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Post by EthanTheAnnus on Oct 10, 2017 2:08:20 GMT -5
Rocketkit and Stormkit padded away after Lionyowl had finished the re-enactment with them. Spotting Cloudkit, Stormkit meowed loudly, "Hey, Cloudkit! Want to play moss-ball?"
Satisfied that the older kits were entertained, Lionyowl and Gingerheart lay side by side in the shade. A heartbeat later,
Firefur joined them.
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Post by EthanTheAnnus on Oct 10, 2017 2:05:48 GMT -5
So page tomorrow not today... I have a Greek exam tomorrow and I've been studying all day so I'm just gonna play some pokemon now to take my mind off the test... but I'll get the page up tomorrow after the exam! thats a lie i didn't play pokemon tonight I WAS TOO DISTRACTED BY STAR WARS
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Post by EthanTheAnnus on Oct 10, 2017 2:04:37 GMT -5
-` gumi ´- .✫ 🐾 forgot to reply to Embertide)
"I'm not sure," Lynxheart answer slowly, whiskers twitching. "It's a wonder he even knows the difference between a cat and a squirrel!"
Aphelyon
"Looking for friends?" teased Snowfall, bumping against the Clan medicine cat. She shook her dark brown tabby pelt out and licked her single white forepaw, drawing it up over her ears. "Don't look so glum, Rainbreeze! Even though you're half-Clan,
we don't appreciate you any less." She blinked once at him with her jay-blue eyes, then she turned to survey the hollow.
She noted that other WindClan cats were filing out into the crowd, mingling with the other Clans.
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Post by EthanTheAnnus on Oct 10, 2017 1:57:50 GMT -5
"ummm, probably some sort of large pieces of metal or wood? you know, so we can build up a small shelter around the building we were in before? then we'll get some food, too, i guess." louis tried not to show how desperate he felt at the moment. nearly everything was wrecked or ruined. there was a slim chance of finding large pieces of metal or wood.
"Alright. Meet back here before six!" Louis called after him. It surprised him that Paul had talked to him... almost like a friend. Shut up, Louis, he scolded himself. Before you get a crush on this guy. |
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Post by EthanTheAnnus on Oct 9, 2017 1:51:08 GMT -5
Mosspool please fan me! This story is sooooo good so far.
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Post by EthanTheAnnus on Oct 9, 2017 1:44:18 GMT -5
I have voted for you.
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Post by EthanTheAnnus on Oct 9, 2017 1:41:30 GMT -5
I HAS ENTERED.
"Well, this will be fun," I muttered. I flexed the bones in my tail gingerly. I was staring at the world from gaping holes in my skull. I could see my own bones; not pure white, like I'd imagined, but instead more of an off-white, with some yellowed and rotting patches here or there. I tried to blink. I couldn't- guess you can't when you're a skeleton. I spotted another cat at my side.
"Who are you?" I growled, wary. I tried to unsheathe my claws, then realised they had become like a dog's- always out and unable to retract.
"M-My name's Minnowfur. O-Or it was, anyway."
"Minnowfur?" I gaped.
"D-Do I know you?"
"It's me! Ashtalon!" I put one paw towards her. She smiled, then a single skeleton cat appeared on the horizon. One forepaw was twisted to the side and it's left ear was missing. I gasped.
"M-Mountainpeak?" It was my turn to stutter. The cat approached with a laugh.
"You got that right. Now, I believe we have unfinished business." He flicked his ear and swarms of skeletal cats emerged, pushing up through the dirt, swamping me and Minnowfur.
"Mountainpeak! you're better than this!" I howled, fending off attack after attack, my spine pressed up against Minnowfur's (balance was awkward; our bones kept slipping and making our ribcages bash together).
"Ha. That's what they all say." He flicked his tail and more skeletal warriors emerged, rushing forwards to join the attack.
"We can't hold them off forever," Minnowfur mewed. I could barely hear her over the clanking of bones. Then it hit me.
