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Post by Aphelyon on Feb 22, 2017 14:50:28 GMT -5
Yeah so I was just thinking of all my past characters and I realized I have a couple that were quite terrible. Most were only mildly edgy at best, but some... wow. So I thought, it would be funny to make a Clan/contest/game sorta thing where basically the goal is to try to present the most absolutely cringe-worthy OC you can. Doesn't have to be one you've ever used, can be something you make up on the spot.
So, you fill out the form for each cat, as if you creating a roleplay character, but unlike normal, the goal isn't to create a good character, it's to create the worst possible one you can. You know the type: over the top special, "flawed" but still somehow perfect, probably has a tragic backstory, etc. Characters can be in any point on their timeline, from birth to death, as long as they're terrible. Bonus points for unnatural detailing. Nothing completely over-the-top, like fully pink fur, but smaller details like purple/red eyes or a star on the cheek, or whatever, is a go. Bonus points as well for Sue-ish names cats wouldn't know about, like Demonwing, Angelfeather, or Diamondeye, or just super edgy names like Brokenheart or Lostspirit that no same Clan cat would ever actually name their kit. Also bonus points for cats who have absolutely no business being leader becoming leader. And finally, tragic backstory. Of course, their story doesn't have to be tragic, but overly dramatic... yes. Bonus points if they're the subject of a super obvious prophecy and are still surprised when they find out the prophecy is about them. They can be from the canon Clans or from made up Clans but you get even MORE bonus points if they fit badly into canon, like being Scourge's mate/kit, or Firestar's unknown forbidden daughter, or an AU where they become Ravenpaw's mate, or something silly like that. But, like, don't try to make their ties to canon make sense. Just throw them in haphazardly. It'll be fine.
Of course, don't just take all of these things at face value and pile them together. I'm not gonna accept if you literally just take the pieces I've presented and make a cat out of them without any thought of your own. Try to use those kinds of aspects creatively to create the worst possible character you can. Not sure what y'all are gonna win for making me cringe but hopefully I'll think of something. Maybe a very short fanfiction about your terrible character ( ͡° ͜ʖ ͡°)
I was honestly debating making this an actual Clan instead of a game thread, but I feel like that would just get... insane. I still might though, could be fun. But yeah, terrible Mary-Sues, lesgo *clap clap*
Name: Gender: Age: Appearance: Personality: Kin: Clan: History:
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Post by Rainstar on Apr 17, 2017 18:23:04 GMT -5
I thought this OC would never see the light of day, BUT HERE WE GO!
Name: Fireclaw Gender: Male Age: 17 moons Appearance: A ginger tom with one black paw. Personality: He is quite evil. :> Kin: He is Firestar's brother Clan: He be in the Dark Forest History: As a kit, Firekit went into the wild and joined ShadowClan. This was when Tigerstar led ShadowClan. He trained under Tigerstar, even though he was Firestar's brother. He grew hatred for ThunderClan for no reason in particular. After Tigerstar died, Fireclaw was a young warrior. Blackstar knew about him being evil so Blackstar killed Fireclaw.
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Post by Redfleck on May 9, 2017 16:18:56 GMT -5
I don't have time to make a form right now, but I just wanted to say that this could be like applications for Starkit's Prophecy (part 2) characters lol.
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finland
Porgs are love
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Post by finland on May 10, 2017 12:14:12 GMT -5
Name: Bloodstrike Gender: Female Age: 14 moons Appearance: A red and black she-cat with red-glowing eyes. Personality: Ruthless, evil, and powerful. Kin:Scourge and Mapleshade Clan: ShadowClan History: As a kit the other kittens were always mean to her because of her fur and eyes. So Bloodkit started her Dark Forest training when she was only 4 moon old! She quickly became the best fighter ever, and didn't even need apprentice training. She was that skilled earning her Warrior name of Bloodstrike! She has 36 lives and can heal herself, so she can never die! Bloodstrike killed all of the cats who were ever mean to her and everyone fears her!
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Post by Aphelyon on May 18, 2017 10:28:21 GMT -5
Haha wow I didn't realize this was still a thing. These are good XD I like the way that Fireclaw just subtley doesn't fit into the canon at all, and Bloodstrike is soooo edgy. Awesome.
