Rує
So many story ideas, and so little time!
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Post by Rує on May 15, 2017 22:18:42 GMT -5
I am about to start reading this!
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Post by phantomstar57 on May 15, 2017 22:58:58 GMT -5
Read this tonight and I like the alternative timeline. Love your characters! I look forward to chap 7. Fan me please!
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Post by mintedstar/fur🦇 on May 15, 2017 23:30:25 GMT -5
I'll get you up as a fan soon Phantom. And thanks Rye! Glad you both are reading and I hope you continue to like what you see.
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Post by Owlmoon on May 16, 2017 7:39:25 GMT -5
Pleeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeease new chapter Mintyyyy pleeeeeeeeease?
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Post by mintedstar/fur🦇 on May 16, 2017 15:22:32 GMT -5
This week, Owl. I'll have a new chapter up this week.
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Post by Owlmoon on May 17, 2017 5:46:17 GMT -5
YASSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSS
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Post by Owlmoon on May 17, 2017 8:48:39 GMT -5
Chapter 6 was great!
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Post by mintedstar/fur🦇 on May 17, 2017 15:34:38 GMT -5
Thank you very much.
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Post by Owlmoon on May 17, 2017 19:02:51 GMT -5
'welcome. I loved the idea...and that font....but the concept really is interesting.
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Post by mintedstar/fur🦇 on May 18, 2017 21:59:20 GMT -5
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Post by mintedstar/fur🦇 on May 18, 2017 21:59:47 GMT -5
As promised, chapter 7!
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Post by Dingoleap on May 19, 2017 4:26:53 GMT -5
Ooooh, a new chapter! I know what I'm doing tomorrow!
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Post by mintedstar/fur🦇 on May 19, 2017 11:28:30 GMT -5
Yes. Yes you do.
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Post by Owlmoon on May 20, 2017 8:57:19 GMT -5
YASSSSSSSSSSSSSSSS
- Owlmoon
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Post by Owlmoon on May 20, 2017 9:01:36 GMT -5
Two corrections for the typo queen....
“Why would they come because of a ShadowClan medicine cat." (Should be a question mark, right?)
I apologies for not being able to rescue Smokepaw sooner.” (I apologies?)
- Owlmoon
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Post by mintedstar/fur🦇 on May 20, 2017 13:48:48 GMT -5
Wrong. I am the typo princess. Phantomstar refuses to give up her throne no matter how much I pester her for it. xD Thank you! I'll go fix those.
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Post by phantomstar57 on May 20, 2017 15:24:22 GMT -5
Wrong. I am the typo princess. Phantomstar refuses to give up her throne no matter how much I pester her for it. xD Thank you! I'll go fix those. LOL my old brain and flying fingers will never relinquish the Crown!
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Post by mintedstar/fur🦇 on May 20, 2017 15:28:01 GMT -5
I'll have to settle for the tiara or whatever princesses wear.
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Post by Owlmoon on May 20, 2017 17:03:33 GMT -5
LOL guys sorry bout that:)
- Owlmoon
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Post by mintedstar/fur🦇 on May 20, 2017 17:05:52 GMT -5
Why you sorry? I had an excuse to mention an inside joke. xD
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Post by ~Sapphire~ on May 21, 2017 3:50:25 GMT -5
Just caught up... The new chapter is so touching! It's nice that, even in a pretty dystopian time for the Clans, there's still moments of kindness and bravery.
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Post by Owlmoon on May 21, 2017 12:56:18 GMT -5
Mint, mint...
- Owlmoon
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Post by mintedstar/fur🦇 on May 21, 2017 16:43:01 GMT -5
What have I done noooooooow. xD
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Post by mintedstar/fur🦇 on May 21, 2017 16:43:24 GMT -5
Just caught up... The new chapter is so touching! It's nice that, even in a pretty dystopian time for the Clans, there's still moments of kindness and bravery. Thanks Sapphire!
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Rує
So many story ideas, and so little time!
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Post by Rує on May 21, 2017 16:55:37 GMT -5
I was finally able to read up through chapter 7! I saw some spelling and grammar mistakes scattered throughout, so perhaps an extra minute or two of proofreading before posting could help with that? Otherwise, I'm really liking the story so far. You do a good job at revealing just enough information to keep me hooked while still having so many unanswered questions. I can't wait to see where the story goes from here!
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Post by mintedstar/fur🦇 on May 21, 2017 16:59:45 GMT -5
I could proof read for a week and still miss things. >.< Sorry about that. Spelling and grammar are a weakness of mine. Unfortunately, the people I often ask to edit are unavailable. But I'm glad you like the latest chapter! Thanks for reading!
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Rує
So many story ideas, and so little time!
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Post by Rує on May 21, 2017 17:02:46 GMT -5
Aww, that's okay. I might be able to edit, if you would want me to! You're welcome!
May I be added as a fan?
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Post by mintedstar/fur🦇 on May 21, 2017 17:05:55 GMT -5
If you want to, that would be AMAZING. And yes, of course!
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Rує
So many story ideas, and so little time!
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Post by Rує on May 21, 2017 17:30:10 GMT -5
Alright! Just let me know when you'd like me to read over something.
Thanks!
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Post by mintedstar/fur🦇 on May 21, 2017 18:07:51 GMT -5
'kay!
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