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Post by EthanTheAnnus on Aug 19, 2017 23:34:56 GMT -5
"Sure," Michael replied cautiously. He'd been finding it harder to completely trust Jeremy after the whole "Squip thing". Especially since Jeremy had made him feel pretty suicidal back on Halloween. I guess I should try to forgive him... but I just keep wondering if the Squip will come back or if he's going to betray me again or... Michael quickly shook off the thoughts before Jeremy restarted the level. Damn, I wish I knew what was going on his head right now.
((I'll bookmark it now. And BTW, after the car crash, maybe Jeremy can discover that one of the students at school made a musical (BMC) based off of what happened and when he hears "Michael in the Bathroom" he feels like hell for doing that to Michael. Just an idea ow0))
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Post by EthanTheAnnus on Aug 19, 2017 23:26:16 GMT -5
I find Tiger having a crush on Maple to be kinda funny. Like imagine that. Tigerstar: Mapleshade, we need to rally our forces from ShadowClan-- Mapleshade: Shut up you annoying furball! *stalks off* Tigerstar: ..... Tigerstar: *feels hot under his fur* Darkstripe: -scowling a little- Hey Tigerstar snap out of it-- Tigerstar: Be quiet you imbecile! Darkstripe: ....*feels hot under his fur* Ah, I forgot the headcanon about Darkstripe having a crush on Tigerstar...
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Post by EthanTheAnnus on Aug 18, 2017 23:00:42 GMT -5
Welcome to the forums, jettstar! Glad you found us! I hope you enjoy your stay (*cough* if you're like me it could be a lot of years *cough*)!
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Post by EthanTheAnnus on Aug 18, 2017 22:58:13 GMT -5
It's getting to me, too.
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Post by EthanTheAnnus on Aug 18, 2017 22:56:54 GMT -5
Uhhh...
Scourge and Firestar have a similar sounding voice.
Tigerstar's voice is deep but after he dies it becomes a more high-pitched voice.
Sasha has actually been offered a place in StarClan, but she declined.
Mothwing doesn't believe in StarClan because she remembers Tadpole's death and believes that if StarClan were real, they wouldn't let kits die.
Mapleshade's hallucinations of her kits still occur from time to time in the Dark Forest; they're usually drowning in the thick, sludgy rivers and she can't save them in time.
Tigerstar had a crush on Mapleshade when he was in the DF, but he was too scared of her to admit it.
Spottedleaf actually became a medicine cat because she started feeling attracted to she-cats as well as toms.
Firestar and Graystripe are secretly gay for each other.
Bumblestripe and Graystripe often have arguments about who could eat the most prey.
Graystripe still catches fish sometimes.
Hollyleaf's suffix was given to her because Squirrelflight suggested it.
Hawkfrost is a lighter brown than Tigerstar and Brambleclaw, though Brambleclaw is the slightest shade lighter than Tigerstar.
Mothwing and Tawnypelt actually often talk to each other at Gatherings.
Alderpaw's voice actually sounds like Moonkitti.
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Post by EthanTheAnnus on Aug 18, 2017 22:45:43 GMT -5
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Post by EthanTheAnnus on Aug 18, 2017 22:44:16 GMT -5
Yeah, I just noticed this too. It's very annoying, since now my fics and stuff can't be updated. @sav Sand @roswell
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Post by EthanTheAnnus on Aug 18, 2017 22:41:44 GMT -5
Here it is! Let me know if you need me the change anything... This looks really pretty! Thank you so much!
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Post by EthanTheAnnus on Aug 18, 2017 22:41:00 GMT -5
"Probably true," Louis replied. "I guess what we should be doing is searching for food; anything that's survived the quake." "Ooh!" Paul exclaimed. "Let's go get some candy from that super expensive candy store and rob it!" He bounced on his toes. "If the candy store is still stable, and won't collapse on our heads," Louis pointed out, but he was grinning anyway.
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Post by EthanTheAnnus on Aug 17, 2017 18:43:39 GMT -5
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Post by EthanTheAnnus on Aug 17, 2017 18:42:19 GMT -5
(When Josh is an extension of yourself.... ) "Do I have to look?" asked Eveline, referring to the cabin. She didn't want to actually see it, because that might just make it real. "No, you can just sleep outside in the rain," said Josh, gesturing at the gray clouds in the sky.