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Post by Aphelyon on May 18, 2017 10:42:43 GMT -5
I raise you:
Name: Moonspirit Gender: Female Age: 16 moons Appearance: Beautiful long-furred blue she-cat with ice-blue eyes and a white heart-shaped patch on her chest. Personality: Loving and caring to all of her Clanmates but can be fierce when she needs to be. She is very understanding and even though she's young is wise and gives advice to her Clanmates. Kin: Mother is Bluestar, father is Lionheart. Clan: StarClan (ThunderClan) History: Some time after Bluestar became leader she became secret mates with Lionheart and found out she was pregnant with another litter of kits. She didn't want to lose these kits the same way she lost her first litter, and knew that as leader she didn't have time to raise another litter, so when Moonkit was born (in secret) she gave the kit to another queen and they pretended Moonkit was a part of that litter. Moonkit always knew her mom was really Bluestar though, even though no one told her, but she never said anything because even as a kit she knew it was an important secret. All her life she wanted to be a medicine cat but the Clan needed strong warriors so she became a warrior apprentice instead, sacrificing her dream for the good of the Clan because she knew as Bluestar's daughter she would be a fantastic hunter and fighter. She earned her warrior name after a few moons of apprenticeship when she single-pawed rescued another apprentice from a badger and chased the badger off. Her life was promising and it looked like she might be leader someday. But Thistleclaw was jealous of her, and realized she must be Bluestar's daughter, so to get rid of the competition and to make Bluestar suffer, Thistleclaw killed her and threw her body over the gorge so that no one would find it. In StarClan, Moonspirit doesn't hold a grudge because she knows that there is no point in having hatred; she just helps to guide the medicine cats of ThunderClan as best she can.
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Post by *ᴿᵃᶤᶰᶜᵃˡˡᵉʳ* on May 22, 2017 21:36:21 GMT -5
Name: Eclipsepaw Gender: shecat Age: 9 moons Appearance: Small black she-cat with golden flecks and shimmering orange eyes. Personality: Kind, outgoing, protective Kin: Flamepaw, Lightpaw Clan: Thunderclan History: Born outside of the clans to a cat by the name of Thunder, she and her siblings, (along with her cousins born three to a litter to River, Wind, Shadow, and Sky) joined the clans after dreaming of their grandmother Star. Each chose the clan based on their parents names, (Skyclan mysteriously joined the clans) and one of each became a medicine cat. Each separate clan then received a prophecy from a Starclan cat that stated the the clans would be destroyed by an unknown force. Thunderclan received the prophecy stating that only the light of flame during the darkening of the sun would save them. Each of them received a power, with Eclipsepaw getting the super power of basically becoming an all powerful being causing and drawing upon the eclipse.
(This was honestly the most Mary sueish cat I have come up with in the past. I never like making looks and personality Mary sueish, but the powers always went over board. Eclipsepaw was the worst, though honestly that entire family was just bad)
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Snowlight
One day I will rule the world......
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Post by Snowlight on May 22, 2017 23:41:06 GMT -5
Name: Perfectspirit Gender: She-cat Age: 2 moons Appearance: Pure white fur with rainbow eyes Personality: Kind, loving, and perfect Kin: Unknown Clan: ThunderClan History: Perfectspirit was found in the woods all alone when she was only 2 days old. When Bramblestar found her he was going to leave her there, but when he looked into her perfect rainbow eyes he knew she was going to save them all. Bramblestar named her perfectkit. When Tigerstar came back from the dead (again) to destroy ThunderClan, she shot lasers out of her eyes and killed him. Bramblestar was so impressed he made her a warrior when she was only one moon old.
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Post by Deleted on May 23, 2017 1:38:04 GMT -5
Name: sPARKLepaw Gender: COOL gal Age: 4 MOONs Appearance: ShE HAS PRetty RAINBOW FUR THAT SPARKLES AND PRETTY PINK EYES THaT CAN OPEN PORTOLS INTO sTAR CLAN Personality: CLUMSY AND CUTE Kin: HeR FATHER AND MOTHER WERE KILLED Clan: SHIMMERCLAN History:sHE wAs MAdE a AppRENtiCe eARlY BC SHE IS SO COOL, ALSO HER PARENTS DIED (sorry about the text but i needed to make it extra cringy)
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Post by Aphelyon on May 23, 2017 11:05:55 GMT -5
Lol these are lovely. They kind of vary between like illiterate 10-year-old's OCs that are just super over the top and more subtle, like, edgy 14-year-olds.
