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Post by ʀᴀɪɴʟᴇᴀғ 🍁 on May 9, 2017 15:16:04 GMT -5
Oh, so that means possible River - Shadow alliance when they both become leader.
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Post by ʀᴀɪɴʟᴇᴀғ 🍁 on May 9, 2017 15:23:50 GMT -5
Ooh, yeah. Would it be out of character for her to get angry at Breeze for trying to help?
Also, I'm trying to come up with cats, but I'm afraid I'm going to make too many. xD
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Post by Erιѕ Alvα on May 9, 2017 15:34:44 GMT -5
I like the sound of Foxpetal. Foxpetal it is then. ^^
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Post by ʀᴀɪɴʟᴇᴀғ 🍁 on May 9, 2017 15:34:49 GMT -5
Oh God. o-o So far, I have Willow, Breeze, Shade, Reed, Soot, Breeze's sister, and maybe Robin? I may also kill of Breeze's sister and have a tom instead, saying it's her only surviving kit. Thoughts?
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Post by Erιѕ Alvα on May 9, 2017 15:36:26 GMT -5
I like that. Adds some tragedy.
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Post by ʀᴀɪɴʟᴇᴀғ 🍁 on May 9, 2017 15:38:52 GMT -5
True, but I may make some extra characters.. Reedstar will die and Willow will retire and die soon as well. I may rename her Minnow as well because Willow isn't working for me.
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Post by Erιѕ Alvα on May 9, 2017 15:44:30 GMT -5
Oh I love the name Minnow. ^^ I think I want a Cloverfrost as a queen somewhere.
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Post by ʀᴀɪɴʟᴇᴀғ 🍁 on May 9, 2017 15:50:54 GMT -5
Same, Minnow is a pretty prefix. I don't know if I want to make any permanent queens yet. I know Sootdance will be a queen later on. I may change her prefix though, it just doesn't seem to match her description. xD
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Post by ʀᴀɪɴʟᴇᴀғ 🍁 on May 9, 2017 16:12:06 GMT -5
Alright, good. What incident would occur?
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Post by Erιѕ Alvα on May 9, 2017 16:19:21 GMT -5
➤ Foxpetal | 24 Moons | She-cat | Bisexual Eyes judge silently from the shadows of her face; burning, flaming amber. Marbled ink surrounds her smooth tortoiseshell form, more red than black except for her angular head. Only her underside (belly, chin, throat, and paws) possess white. Her fur is smooth and her body tall and lithe. As her name suggests, Foxpetal is a predator. Her father sought to that. When she was young, but a rogue child named Apple, he killed her entire family save she and her sister. He was adamant that his daughters be as bloodthirsty and strong as he was, and mercilessly trained them as such. His unloving and cold nature, mixed with his favoritism of her sister, shaped her to be hateful as well, most notably to them. Before coming to ShadowClan, she killed the sibling and drowned her father, thinking she could make a new life away from their influence. But it was too late; the taste for murder was too strong to resist, the adrenaline addicting. It was thrilling. Perhaps it was bad blood or simply her upbringing, but the fun of the hunt was nonetheless there. Her mentor only encouraged her passion, and heightened her physique. Foxpetal may be strong in body, but she is as much in mind as well. She is secretive and manipulative, hiding behind an attractive and gentle facade. She is intelligent and ambitious, as well as a fierce warrior helpful to her clan. The pull to kill, however, becomes more and more difficult to suppress. She has a temper and has vengeful tendencies, as well as being horribly possessive and jealous. All is held within a calm exterior. All sealed away in a smiling, shadowy face. ➤ Erιѕ Alvα Clan: ShadowClan Rank: Warrior Kin: Father- Branch
Sister- Berry Romantic Interest: I have a headcannon that Foxpetal was generally okay (even with her bad-influencing mentor) with keeping her violent lusting contained but then her love interest is stolen by a rival, which sets off the plot with her in motion? The jealousy leads her to kill either the rival or the love or both (if she can’t help herself hehehe), she’s discovered as the killer, the leader condemns her to die in front of the clans as previously said, etc etc.
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Post by ʀᴀɪɴʟᴇᴀғ 🍁 on May 9, 2017 16:23:04 GMT -5
Wait, I thought her mentor encouraged her and she killed for fun, hence why ShadowClan gets a bunch heat because cats of all Clans are being killed by her?
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Post by Erιѕ Alvα on May 9, 2017 16:24:55 GMT -5
Well, yes, but idk, it didn't seem reason enough. I wanted to suggest a more 'mentally snapping completely' thing. But if you'd prefer that I understand.