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Post by EthanTheAnnus on Aug 17, 2017 18:41:03 GMT -5
"Jeesh, just trying to lighten the mood," Louis muttered, backing away, hands held high in surrender. As an after-thought, he added, "Seriously, though, do you want some help?" "Nah," Paul said, dropping the huge block. "That's okay, I doubt we'd be able to lift it anyway." "Probably true," Louis replied. "I guess what we should be doing is searching for food; anything that's survived the quake."
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Post by EthanTheAnnus on Aug 17, 2017 3:00:34 GMT -5
For me, poorly written is usually a character who is either over or under used, or just an all round jerk.
An over used character: Mapleshade.
Ok, so she appears lightly in the main series, trying to drown Ivypool and all... yeah yeah, that's cool. Then she gets her own Novella. Ok, not too bad... Then she appears in Crookedstar's Promise. That starts to annoy most people, but then we find out she's in the FREAKING TIGERSTAR NOVELLA TOO. Just why?
An under used character: Hollyleaf.
Seriously, I feel like she was brought in just to confuse the plotline. Then for us all to assume she is dead, only for her to return so she can DIE.
An all round jerk: Firestar.
The first series, he was great. From there on, he went downhill. He seemed to become a less murderous Tigerstar. He walks all over the other Clans territories and broke the code multiple times. Actually, he broke about half the code, if not more.
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Post by EthanTheAnnus on Aug 17, 2017 2:28:09 GMT -5
Nope. Was going to though.
TUBM likes either Hamilton, DEH or BMC.
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Post by EthanTheAnnus on Aug 17, 2017 2:26:55 GMT -5
Here's everybody's favorite BMC song, featuring Google Translate! [Michael] The collapse of a large part of that is hanging in the bathroom If you want to lose it
My friend left me alone because you got pain But in the game of football, who they want to him, Take heed, provoking me to my phone or that evil is
Everything like a pair of semi But the fault, there is no other medium
I was in the bathroom is part of Michalis Michail remember how Michail Michail who has none of the group, I am the I am, and in the bath, Bread corn is bruised; because he will not have done it? and wait Getting slower and slower depressing pulled But Michael, Michael, Michael, one will realize that Michael is Hammamkhana Oh, that is,
I was hiding, but they ignored our history The memory has been deleted, the update site should be used booking Songs heard drunk girl at the door - I hope you dance! This girl is very boring to be drunken, I do not know why it has done so, it is not the whole of the mind shall suggest to me to come down?
Now only a shower room Michalis Michail Bany I feel a little pain Bany, Michael, Michael, a part of bany, opened tears At work, I'm waiting for XEROSTOMIA OR weeds, either because of my bad! But Michael, Michael fears, "I do not know about the When Michael bathroom!
Tap, tap, tap is dead Tap, tap, tap So, I am, I am coming quickly, Tap, tap, tap These are simply leave Tap, tap, tap Of the people, of the people of Israel, this war was a child,
The voice sound voice sound "I feel pressure shock Bang bang bang bang I left a big mistake Splash, splash, splash, undergraduate the face of water I'm in a good place He opened the door But I can not fight! more
I want my otherwise be unable to when a mirror In fact, it is clear Of course, like ....
a group A sad face Michael sing in the bathroom is part it was night I see that there are six channel at home, in the bed, and lay upon the ground Or was, and is not willing to be away from this world, I'm just a lonely, says Michael; It will be Shiren The cruise car comb God, that's a loser "Only Michael Vlieg What do you think you know toilet Michael "Bread corn is bruised" "Michael is Hammamkhana" "At work, I'm waiting for XEROSTOMIA" Toilet Michael XD And welcome to our wonderful cult.