"If Mountainpeak can summon an army," I said, "Then so can I!" I grinned, flicked my ear and skeletal warriors burst from the ground, this time fighting on my side. I flicked my tail and more warriors emerged, this time managing to fight past Mountainpeak's inner guard. I smiled. Maybe beating my evil son wouldn't be so hard after all.
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Post by EthanTheAnnus on Oct 9, 2017 1:26:12 GMT -5
Firefur watched Dawn race away, quickly replaced by Rocketkit and Stormkit.
"Lionyowl," gingerheart called. "they want you to tell them a story."
"oh, do they now?" lionyowl said with a purr of amusement. "how about the time the clan had to fight off a fox? come on, you two and firefur can be the cats and i'll be the fox."
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Post by EthanTheAnnus on Oct 9, 2017 1:22:28 GMT -5
-` gumi ´- .✫ 🐾 Salted Squid
"Oh, shhh, Puddlefeather," Cliffwing meowed in a scolding tone. "I'm sure they all think it's utterly brilliant and thrilling that I am deputy." He shook out his ruffled fur and sat down underneath where Springstar stood.
Ignoring the fact that Duskstar's attention had shifted away from her, she meowed, "Prey is running well in ShadowClan, too,
Duskstar." She glanced over at the young ThunderClan leader. "And welcome. I hope that StarClan blesses you with a good leadership."
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Post by EthanTheAnnus on Oct 9, 2017 1:13:44 GMT -5
ok, yay! i'll let you guys approach my cats, since i'm not sure what's happening at the moment.))
Timberfur stretched and padded out from the warriors den. As one of the older warriors, his nest was closer to the middle of the den so it took a bit to pick his way past the other nests. Reaching the exit, he walked out into the morning light and blinked rapidly. The light was blinding. He glanced around to see if any cats were awake yet.
Thunderpaw sat to the side of the camp, cleaning prey off her whiskers. She sniffed disdainfully ever time a cat did something stupid or idiotic. They're just not perfect like me, she thought to herself, standing up. She padded forward a few paces and tripped over her own paws, embarrassing herself. ok, maybe not that perfect.
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Post by EthanTheAnnus on Oct 9, 2017 1:05:34 GMT -5
he's here... the boi STONEPAW IS BACK and so is Fogpaw (I seriously love her, she's a precious child) Yes I love Fogpaw too! She's so smol ahhhhh Hawktalon, this story is sooooo pure ahhhh i love it i neeeeed to bookmark this page
your comics are beautiful and they have me inspired i'm gonna do a comic once i get a drawing tablet (which is soon). Aw yay! I always love to inspire people! When you start it up be sure to shoot me a link and I'll come by to see it! HE'S HEREEEE I bet I can yell the loudest.
THE BOI!!!!!
But, anyway, nice page, Hawky! FrozenClan territory is pretty! :3 Ah yes I love drawing FrozenClan territory cause I FINALLY GET TO USE GREEN OMG!!! MountainClan territory is just... purple and it's so boring so VARIETY YAYY |
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Post by EthanTheAnnus on Oct 7, 2017 23:30:25 GMT -5
ahhhhh Hawktalon, this story is sooooo pure ahhhh i love it i neeeeed to bookmark this page
your comics are beautiful and they have me inspired i'm gonna do a comic once i get a drawing tablet (which is soon).
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Post by EthanTheAnnus on Oct 7, 2017 23:19:04 GMT -5
❴ ғα∂ιηg ✦ яεαℓιтү ❵ i guess you've gotta judge now. I don't think I stand a chance against these beautiful writing pieces, but good luck to everyone anyway!
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Post by EthanTheAnnus on Oct 7, 2017 23:15:53 GMT -5
updated! @mitedstarfur please don't kill me, I hope this cliffhanger doesn't kill you. also,
next chapter, a lot more will be revealed. yeah. so, uh, stick around?