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Post by ʀᴀɪɴʟᴇᴀғ 🍁 on May 9, 2017 19:30:27 GMT -5
I'm only bringing it up because it was discussed before the character was assigned. I'm not trying to be mean, though it probably looks otherwise, huh?
I think I'm going to write a summary from the posts of the plot so we can get the timeline and everything correct. I want to make sure there is an understanding of it.
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Post by Erιѕ Alvα on May 9, 2017 19:32:53 GMT -5
Well, I do understand it, I was just suggesting an alternative. I wasn't here for much of the Apple discussion, so I didn't think it would hurt to bring up my own idea. If its not what you want than that's perfectly fine.
But nothing's wrong with a timeline, does keep everyone else on the same page too~
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Post by Sand on May 9, 2017 19:42:20 GMT -5
i canT STOP MAKING CHARACTERS I NEED TO ME STOPPED hAND OVER YOUR CAPABILITY RIGHT NOW i DeManD IT
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Post by dou on May 9, 2017 20:22:01 GMT -5
i canT STOP MAKING CHARACTERS I NEED TO ME STOPPED hAND OVER YOUR CAPABILITY RIGHT NOW i DeManD IT i sO woULD
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Post by Sand on May 9, 2017 20:26:04 GMT -5
hAND OVER YOUR CAPABILITY RIGHT NOW i DeManD IT i sO woULD tHANK YOU sO much
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Post by ʀᴀɪɴʟᴇᴀғ 🍁 on May 9, 2017 20:27:35 GMT -5
Well, I do understand it, I was just suggesting an alternative. I wasn't here for much of the Apple discussion, so I didn't think it would hurt to bring up my own idea. If its not what you want than that's perfectly fine.
But nothing's wrong with a timeline, does keep everyone else on the same page too~ There have been a few mix-ups by others as well, including myself. I personally don't find the idea of her turning murderous because of heartbreak appealing. It's been done several times while a villain simply doing something because they just want to hasn't been explored. When we were discussing names and Dou brought up Mapleshade, that rose a flag for me. Generally, a lot of people don't like Mapleshade because of her backstory and I fear if we place our feet wrong, we would just be rehashing an idea from the books instead of having something far more unique. If this was a different entirely, I'd be fine with it most likely. I feel like I'm coming off as a jerk...
Correct wasn't the right word. I like to keep things in order because Sand and I once did the five Clans at the lake and someone we were once friends with had a massive plot that was exciting at first, then they refused to let go on their part. They had a rogue and assembled members to create a new Clan, but when we tried to advance the plot, they never showed up and almost seemed to be busy with their side of things. The Clan shouldn't have lasted as long as it did because there was no organization and prior agreements. With a lot of the side plots we have going on, we could probably place them in the phases to keep organization.
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Post by Erιѕ Alvα on May 9, 2017 22:27:04 GMT -5
Ooh right I didn't think of it devolving into a Mapleshade situation. No, I understand that order needs to be maintained, and I'm not trying to cause trouble. Perhaps not coming off as a jerk, but I do feel patronized at times. I think that just comes with the difficulty that you can't hear how someone says something over typing.
Well, there's Foxpetal up there anyway. Love-murder plot aside, anything else I will be required to change or is she adequate?
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Post by Erιѕ Alvα on May 9, 2017 22:31:13 GMT -5
Oh, something random I just remembered I learned in my web design classes that I thought I might share: people are much more inclined to read lists or rules if they are organized in ascending paragraph length.
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Post by ʀᴀɪɴʟᴇᴀғ 🍁 on May 10, 2017 13:58:02 GMT -5
Ooh right I didn't think of it devolving into a Mapleshade situation. No, I understand that order needs to be maintained, and I'm not trying to cause trouble. Perhaps not coming off as a jerk, but I do feel patronized at times. I think that just comes with the difficulty that you can't hear how someone says something over typing.
Well, there's Foxpetal up there anyway. Love-murder plot aside, anything else I will be required to change or is she adequate? I honestly feel horrible about this. I know you aren't trying to cause trouble. I'm really sorry for how I've made you felt, I wasn't trying to patronize you or anything like that.
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Post by ʀᴀɪɴʟᴇᴀғ 🍁 on May 10, 2017 14:01:24 GMT -5
Fox looks good to me as well, though I don't know how old you want her with the training. In my opinion, if Foxpetal is older, as you have her, I think three moons of training should be enough. Thoughts?
Regarding the rule thing and opening, I can just switch the rules around in that order if you want, Eris. I'm also good with opening this weekend, I just need to get my cats completed.
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Post by Erιѕ Alvα on May 10, 2017 22:50:42 GMT -5
No no, don't feel horrible
And it was just a suggestion, a bit of psychology never hurts haha. I also agree with 3 moons of training is good, but I can always age her down.
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