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Post by Hawktalon, on Mar 24, 2017 11:00:20 GMT -5
Your art in your new style has definitely improved over the last few pages! I really like the expressions and poses, and the proportions are better. Your comics are easy to read and understand, and it's easy to tell your characters apart, which is great for a comic. I've come across a few web comics that I could barely stand to read simply because it was confusing and hard to follow the story. Wow thank you so much! I try to make my comics very accessible and like you said, easy to understand and follow. There are too many where it's hard to follow and where the art isn't easy to read... I used to read some and when it was too confusing I would think 'well at least it makes sense to them but like, that isn't the best policy for a comic lol
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Post by Hawktalon, on Mar 24, 2017 11:00:47 GMT -5
Honestly, I think the old style in this comic is cute, but the new style is really pretty. that's good, maple! I'm glad you like both still, though!
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Post by mintedstar/fur🦇 on Mar 24, 2017 16:55:19 GMT -5
I like both styles as well.
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Post by ᴄᴏɴɪ﹣ғᴇʀᴏᴜs on Mar 25, 2017 11:08:29 GMT -5
So I'm half done on the PMV(Sorta) and hopefully it'll be up next week... And you can expect one piece of fanart for both Skyfall and Yin and Yang! I'm still looking forward for the new page!
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Post by Hawktalon, on Mar 25, 2017 19:04:29 GMT -5
I like both styles as well. Yay!!
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Post by Hawktalon, on Mar 25, 2017 19:04:57 GMT -5
So I'm half done on the PMV(Sorta) and hopefully it'll be up next week... And you can expect one piece of fanart for both Skyfall and Yin and Yang! I'm still looking forward for the new page! OMG you're so nice! I can't wait to see everything! I'm sure it'll be amazing!!!
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Post by Eclipselance on Mar 25, 2017 19:23:11 GMT -5
Someone has probably asked this but I can't find it! Is Broken Wings also on the new WCF? I think I remember reading it on the old forums, and I definitely remember reading this one and Skyfall (great conclusion, by the way).
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Post by ᴄᴏɴɪ﹣ғᴇʀᴏᴜs on Mar 26, 2017 7:03:38 GMT -5
Ok, I've finished drawing seven cats in the fanart... Twelve more plus backgrounds to go! WHEEEEEE
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Post by Hawktalon, on Mar 26, 2017 13:37:32 GMT -5
Someone has probably asked this but I can't find it! Is Broken Wings also on the new WCF? I think I remember reading it on the old forums, and I definitely remember reading this one and Skyfall (great conclusion, by the way). IDK if someone's asked, but i'll still answer! Broken Wings isn't up on this WCF. The only ones of my comics that are up here are Skyfall and Yin and Yang. The Unforgiven and Broken Wings aren't up. I'm in the process of doing a few things, namely putting all my comics in one place. But that'll be after Yin and Yang is done because spoilers. But I'll let you all know! So sorry for the inconvenience, but I'm glad you like Skyfall!
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Post by Hawktalon, on Mar 26, 2017 13:37:45 GMT -5
Ok, I've finished drawing seven cats in the fanart... Twelve more plus backgrounds to go! WHEEEEEE Ohmygosh you're amazing! Thank you so much!!
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Post by ᴄᴏɴɪ﹣ғᴇʀᴏᴜs on Mar 27, 2017 8:23:01 GMT -5
Ok, I've finished drawing seven cats in the fanart... Twelve more plus backgrounds to go! WHEEEEEE Ohmygosh you're amazing! Thank you so much!! Oh and a question: will you be redrawing Broken wings and The Unforgiven too?
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Post by Hawktalon, on Mar 27, 2017 11:03:38 GMT -5
Oh and a question: will you be redrawing Broken wings and The Unforgiven too? at this point, I want to say no. Comparing them to the original Yin and Yang, they look very good, for my level of artistry at the time, anyway. And I don't feel the same weird desire to re-do the story for them as I did for Yin and Yang. Like, there wouldn't be much of a change. It'd be like those times when a remake of a movie comes out and people are like 'what did that even need a remake?' But also, who knows? I keep thinking 'oh the comic (sixth) after Yin and Yang will be my last one' but then I think 'but... what would I even do if i'm not doing comics?' I wouldn't know what to do with my life... i've been doing them for... seven years? That's nearly a decade. And Yin and Yang isn't even over yet, so I don't even know how long I'll have been going when I get there. I am definitely going to do a sixth comic, I'm working it out right now and I'm very excited! But after that... who knows? We'll see when we get there, of course!
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Post by moonmasksunfrost on Mar 27, 2017 19:07:12 GMT -5
FIGHT FIGHT FIGHT Argghh, I feel you on the complicated fight poses, Hawky. They all look very nice though ^^"
*reads through thread* aw yes, a sixth comic in the works? I'll be excited to see what you cook up! I get what you mean about The Unforgiven and Broken Wings, you've improved so far from there but they still look very nice.
