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Post by A crying Nidoking on Feb 9, 2017 20:26:28 GMT -5
Nah spoilers wont mess it up. we could do that. Im ashamed of myself for posting this but I drew a punk/biker Moonheart for laughs and giggles.
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Post by Novi on Feb 9, 2017 20:27:50 GMT -5
He makes me think of one o the dogs from Balto xD But i like him
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Post by Novi on Feb 9, 2017 23:03:43 GMT -5
Woah. That's so cool!
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Post by Hawkeyes258 on Feb 9, 2017 23:47:57 GMT -5
We need Lovepaw or Hopepaw only he/she can defend us from Hatepaw's edgyness!
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Post by Novi on Feb 9, 2017 23:50:07 GMT -5
Yaas. Make it happen Hawk xD
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Post by A crying Nidoking on Feb 9, 2017 23:59:52 GMT -5
We need Lovepaw and Hopepaw the wonder twin duo to overcome the evil skateboarding Dark Forest cat that is Hateplate. It needs to happen.
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Post by Hawkeyes258 on Feb 10, 2017 0:13:16 GMT -5
XD Lovepaw also is the matchmaker and Hopepaw gives these rather long speeches about never giving into despair and sadness. Meanwhile Hatepaw throws like a rock or mouse at them.
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Post by A crying Nidoking on Feb 10, 2017 0:21:29 GMT -5
This sounds amazing. I bet Owlpaw would love Hopepaw.
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Post by Deleted on Feb 10, 2017 4:58:30 GMT -5
☁︎ out of character ☁︎ hey everyone ! CAN I HAVE TWILIGHTCLAN DREAMS THOUGH also all the art is lovely !
☁︎ roleplay ☁︎
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Post by Deleted on Feb 10, 2017 18:39:35 GMT -5
☁︎ out of character ☁︎ i wish i could draw like you entracon !
☁︎ roleplay ☁︎
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Long time RPer, up for anything. Don't be a stranger, say hello!
Pronouns: Call Me Cinnamon! (They/Them)
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Post by Cinnamon Roll on Feb 10, 2017 20:17:16 GMT -5
Backstory narratives are always a good idea, since they can give insight into your cats personality outside of what we know in the roleplay!
Or you could write about some kind of adventure your cats had? (doesn't really matter if its canon or not)
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Post by Novi on Feb 10, 2017 20:43:27 GMT -5
How old was Yellowclaw when he was made deputy?
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Post by A crying Nidoking on Feb 10, 2017 21:11:00 GMT -5
How old was Yellowclaw when he was made deputy? this can be up to you! I imagine Robinstar chose a younger deputy (Yellowclaw was only 30-something moons I think) after the previous (older) deputy passed away or retired. So realistically somewhere between 20 moons and his age at death is what I think! Just my two cents though, not telling you what to put in your story. o.o The story with Snowpaw and Yellowclaw was really cute, i forget if it mentioned the previous deputy by name or something. You guys are free to make up a character for the deputy before Yellowclaw.
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Post by Novi on Feb 10, 2017 21:18:58 GMT -5
I just jotted down an Echoblaze as the previous deputy. Lol. And I'm trying to figure everything out because I'm doing Snowfawn's death scene and Ivypaw is the kit that she saved and I'm just trying to think of where everyone would be in terms of age and it's a lot harder than one might imagine xD Also, do the Starclan cats' ages go up by 2 moons along with everyone else? I'm just going to have Yellowclaw be deputy by this time. So then he should be around...22? Maybe....? Or 24? Because when I first made her, Snowfawn was 30, but then the time thing happened and I don't remember if the Starclan cat's ages changed but before Ivypaw would have been 8 moons, not 10. Aaaand I'm putting so much more thought into this than I should be xD Why can't I do this with school? Lol
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Post by A crying Nidoking on Feb 10, 2017 21:55:34 GMT -5
Aww that sounds like such a cute story. And no the Starclan cats don't age. Maybe try subtracting Yellowclaw's age at the time of Snowfawn's death from everybody else's ages?
Ex Robinstar is 50 moons old. Subtract Yellowclaw's age at the time of Snowfawn's death and you'd get the age for her. I imagine lots of the younger warriors would still be apprentices at that time.
