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Post by ﮩ٨ـﮩﮩ٨ـevīأdīทⲟﮩ٨ـﮩﮩ٨ـ on Aug 7, 2024 14:40:18 GMT -5
ADVERTISING!
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Post by sharptail on Aug 7, 2024 14:41:09 GMT -5
Writing territory and camp descriptions!
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Post by sharptail on Aug 7, 2024 14:42:17 GMT -5
✦⚝Stormscar⚝✦ I posted in Windclan if you want to respond.
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Post by ✦⚝Stormscar⚝✦ on Aug 7, 2024 14:48:18 GMT -5
First, what plot lien and camp are we going to do ﮩ٨ـﮩﮩ٨ـevīأdīทⲟﮩ٨ـﮩﮩ٨ـ ?
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Post by ﮩ٨ـﮩﮩ٨ـevīأdīทⲟﮩ٨ـﮩﮩ٨ـ on Aug 7, 2024 14:50:46 GMT -5
Maybe start the plot line when our characters that are apprentices are kits
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Post by sharptail on Aug 7, 2024 14:54:20 GMT -5
Quick little camp description:
Sunclan camp is located in a ravine in the middle of the desert. The dens are caves in the walls of the ravine, cat-sized tunnels lead to these dens. Each den holds about 8-9 cats and some dens are connected to other dens through tunnels. Each ranks has it's own den(s), all of the warriors sleep with other warriors, same with apprentices. The only cats that don't sleep with other cats are the leader and medicine cat. The leader sleeps in a much smaller den that is below an overhang that is used to call meetings from. The medicine cat has a much bigger den to make room for the herb storage and places for sick or injured cats to rest. The fresh-kill pile is surrounded by small rocks and is near the elders den. The exit or entrance to camp is a pile of rocks that go up and out of the ravine.
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Post by ✦⚝Stormscar⚝✦ on Aug 7, 2024 14:54:40 GMT -5
No, i mean out of all the plot ideas which do we do?
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Post by sharptail on Aug 7, 2024 14:56:23 GMT -5
Oh yeah, evildino mention a cult earlier and now I want a dark forest cult plot.
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Post by sharptail on Aug 7, 2024 14:58:12 GMT -5
Ooo, or what if there is a sandstorm briefly at some point, or repetitive sandstorms.
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Post by sharptail on Aug 7, 2024 14:59:05 GMT -5
Also, Stormscar, do you wanna go over to Windclan real quick for me?
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Post by ✦⚝Stormscar⚝✦ on Aug 7, 2024 15:03:00 GMT -5
Orrrrrrrr:
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Post by sharptail on Aug 7, 2024 15:19:18 GMT -5
I think we need a territory description.
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Post by sharptail on Aug 7, 2024 15:20:46 GMT -5
Gonna try and summon Stormscar. ✦⚝Stormscar⚝✦
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Post by ✦⚝Stormscar⚝✦ on Aug 7, 2024 15:38:51 GMT -5
*Rises from grave* GaSp I lIvE, what territory are we doing? Oasis or Canyon?
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Post by sharptail on Aug 7, 2024 15:41:08 GMT -5
I did a quick camp description for a ravine, I can change it to canyon though. I just went with what I thought we were doing cause no one else was doing anything for the descriptions.
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Post by sharptail on Aug 7, 2024 15:42:16 GMT -5
Ravine:
Sunclan camp is located in a ravine in the middle of the desert. The dens are caves in the walls of the ravine, cat-sized tunnels lead to these dens. Each den holds about 8-9 cats and some dens are connected to other dens through tunnels. Each ranks has it's own den(s), all of the warriors sleep with other warriors, same with apprentices. The only cats that don't sleep with other cats are the leader and medicine cat. The leader sleeps in a much smaller den that is below an overhang that is used to call meetings from. The medicine cat has a much bigger den to make room for the herb storage and places for sick or injured cats to rest. The fresh-kill pile is surrounded by small rocks and is near the elders den. The exit or entrance to camp is a pile of rocks that go up and out of the ravine.
