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Post by Sootfeather on Jan 1, 2017 0:03:59 GMT -5
The new page is great! The eye placement is better, and the spots on the muzzle being faint make it look better for some reason. I really like Bearheart's design, he looks so fluffy! I also really like the first two panels.
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Post by Hawktalon, on Jan 1, 2017 0:12:29 GMT -5
The new page is great! The eye placement is better, and the spots on the muzzle being faint make it look better for some reason. I really like Bearheart's design, he looks so fluffy! I also really like the first two panels. Aaa yay thank you! This means so much to me, so thank you so much!!!!
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Post by Brownie on Jan 1, 2017 1:55:37 GMT -5
The new page is great! The eye placement is better, and the spots on the muzzle being faint make it look better for some reason. I really like Bearheart's design, he looks so fluffy! I also really like the first two panels. I agree with this too. I think the dark muzzle spots made the faces too busy, and having them fainter makes it easier to look at. You can focus on the expressions more.
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Post by Hawktalon, on Jan 1, 2017 12:02:18 GMT -5
The new page is great! The eye placement is better, and the spots on the muzzle being faint make it look better for some reason. I really like Bearheart's design, he looks so fluffy! I also really like the first two panels. I agree with this too. I think the dark muzzle spots made the faces too busy, and having them fainter makes it easier to look at. You can focus on the expressions more. Aaa wow thank you for this! It helps always so much when specific things are spelled out! So thank you!!
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Post by FåwnFrøst on Jan 1, 2017 12:43:44 GMT -5
The new page is great! The eye placement is better, and the spots on the muzzle being faint make it look better for some reason. I really like Bearheart's design, he looks so fluffy! I also really like the first two panels. I agree with this too. I think the dark muzzle spots made the faces too busy, and having them fainter makes it easier to look at. You can focus on the expressions more. I agree! Also, it seems like you made the muzzle spots the same color (just a bit darker) than the cat. It draws less attention to them and it makes the cat look nicer, too.
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Post by Deleted on Jan 1, 2017 21:39:35 GMT -5
oh my god, I found the Broken Wings comic. You've improved so much, great job! This comic is amazing!
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Post by moonmasksunfrost on Jan 2, 2017 13:06:44 GMT -5
Aahhhh I keep abandoning this place And feeling super guilty I freaking didn't even reply to your post Hawky ;-;
My Christmas break was good, we actually went down to North Carolina as well because my family lived there for a couple years, so we have some friends down there. Also there is a yummy breakfast spot that makes crepes, ;3 We saw Rogue one, and generally hung about, which was nice. Ack, and now 2017 is here...! Have you gone back to school yet or if your break still going?
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Post by Hawktalon, on Jan 3, 2017 10:10:25 GMT -5
oh my god, I found the Broken Wings comic. You've improved so much, great job! This comic is amazing! Aw thank you!!!
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Post by Hawktalon, on Jan 3, 2017 10:13:03 GMT -5
Aahhhh I keep abandoning this place And feeling super guilty I freaking didn't even reply to your post Hawky ;-; My Christmas break was good, we actually went down to North Carolina as well because my family lived there for a couple years, so we have some friends down there. Also there is a yummy breakfast spot that makes crepes, ;3 We saw Rogue one, and generally hung about, which was nice. Ack, and now 2017 is here...! Have you gone back to school yet or if your break still going? Oh no it's completely okay Moon! You come by whenever you want to of can! Always love seeing you either way!! Sounds super fun! And lol my break actually goes till like the 16th or something! So I have a bit more time!! It's good I love relaxing, though I need to start getting up at a reasonable time..: Like I got up this morning, even set an alarm for 9:30 and... stayed in bed till now, which is 10. And I was told by my Greek professor to study Greek every day of break for like 10 mins and I have done none of that! Haaaaaaaa welp.
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Post by Jackalstep on Jan 4, 2017 0:35:35 GMT -5
I like the new page! Skullstripe's eyebrows in the first frame made me grin.
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Post by Hawktalon, on Jan 4, 2017 21:54:11 GMT -5
I like the new page! Skullstripe's eyebrows in the first frame made me grin. Awesome!!
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Post by Hawktalon, on Jan 6, 2017 8:36:44 GMT -5
I'll try to work on a page today!
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Post by Hawktalon, on Jan 6, 2017 23:21:33 GMT -5
page 29 is almost done it'll be finished tomorrow morning! And we might be getting snow here, so yay for that!!
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Post by FåwnFrøst on Jan 7, 2017 11:07:26 GMT -5
page 29 is almost done it'll be finished tomorrow morning! And we might be getting snow here, so yay for that!! It tried to snow here... Everyone was freaking out about it and then none of it stuck to the ground.
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Post by Hawktalon, on Jan 7, 2017 13:46:00 GMT -5
page 29 is UP!