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Post by Novi on Feb 10, 2017 22:02:18 GMT -5
I know, but the problem with the Starclan cats not aging and the living cats aging is just that. They age xD So eventually I'm going to have a 30 moon old Ivypaw (warrior name) while Snowfawn is still 30 as well. But, whatever. Lol. I finished. More Snowpaw and Yellowclaw cuteness-- Snowpaw's Assessment Snowpaw looked around frantically. After Echoblaze told her what she would be doing, she knew exactly what she had to do. But where was he? Out on a patrol. The mouse-brained overachiever that he was just had to get up super early in the morning. She scented the air and padded after the trail. Once she caught up to them, she took a running start and barreled into him. "Oof." Yellowclaw stumbled backwards. "Yellowclaw!" Snowpaw's ears perked up cheerfully. "Guess what! Guess what!" "What?" Yellowclaw held his head up to look at her. She was fairly small and he was used to having her tackle him. "I'm going to have my warrior's assessment!" She declared proudly, her chest puffing up. "I'm supposed to hunt with a partner and then do my battle test against Echoblaze. And he let me choose who I wanted and I. Chose. You." She nuzzled him happily. Yellowclaw hadn't chosen Snowpaw as his partner during his assessment since she wasn't a warrior yet, but now they could show their teamwork. "Alright, alright." Yellowclaw purred and rolled over, forcing her off of him. "Are you sure you're ready to be a warrior, though?" "And what's that supposed to mean?" Snowpaw pouted. "It's more work." He flicked his tail over her ear. "You'll be expected to pick up more responsi-" "Don't say it." Snowpaw squeezed her eyes shut. "I hear that word out of your mouth way too often. I know, I know. But it'll also be more fun because I'll be able to patrol with you again." She pranced around him happily. "And then we'll be able to have more play time because I won't be called away by Echoblaze to go training." Yellowclaw shook his head. "You act like I'm the only friend you have." His feathery tail curled around his paws as he sat down. "I have plenty of friends." Snowpaw huffed. Okay, maybe she didn't have as many as she'd like to, but they were always so boring. Sure Yellowclaw could be a stick in the muck, but when he did relax and have fun it was a grand old time. Besides, he needed her around otherwise he'd run his paws off. "But you're the one who tolerates me the best." "If you say so." From the expression on his face, he didn't believe her. Snowpaw was an incredibly excitable she-cat and could get a bit fiery at times. It was a pawful handling her, but he had to admit at the end of the day it was fun. "Great! Let's go meet Echoblaze then!" Snowpaw bounded off. Yellowclaw shook his head.
Echoblaze had given them their task: get as much prey before the afternoon. Her mentor would be tailing behind them to ensure Snowpaw was the one making the decisions. Yellowclaw followed after her. They were going a pretty ways away from the territory. He knew where she was headed off to. There was an old twoleg den a ways away. It was a bit of a distance to travel, but it would stand to reason that there would be some good prey near it. Once there, Snowpaw paused and scented the air. There was definitely either prey near or living there. Her whiskers twitched. "Can you smell it?" "Of course." Yellowclaw nodded. After they'd rolled around in leaves to disguise their scents, the two quickly got to work. The den was large, but it didn't have many ways in and out on the ground. Once all the exits were blocked, Snowpaw climbed the nearest tree. She padded across the branches slowly. Yellowclaw's ears flicked as he kept his eyes on her. Sure, she was light, but she was going to the very edge of the branch. Once ready, she leapt down. There were squeaks of surprise as the critters inside, mice, went scattering. They were forced to climb the walls as they fled. Yellowclaw easily plucked them off as they climbed down, giving them swift kills. Some escaped, but it wasn't a big deal. Once finished, Snowpaw came wiggling through their makeshift barrier, three mice hanging from her jaws. Yellowclaw had managed to snag four for a total of seven. Echoblaze came padded out of the shadows. "Well done you two." He purred. "But how'd you know about this place?" He looked around. It was clear he hadn't been to it before. "Exploration is a fun past time." Snowpaw informed him cheerfully. "So did I pass?" "We'll see." Echoblaze shook his head. They two had gotten plenty of prey, but he couldn't say anything until after the battle assessment. "Yellowclaw, you can take the prey back to camp. Snowpaw, are you ready for the second half of your test?" "Of course!" The little apprentice nodded eagerly. Yellowclaw waved goodbye with a swish of his tail before disappearing back into the woods.
