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Post by 🍁Searipple101🍁 on Aug 3, 2016 16:28:39 GMT -5
Good luck with it all! There's kind of a lot of cliffhangers in here XD
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Post by phantomstar57 on Aug 3, 2016 18:47:33 GMT -5
Plan top read Chap 24 tonight!
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Post by phantomstar57 on Aug 3, 2016 19:04:32 GMT -5
And of course I want to see more! LOL
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Post by phantomstar57 on Aug 3, 2016 20:44:11 GMT -5
OMG! I eagerly await chap 24. Unlike Duskfrost I do grieve! Oh for sweet revenge!
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Post by 🍁Searipple101🍁 on Aug 4, 2016 12:10:01 GMT -5
I'm very glad you're so excited! Duskfrost would grieve if he knew how to. The whole point is he just doesn't understand those kinds of feelings. He can care about others, though not many get that, but he can't understand such feelings as grief and regret. All he knows is that feels weird or he feels 'hollow' as he describes it. Poor guy doesn't even know how much he's suffering. I think I like that best about him as a character and the story. Can i ask what you like best? And who your favorite character really is? I'm always curious about that stuff :3
I'm pretty sure you'll like the last chapter. I'll post it in a couple days ^.^
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Post by phantomstar57 on Aug 4, 2016 12:45:36 GMT -5
I'm very glad you're so excited! Duskfrost would grieve if he knew how to. The whole point is he just doesn't understand those kinds of feelings. He can care about others, though not many get that, but he can't understand such feelings as grief and regret. All he knows is that feels weird or he feels 'hollow' as he describes it. Poor guy doesn't even know how much he's suffering. I think I like that best about him as a character and the story. Can i ask what you like best? And who your favorite character really is? I'm always curious about that stuff :3 I'm pretty sure you'll like the last chapter. I'll post it in a couple days ^.^ I do like Duskfrost and you presented him so well, but I LOVED Darkpaw _ near cried when I found it he died. . .and Duskfrost's anger and rage is very justified. . .even if he doesn't quite understand it or why.
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Post by 🍁Searipple101🍁 on Aug 4, 2016 13:19:17 GMT -5
Oh yeah, I loved Darkpaw, too. He was just so spunky and cute and looked up to Duskfrost so much, even with only one good eye. It honestly was a hard choice to kill him off, but it was necessary to the story, sadly. If I do end up making the next story in the series, which I honestly probably will,(slight spoiler incoming) you'll get to learn more about his death and who exactly did it.
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Post by 🍁Searipple101🍁 on Aug 4, 2016 19:37:09 GMT -5
Chapter 25, the final chapter, is now up! I couldn't wait, so here it is, and please enjoy!
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Post by phantomstar57 on Aug 4, 2016 20:35:58 GMT -5
Oh yeah, I loved Darkpaw, too. He was just so spunky and cute and looked up to Duskfrost so much, even with only one good eye. It honestly was a hard choice to kill him off, but it was necessary to the story, sadly. If I do end up making the next story in the series, which I honestly probably will,(slight spoiler incoming) you'll get to learn more about his death and who exactly did it. You best do that story :-)
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Post by phantomstar57 on Aug 4, 2016 20:36:59 GMT -5
Chapter 25, the final chapter, is now up! I couldn't wait, so here it is, and please enjoy! Oohh gotta go opn on my Kindle!!!
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Post by 🍁Searipple101🍁 on Aug 4, 2016 20:55:22 GMT -5
I'll probably do it :3 I'm excited about it and already have a banner made and the prologue written out. And, like this last chapter, if I get excited about something, I can't keep it to myself for long. I have to share it with everyone, whether it be a piece of art I did or writing!
