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Post by Novi on Feb 27, 2017 0:40:03 GMT -5
I don't mind. Even if it's my character, it's your artwork :3
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Post by Novi on Feb 28, 2017 0:09:23 GMT -5
So, because I'm procrastinating I wrote up a short scene ^^" Normally the cat who receives the spirit is close to the one who died, so I guess it's not too far-fetched even if most (if not all) of Starclan sees Snowfawn as a childish warrior. Reunion The sound of claws against rock filled the quiet air. Snowfawn muttered angrily to herself. Why? How? The questions whirled in her mind. How had the dark forest become powerful enough to do what they did? They must have found some trick or something. And why couldn't Starclan do anything? Their duty was to protect the clan and yet there was nothing they could do as they watched their clanmates die. Snowfawn had seen the shadow sneak up on them. The sight of so much blood left a sick feeling in her stomach. And Yellowclaw.....although she wanted to see him, she didn't want it to be like this. She had always watched over him and it upset her deeply to see him retreat into himself after she died. It wasn't at all what she had wanted. She was always telling him to go easier on himself. Of course he kept saying he enjoyed his duties, which he probably did, but that didn't mean he should run himself exhausted for the clan. It wouldn't have done them any good if the deputy couldn't keep up with his health. Although he was deputy, Snowfawn wasn't a very senior Starclan member, not to mention there really wasn't any need for a message to be sent. All she could do was hope he'd feel better. "I think you've done enough." A gentle voice spoke from behind her. Snowfawn whirled around. Echoblaze padded up to her slowly. "The poor rock. Not to mention you'll dull your claws if you do too much." Her silver tail brushed against the forest floor slowly, leaves moving out of its way. Shouldn't Echoblaze be receiving Robinstar? He padded forward and nudged her. "I think Yellowclaw would be feel better if he saw you again....." Her eyes widened. What was he saying? Normally only the higher ups retrieved cats. "You two were very close after all." Snowfawn still couldn't seem to find her voice, but she nodded and followed him. Snowfawn's stomach did a flip as they neared the bodies. The stench of death was still very present and her need to gag was almost overwhelming. At least her death hadn't been as....gruesome. She could vaguely see Echoblaze nudge Robinstar. Slowly, she lowered her nose and nuzzled Yellowclaw's cheek gently. His spirit shifted and slowly parted from his body. It was a bit....creepy to watch. He looked around slowly and seemed to realize what had happened. Snowfawn wasn't entirely sure what her expression was, but Yellowclaw leaned forward and touched his nose to her head. Her heart tightened. She should be the one comforting him, not the other way around. But she had to admit that the warmth of his spirit was a great relief. She rubbed her head under his chin and silently they rejoined Echoblaze and Robinstar before heading back, a slight shiver ran up her spine. Something big was happening. And this was only the beginning. Fear gripped her. She pressed closer to Yellowclaw. She remembered how disorienting it was when she first became a Starclan cat. No doubt most would wait until they were more comfortable about talking about it all. Discussing your murder wasn't exactly the most pleasant thing...Echoblaze had also told her both Robinstar and Yellowclaw would be replacing himself and Pheasantfeather on the Starclan council. Was giving them such responsibility so soon after their death such a good idea? Although, their words would make a huge impact on who Starclan chose as the next leader of Twilightclan.
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Post by Cinnamon Roll on Feb 28, 2017 17:45:12 GMT -5
Oh shoot Novice I never saw the short story you posted! I like it- I would consider it canon for Yellowclaw, it makes sense that Snowfawn would bring him up P:
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Post by 𝕊𝕙𝕒𝕕𝕠𝕨 on Feb 28, 2017 17:53:27 GMT -5
So what should my next story be on? AU-Sunlightclan, the opposite of Twilightclan, my personal least favorite. AU-Twilight Town, the human counter world to Twilightclan. Canon story on Starlingpaw: Death of parents, her relationship with Ravenfur, and her life after the fox attack. What if?: What if Shadestar died or went missing on the way to the Moon Pool to recieve her lives. Canon story on Stormdash: How she was before, and now after the fox attack. MORE TO COME SOON POSSIBLY! Suggest ideas please
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Post by Novi on Feb 28, 2017 17:56:36 GMT -5
No problems Cinnamon xD i just posted it because i was (still am. Oops) procrastinating my hw. I ahould stop, but i dont want to do it all. Too much effort. Haha.
