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Post by Maplestone360 on Jun 16, 2017 15:43:56 GMT -5
Browntail's not telling the truth, is she?
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Post by Hawktalon, on Jun 16, 2017 17:54:58 GMT -5
Browntail's not telling the truth, is she? Noooope!
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Post by moonmasksunfrost on Jun 16, 2017 19:10:27 GMT -5
Liar Liar, liar, pants on fire pantelones del fuego braccae tuae conflagrante >:t
Browntail and Yangpaw are worried about her for veeery different reasons. I hope Browntail comes out and admits the stuff to them at some point, I don't dislike her but I certainly don't like her methods... Assigning Yinpaw a jerkish mentor and lying about her being blind in her purple eye and StarClan knows what else. I mean, yes it's a scary prospect, but if you're scared about her having the power to destroy things, lying to her about stuff is maaaaybe not the best way to go?
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Post by Hawktalon, on Jun 16, 2017 19:14:11 GMT -5
Liar Liar, liar, pants on fire pantelones del fuego braccae tuae conflagrante >:t Browntail and Yangpaw are worried about her for veeery different reasons. I hope Browntail comes out and admits the stuff to them at some point, I don't dislike her but I certainly don't like her methods... Assigning Yinpaw a jerkish mentor and lying about her being blind in her purple eye and StarClan knows what else. I mean, yes it's a scary prospect, but if you're scared about her having the power to destroy things, lying to her about stuff is maaaaybe not the best way to go? lol and yeah! it is what makes Browntail such an interesting character though to write! She wants whats best for her Clan (among other motivations), but she's paranoid and her methods are... not great.
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Post by FåwnFrøst on Jun 16, 2017 21:55:23 GMT -5
"They kind of remind me of something" Well, duh, Yangpaw, they're painted on the wall! I think the reason she doesn't notice Browntail being so evasive is because she's not actually looking at her. The new pages are so pretty! I love how you added the contest winners' art on it.
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Post by Hawktalon, on Jun 16, 2017 22:24:55 GMT -5
"They kind of remind me of something" Well, duh, Yangpaw, they're painted on the wall! I think the reason she doesn't notice Browntail being so evasive is because she's not actually looking at her. The new pages are so pretty! I love how you added the contest winners' art on it. a yin-yang is painted on the wall, but that doesn't mean Yangpaw knows exactly what it is or how it relates to the story Browntail told in chapter one! she doesn't exactly have all the pieces to the puzzle, like I don't think she'd say 'look at this weird rock it looks like a yang symbol' she'd say something like 'look at this weird rock it has the same colors as me' and yeah, yangpaw's either really oblivious, or she's just not looking at Browntail. or both lol
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Post by Hawktalon, on Jun 17, 2017 8:27:51 GMT -5
Ahhh I came back to this after last reading it at like page 45 and the hype for all of the new pages is real You got me hooked here Yay! Glad you're back!
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smilii
trying to be more active!
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Post by smilii on Jun 17, 2017 10:25:50 GMT -5
Ahhh I came back to this after last reading it at like page 45 and the hype for all of the new pages is real You got me hooked here Yay! Glad you're back! I have several comics on here saved in my Bookmarks and sometimes check up on 'em (this is one of them)
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Post by neb on Jun 18, 2017 13:26:43 GMT -5
Bookmarking this ahhhh
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Post by 𝕊𝕙𝕒𝕕𝕠𝕨 on Jun 18, 2017 19:43:16 GMT -5
You would think Yangpaw would ask about the pendants shape being pained on the wall and what it meant, and why she and her sister have the same coloring as them..
But again I think Yangpaw's too busy staring at the amazing art and not noticing Browntail's lying.
I like this situation a lot.
Like really.