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Post by rainwhisker on Jun 1, 2017 16:06:31 GMT -5
Name: Rainboweyes Gender: Female Age: 6 moons Appearance: A beautiful blueish-gray cat with eyes that can change color depending on her emotions. Personality: The nicest cat you'll ever meet. She loves to help and is amazing at everything. Kin: Unknown Clan: Thunderclan History: Rainbowkit was abandoned by her mom and dad when she was less than a moon old. She was found by Firestar and Firestar took her into the clan. Firestar was so shocked by her power that instead of making her an apprentice, he made her a warrior at 6 moons.
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Post by chimken nugget on May 14, 2018 3:44:59 GMT -5
Name: Shimmerystar
Gender: Female
Appearance: Beautiful sparkly turquoise she-cat with long, thick, soft fur that contains real gold and diamonds, rainbow eyes with star pupils, and a black marking on her chest that grants her every power in the universe.
Personality: A kind, sweet, brave, loyal, honest, determined, friendly, good, wise, beautiful, amazing, strong, powerful, helpful, compassionate, intelligent, creative, talented, and unique she-cat who is loved by every cat in all the Clans and is widely considered the greatest cat to have ever existed.
Kin: She has no kin because she magically descended from StarClan to stop all the evil in the world and fulfill a prophecy.
History: StarClan received a prophecy about a cat who would defeat every evil spirit in the universe and be worshipped by all the Clans. They created Shimmerykit out of the goodness of their own souls and sent her down from Silverpelt to help the living cats. Shimmerykit wandered into the ThunderClan camp, and every cat there was immediately struck by her immense awesomeness and power. They all bowed down to her and Bramblestar made her the new leader, Shimmerystar. She didn't need any training because she was already exceptionally skilled at everything she tried. Every cat loved her, and she was a wonderful leader who made the best decisions for her Clan.
One day, Dark Forest spirits led by Mapleshade and Sol attacked, but as soon as they saw Shimmerystar they were blinded by her goodness and began to worship her. Shimmerystar told them to stay away from the Clans, and they moved 978 million miles away so the Dark Forest could never harm any cat. At the next Gathering, the other Clans heard what Shimmerystar had done and crowned her as the new leader of RiverClan, WindClan, SkyClan, and ShadowClan after the previous leaders stepped down.
She now had five Clans of cats to lead, but Shimmerystar was still the best leader ever and easily defeated any fox, badger, or rogue that threatened her Clanmates. However, she always let new cats join, as long as her incredible intuitive skills told her that the new cat wasn't evil. Since so many cats loved her, Shimmerystar had five mates but she loved all of them and had 5 litters of kits. The kits inherited some of Shimmerystar's amazingness, but she was still by far the best cat in the forest. She was an excellent warrior even with kits and could catch enough prey to feed all her followers in just an hour, fight off seventeen dogs at once, climb the tallest tree in seconds, swim across the lake during a storm, and run faster than a horse. Although she had all these abilities, Shimmerystar never even thought of using them for anything other than the good of her Clan, which had been named ShimmeryClan in her honor.
After living for 25 years and breaking Mistystar's record, she died valiantly while saving he Clan from a group of 99 massive dogs, bears, badgers, foxes, and mountain lions. ShimmeryClan continued to respect their founder even after her death, and Shimmerystar became supreme leader of StarClan and the Tribe of Endless Hunting, because the Tribe of Rushing Water loved her even though she had never visited the mountains. Every cat remembered and honored Shimmerystar as the greatest, awesomest, and best cat to ever grace the earth with her presence.
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Post by earthreborn on May 15, 2018 20:43:11 GMT -5
Name: Darkflash Gender: male Age: 8 moons Appearance: A pure white tom with a black splash of fur on his chest Personality: Constantly changing; nice one minute, nasty the next, pretty much unpredictable Kin: None Clan: RiverClan History; He joined RiverClan as a rouge, after his former group went through an uprising and he was exiled. He still plans for revenge on the rouge leaders of the uprising.
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