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Post by Hawktalon, on Jan 7, 2017 14:41:16 GMT -5
HEEEEEEECK I WAS WORKING ON SOMETHING SUPER AWESOME FOR THE COMIC AND MY PROGRAM CRASHED AND I DIDN"T SAVE AAAAAAAAAARRRRGGGHHHHHHH IT WAS SOO COOL AND TOOK SO LONG IM SCREAMING AND NOW IT'S LOST FOREVER
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Post by Windspirit14 on Jan 8, 2017 14:59:54 GMT -5
HEEEEEEECK I WAS WORKING ON SOMETHING SUPER AWESOME FOR THE COMIC AND MY PROGRAM CRASHED AND I DIDN"T SAVE AAAAAAAAAARRRRGGGHHHHHHH IT WAS SOO COOL AND TOOK SO LONG IM SCREAMING AND NOW IT'S LOST FOREVER Oh. That sucks.
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Post by FåwnFrøst on Jan 8, 2017 15:02:08 GMT -5
HEEEEEEECK I WAS WORKING ON SOMETHING SUPER AWESOME FOR THE COMIC AND MY PROGRAM CRASHED AND I DIDN"T SAVE AAAAAAAAAARRRRGGGHHHHHHH IT WAS SOO COOL AND TOOK SO LONG IM SCREAMING AND NOW IT'S LOST FOREVER That happens to me sometimes! I know exactly how you feel! What were you working on?
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Post by Emberleaf on Jan 8, 2017 15:37:58 GMT -5
Is Browntal Fawnspot's sister or something?
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Post by FåwnFrøst on Jan 8, 2017 16:34:17 GMT -5
As a matter of fact, I just accidentally deleted my comic page instead of the layer I meant to. So I know exactly how you feel, Hawktalon.
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Post by Hawktalon, on Jan 8, 2017 16:55:00 GMT -5
HEEEEEEECK I WAS WORKING ON SOMETHING SUPER AWESOME FOR THE COMIC AND MY PROGRAM CRASHED AND I DIDN"T SAVE AAAAAAAAAARRRRGGGHHHHHHH IT WAS SOO COOL AND TOOK SO LONG IM SCREAMING AND NOW IT'S LOST FOREVER That happens to me sometimes! I know exactly how you feel! What were you working on? i didn't want to say cause it was gonna be a surprise, so I'll be vague: i'm animating something special!
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Post by Hawktalon, on Jan 8, 2017 16:56:46 GMT -5
Is Browntal Fawnspot's sister or something? ding ding! Just don't say anything else, ember! some people don't know who she is yet!
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Post by Hawktalon, on Jan 8, 2017 16:57:06 GMT -5
As a matter of fact, I just accidentally deleted my comic page instead of the layer I meant to. So I know exactly how you feel, Hawktalon. ohhhh the pain I'm sorry my friend
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Post by Hawktalon, on Jan 8, 2017 16:58:44 GMT -5
so I'm re-doing this special animation i'm working on and its going well i'm saving a bunch lol and its like 100+ frames (though its just the basic storyboard/sketches RN) but like 20 seconds oh well it's gonna be cool
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Post by Emberleaf on Jan 8, 2017 20:00:53 GMT -5
Do you have any tips for drawing wings? Especially on things like its, I try but it's hard to get the to look right.
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Post by Hawktalon, on Jan 8, 2017 23:49:19 GMT -5
Do you have any tips for drawing wings? Especially on things like its, I try but it's hard to get the to look right. Okay so this is gonna sound super unhelpful but... look at references? Like look up some birb pictures, especially anatomy drawings. Of course, the wings I draw are one) have been drawing them for a number of years so it's like nbd for me and two) are not perfect and I still look at ref pics too my dude. I... also have a pet bird (parakeet, neon green and yellow. Named Skittles) whom I look to for inspiration. So he helps a bit. It's late now and I'm on mobile, so I'll see about making a small tutorial or something.
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Post by Sootfeather on Jan 9, 2017 11:56:04 GMT -5
I really like Lavenderstar's annoyed expression in the first panel of the new page. There seems to still be some problems with the facial structure, but you're definitely improving. I'm struggling with human facial structure currently, so I know that it can be something that's hard to improve in. Facial structure and eye placement is hard on all animals.
And I'm excited about the animation! It's sad when you lose work like that but I bet it will still turn out great. O yeah, I have another snow day so I'm freeee
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Post by Hawktalon, on Jan 9, 2017 15:34:57 GMT -5
I really like Lavenderstar's annoyed expression in the first panel of the new page. There seems to still be some problems with the facial structure, but you're definitely improving. I'm struggling with human facial structure currently, so I know that it can be something that's hard to improve in. Facial structure and eye placement is hard on all animals. And I'm excited about the animation! It's sad when you lose work like that but I bet it will still turn out great. O yeah, I have another snow day so I'm freeee ah yes, precisely why I don't draw people... very often. I'm sure if we both keep working, though, we'll get it! Ooh! And yay for that!
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Post by Hawktalon, on Jan 9, 2017 15:35:10 GMT -5
Page 30 is UP!
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Post by Brownie on Jan 9, 2017 19:44:33 GMT -5
what program are you trying to use to record? OBS is pretty good and free ^^ you'll need to have another editing program to speed it up, but it's the program I use to screen record and it works well.
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