Alrighty then. Snowfawn it is :3 who brought Robinstar we can leave to Nido tho. I do prefer Snow/Yellow tho bc it's not just my character's background. And they're becoming easier to do. Maybe ill do an Ivy/Badger one tho. XD
Edited in: do whatever you want Lynx
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Post by Cinnamon Roll on Feb 28, 2017 18:03:11 GMT -5
Twilight Town might be interesting...?
I know for my next story I'm going to continue on badgherheart, and then maybe do one on Iceflight as well. i really haven't given her enough love.
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Post by Novi on Feb 28, 2017 18:10:39 GMT -5
The continuation of Badger's tragedy ;-; the poor baby.
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Post by Cinnamon Roll on Mar 1, 2017 18:07:14 GMT -5
I've gotta say, i love the character development going on in the dark forest right now. I feel like I'm seeing a totally new side of Pricklepaw and Slatestorm and although it is admittedly kinda sad, I feel really really interested in their personal stories now, and I can't wait to see how they develop 0w0
Cloudypaw too, even though we've only just seen her enter, seems really interesting to me too. Also, anyone else noticing how Iceflight is bringing on all these young female trainees? I smell a Matriarchy here guys, LOL
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Post by Novi on Mar 1, 2017 18:20:23 GMT -5
What does a matriarchy smell like? X'D i can imagine what it would sound like Lol
The DF is always interesting in that sense. In being selfish and using the cats, they actually help them out quite a bit. It all just depends on the end where the cats' loyalties lie whether all the work paid off
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Post by Cinnamon Roll on Mar 1, 2017 18:27:38 GMT -5
Yes!! I know right?! Like.. we're building Pricklepaw's confidence and paying special attention to her, so technically it is.. good?? Slatestorm not so much.. I feel so bad for her ;A;
What does a matriarchy smell like... now that you've asked me that, I've completely puzzled myself.
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Post by Novi on Mar 1, 2017 18:35:20 GMT -5
I think it would have been better if she'd had a mentor from 6 moons old too.
What would lots of girls together smell like? I'm not social enough to know. A smoothie? Do people wear fruity stuff? Or was that never even a thing? .-.
Edited in: a showdown XD That's what would happen
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Post by Hawkeyes258 on Mar 1, 2017 19:22:24 GMT -5
Hi
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Post by Novi on Mar 1, 2017 19:25:16 GMT -5
Hey Hawk. Noisepaw is going on the patrol that will get lost, so if you wanted you could probably toss Breezewhisper in as well
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Post by Hawkeyes258 on Mar 1, 2017 19:32:25 GMT -5
Mmm okay :3)
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Post by Novi on Mar 1, 2017 19:34:47 GMT -5
Cinderstorm just called for anybody wanting to go hunting. I'll wait on Onyx or the end of the DF visit before responding, whichever comes first.
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Post by Cinnamon Roll on Mar 1, 2017 20:01:34 GMT -5
I just want to point out the fact that Iceflight is still so bitter about not being chosen as Twilightclan's leader like a billion moons ago that she's LITERALLY stealing young cats from modern day Twilightclan to become part of her dark pseudo-clan. What a freakin salty lady
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Post by Novi on Mar 1, 2017 20:05:31 GMT -5
She just can't let go. X'D Haha. Imagine if she had been chosen, tho. Would it have changed her? Darksand just enjoys messing with people. He's like, Internet troll you should actually be scared of.
Edited in: oh, but what if Starclan cats kind of did what the DF do? Pick out cats who have insecurities and weaknesses and just work with them in their dreams, but keep their paws towards the light side. The whole thing would have been averted.
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Post by Cinnamon Roll on Mar 1, 2017 20:10:55 GMT -5
I think the whole thing could have been even moreso averted if the cats of Twilightclan weren't such a bunch of intolerant, suspicious jerks, lol. The whole white cat thing is just a self fulfilling prophecy at this point, and the amount of rude, lazy cats in the clan just contributes to the fact that none of the weaker or "special" cats get the attention they deserve.
