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Post by EthanTheAnnus on Oct 19, 2017 1:33:27 GMT -5
HALLOWEEEEEEN;;
name: T
gender (opt): 3
breed:13
eyes: 4
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Post by EthanTheAnnus on Oct 19, 2017 1:31:47 GMT -5
The comic I'm planning is not too bad, but a little gory. It is sorta like Warriors-level violence, though, so not really bad.
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Post by EthanTheAnnus on Oct 19, 2017 1:22:58 GMT -5
I've signed up. I actually only found out about this recently, but I'm gonna do it, especially since there's a novel I've been trying to write for over a year now. Maybe that'll mean I'll actually get it done, or at least get a good start on it.
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Post by EthanTheAnnus on Oct 19, 2017 0:59:19 GMT -5
Alright, I guess that’s what we’ll do, ❴ ғα∂ιηg ✦ яεαℓιтү ❵. And I’m ready to write another chapter when you’ve written yours. I need to do that still ayah, sorry depression and responsibilities have been keeping me occupied |
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Post by EthanTheAnnus on Oct 18, 2017 16:19:31 GMT -5
The brown tabby tom narrowed his green eyes at the cats in front of him. The bush he was crouched behind fully hid him, but he was growing increasingly paranoid.
“The wind won’t just change, Hawk,” meowed a russet tabby she-cat, her amber eyes full of amusement at the tom’s distress.
“I’m not sure of that, Dark,” The tom, Hawk, shout back. “We’ve hunted before and the wind has changed. Besides, they have kits with them. They might not be too happy to find us here.”
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Post by EthanTheAnnus on Oct 18, 2017 16:15:31 GMT -5
I love this AHAHAHA
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Post by EthanTheAnnus on Oct 18, 2017 16:14:02 GMT -5
This is good, but cringe too.
Like my old fic that I’m remastering.
I have no clue why I thought that piece of trash was good.
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Post by EthanTheAnnus on Oct 18, 2017 16:09:59 GMT -5
Alright, I guess that’s what we’ll do, ❴ ғα∂ιηg ✦ яεαℓιтү ❵. And I’m ready to write another chapter when you’ve written yours.
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Post by EthanTheAnnus on Oct 18, 2017 3:50:03 GMT -5
mintedstar/fur do you mind filling out the above survey?
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Post by EthanTheAnnus on Oct 18, 2017 3:43:28 GMT -5
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Post by EthanTheAnnus on Oct 18, 2017 3:43:16 GMT -5
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Post by EthanTheAnnus on Oct 18, 2017 3:42:43 GMT -5
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Post by EthanTheAnnus on Oct 18, 2017 3:42:31 GMT -5
Prologue
Starfire
“You promised me, Starfire,” came the hissing voice, warning and threat in his tone.
“I promised you nothing,” I returned with a smile. “I simply implied you would get what you wanted.”
“Why, you-”
“Is there a problem, Rattatusk?” A russet-furred she-cat had entered the clearing, her cold amber eyes narrowed.
“None at all.” The large black and red snake ducked his head to stare at the ground, glanced up, then turned to slither away.
“Thanks, Mapledawn,” I meowed, somewhat shakily.
“You’d better be,” snorted Mapledawn. “He could’ve bitten you, and then our plans would have been… delayed.”
“Are you suggesting I could be replaced?” I placed forward a paw, claws extended. The she-cat noticed her error.
“Of course not, love,” she purred. “I only meant that it would be immensely difficult to carry out the plan without you. Impossible, even.”
“Hmmm.” I looked away from her, eyes narrowed at the path Rattatusk had cleared when he had exited. “We still need him.”
“I know. But don’t worry; we’ll have his help when it counts.” I turned back in time to spot her malicious smile.
“Got some bargaining chips, huh?” She opened her mouth to answer and I cut her off. “No, don’t tell me. Let this be your thing. I’ll handle the troops.” I whisked away, padding down a narrow path between the trees. I glanced up; once again, my view of the sky and stars was blocked by the leaves of the trees. Nothing new.
“Ah, he’s back. How did it go?”
“Rattatusk was pleased.” I said sarcastically, giving a strained smile to the brown tabby in front of me. “But the plan is already in motion. There is no need to stress.”
“Good, father.” The tom paused for a moment. “And the kit?”
“All prepared,” I answered. “I sent Dragon down there tonight.”