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Post by phantomstar57 on Aug 5, 2016 8:29:20 GMT -5
I'll probably do it :3 I'm excited about it and already have a banner made and the prologue written out. And, like this last chapter, if I get excited about something, I can't keep it to myself for long. I have to share it with everyone, whether it be a piece of art I did or writing! Cool! I haven't read chapt 25 yet-but plan to tonight! Git tied up with a friend who wants a customized model horse. By time we finished it was 10 pm and Robot fightin' Time:-) (Battlebots)
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Post by 🍁Searipple101🍁 on Aug 5, 2016 9:52:06 GMT -5
Battlebots sounds awesome! I hope you had fun :3
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Post by 🍁Searipple101🍁 on Aug 5, 2016 17:18:55 GMT -5
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Post by [~Ghost Writer~] on Aug 5, 2016 17:22:25 GMT -5
I promise I'll try to read this when I have the time
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Post by mintedstar/fur on Aug 5, 2016 17:25:27 GMT -5
Wow, really need to read it all now! So excited!
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Post by 🍁Searipple101🍁 on Aug 5, 2016 17:31:36 GMT -5
Thanks guys! No need to rush, though, either of you. I look forward to your feedback
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Post by phantomstar57 on Aug 5, 2016 21:10:30 GMT -5
Battlebots sounds awesome! I hope you had fun :3 It i a blast! It used to be on TV years ago in the late 90s. I was so happy to see it back on ABC and the robots are bigger, more ferocious and parts go flying around the battle box!
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Post by 🍁Searipple101🍁 on Aug 5, 2016 21:14:57 GMT -5
Sounds awesome! I've never personally seen it, but when described I know what you're talking about. I'd like to see it sometime.
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Post by phantomstar57 on Aug 5, 2016 21:29:54 GMT -5
Finished Chap 25! Great work and OMG, you better write the next one! I did see one boo boo where you used loose instead of lose. "It's true!" At this point, I was starting to loose my temper, but I knew I could not fight Poppycloud right here. Should be lose my temper :-)
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Post by 🍁Searipple101🍁 on Aug 5, 2016 22:11:30 GMT -5
Ah, thanks. Typo Princess here XD I'll fix it later, though.
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Post by phantomstar57 on Aug 6, 2016 9:02:26 GMT -5
Sounds awesome! I've never personally seen it, but when described I know what you're talking about. I'd like to see it sometime. It's on ABC I believe Wed or Thurs night (Forget since we record it and watch at our lesuire). Just fun time! If you're geeky like me LOL
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Post by phantomstar57 on Aug 6, 2016 9:03:57 GMT -5
Ah, thanks. Typo Princess here XD I'll fix it later, though. Welcome from the Imperial Typo Queen. . .
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Post by 🍁Searipple101🍁 on Aug 6, 2016 11:42:01 GMT -5
Thanks! I'll check it out sometime. I'm only a little geeky, but I still like cool things.
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Post by 🍁Searipple101🍁 on Aug 6, 2016 20:18:59 GMT -5
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Post by 🍁Searipple101🍁 on Aug 7, 2016 11:54:50 GMT -5
bumpers
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Post by mintedstar/fur on Aug 7, 2016 16:08:33 GMT -5
Ah, thanks. Typo Princess here XD I'll fix it later, though. No! You shall never dethrone me! I am the Typo Princess! No one shall take my throne!!!
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Post by phantomstar57 on Aug 7, 2016 16:12:39 GMT -5
LOL Typo Princess ye shall remain but this old she-cat shall always be the Imperial Typo Queen! 59 years and counting hehehe. Found a few last night in NEW BLOOD proofing on the Kindle before moving a section to the new layout..ugh. Now the silly thing tells me the text is too long aftre it wasn't before the layout change. . .
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Post by 🍁Searipple101🍁 on Aug 7, 2016 16:26:52 GMT -5
I will fight you for it, Mint! *takes out sword*
Sorry about that, Phantom :/ But you should be happy to know that Born of Blood: Blood Moon is now posted with the Prologue. It's short, but I think it does its job well.
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Post by phantomstar57 on Aug 7, 2016 16:35:19 GMT -5
I will fight you for it, Mint! *takes out sword* Sorry about that, Phantom :/ But you should be happy to know that Born of Blood: Blood Moon is now posted with the Prologue. It's short, but I think it does its job well. Cool! I'll be checking it out later this eve when i can read on my Kindle!
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