck, I'm still not sure whether to even keep the afterlife ambiguous in this remake or not. I personally like StarClan being like cat heaven, where cats go when they're happy in the after life, and what not. I also think the prophecies are a great aspect in all of this, cause it shows more communication for medicine cats in a religious perspective, but also still ambiguous on StarClan's side. However I think it's pretty dumb that even sometimes they don't know where the prophecies come from, I always thought it was better that StarClan cats make prophecies and how the living cats perceive them is their own path.
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Post by Pyropelt on Jul 14, 2017 22:43:09 GMT -5
I agree, that would be really fascinating. I always loved the idea of this concept, because it would mean we'd get a blind warrior, and Hollyleaf would find her talent in healing, even if she's not one of the three. I also like the idea of Jayfeather becoming an antagonist, because he hates how he's treated and looked down upon for being blind, Tiger and Broken take advantage of this too. Jayfeather has always had a pretty nasty temper, and I feel like, if possible, he could have been a pretty decent villain, if written properly. Especially considering he seems to have the most influence and power of the three, he'd be a very prime cat to have on the side of the Dark Forest. Imagine how much easier it would be to influence cats in the dreams using Jayfeather's abilities? I think Tigerstar, since he made the offer, would be a great mentor for him, especially when it comes to tricking opponents in battle. And Brokenstar, because he was once blind, and probably knows a thing or two about how to fight that way. But on the other hand, Hollyleaf has potential of being a good villain too. As a medicine cat, her word could practically be law, and even out power the leader. She could use her influence and be a false prophet, while trying to get revenge on Ashfur and Leafpool, like in canon when she's pretty much off the hinge insane. What if she actually did kill Leafpool with those deathberries, and she becomes the sole medicine cat? What if she does run off, then TC without a medicine cat would be hectic, I think it would fun to read. What about having Hollyleaf be conflicted with herself? Like about the warrior code vs the medicine cat code? And then maybe if you were to write her as the villain, she could have a split personality? Or maybe having Hollyleaf meet with other medicine cats and coercing one to be evil?
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Post by 𝓣𝓲𝓷𝓾𝓿𝓲𝓮𝓵 on Jul 14, 2017 23:41:16 GMT -5
Thanks. I was actually thinking of doing something like that, but I actually meant the prologue, if there should even be one at all, that is. Or a prophecy, for that matter. Heck, I'm still not sure whether to even keep the afterlife ambiguous in this remake or not. I personally like StarClan being like cat heaven, where cats go when they're happy in the after life, and what not. I also think the prophecies are a great aspect in all of this, cause it shows more communication for medicine cats in a religious perspective, but also still ambiguous on StarClan's side. However I think it's pretty dumb that even sometimes they don't know where the prophecies come from, I always thought it was better that StarClan cats make prophecies and how the living cats perceive them is their own path. Same, honestly. Either way, I'll definitely have StarClan involved as little as possible, like how it was in the first arc.
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Post by Tas on Jul 15, 2017 7:23:14 GMT -5
What if you kept the prologue very similar, but cut out the Bluestar-Spottedleaf discussion? Maybe put that in at a later time, if not taking it out at all?
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Post by 𝓣𝓲𝓷𝓾𝓿𝓲𝓮𝓵 on Jul 15, 2017 23:17:46 GMT -5
What if you kept the prologue very similar, but cut out the Bluestar-Spottedleaf discussion? Maybe put that in at a later time, if not taking it out at all? I don't know... Like I said, I don't want to be too similar to the original book, either. I'll think of something, I'm sure.
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Post by 𝓣𝓲𝓷𝓾𝓿𝓲𝓮𝓵 on Jul 16, 2017 19:59:07 GMT -5
I'm still not sure whether there should be a prophecy or not. If there is, maybe Firestar could be a red herring just to twist thing around?
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Post by ❅Maplefrost❅ on Jul 16, 2017 20:13:53 GMT -5
I'm still not sure whether there should be a prophecy or not. If there is, maybe Firestar could be a red herring just to twist thing around? I actually didn't have much of a problem with Firestar being the main prophecy of the first book? But I preferred twist prophecy in the second series, similar to how the Tribe thought Stormfur would save them, but it was Feathertail, etc. For the first series, why not add a little twist, could be interesting? Maybe the prophecy is meant for Cloudtail, not Firestar? Also what if Cloudtail had ginger fur like him instead? And he's the one meant to be the fire that saves the clan? Idk if you've watched MLP, great show tbh, fandom not so much, but anyways in one of the seasons they have to fight a villain named King Sombra. Twilight, the mc, gets trapped and is unable to save the day by taking a sacred object to the kingdom before it's too late. So who ends up being the one that saves them? It's Spike, her helper, he's a dragon, and a character everyone usually overlooks. Twilight has a moment where she realizes that the one that has to save everyone is him and she tells him to go without her, in the end things do work out. But what I like was this twist, with the writers using Spike, instead of Twilight, to save the day. And really, no one was expecting it either, since things were going well and in Twilight's favor as the MC through out the one hour special. However the twist was incredibly interesting, do you get what I'm saying? EDIT: Here's a video clip:
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Post by 𝓣𝓲𝓷𝓾𝓿𝓲𝓮𝓵 on Jul 16, 2017 20:26:30 GMT -5
I'm still not sure whether there should be a prophecy or not. If there is, maybe Firestar could be a red herring just to twist thing around? I actually didn't have much of a problem with Firestar being the main prophecy of the first book? But I preferred twist prophecy in the second series, similar to how the Tribe though Stormfur would save them, but it was Feathertail, etc. For the first series, why not add a little twist, could be interesting? Maybe the prophecy is meant for Cloudtail, not Firestar? Also what if Cloudtail had ginger fur like him instead? And he's the one meant to be the fire that saves the clan? Idk if you've watched MLP, great show tbh, fandom not so much, but anyways in one of the seasons they have to fight a villain named King Sombra. Twilight, the mc, gets trapped and is unable to save the day by taking a sacred object to the kingdom before it's too late. So who ends up being the one that saves them? It's Spike, her helper, he's a dragon, and a character everyone usually overlooks. Twilight has a moment where she realizes that the one that has to save everyone is him and she tells him to go without her, in the end things do work out. But what I like was this twist, with the writers using Spike, instead of Twilight, to save the day. And really, no one was expecting it either, since things were going well and in Twilight's favor as the MC. However the twist was incredibly interesting, do you get what I'm saying? I've watched MLP, so I know what you're referring to. Sombra is actually one of my favorite villains on the show, next to Tirek and Chrysalis. I don't know why, but I've always had a problem with stories of outsiders saving a foreign tribe or land or whatever. Even the good ones. I don't know... unfortunate implications, I guess? It really could go either way since I didn't have too much of a problem with Firestar being a prophecy cat until now for some reason. If I do decide to change it, maybe Sandstorm could be the one, and Bluestar and Spotttedleaf just misinterpreted it to mean Firestar?
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