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Post by EthanTheAnnus on Oct 7, 2017 23:09:33 GMT -5
(Okay, there are still problems. What I meant by the elements... it's more of a way to balance out the Marked and the non-Marked. Otherwise, the power cats could overrun everything. For Thunderpaw...What did she lose to gain the ability to go transparent? For the Marked, each part of the power needs to cause something bad to happen to the cat. For example, a Marked like your could either lose something very major, (like they are blind, can't have kits, or loses all of their claws,) or have something more minor happen for each power. (like for flying cats, many of them have wings that cannot disappear.) Maybe have the weakness of the shadow warriors also happens when she enters the shadows? Also, how many shadow warriors can she summon? For lionyowl, the question is simple. What rank is he? Is he a Fighter, Sentinel, or Hunter?) |
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Post by EthanTheAnnus on Oct 7, 2017 23:03:59 GMT -5
Lionyowl flicked his tail as he entered the nursery.
"Mind if I come in?" he purred, looking at cedarbranch and the kits.
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Post by EthanTheAnnus on Oct 7, 2017 23:01:37 GMT -5
bumpy bump bump)
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Post by EthanTheAnnus on Oct 7, 2017 22:56:04 GMT -5
Timberfur || 60||tom|| thunderfire
Timberfur is a light brown tabby with white paws, underbelly, chest and muzzle. He has leaf green eyes and his left ear is torn in three places. He is the Clan deputy (if that's ok? Also, in about nine weeks i'm going on a holiday for a week, so I'll give you a heads-up closer to the time)
Thunderpaw ||8||she-cat|| thunderfire
Thunderpaw is a gray she-cat with black tabby markings and tufted ears. She has white paws except her left forepaw, which is brown. Her ear-tips are also brown and she has sharp sky-blue eyes.
Timberfur|| 60|| tom||thunderfire
Timberfur is a light brown tabby tom with white paws, chest, underbelly, chest and muzzle. He has leaf green eyes and his left ear is torn in three places. He is generally patient and kind, but does have a temper than can flare up from time to time. He tends to overthink things sometimes because he tries too hard to plan things out.
Thunderpaw|| 8|| she-cat|| thunderfire
Thunderpaw is a gray she-cat with black tabby markings and tufted ears. She has white paws except for her left forepaw which is brown. Her ear tips are also brown and she has sharp sky-blue eyes. Her temper is easily set off and she is snarky and quite sarcastic. She is, however, fiercely loyal. |
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Post by EthanTheAnnus on Oct 7, 2017 22:47:45 GMT -5
Well, Jamilton is alexander hamilton and thomas jefferson.
grofflin is not actually hamilton characters, it's the cast members. lin manuel-miranda, the guy who made hamilton and plays hamilton in the show, and jonathon groff, the guy who plays king george (III).
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Post by EthanTheAnnus on Oct 7, 2017 22:43:48 GMT -5
brambleflight "he could use the help, actually," lionyowl said thoughtfully.
"from what i've heard, stormkit's the stubborn one," firefur mewed.
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Post by EthanTheAnnus on Oct 7, 2017 22:39:35 GMT -5
(I'd better make Louis an RP avatar lol)
Louis glanced back to see Paul facing the other way, slightly slouched, and Louis sighed. He'd probably upset the other boy,
and he guessed he didn't want to do that. He groaned slightly and then called out. "Paul! Want to help me set up a camp for the night?" |
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Post by EthanTheAnnus on Oct 7, 2017 0:22:43 GMT -5
Bump)
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Post by EthanTheAnnus on Oct 7, 2017 0:21:55 GMT -5
Uhhhh... not really, unless you count the Hamilton fandom getting me onboard with the GroffLin ship and the Jamilton ship.
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Post by EthanTheAnnus on Oct 7, 2017 0:20:27 GMT -5
Acornfall looked at the two and snorted softly. “Did you two rehearse that?” He joked with a grumble. Cloudysong chuckled a bit and gave her white pelt a couple licks. “What are you two up to?"