Normally Snowpaw was filled with restless energy and all she wanted to do was move, but now was not the time. Echoblaze lead the way to a clearing she'd never been to before. No doubt testing her in an area she didn't know as well. It would make for an interesting fight. Without speaking, Echoblaze turned and faced her. Snowpaw responded by lowering into her fighting stance. Her mentor was quite a bit larger than she was and stronger. But Snowpaw also knew more about him than he probably realized. Sure, she was known as being pretty flighty, but she had her moments of seriousness. And she wasn't stupid or blind. Snowpaw was the first to make a move. She slashed at his legs. Echoblaze rose to squish her, but she landed quickly and rolled over, flashing her claws. She grabbed hold of soft fur and flesh. When she felt his head move to bite, her tail came up and tickled his nose, causing him to sneeze. With that distraction, using all her might, she shoved one side of him, forcing him to roll off. Once freed, she leapt back onto her paws to face him. They continued to exchange blows, Snowpaw doing her best to stay close and not give him much chance to put power behind any slashes that may hit her. After a while, Echoblaze stopped and straightened up, his eyes lit with pride. "Well done." He purred. Snowpaw's whiskers twitched. He'd tried faking her out before, but he shook his head. "I mean it this time." Amusement laced his voice and Snowpaw relaxed, instantly returning to her cheery self. "How'd I do?" She pranced around him happily. "You'll see." Snowpaw skidded to a halt and pouted. "Whaa?" Echoblaze didn't respond and instead started the journey back to camp. She had no choice but to follow, her tail dragging slightly.
"I, Robinstar, leader of Twilightclan, call upon my warrior ancestors to look down on this apprentice. She has trained hard to understand the ways of your noble code, and I commend her to you as a warrior in her turn. Snowpaw, do you promise to uphold the warrior code and to protect and defend your Clan, even at the cost of your life?" Snowpaw's entire body quivered with excitement. "I do." "Then by the powers of StarClan, I give you your warrior name. Snowpaw, from this moment you will be known as Snowfawn. StarClan honors your warmth and spirit, and we welcome you as a full warrior of Twilightclan." Snowfawn sat up straighter as Robinstar rested her muzzle on the she-cat's head. She licked her shoulder and the clan welcomed her. "Snowfawn! Snowfawn!" Yellowclaw's eyes glowed happily for his friend. His voice rose above the rest with ease. Slowly, they circled her to congratulate her before heading off to bed. Yellowclaw nuzzled her gently. "I'll have a nest spot for you tomorrow." He purred before disappearing into the warriors den with the others. Snowfawn was eager to be with him again and settled down in the middle of camp to sit vigil. Death scene-- Blood Fire "Ivykit!" A panicked voice came from the nursery, overcoming the loud pounding of rain. "Ivykit!" Snowfawn woke and slipped out of the warriors den to see Briarrose hurrying around camp calling for her only living kit. Robinstar slipped out of her den as other warriors joined them. Snowfawn could barely see through the rain. "What happened?" She demanded. Briarrose's eyes were wide with fear. "I-I don't know." She stammered. "I woke up to check to see if he was warm and couldn't find him. With all this rain, he must be cold and soaked to the bone." Robinstar nodded. "Then we'll split up." Snowfawn quickly slipped out of camp. With her understanding of curiosity, she had a pretty good idea where the small kit had gone off to. After his father refused Robinstar's offer to join the clan, he was escorted off the territory. No doubt Ivykit had gone off in search of the tom. She growled. Some father he would have been, though. Abandoning your kit was unacceptable. Squinting through the rain, she took a gut choice and headed for the swamp. Where else would the kit go, after all, but the hardest place to find them? It was simple kit and life-logic. Sure enough, when Snowfawn arrived, she could just barely see a small bundle huddled on one of the islands in the marsh. If he hadn't been shivering violently, Snowfawn would have passed over his black pelt and dismiss it as a shrub. Without hesitation, she dove into the swamp and began making her ways towards it. The only good thing about the rain was that it was breaking up the usual heavy muck and mud, making it easier to pass through it. Not that it was any less disgusting. When she finally reached him, she nudged him with her nose. A single pale blue eye appeared and his head lifted a bit. Snowfawn gently lifted him up by the scruff and turned around to start back. Following life logic, the storm decided then that it wanted to pick up some wind. The swampy water became rough. She struggled to keep Ivykit above water as she swam through. There was a squeal from him as he was pulled out of her jaws. "Ivykit!" Snowfawn swam after him desperately. A stone dropped in her stomach when she noticed something long slithering towards him. She paddled faster and, after reaching him, grabbed him a bit rougher by the scruff and pulled him towards her, kicking out a bit to try to splash the snake away. A slight pain shot through her leg, but she brushed it aside and continued to make her way to harder ground. She was met by a patrol and pulled out. Ivykit was take from her and she was vaguely aware of voices around her asking things like what she'd been thinking and how she was doing. But, Snowfawn couldn't find any way to respond. Her body felt like it was on fire from the inside. Unable to hold herself up, she collapsed. She could easily hear her heart racing, but it only seemed to make things worse. She curled into herself trying to make it stop, although she wasn't entirely sure what it would have done. She felt a muzzle against her back, trying to push her up. A familiar voice spoke in her ear, asking her what was wrong. But she didn't know what was wrong. As her surroundings faded, she vaguely remembered the pain that she'd felt when swimming away from the snake. Of course. Life logic. It had been a venomous snake...