But yeah, Iceflight still would have been kindof a Tyrranical leader. The way I see it now, the clan we have is sort of Riverclan-eqsue (kindof jerks but not evil) while Iceflight would have led them towards a path where they were more akin to Shadowclan cats (fierce, cruel etc.)
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Post by Novi on Mar 1, 2017 20:13:49 GMT -5
That true. Haha X'D cats be like people. And the laziness does just add to poor Badger's frustration.
But it's not exactly bad to be fierce and to look out for #1 which is yourself and your clan. Would she be the type of cat to go 'too far' (DF cruel) or 'just far enough' that the dynamics (ideals, rules, etc) of Twilightclan changed?
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Post by Cinnamon Roll on Mar 1, 2017 20:23:52 GMT -5
Nah, she's kinda cruel. As much as I want Iceflight to be a good cat at heart, she really just has zero tolerance for weakness, and cats would suffer for that.
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Post by Novi on Mar 1, 2017 20:35:44 GMT -5
I see..completely cruel cats do add something fun to the roleplay tho :3
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Post by Hawkeyes258 on Mar 1, 2017 21:11:38 GMT -5
Scarletpool for example she is just bloodthristy and little crazy.
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Post by possumstep on Mar 1, 2017 21:18:00 GMT -5
while we're all talking about our df-aligned characters here: about slatestorm. if literally anyone she viewed as far above herself told her to jump off a bridge, she'd totally do it. even if she was thinking like "well, that's just gonna kill me huh..." she'd still do it anyway because that's what she's to do and it's not her place to say no. she doesn't realize that thinking this way is dangerous and also probably not normal, either. she actually didn't have a super rough kithood or anything, but her mother had the tendency to boss her around. blossomtail is nasty and a jerk, but she was never the type to go slashing throats left 'n right. in life, she literally only killed her sister meadowheart, and actually was fighting in self-defense against her nephew windystorm. however, she saw not a single thing she did as wrong and her only regret was accidentally telling windystorm the truth because he killed her in anger - and that's what landed her in the dark forest. time there has leaned her a bit more towards the bloodthirsty side, but primarily she's just full of pent-up hatred towards starclan for, y'know,, not condoning her cold-blooded murder,,,
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Post by 𝕊𝕙𝕒𝕕𝕠𝕨 on Mar 1, 2017 21:49:36 GMT -5
I would like Batpaw to possibly align with the DF, and she might die by betraying Shadestar or something and become a dark forest cat, but I dunno yet.
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Post by Cinnamon Roll on Mar 1, 2017 22:28:14 GMT -5
Blossomtail seems like a multi faceted character... I'm really interested in seeing how she progresses. Do you want her to start regularly training Pricklepaw? Because I can see the two of them getting along well, all things considered.
Lynx, why do you think Batpaw would be a good DF trainee?
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Post by Deleted on Mar 2, 2017 4:07:55 GMT -5
☁︎ out of character ☁︎ what's this storm plot ?
☁︎ roleplay ☁︎
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Post by Onyx on Mar 2, 2017 5:19:31 GMT -5
Ey y'all let me know please if anyone wants to have had Autumn as a mate in the clan or is now dead (DF or SC) or is a rouge or something. If no one wants that Imma make up some kittens... Roll a random gen of 1 - 6 and see how many I get since she was so big for so long lol
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Post by Novi on Mar 2, 2017 9:33:30 GMT -5
If you havent been keeping up, you can go back and read Hazel. It starts on page 16 with Cinnamon's post of possible plots.
Sounds cool Onyx xD will Palecloud still be going on the storm patrol?
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Post by possumstep on Mar 2, 2017 10:05:45 GMT -5
i'd totally be fine with blossomtail regularly training pricklepaw as long as trinkets is ok with it too!
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Post by Cinnamon Roll on Mar 2, 2017 11:20:50 GMT -5
Yeah, ok!
I'm kinda thinking that since it seems like we're doing a little timeskip with the "age 2 moons" thing, that maybe Pricklepaw and Slatestorm could have been doing training that whole time and kinda building up their skills? Seems like they'd be more powerful by now.
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