"We were talking about Rocketkit and Stormkit. Ad how different they are," lionyowl said, replying to cloudysong. "they're sure to be apprenticed soon, and rocketkit still hasn't given up his dream of being a medicine cat." |
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Post by EthanTheAnnus on Oct 7, 2017 0:17:17 GMT -5
Love
Graystripe
Alderheart
Sparkpelt
Bramblestar
Tigerstar (II)
Lionblaze
Jayfeather
Goldenflower
Tigerstar (I)
Scourge
Bone
Storm (DOTC)
Gray Wing
Thunderstar
Riverstar
Crowfeather
Like
Violetpaw
Twigpaw
Purdy
Mousefur
Longtail
Wind Runner
Gorse Fur
Moth Flight
Micah
Neutral
Mapleshade
Brokenstar
Antpelt
Nightcloud
Onestar
Sol
Dislike
Dovewing
Raggedstar
Foxheart
Darkstripe
Sasha
Hate
brezzepelt with a burning passion
also Firestar because he's a pain in the tail and a jerk and- ok, i'll shut up before i rant.
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Post by EthanTheAnnus on Oct 7, 2017 0:12:25 GMT -5
“Morning Lionyowl. Morning Firefur.” Cloudysong called from where she sat besides Acornfall and Dovestorm. She waved her tail at the two brothers and stretched out her front legs. Acornfall glanced over at the other warriors and mumbled a greeting. The reddish tom sighed. “Camp is sure lively today.” He muttered. |
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Post by EthanTheAnnus on Oct 7, 2017 0:09:22 GMT -5
I get to have sugar free gum thank thor
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Post by EthanTheAnnus on Oct 7, 2017 0:08:12 GMT -5
(I’ll try my best to explain all that’s happened xD Ok so first off the clan is named Viperclan. So first off, Goosestar has recently passed and Adderstar has taken his place. Adderstar is a strict and cold kind of leader so a good group of our cats aren’t exactly enjoying him leading them (so far this is Beewhisker, Littletree, Feathershine, and Whitefox). There’s also a bit of an illness going around. Dewfur, Rabbitface’s mate, just died of it (they have one young kit named Cloudkit), and Thunderfoot and Whitefox are still sick. Beewhisker and Littletree found an orphan kit on their hunting trip. Her name is Dawn and they took her back to camp to be seen by Feathershine (he’s the medicine cat). Then Adderstar visited them and said that Dawn could stay but with strict terms and the moment she messed up she would be exiled. Beewhisker got angry and argued with him for a while, he threatened to exile her as well. Adderstar left but declared that Dawn would be exiled once she reached 6 moons old. Beewhisker said she’d leave too then. After that, Feathershine went to try and talk some sense into Adderstar, the two argued for a bit. Feathershine came back to the den and found out Dewfur had died. He felt guilty and went out on a walk. NOTE: Dawn herself was asleep for pretty much all of this so she has no clue yet. We skipped to the next morning after everyone fell asleep. Beewhisker slept in the medicine cat den with Dawn, Thunderfoot and Whitefox. Feathershine was still missing in the morning. He actually went to go talk to Starclan about why Adderstar was leader but no one knows this. Beewhisker went ahead to show Dawn around the camp and also talk to an elder, Vultureflight, who trained as a medicine cat apprentice for a while so he could take over until Feathershine’s return. He’s doing so now and Beewhisker has shown Dawn the elder’s den, warrior’s den, and is taking her over to the nursery currently but stopped to talk with Rabbitface and Cloudkit along the way. ) |
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Post by EthanTheAnnus on Oct 7, 2017 0:06:45 GMT -5
(alright, I'm heere to have fun)
Darkstar led her clanmates into the clearing. she leapt up beside duskstar and dipped her head respectfully.
"Greetings, Duskstar. I trust the prey is running well?" she glanced out over the crowd of cats for a moment, making sure all her shadowclan warriors were accounted for, then she turned back the duskstar.
Cliffwing pushed through the crowd, puffing out his chest importantly.
"RiverClan deputy, coming through!" he yowled.
Lynxheart, a warrior of SkyClan, rolled her eyes at Cliffwing. she could see her brother hadn't changed a bit since he'd left skyclan.
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