“I don’t like how much trust you have in that rogue,” he muttered, but didn’t challenge me further.
“I’m sure the kit will do great,” put in a gray she-cat.
“Exactly. Browntail, have as much faith in me as Grayswoop.”
“I have faith in you, and the plan. As long as Dragon doesn’t screw it up.”
“Well, why don’t you ask him,” I meowed. “He’s back.”
Chapter One
Hawkfeather
“Hawkpaw! Stonepaw! Firepaw! Hawkpaw! Stonepaw! Firepaw!”
I sat proud beside my siblings, chest puffed out, head held high. The gathered cats disbanded and we all stood up, ready to begin our training. Our parents padded over.
“I’m so proud of you!” Snowfox proclaimed loudly, licking each of us on the head in turn.
“Mo-other,” groaned Stonepaw. “I’m not a kit!”
I turned to my father, Seedstar, anxious for his reaction. He simply turned his head away from all of us. I forced down the disappointment. This was nothing new. My mentor, Riverfoot, padded over.
“Ready to train, kiddo?” she asked fondly. I nodded. We padded from the camp with Stonepaw and Firepaw, along with their mentors, Monsterclaw and Windpelt. We padded along swiftly and then something leapt at me, claws digging into my pelt, rolling me over and over…
“Hawkfeather! Hawkfeather!”
“Midpaw? Ugh. What time is it?”
“Redfur told me to wake you. We’re on the dawn patrol!” My excited apprentice jumped around the warrior’s den, nearly landing on Stonefur’s tail.
“I can’t believe I overslept!” I exclaimed, flicking my tail as I leapt to my paws.
“Still the lazy cat you were as an apprentice, I see?” Redfur’s amused purr met my ears.
“What would you know?” I spluttered, indignant.
“Riverfoot is my sister,” Redfur pointed out.
“Oh, right.”
“Can you two stop talking? I want to go already!” Midpaw practically landed on my head as she flopped around in excitement. I laughed at her kit-like behaviour.
“Alright,” I meowed, following the kit out of the den. Redfur came out a moment later, followed by Firewing and a grumbling Stonefur.
“Remind me to never wake him up early again,” Redfur meowed, amused.
“Consider it done,” I replied with a purr. “Come on, Midpaw. We’re ready now.”
“Most of us, anyway,” Stonefur grumbled.
“Oh, shut up,” I purred in amusement. “We’re leaving.”
“Wait! Hawkfeather!” Silverclaw raced over to me. “Seedstar’s asking for you.”
I gaped. “Is he…”
Silverclaw nodded. “Wishcloud tried her best. All we can do is grant his wishes now.”
“You’ll have to go on without me,” I meowed to Redfur, who dipped his head in acknowledgement. Then I turned back to Silverclaw. “Show me to him!”
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Post by EthanTheAnnus on Oct 18, 2017 3:42:15 GMT -5
Does anyone, per chance, remember a cringey fic on the old forums, called Immortal Demon, that got a lot of attention for its storyline and characters?
By someone called iluvanimals456?
Well, that was me, and I'm here with a remastered version!
This one shouldn't be quite so fast-moving, so the story should be easier to follow. Plus, my writing won't be so cringey. Ready for the ride? Well, let's go!
Characters:
Hawkfeather- brown tabby tom with green eyes. He has white paws and muzzle.
Midpaw- black she-cat with one white forepaw, a white flash on her chest and blue eyes.
Starfire- yellow tabby tom with amber eyes.
Rattatusk- huge black and red scaled snake.
Thunder- silver tabby she-cat with bright blue eyes.
The Protector- a mysterious black tom with yellow eyes.
Synopsis:
Hawkfeather is your typical Clan warrior, aside from a few things, including the fact that a strange cat continuously appears in his dreams. He has an apprentice, is well-respected and lives a normal life... until his father, Seedstar, falls gravely ill and tells him something that will change his life forever....
Introduction:
I never knew I was “special”. I never knew I had all the time in the world. I never knew her days were numbered. I never knew how hard life would be, being this way. I never knew it would be the worst thing that happened to me.
And it’s all because of something that happened before I was born.
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Post by EthanTheAnnus on Oct 18, 2017 1:37:51 GMT -5
Snowblossom was oblivious to the two as she jumped from tree to tree with ease. She finally stopped and looked at her apprentice "this looks like a good area."
sandy earth.
