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Post by robinspot on Jan 12, 2017 18:49:33 GMT -5
And I'm really not sure if it's good or not. Opinions? Critique?
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Post by Deleted on Jan 12, 2017 20:22:04 GMT -5
I think it is really good! I love your art style!
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Post by Deleted on Jan 13, 2017 11:20:41 GMT -5
I can critique it if you'd like. I won't be rude.
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Post by robinspot on Jan 13, 2017 18:27:30 GMT -5
@blubberywhales King Ahhh thanks!!! ^^ @mongrel Tht would be awesome, I'm always looking for improvement!
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Post by Deleted on Jan 13, 2017 18:52:12 GMT -5
Keep in mind this is all written as if you are looking to make your art more realistic.
I'm a little confused by the angle? Like, it looks like the girl could be tilting to the side slightly? Or maybe have one leg shorter than the other? A lot of times my drawings turn out like that (albeit much, much worse than this great stuff right here), and I rework them entirely because that saves me the complication. Then again, I don't use a program with complexity right now, just some cheap in-browser junk, and thus have no choice but to do so.
Speaking of, her torso area looks as though turned slightly to the left (and uncomfortably, by the looks of it), but her legs are facing forward. That might be a little painful. And the right thigh is thinner than the left.
The thing with the arms is a little weird. It makes sense but it looks like the right arm, the arm tucked under the other, is stiff and awkward? Like she's awkward and doesn't know where to put her arm? And why is she touching her upper thigh like that?
I don't think the eyes and nose being aligned like that is anatomically correct, but if that's what you were going for, it still looks alright. I'm just saying.
The neck thing—why are necks always thin like that? They're either shaped like upside down ice cream cones or painfully thin. Maybe that's what you were aiming for.
This may be a little inappropriate but her thigh gap is a little too big and her cameltoe is way too small and not shaped normally. I regret that I must say this, but it's the truth. Egh.
The coloring looks okay, but the shading—or lightening, I guess?—appears a little off. Like, from where is the light coming? Because there looks to be only one source of light (the glow to the far left), and the shading doesn't really mirror it. It looks like there are multiple light sources judging by the overzealous shading/lightening? but I don't see any of them but maybe that faint one to the far left corner. Maybe make clear where the light is coming from through your shading, if there's any light at all. Otherwise there's just random spots of light. Choose direct paths for your light. Look at how light travels in everyday photos. Learn about light.
I could go into detail about the face itself but it seems as thought you were aiming for a creative style there.
That's pretty much it, I think? I might post more later if I can think of anything else.
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Post by robinspot on Jan 13, 2017 20:10:48 GMT -5
Thanks! I'll make sure to work on the things you ccovered! Critique always helps!
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Post by robinspot on Jan 13, 2017 20:11:16 GMT -5
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Post by Deleted on Jan 13, 2017 20:13:26 GMT -5
yay thanks! glad to see I made a difference
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