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Post by Hawktalon, on Jun 18, 2017 22:30:55 GMT -5
You would think Yangpaw would ask about the pendants shape being pained on the wall and what it meant, and why she and her sister have the same coloring as them.. But again I think Yangpaw's too busy staring at the amazing art and not noticing Browntail's lying. I like this situation a lot. Like really. she might be noticing but not really putting all the pieces together. chapter one said the story was really old and that it was largely regarded as just that, a story. so with that in mind, its just so impossible for anyone other than Browntail (who is a medicine cat and has to think about this kind of thing often, especially when she knows about the Prophecy) to think about the talismans as anything more than weird rocks that just happen to maybe remind you just a little of that old story. but it's just a coincidence, says yangpaw itd be like... idk someone's great grandparent was told a story that their great grandparent hid a key to a secret treasure in their house. and the someone is told by their parent (making the story eight generations old) that story maybe like twice when they were a kid, and it has become more like just a family joke by that time than a real serious thing. but one day the someone finds a key. of course they'd think about the old story, but unless they were particularly wildly imaginitive, they wouldn't think much past the fact that that key reminds them of the old story. its so old and so far fetched that it couldn't possibly be true. but still, it just might be. thats basically what i'm trying to get across. yangpaw is actually oblivious (to Browntail's lying especially) but it simply hasn't occurred to her to put all the pieces together. especially since she doesn't have all the pieces to even do that. and Browntail just thinks its better to just go whole hog and lie to Yangpaw as well even though she doesn't see the same signs about the Prophecy as she sees about Yinpaw. You'll just have to keep reading to find out if she's right or wrong about that!
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Post by Hawktalon, on Jun 18, 2017 22:31:12 GMT -5
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Post by 𝕊𝕙𝕒𝕕𝕠𝕨 on Jun 18, 2017 22:33:06 GMT -5
That's what I like about it though, is it is realistic! I just like how you actually think about what you do with your comics instead of putting in random stuff.
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Post by Hawktalon, on Jun 19, 2017 9:20:07 GMT -5
That's what I like about it though, is it is realistic! I just like how you actually think about what you do with your comics instead of putting in random stuff. Oh yay good! I do try to make them as realistic as I can, in terms of plot and characters, making a flowing and interesting plot and believable characters, and that sometimes means sacrificing things like humor for a more serious storyline that is mostly focused on the plot (and dialogue for that matter), but I still think it works out!
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Post by Hawktalon, on Jun 19, 2017 17:43:57 GMT -5
page today I think! I'll start it now, and if i don't finish, it'll be up later tonight hopefully!
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Post by Hawktalon, on Jun 19, 2017 22:48:47 GMT -5
page is all lined! it'll be colored and up tomorrow!
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Post by sorry on Jun 20, 2017 6:52:40 GMT -5
*suspenceful music plays*
Love the new page, by the way!
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Post by Hawktalon, on Jun 20, 2017 10:40:24 GMT -5
page 57 is UP!
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Post by mintedstar/fur🦇 on Jun 20, 2017 12:07:55 GMT -5
You just better get it right, Yangpaw.
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Post by Hawktalon, on Jun 20, 2017 12:47:24 GMT -5
You just better get it right, Yangpaw. do it GOOD yangpaw!
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Post by mintleaf2 on Jun 22, 2017 8:55:47 GMT -5
Your art is just incredible. It's so inspiring how much you've improved <3
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Post by featherdapple on Jun 22, 2017 10:48:31 GMT -5
Amazing artwork, all of the pages are so pretty.
Can't wait for the gathering Browntail mentioned.
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Post by Hawktalon, on Jun 22, 2017 16:51:57 GMT -5
Your art is just incredible. It's so inspiring how much you've improved <3 thanks so much! Amazing artwork, all of the pages are so pretty. Can't wait for the gathering Browntail mentioned. thank you! and that'll be next chapter!
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Post by Deleted on Jun 23, 2017 7:26:06 GMT -5
Hope Yinpaw isn't jelly of Yangpaw. Poor thing has a terrible mentor. It's Browntail's fault.
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Post by Hawktalon, on Jun 23, 2017 9:47:29 GMT -5
Hope Yinpaw isn't jelly of Yangpaw. Poor thing has a terrible mentor. It's Browntail's fault. you'll have to wait and see!
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Post by Hawktalon, on Jun 23, 2017 9:48:03 GMT -5
page will be up tonight i think!
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Post by Deleted on Jun 23, 2017 10:23:15 GMT -5
*stares at comic till page comes up*
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Post by Hawktalon, on Jun 23, 2017 19:41:45 GMT -5
You might have to stare a bit longer sorry I have to delay the page till tomorrow I'm tired after work... but I'll start it tonight to finish tomorrow! Sorry for the delay!
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Post by ᴄᴏɴɪ﹣ғᴇʀᴏᴜs on Jun 23, 2017 22:07:37 GMT -5
You might have to stare a bit longer sorry I have to delay the page till tomorrow I'm tired after work... but I'll start it tonight to finish tomorrow! Sorry for the delay! It's ok~ I know what it's like to be tired. Get some rest.
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