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Post by EthanTheAnnus on Aug 17, 2017 2:24:03 GMT -5
Well, I'm not generally a full-out romance nerd either. And drama is literally my best friend in rps. (cough like I always kill of my characters cough) Uhhh... Maybe something along the lines of a squip flare-up that turns into a massive fight, Michael leaves and ends up in a car crash and Jeremy feels really, really bad over it? Maybe also Michael in a coma and perhaps Jeremy takes some surgery to get rid of the squip. Either that or some Hanahaki stuff. Your plot is: Squip comes back, Michael freaks and blames it all on himself and the car crash happens. What might be cool is that Jeremy drinks alcohol to mess up the Squip, and somehow drunkenly causes Michael's car accident. Poor Mike is in a coma because of Jeremy. I'd say that Michael is in a coma for a week at most, unless we want dreaming-Michael and dream-Jeremy to play out, too (which is also a very interesting idea). In the coma-dream, Michael can work out his inner turmoil and whatnot and have fluffy fluff with Jeremy....until he wakes up. You mentioned hanahaki disease and while doctors were trying to surgically remove car metal out of Michael's body, they find a lot of flowers in his stomach. Now, we can go in several directions depending on if hanahaki is an official phenomenon or if it's just an urban legend. Either way, I think Jeremy would freely allow Squip to block Michael, or Squip would convince Jeremy to block Michael. Michael can either learn or not learn about how Jeremy had been the cause of his coma. Or he knows, but has amnesia. Or he just knows. Whatever happens, Michael wonders why Jeremy is still ignoring him—for all Michael knows, the Squip is totally gone and he cannot comprehend. If Michael doesn't know about Jeremy, then same scenario except add more drama. Getting back to hanahaki disease, the doctors can either tell Michael about the flowers, or leave it alone. I think an interesting plot twist would be: when Michael wakes up, he realizes the flowers are gone. Did the doctors take out the flower? Does he not love Jeremy anymore? What's the difference between no homo, best friends/boyf riends and actual, real life boyfriends? There's some panic before he realizes that the flowers disappeared because Jeremy loves Michael back. (I know, it's cheesy.....) .... I could go on forever, but....suggestions? We do have a rough outline, and we can always throw additions to plot to make them suffer even more. This is good. I'm just gonna start this randomly with them both down in Michael's basement)) "Gah!" Michael threw down the controller as the screen flashed GAME OVER into his face.
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Post by EthanTheAnnus on Aug 17, 2017 2:19:45 GMT -5
"Why else would I mention them?" Josh said, slightly annoyed. "I swear, every fandom I'm in has gay ships... Laurens and Hamilton, Jeremy and Michael, Nico and Will, Evan and Conner..." "Alright..." said Eveline, thinking for a second. Then she shrugged. "Best of an opinion I've got is that some of the art on the internet is good. Other than that, I'd actually have to watch it to know." She tapped her fingers against her backpack straps. "And is that surprising? That there are gay ships in all your fandoms? It's nice to have verity. Personally, I like Nico and Will." She grinned. At least she actually was in that fandom. "AHA!" Josh shouted. "You are part of fandoms! And I can do art- sometimes. I mean, I can do art for the Warriors fandom... Oh, here's our cabin!"
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Post by EthanTheAnnus on Aug 17, 2017 2:17:10 GMT -5
"Is my singing that bad that it made your muscles malfuction?" Louis asked jokingly. Paul turned and looked at Louis, glaring. He was not in the mood for jokes. "Jeesh, just trying to lighten the mood," Louis muttered, backing away, hands held high in surrender. As an after-thought, he added, "Seriously, though, do you want some help?"
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Post by EthanTheAnnus on Aug 16, 2017 3:59:53 GMT -5
Oh guys I made an rp Discord server if anyone wants to join StormClan: discord.gg/SHUFRrV
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Post by EthanTheAnnus on Aug 16, 2017 3:41:09 GMT -5
Sand Felix I'd love it if we could have an official Discord server, as long as you guys are up for moderating that too!
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Post by EthanTheAnnus on Aug 16, 2017 3:38:51 GMT -5
@rainbowclaw *patiently awaits updates* Sup I was at school nothing much... school, homework, school, shipping Jeremy and Michael, school, school, school.
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Post by EthanTheAnnus on Aug 16, 2017 3:37:55 GMT -5
EthanTheAnnus I made a thread for our Jeremy/Michael rp! As far as plots go, I like staying in canon and having Squip flare-ups, but that's also way too boring. AUs are awesome. Soulmate AUs are iffy for me though, since I get bored playing 100% romance. Don't get me wrong—I ship them like FedEx but pure romance and fluff isn't my thing, haha.... I like angst and drama. What kind of stuff do you like? Despite having all these vague concepts flying around, I have no clue for a possible plot. Well, I'm not generally a full-out romance nerd either. And drama is literally my best friend in rps. (cough like I always kill of my characters cough) Uhhh... Maybe something along the lines of a squip flare-up that turns into a massive fight, Michael leaves and ends up in a car crash and Jeremy feels really, really bad over it? Maybe also Michael in a coma and perhaps Jeremy takes some surgery to get rid of the squip. Either that or some Hanahaki stuff.
