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Post by The Kat's KitKat on Feb 2, 2017 17:50:52 GMT -5
This is a something I drew fairly recently, and it gave me a huge headache! If any of ya'll could critique it, it would be greatly appreciated
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Post by The Kat's KitKat on Feb 2, 2017 19:15:42 GMT -5
Ah, thanks! I thought they looked a bit off
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Post by Sootfeather on Feb 5, 2017 16:44:40 GMT -5
I think that the forehead looks to big, and it's a little distracting. I also think it would look better with a bit of fur, especially around the neck and head. I would have to see a few more of your drawings to really pick out consistent mistakes, but for now, this is all I can give you.
By the way, I really like the crosshatching shading you used, it looks nice.
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Post by The Kat's KitKat on Feb 5, 2017 20:56:35 GMT -5
Thanks for the feedback!
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Post by Reverend 3 kits on Feb 7, 2017 4:48:39 GMT -5
The main issue is with the perspective. Also it is unclear what's going on with the body. Try looking at references.
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Post by The Kat's KitKat on Feb 8, 2017 7:16:31 GMT -5
Hm, okay
Thanks!
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Post by treerain on Feb 8, 2017 14:50:38 GMT -5
This is really good! Maybe work on the proportions for the anatomy though. The forehead has already been pointed out, I saw, but also, the neck seems a bit flat making the transition from body to head a little weird. Maybe adding more depth to that part of the picture would work.
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Post by The Kat's KitKat on Feb 8, 2017 18:05:33 GMT -5
Alrighty, I'll keep that in mind for future stuff, thanks!
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