"Snowfawn." A gentle voice spoke. The noise and the cold of the storm had faded and she felt surprisingly light and calm. The fire in her veins had faded. "Come on, now." Something tickled her nose and her eyes sprung open. Around her was a starry background and standing before her was Echoblaze. Although she was happy to see her mentor, she knew all too well what it had meant. His eyes were gentle for once. Slightly numb, she rose and was only a little surprised when her she looked down and didn't see her own body actually move. Somehow she'd made it back to camp. She noticed the familiar scenery of the medicine cat den. Since it had taken so long for Echoblaze to get her, she assumed she'd passed out before actually dying. At least it was better than feeling like she was on fire the entire time.. She followed Echoblaze out and saw Yellowclaw pacing back and forth. She moved to touch him, but he stopped her. "It won't make any difference.." He informed her softly. Snowfawn shook her head. A different kind of pain took her heart and she followed him away from the clan. Although Twilightclan was still her home and her family, she was no longer a direct part of it. She hoped Yellowclaw wouldn't forget to have fun. Keeping in mind that the things I write are mostly for entertainment and not the contest ^^"
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Post by A crying Nidoking on Feb 10, 2017 22:10:50 GMT -5
Oh no.... the feels.... the feels....
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Post by Novi on Feb 10, 2017 22:12:32 GMT -5
The whole point of writing, am I right?
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Post by A crying Nidoking on Feb 10, 2017 22:15:27 GMT -5
I know but the feels hit me hard man ;-; Yellowclaw and Snowfawn are my Twilightclan OTP now and forever.
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Post by Novi on Feb 10, 2017 22:17:21 GMT -5
Aaaaw. Thanks <3 Cinnamon and I were talking about how much we love their dynamic. Snowfawn keeps Yellowclaw from running his paws off while he keeps her calm when she gets fired up. Although we're not actually sure if they would have ended up together I still love 'em.
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Post by 𝕊𝕙𝕒𝕕𝕠𝕨 on Feb 11, 2017 0:23:56 GMT -5
I just jotted down an Echoblaze as the previous deputy. Lol. And I'm trying to figure everything out because I'm doing Snowfawn's death scene and Ivypaw is the kit that she saved and I'm just trying to think of where everyone would be in terms of age and it's a lot harder than one might imagine xD Also, do the Starclan cats' ages go up by 2 moons along with everyone else? I'm just going to have Yellowclaw be deputy by this time. So then he should be around...22? Maybe....? Or 24? Because when I first made her, Snowfawn was 30, but then the time thing happened and I don't remember if the Starclan cat's ages changed but before Ivypaw would have been 8 moons, not 10. Aaaand I'm putting so much more thought into this than I should be xD Why can't I do this with school? Lol Actually, I already made up the deputy before Yellowclaw as Largescar, Dappledream's father, he's used in my entry. Which will be posted soon. Though it is not exactly 'small'
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Cinnamon Roll
Long time RPer, up for anything. Don't be a stranger, say hello!
Pronouns: Call Me Cinnamon! (They/Them)
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Post by Cinnamon Roll on Feb 11, 2017 0:26:01 GMT -5
Aaaahhh, oh no.... ;A; I can see Yellowclaw now, focusing more and more on tasks within the clan to keep his mind off of her death. He becomes even more quiet and reserved due to not having her around to pull him out of his slump fsjhgsksdh oh noooooooo
Really good though...
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Post by 𝕊𝕙𝕒𝕕𝕠𝕨 on Feb 11, 2017 0:27:31 GMT -5
I just might forget all chances f my characters being in relationships because....
let's face the facts, that won't probably happen XD
Because i'm me XDXDXD
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Non-binary
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Cinnamon Roll
Long time RPer, up for anything. Don't be a stranger, say hello!
Pronouns: Call Me Cinnamon! (They/Them)
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Post by Cinnamon Roll on Feb 11, 2017 0:29:04 GMT -5
I thought shadestar and moonheart were gonna be a thing tho?