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Post by EthanTheAnnus on Aug 16, 2017 3:34:16 GMT -5
"Hey!" Louis turned around the slap Paul before turning back to turn on the music again. "Find the bad guy, push em aside, then move on forward with your friend at your side. It's a two player game, so when they make an attack, you know you got a brother gonna have your back!" Louis didn't recognise his own singing skills. He glanced over at Paul. "I'm probably screeching the lyrics, so I apologize in... well, I guess this is semi-advance." "Ugh!" Paul glared at the wreckage. "I had very expensive headphones that blocked out all sound somewhere over there." He put all of his contempt into the hand-flicking gesture he made, then tried to lift a block of rubble. It was too heavy for him. Paul's muscles bulged, but he couldn't even get it off the ground. "Is my singing that bad that it made your muscles malfuction?" Louis asked jokingly.
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Post by EthanTheAnnus on Aug 16, 2017 3:32:51 GMT -5
Duskstep nodded before pushing the formerly forgotten bird toward the apprentice. "You need to eat or you won't have strength enough to fight off a fever if it comes." He insisted, knowing that was the last thing they needed when everycat was separated. "I would get you water, but I doubt you want to be tasting salt for the next moon more than you already are." He could still taste the salt from swimming over and he personally would hate to get more of it on his tongue. "Thanks," Mudpaw mumbled again, forcing himself to stand up on shaky legs so he could crouch by the bird. He tore into it's flesh and his gaze instantly lit up. "My favourite!"
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Post by EthanTheAnnus on Aug 16, 2017 3:31:41 GMT -5
Before long, the group had reached shelter - A small cave. Ravenpelt warily padded inside, glancing around the visual signs of danger, then opening his mouth to scent the air. Nope, no predators. Just a stale scent of rabbit. Ravenpelt glanced back outside. "All clear!" he called.
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Post by EthanTheAnnus on Aug 16, 2017 3:26:05 GMT -5
"Hum?" asked Evenline. "Am I supposed to offer my opinion on them?" She'd listened to a couple of songs, she didn't claim to know it so well that she knew all the names. But she wasn't going to tell Josh that. "Why else would I mention them?" Josh said, slightly annoyed. "I swear, every fandom I'm in has gay ships... Laurens and Hamilton, Jeremy and Michael, Nico and Will, Evan and Conner..."
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Post by EthanTheAnnus on Aug 15, 2017 3:10:44 GMT -5
A single, lone black wolf padded through the woods. His fur tingled slightly and his hackles raised warily as he set foot into a Pack territory. His green eyes scanned the woods and he sniffed the air. Satisfied, he padded fowards, then paused. A small rabbit sat in front of him. He crept slowly forwards, two-tail lengths away, one-tail length... pounce! He bit the rabbit's neck and snaffled it up into his jaws quickly, glancing around again. He tried to sniff the air to see if any Pack member were around, but the scent of prey-blood masked everything. His eyes narrowed. He gently placed down the prey and put his single white forepaw on it. He sniffed deeply. Prey was so scarce that he was willing to risk invading territories to hunt. Even if it could end with his corpse littering the forest floor.
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Post by EthanTheAnnus on Aug 15, 2017 3:05:37 GMT -5
Pretty!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Post by EthanTheAnnus on Aug 15, 2017 3:04:31 GMT -5
Duskstep padded a short distance away, finding a small patch of the bright flowers being choked out by brambles and weeds. He nipped the stems of a few and hurried back to where Mudoaw was, hoping that Iceoaw had found some cobwebs. Alright, how was Marigold prepared? I don't think I ever ate this, so it must be applied as those goop things the medicine cat does. He chewed the flower heads into a pulp, his nose scrunching in distaste as the bitter flavors washed over his toungue. He laid the poultice where he thought the wound was. Mudpaw felt Duskstep applying some of the poultice. The cut stung like wildfire as the juices seeped in, but Mudpaw had no strength to move. In fact, he didn't even have a will to move. "Thanks," he whispered hoarsely.
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Post by EthanTheAnnus on Aug 15, 2017 3:01:39 GMT -5
"No I don't know where the others are. I only recently found Sleetwing. If we don't find them soon we should look for shelter." He had to catch his breath. Sleetwing nodded her agreement, slightly impressed by the tom. "The kits and apprentices shouldn't stay out in this weather," she meowed.
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