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Post by 🍁Searipple101🍁 on Mar 25, 2017 23:59:01 GMT -5
I hope I didn't hit any cars and keyed them XDDDDDDDD
I'm so bad.
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Post by [~Ghost Writer~] on Mar 26, 2017 0:02:21 GMT -5
I DUG MY KEY INTO THE SIDE OF HIS PRETTY LITTLE SOUPED UP FOUR WHEEL DRIVE, CARVED MY NAME INTO HIS LEATHER SEEEEEEEAT!
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Post by mintedstar/fur🦇 on Mar 26, 2017 0:05:21 GMT -5
Someone is in a singing mood today. XD And here I'm stuck listening to wordless songs. I can't join in.
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Post by 🍁Searipple101🍁 on Mar 26, 2017 0:07:02 GMT -5
I'm listening to Get Scared right now. Specifically, Parade.
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Post by [~Ghost Writer~] on Mar 26, 2017 0:07:23 GMT -5
Someone is in a singing mood today. XD And here I'm stuck listening to wordless songs. I can't join in. I can't help it. I miss choir days....
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Post by mintedstar/fur🦇 on Mar 26, 2017 0:10:18 GMT -5
I'm listening to Roundtable Rival. Don't ask me who it's by, I don't know. XD
I'm not going to stop you, Blue. I just wish I could join you. I'll just change songs so I can...
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Post by [~Ghost Writer~] on Mar 26, 2017 0:11:09 GMT -5
I'm listening to Roundtable Rival. Don't ask me who it's by, I don't know. XD I'm not going to stop you, Blue. I just wish I could join you. I'll just change songs so I can... Sing with me the song of my people
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Post by mintedstar/fur🦇 on Mar 26, 2017 0:21:30 GMT -5
Ooooh I hear, hear the echo of your drums. It's in your hands, let the rain dance. Oooh I feal, feel the power of your song. It's in your call, let the rain fall!
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Post by [~Ghost Writer~] on Mar 26, 2017 0:35:00 GMT -5
Come with me And dive into a world humans can't see. Where worries turns into light and ecstasy. Where tears illuminate your whole being. but these wave Are drifting me Awaaaaay
Won't you rescue me From this endless sea Before I turn into seafoam Won't you stay with me Underneath the sea Before I turn into Seafoam
My voice is trapped in bubbles You can't see or hear I'm losing breath I can't move yet I close my eyes
Sometimes We're born with fins that are too short to swim
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Post by [~Ghost Writer~] on Mar 26, 2017 0:36:11 GMT -5
That song reminds me of Sunstar's death
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Post by 🍁Searipple101🍁 on Mar 26, 2017 0:37:25 GMT -5
It's cold, so why aren't the embers falling from the stars? I can see your face, so why aren't you with me in my arms? I'm becoming numb, I can barely hold up my own hand. But I can still feel you here, while the world begins to fall apart. While the world begins to fall.
And you'll scream my name up to the sky as you watch the tide come wash away the night, and you'll scream my name up to the sky as you watch the tide come wash away the night, and well make our way out of this mess.
My pulse slows, as my eyes begin to close. Theres a fire inside this beating heart but it only beats for you. Ashes fill my lungs, can't you taste them on your tongue. Watch the light wash away. I'll be holding on and its all for love.
And you'll scream my name up to the sky as you watch the tide come wash away the night, and you'll scream my name up to the sky as you watch the tide come wash away the night, and well make our way out of this mess.
And you'll scream my name up to the sky as you watch the tide come wash away the night, and you'll scream my name up to the sky as you watch the tide come wash away the night, and well make our way out of this mess.
While the world begins to fall.
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Post by [~Ghost Writer~] on Mar 26, 2017 0:40:54 GMT -5
I saw sea's song contest (find a song that describes a character) and I wanna do that
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Post by 🍁Searipple101🍁 on Mar 26, 2017 0:43:48 GMT -5
Then find a song and have me listen to it :3 I can't wait to see(or rather hear) what you come up with
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Post by [~Ghost Writer~] on Mar 26, 2017 0:45:32 GMT -5
I will for Empty.
