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Post by Deleted on Oct 3, 2016 7:53:35 GMT -5
Wow, those were great chapters. very well thought out.
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Post by mintedstar/fur🦇 on Oct 3, 2016 15:52:33 GMT -5
But I did. But how? xD By being random? :3
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Post by mintedstar/fur🦇 on Oct 3, 2016 15:52:50 GMT -5
Wow, those were great chapters. very well thought out. Thank you.
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Post by mintedstar/fur🦇 on Oct 3, 2016 15:53:37 GMT -5
(I guess if anyone was wondering and looks at my last post, I'll be gone for the day.)
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Post by Jackalstep on Oct 4, 2016 14:14:36 GMT -5
Yay new chapters! I will read them soon, I have some homework to finish first.
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Post by ~Sapphire~ on Oct 5, 2016 12:44:32 GMT -5
If by 'random' you mean 'an awesome writer'
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Post by mintedstar/fur🦇 on Oct 5, 2016 15:21:58 GMT -5
If by 'random' you mean 'an awesome writer' Thanks. Also, on another note: I have just written a mountain of a chapter. It's from Whitefire's POV and you could call it a test chapter to see if people like it. You will get to see a side of White we haven't gotten to yet and for some reason it took me an age to find an ending to this chapter. It ended up as 8 pages.
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Post by Deleted on Oct 5, 2016 16:08:48 GMT -5
I'll be waiting for that chapter! o:
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Post by Jackalstep on Oct 6, 2016 15:37:16 GMT -5
Woah. Was not expecting that... Can't wait to read more!
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Post by ~Sapphire~ on Oct 7, 2016 14:50:52 GMT -5
8 pages? O.o Bring it on...
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Post by mintedstar/fur🦇 on Oct 7, 2016 16:04:38 GMT -5
I will be updating with two chapters tomorrow.
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Post by Deleted on Oct 7, 2016 16:12:01 GMT -5
Yay!!
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Post by mintedstar/fur🦇 on Oct 8, 2016 21:25:49 GMT -5
I'm planning on adding a fun fact section here soon as well. Just odd little facts that would be hard to work into the story at this point.
Also, I want everyone's opinion on which POV they like better: Soot's or Whitefire's.
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Post by mintedstar/fur🦇 on Oct 9, 2016 1:32:38 GMT -5
And what is this? Chapter 15 has mysteriously appeared ahead of schedule. Well, until opinions on which test POV is better that is all I can write right now. Hope you enjoy the three chapter update!
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Post by Deleted on Oct 9, 2016 16:46:03 GMT -5
Having chapter 15 too was a nice surprise. cx
I'm not really sure how I felt about the POV changes. They kind of confused me (I'm still trying to put my finger down on why, exactly) but at the same time they were neat. I think I liked Soot's POV more than Whitefire's.
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Post by mintedstar/fur🦇 on Oct 10, 2016 13:26:06 GMT -5
Having chapter 15 too was a nice surprise. cx I'm not really sure how I felt about the POV changes. They kind of confused me (I'm still trying to put my finger down on why, exactly) but at the same time they were neat. I think I liked Soot's POV more than Whitefire's. Ha, I'm master of confusion. Hopefully, I'll be able to turn all that confusing stuff into twist endings or something. If you do put your finger on which part is confusing please tell me so I can fix it. Cool! Now all I need is some more feedback from the other fans and I can start writing some more. (And, when I'm done, actually edit the chapters I've written.)
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Post by Deleted on Oct 10, 2016 15:06:54 GMT -5
Alright. Good luck with writing (:
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Post by Jackalstep on Oct 10, 2016 21:16:54 GMT -5
Woo, can't wait to read the newest chapters, which I'm gonna do in just a couple minutes here!
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Post by mintedstar/fur🦇 on Oct 13, 2016 13:22:33 GMT -5
Hum... we are almost done with this story. We are now a little over half way done.
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Post by ~Sapphire~ on Oct 14, 2016 16:28:17 GMT -5
*pants* Must catch up, must catch up!
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Post by Jackalstep on Oct 15, 2016 20:27:38 GMT -5
I did read the latest a while ago, just realized I forgot to comment. It was interesting to see the new PoVs. I know you were wanting feedback; I think I prefer Whitefire's PoV to Soot's.
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Post by mintedstar/fur🦇 on Oct 16, 2016 15:36:21 GMT -5
*pants* Must catch up, must catch up! Want to be a tie breaker? We have one of Soot's POV and one for Whitefire's.
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Post by mintedstar/fur🦇 on Oct 16, 2016 16:11:11 GMT -5
Short story up, just below the credit and fan list.
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Post by ~Sapphire~ on Oct 19, 2016 13:45:42 GMT -5
*pants* Must catch up, must catch up! Want to be a tie breaker? We have one of Soot's POV and one for Whitefire's. Um, fine cx Maybe Soot? His POV seems to fit in more smoothly, but honestly either would be very cool. (Or both, even?) It's slightly confusing how Hollypaw's POV slips into third person in the latest chapter, I have to say. But this is coming along really well, Mint.
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Post by Deleted on Oct 19, 2016 16:18:16 GMT -5
Cool short story, minted! :3 interesting perspective on the subject of evil.
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Post by mintedstar/fur🦇 on Oct 21, 2016 15:50:36 GMT -5
Want to be a tie breaker? We have one of Soot's POV and one for Whitefire's. Um, fine cx Maybe Soot? His POV seems to fit in more smoothly, but honestly either would be very cool. (Or both, even?) It's slightly confusing how Hollypaw's POV slips into third person in the latest chapter, I have to say. But this is coming along really well, Mint. I was considering doing both. But I'll probably do some short stories from Whitefire's POV. Ooops. Another thing I'll fix when editing. And thank you, we will see the ending before Halloween.
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Post by Deleted on Oct 21, 2016 19:25:42 GMT -5
The ending of the whole fanfic, or...? o:
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Post by ~Sapphire~ on Oct 22, 2016 14:42:18 GMT -5
Um, fine cx Maybe Soot? His POV seems to fit in more smoothly, but honestly either would be very cool. (Or both, even?) It's slightly confusing how Hollypaw's POV slips into third person in the latest chapter, I have to say. But this is coming along really well, Mint. I was considering doing both. But I'll probably do some short stories from Whitefire's POV. Ooops. Another thing I'll fix when editing. And thank you, we will see the ending before Halloween. Sounds like a good solution c; Really? So soon? O.O
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Post by mintedstar/fur🦇 on Oct 23, 2016 13:07:35 GMT -5
The ending of the whole fanfic, or...? o: Ending of the whole fan fiction, correct.
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