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Post by Hawktalon, on Mar 27, 2017 20:04:00 GMT -5
FIGHT FIGHT FIGHT Argghh, I feel you on the complicated fight poses, Hawky. They all look very nice though ^^" *reads through thread* aw yes, a sixth comic in the works? I'll be excited to see what you cook up! I get what you mean about The Unforgiven and Broken Wings, you've improved so far from there but they still look very nice. Awe you're so nice moon!! And yes, comic six is in the planning stage, as in i'm just brain barfing notes onto a document lol it actually has a title (i'm so proud of it its amazing) but i'm not saying anything about it or the comic itself yet though. But it is in the works and that's all you guys need to know!
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Post by FåwnFrøst on Mar 27, 2017 20:14:06 GMT -5
And yes, comic six is in the planning stage, as in i'm just brain barfing notes onto a document lol Oh look it's me when I work on my new comic pages. I need to work on those...
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Post by Maplestone360 on Mar 27, 2017 20:32:22 GMT -5
And yes, comic six is in the planning stage, as in i'm just brain barfing notes onto a document lol Oh look it's me when I work on my new comic pages. I need to work on those...Same. As in, yes, I've been planning a comic, but I don't know if I'll start it anytime soon. Life is so busy as it is. :|
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Post by FåwnFrøst on Mar 27, 2017 20:49:00 GMT -5
But I'm like: Yes, I'm working on the page, as in I'm just barfing up stuff vaguely resembling a comic page onto my art app and repeatedly undoing everything.
It's cool that you're doing another comic, though, Hawktalon,!
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Post by Hawktalon, on Mar 27, 2017 21:40:01 GMT -5
And yes, comic six is in the planning stage, as in i'm just brain barfing notes onto a document lol Oh look it's me when I work on my new comic pages. I need to work on those...lol i mean i gotta get to work on the next page too haha!
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Post by Hawktalon, on Mar 27, 2017 21:42:48 GMT -5
But I'm like: Yes, I'm working on the page, as in I'm just barfing up stuff vaguely resembling a comic page onto my art app and repeatedly undoing everything. It's cool that you're doing another comic, though, Hawktalon,! ahah the way i said it made it seem a lot more cohesive, as cohesive as word barf can sound, but its really nowhere near starting, and seeing as I have all the time it takes me to finish Yin and Yang to get it all planned out, i'm not too worried and yes, it is! I was actually worried for a while, cause I thought Yin and Yang was going to be my last comic as I couldn't think of any ideas, but one came to me one day and I built it up to some semblance of a plot, so that's gonna happen eventually!
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Post by Hawktalon, on Mar 28, 2017 18:17:51 GMT -5
So I'm gonna start page 41 tonight and try to finish it!
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Post by Maplestone360 on Mar 28, 2017 18:21:57 GMT -5
Yay!
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Post by Fresh Sans Genderbend on Mar 28, 2017 18:53:58 GMT -5
Can't wait for page 41 to be done! :-D
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Post by Hawktalon, on Mar 29, 2017 16:31:04 GMT -5
page 41 might be finished tonight, sorry for the delay! I'll see what I can do, though!
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Post by Deleted on Mar 29, 2017 17:47:24 GMT -5
Yo Hawktalon, I'm dying to know what's the big fricking deal between Skullstripe and Browntail. BTW, why's Yangpaw the creator and Yinpaw the destroyer?
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Post by Maplestone360 on Mar 29, 2017 18:46:20 GMT -5
Yo Hawktalon, I'm dying to know what's the big fricking deal between Skullstripe and Browntail. BTW, why's Yangpaw the creator and Yinpaw the destroyer? Exactly. cx
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Post by Hawktalon, on Mar 29, 2017 21:04:04 GMT -5
Yo Hawktalon, I'm dying to know what's the big fricking deal between Skullstripe and Browntail. BTW, why's Yangpaw the creator and Yinpaw the destroyer? pff you think i'm gonna tell you these things? well, you'll know the first answer by the end of this chapter and the second answer... uh... later
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Post by Hawktalon, on Mar 29, 2017 21:06:41 GMT -5
Page 41 is UP!
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Post by ᴄᴏɴɪ﹣ғᴇʀᴏᴜs on Mar 30, 2017 1:33:04 GMT -5
Gentletom...Gentleman...gotcha. Nice pun, Beepaw!
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Post by Maplestone360 on Mar 30, 2017 6:10:01 GMT -5
Gentletom...Gentleman...gotcha. Nice pun, Beepaw! Even Hawkpaw thought it was funny.
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Post by Hawktalon, on Mar 30, 2017 6:52:19 GMT -5
Gentletom...Gentleman...gotcha. Nice pun, Beepaw! I mean I coooould have made a pun where Thunderpaw says "bee quiet Beepaw" but I did not take this opportunity And I don't think gentletom is even a pun it's could be like a normal word in... cat language lol
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