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Post by πβππ π£π on Mar 30, 2017 11:57:16 GMT -5
OOC Meet Team Watermelon, a group of all animal female spies I made like four years ago and drew this picture three years ago, it's pretty awful:
And I redrew it yesterday:
Improvment? Yes.
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Post by πβππ π£π on Mar 30, 2017 12:49:38 GMT -5
OOC Pls people, I crave attention.
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Post by πβππ π£π on Mar 30, 2017 15:05:54 GMT -5
OOC Poke
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Post by πβππ π£π on Mar 30, 2017 18:30:55 GMT -5
OOC *sigh*
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Post by πβππ π£π on Mar 30, 2017 22:59:07 GMT -5
OOC Please people, comment or something. I live off of the attention you people give me.
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Post by boulevard on Mar 31, 2017 0:17:33 GMT -5
May I give some critique?
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Post by πβππ π£π on Mar 31, 2017 0:24:26 GMT -5
OOC I guess. But for the record, I know neither are great but I am proud of the bottom one so like uh, pls be gentle. I'm my own worst critic but I'm actually pretty proud of the bottom one and I'd kinda like to keep it that way.
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Post by boulevard on Mar 31, 2017 0:27:07 GMT -5
Alright, I'll try and not be harsh. May I ask what art program you are using?
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Post by πβππ π£π on Mar 31, 2017 0:28:42 GMT -5
OOC Just sumo paint, it's not the best but that's all I've got.
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Post by boulevard on Mar 31, 2017 0:30:29 GMT -5
Are you able to download programs?
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Post by πβππ π£π on Mar 31, 2017 0:31:38 GMT -5
OOC Nope.
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Post by boulevard on Mar 31, 2017 0:41:59 GMT -5
Hm, alright.
Okay here we go.
You've improved a bit, I see. There is still a lot of room for improvement however.
Sumopaint is an okay program if you have no way of downloading programs, but if you ever get the chance download something like FireAlpaca or Krita. Those programs are really good, and best part, they're free!
Onto the art. The lines are fairly messy, I do recommend cleaning them up by going over them once more, and if you used the bucket tool find a way to get rid of those white dots. Anatomy is off, I suggest finding time to practice animal and people anatomies alike to get a general feel of how bodies work and move. Even with anthropomorphic animals like this, you have a lot to learn from anatomy.
The colouring on the animals is fine, again, try cleaning it up a lil, but on the background? Tone down the pink, it's a little eye-bleedy. And green and pink together is generally considered a no-go colour combination. Definitely choose colours that don't hurt people's eyes and don't clash as much as these do. Like, for the green, I suggest using perhaps a darker green or something of the sort. Colour wheels and online palette generators (such as palleton.com) help a ton in this situation.
Other than that, it's not the worst I've seen. Not nearly. But there is still a lot to learn here. I hope this helps!
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Post by πβππ π£π on Mar 31, 2017 0:51:33 GMT -5
OOC Kay.
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Post by Moonblazer on Mar 31, 2017 10:58:07 GMT -5
Yeah! I see the improvement! I like the variety of animals ^^'
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Post by Allie on Mar 31, 2017 19:14:25 GMT -5
<3 <3 <3 <3 <3 Okay, but- the second one is so much better S'more! I love your art so much, and like, its gotten so much better. (even though it started out really great) I really really love it~
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