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Post by Novi on Feb 11, 2017 0:33:19 GMT -5
Poor Yellowclaw *huggles him* but thanks <3 I'm getting more used to using him so I'm unwilling to use other charies xD
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Non-binary
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Cinnamon Roll
Long time RPer, up for anything. Don't be a stranger, say hello!
Pronouns: Call Me Cinnamon! (They/Them)
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Post by Cinnamon Roll on Feb 11, 2017 0:35:55 GMT -5
Don't limit yourself, exploring other characters is good!
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Post by Novi on Feb 11, 2017 0:37:21 GMT -5
I knooow. Maybe I'll do Ivypaw's first DF encounter >:3
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Post by Novi on Feb 11, 2017 0:38:12 GMT -5
I just jotted down an Echoblaze as the previous deputy. Lol. And I'm trying to figure everything out because I'm doing Snowfawn's death scene and Ivypaw is the kit that she saved and I'm just trying to think of where everyone would be in terms of age and it's a lot harder than one might imagine xD Also, do the Starclan cats' ages go up by 2 moons along with everyone else? I'm just going to have Yellowclaw be deputy by this time. So then he should be around...22? Maybe....? Or 24? Because when I first made her, Snowfawn was 30, but then the time thing happened and I don't remember if the Starclan cat's ages changed but before Ivypaw would have been 8 moons, not 10. Aaaand I'm putting so much more thought into this than I should be xD Why can't I do this with school? Lol Actually, I already made up the deputy before Yellowclaw as Largescar, Dappledream's father, he's used in my entry. Which will be posted soon. Though it is not exactly 'small' So..what? You want me to change it?
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Post by 𝕊𝕙𝕒𝕕𝕠𝕨 on Feb 11, 2017 1:09:17 GMT -5
Doubt it, looks more like a Moonheart and Sagepaw!
I honestly don't mind too much. I actually think it's a little funny. Because I fail at romance XD
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Post by Novi on Feb 11, 2017 1:13:34 GMT -5
So, it's super short but I also think it's super important :3 A Dark Encounter Ivykit's eyes blinked open and he looked around. This wasn't like his usual dreams. He wandered around curiously. The air smelled like death and was cold. The trees around him were dark and the leaves under his paws felt damp and dead. "W-where am I?" "Welcome to the Place of No Stars." A dark voice spoke from the shadows and a large tom appeared before him. His black pelt was as dark as Ivykit's, but was splashed with brown fur and long scars. "What..what's that?" He tilted his head to one side. "It's where Starclan sends the cats they reject." The other tom settled down on a rock in front of him. "The ones they thought were too 'cruel' and didn't follow their precious 'warrior code'. When in reality, many of us here followed the code closer than they ever did." "I thought all cats went to Starclan." Ivykit tilted his head to one side. "So...what did cats do?" "It's simple really. They tried to make the clan a better place. But of course they were punished for their loyalty to the code. It's a shame, really." "So, then...why am I here?" "Because you were chosen." The other tom's dark amber eyes gleamed. "My name is Darksand. I see potential in you where your clanmates don't. They're blinded by their feelings. Because your father was a rogue, they refuse to acknowledge you. Does it not bother you?" "Not really." Ivykit shrugged. Something flashed in Darksand's eyes. Surprise? No. He must have imagined it. "I mean, they can think what they want. Doesn't change the fact that I'm going to be the best." "Good, good. That's the kind of attitude that will take you far." Darksand nodded approvingly. "It's here, in the dark forest, where you can excel. The clan is too afraid to teach you some moves while others they were fools to not learn." He jumped down and circled Ivykit slowly, but the tiny bundle wasn't afraid. Far from it. He was interested. "Really?" At Darksand's nod, he paused. "But what about my mentor in the real world?" "Don't worry about that. You'll have another one of us." Darksand nodded and behind him, something bubbled. Ivykit padded forward and in a murky pool, a large tom appeared. Ivykit was vaguely aware of his name. Badger...Badger....Badger something. He didn't pay much attention to the other cats since they didn't pay much attention to him. His mother had died a while before, but because he was old enough to be without her milk there hadn't been much fuss. "But how will you make sure he'll be my mentor?" "We have our ways." Darksand's eyes glittered. "No worries. I look forward to seeing your progress." Darksand padded away, his pawsteps not making a sound on the forest floor. He paused and called back, "You will be one of the finest warriors the clan has ever seen." Ivykit suddenly felt himself falling away. With a start, he woke in his nest in the nursery. It was incredibly quiet. Still the middle of the night. He padded outside and peered up at the sky. The moon was practically nonexistent. And the stars were covered by clouds.
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