"It's ok," muttered Timberfur, but he followed anyway. |
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Money
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Post by EthanTheAnnus on Oct 18, 2017 1:36:24 GMT -5
I myself would be willing to create some little kitties on my art program.
It'd just mean there'd be about 4-5 different ones you could buy.
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Post by EthanTheAnnus on Oct 18, 2017 1:31:32 GMT -5
AHHHH HAWKY THE NEW PAGE IS BEAUTIFUL I love your art style sm!!!!
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Post by EthanTheAnnus on Oct 18, 2017 1:27:35 GMT -5
I'm excited for the next page!
Also I should be starting my comic in two weeks when I get the drawing tablet ahaha totally not drowning in MAP parts aha That's good! good luck on your comic! |
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Post by EthanTheAnnus on Oct 17, 2017 2:32:32 GMT -5
(yeah that's totally fine! I encourage it) Snowblossom rolled her eyes "how about you go around listening to at least one story from every cat that has been in the tribe" she said in a mean tone. She always sounded angry and venomous but her bark was meaner than her bite, it was just how she was she never meant too much on it. "Thunderpaw, this is also a reason she-cats live longer than toms, everything is a competition to them. My father used to fight over how his kits were stronger or faster, it's just a nausence if you ask me"
"I bet I'll easily outlive Timberfur," Thunderpaw said smugly. "Also, I've heard toms act even stupider in front of she-cats they like." She shot a meaningful glance at Timberfur, who looked away, embarrassed. |
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Post by EthanTheAnnus on Oct 17, 2017 2:30:36 GMT -5
Np! Don't rush to get it done.
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Post by EthanTheAnnus on Oct 17, 2017 2:30:02 GMT -5
I'm trying to get The SQUIP song out of my head ahaha
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Post by EthanTheAnnus on Oct 17, 2017 2:29:23 GMT -5
(I was gonna say that, but I was thinking we could focus on their thoughts for a bit, but yeah, a timeskip would probably be best)
Louis returned to the half destroyed science lab, lugging along some large pieces of metal and wood, plus some "proper food"
he had taken from the cafe. He sat down in the middle of the room to rest for a moment. During the time by himself, he had worked out that he had a minor crush on Paul. And he had decided that it would stay as a minor crush. Forever.
"You got firewood?" Louis said, surprised that Paul had thought of that and he hadn't. |
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Post by EthanTheAnnus on Oct 17, 2017 2:27:40 GMT -5
okay page 83 is all lined and just needs color and shading! Which I will try to do tomorrow, but I have to spend most of my time tomorrow driving back to school and then I have to finish an animation project... which I've barely started haha... so IDK when the page will be up... tomorrow or wednesday for sure!
Also I should be starting my comic in two weeks when I get the drawing tablet ahaha totally not drowning in MAP parts aha |
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Post by EthanTheAnnus on Oct 17, 2017 2:26:20 GMT -5
I was just practising animation WITH A MOUSE HAHAHA it looks sooooo bad but I had to test the program's animation thingy and it actually works pretty well, so my MAP parts will (hopefully) be good, if I don't rush them.
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Post by EthanTheAnnus on Oct 16, 2017 2:31:32 GMT -5
And I can't draw with a mouse either.
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Post by EthanTheAnnus on Oct 16, 2017 2:31:04 GMT -5
Oh nuuu... I've got to go bye I guesssssssss
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Post by EthanTheAnnus on Oct 16, 2017 2:30:27 GMT -5
Oh yeah, I forgot, his left wing is torn at the top (which you can see) and one of the membranes is torn as well here's another pic if you need it:
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Post by EthanTheAnnus on Oct 16, 2017 2:26:57 GMT -5
Can you draw these two babs? there's a second pic which is the ref for the IceWing, Windfall. Leo is easy enough to see.
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Post by EthanTheAnnus on Oct 16, 2017 2:23:14 GMT -5
Can you just draw me a guy? short brown hair with blonde tips,
brown eyes and some freckles across the bridge of his nose? thanks!
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Post by EthanTheAnnus on Oct 16, 2017 2:19:52 GMT -5
Hi, I'm alive and boreddddd
I'm waiting to get a drawing tablet and I WILL NOT SHUT UP ABOUT IT even though it's two weeks away ahaha I have a great life ahaha 
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DM me if u want
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