I wanna do a contest for TNNOK and WTES
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Post by 🍁Searipple101🍁 on Mar 26, 2017 0:47:23 GMT -5
Okay! I'm eager now X3
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Post by mintedstar/fur🦇 on Mar 26, 2017 1:11:32 GMT -5
Cambridge to Boston Lives in a world she's lost in Victim of compromise He's staring at her Aberdeen heart London eyes, Glasgow bone She's a whistle in the catacombs A paradox
He's in love with the statue in a marble block He's in love with the girl that time forgot
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Post by » ѕнαdσω ⚔️ on Mar 26, 2017 11:06:17 GMT -5
EARTHQUAKE!! You now if you want some information on what an earthquake can do to an environment/landscape all you got to do is ask. I am the geology major after all. :'D
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Post by [~Ghost Writer~] on Mar 26, 2017 12:13:59 GMT -5
EARTHQUAKE!! You now if you want some information on what an earthquake can do to an environment/landscape all you got to do is ask. I am the geology major after all. :'D Really?!? Dude, that'd be so helpful! (I'm not in college yet just because im trying to save up a bit of money but I'm going to major in psychology and maybe minor in writing :3 I'm sure no one is surprised about the psychology part)
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Post by » ѕнαdσω ⚔️ on Mar 26, 2017 12:25:19 GMT -5
I love psychology. I took a class in my first year of college that got me really hooked, but I couldn't imagine doing it as a career. x'D
Well, here is what I can tell you. You can think of earthquakes as irritants for the earth's surface. Any weaknesses will be exposed. Earthquakes have been known to re-awaken once dormant volcanoes, or make active volcanoes erupt sooner. They can cause massive rips in the earth which can lead to sink holes and fissures that open up pockets of gas which can be deadly. They can also cause a chain reaction that will lead to more earthquakes. Depending on how large, there will also be aftershocks which will grow smaller the longer it goes on. The largest earthquakes can have aftershocks that last an entire day up to a few days. Rough ride. o3o
Oh, and don't forget that if you have an earthquake under the water, it can cause tsunamis. Larger the quake, the larger the tsunami.
There's tons of real life examples out there. The most recent ( and major) being the Japan Earthquake that caused that tsunami that wiped out a large portion of their coastal cities. I think that was only a few years ago. What's sad is that they were the most prepared country on earth to deal with such a situation, but the waves overcame all of their defenses.
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Post by » ѕнαdσω ⚔️ on Mar 26, 2017 12:28:26 GMT -5
Landscape wise Earthquakes have been known to move areas a few feet and displace the land tens of feet. Where the earth opens one side could be raised twenty feet while the other side remains un-effected. So in your story the surroundings could look very different. Landmarks that were once there could have been moved some or even completely destroyed.
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Post by [~Ghost Writer~] on Mar 26, 2017 12:32:45 GMT -5
That gives me a few good ideas. Definitely helps :3
I wanted to be a therapist or Psychology teacher for about 9 or more years to this day haha. That's about half my life or so
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Post by [~Ghost Writer~] on Mar 26, 2017 14:58:31 GMT -5
New chapter
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Post by [~Ghost Writer~] on Mar 26, 2017 15:13:47 GMT -5
Edited
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Post by 🍁Searipple101🍁 on Mar 26, 2017 15:21:58 GMT -5
"Frostedweb said to keep hope and then have my my medicine cat name, Shrewlight." (re-read it)
Sorrelclaw looked around for Spiderheart and headed over to the tom who was chatting with his son, Dustpaw, about hunting skills. (commas around Dustpaw's name here)
"Spiderheart, Batstar wants you to go out hunting. She said anything would help." She pressed her muzzle close to her(should be 'his' ear. "Be sure to try to get a lot. I think we might have more mouths to feed soon." Dustpaw glared at the she-cat, displeased with her closeness to her father. "Now get going! The clan isn't going to feed itself!" Her tapped his white and grey ear with a paw and left to search for brambles.
"He's not a good enough swimmer to go with you, Spiderheart. (comma, as she is addressing Spiderheart directly.)
Even if he starts drowning I'll be there to get him. He's not a kit anymore,(addressing Batstar directly) Batstar, he's almost a warrior." He lashes('lashed.' Keep it in past-tense to be uniform with the story.) his tail.
"It's hard for me too, Sorrelclaw.
looking over at her son who was sharing a drowned mouse with Rainpaw. (Not as important, but it'd make a bit more sense if you described briefly where the mouse came form. I realize the water, but it's a tiny plot hole as it stands now since you had Spiderheart and Dustpaw go in search of prey just moments before.)
"Starclan, let them be alright out there." Batstar whispered. (If she's addressing StarClan directly, comma after it.)
I realize most of these will seem pretty nitpicky, but commas are proper grammar. Overall, very good work, though. I love the after tremors that are starting to happen, and that we may not see our two toms again. It's suspenseful!
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Post by 🍁Searipple101🍁 on Mar 26, 2017 15:22:37 GMT -5
I'm not looking over it again after my search, so you can just fix anything you haven't already XD
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Post by [~Ghost Writer~] on Mar 26, 2017 15:24:21 GMT -5
Welp.... Spiderheart and Dustpaw confirmed transgender and Sorrelclaw is confirmed lesbian it looks like
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Post by [~Ghost Writer~] on Mar 26, 2017 15:30:16 GMT -5
Fixed
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Post by mintedstar/fur🦇 on Mar 26, 2017 15:35:38 GMT -5
*shrugs shoulders in amusement* Why not! They can join transgender Seedpaw (Mortality) and gay Rattlesnake and Dream (The Game).
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Post by 🍁Searipple101🍁 on Mar 26, 2017 15:36:55 GMT -5
Stuff's going down, and I like it. If I may, I'd personally love to see more Thicketpaw. I think I'm starting to like him more than Spiderheart, actually XD idk why, but my mind is gravitating to him.
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Post by [~Ghost Writer~] on Mar 26, 2017 15:37:53 GMT -5
New inside joke for WTES Also, anyone noticed that Sorrelclaw hinted that they'll be new cats in the clan anyone? :3
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