Canyon:
Sunclan camp is located in a canyon in the middle of the desert. The dens are caves in the walls of the canyon, cat-sized tunnels lead to these dens. Each den holds about 8-9 cats and some dens are connected to other dens through tunnels. Each ranks has it's own den(s), all of the warriors sleep with other warriors, same with apprentices. The only cats that don't sleep with other cats are the leader and medicine cat. The leader sleeps in a much smaller den that is below an overhang that is used to call meetings from. The medicine cat has a much bigger den to make room for the herb storage and places for sick or injured cats to rest. The fresh-kill pile is surrounded by small rocks and is near the elders den. The exit or entrance to camp is a pile of rocks that go up and out of the canyon.
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Post by ✦⚝Stormscar⚝✦ on Aug 7, 2024 15:45:44 GMT -5
lets wait for evildino to return before we do.
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Post by sharptail on Aug 7, 2024 15:50:01 GMT -5
Sounds good. Tag me if they come back and I don't show up. I'll be gone around 5:50-7:25 PDT, btw.
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Post by sharptail on Aug 8, 2024 12:31:11 GMT -5
ﮩ٨ـﮩﮩ٨ـevīأdīทⲟﮩ٨ـﮩﮩ٨ـ ✦⚝Stormscar⚝✦ I just want to let you know, I'll be gone from tomorrow afternoon, the next week, and then I will be back Sunday.
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Post by ﮩ٨ـﮩﮩ٨ـevīأdīทⲟﮩ٨ـﮩﮩ٨ـ on Aug 8, 2024 12:44:14 GMT -5
Ok good to know! I'm also pretty booked tomorrow so I doubt I will be on
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Post by ﮩ٨ـﮩﮩ٨ـevīأdīทⲟﮩ٨ـﮩﮩ٨ـ on Aug 8, 2024 12:47:21 GMT -5
Also I think I can picture the canyon more for the cats And it sounds more realistic
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Post by sharptail on Aug 8, 2024 12:51:01 GMT -5
So, canyon. Also, is the territory like, rocky and sandy with shrubs and stuff or like, sand, just tons of sand?
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Post by ﮩ٨ـﮩﮩ٨ـevīأdīทⲟﮩ٨ـﮩﮩ٨ـ on Aug 8, 2024 13:57:57 GMT -5
Sorry i was putting my brother down for a nap!
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Post by ﮩ٨ـﮩﮩ٨ـevīأdīทⲟﮩ٨ـﮩﮩ٨ـ on Aug 8, 2024 13:59:09 GMT -5
Rocky and sandy, and yes there is vegetation! Kinda like the Moab desert, look it up if you don't know what it is
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Post by sharptail on Aug 8, 2024 14:03:51 GMT -5
Cool, thanks for the clarification.
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Post by ✦⚝Stormscar⚝✦ on Aug 8, 2024 14:45:21 GMT -5
Camp -perhaps these cats live in a canyon-like area in said desert. Like SkyClan, these cats can jump high and far to be able to reach certain parts of the camp, each den houses 8-9 cats and these cats are from diffrent groups (Like the mentioned chasers (Very fast, the mentors often teach sand running technique as the desert's lose sand can be harder to run on), ambushers (often the pale colors of sand, as it'd be hard to hide in the sand without these colors), and unmentioned (Aka I thought of them myself) Water gatherers (Basically what the name says, these cats often have denser fur to be able to venture farther off into the desert to search for cacti to harvest for water), guards (Basically they just learn to fight) and lastly, crafters (These cats craft items (such as water holders) that benifit the whole clan)). Not including the smallest and biggest dens which are saved for the leader, and medicene cats with their herbs stocks and treatment bedding. Bedding used in this area isn't moss like most clans, as moss would be extreamly diffucult to find, instead they use the grass and ferns ocassionally found in deserts, due to this it is not uncommon for a cat's bedding to be stale, contain dead grass, or stink a bit.
Culture -Names: DawnClan, SunClan, ValleyClan, SandClan, BurnClan, Fire/FlameClan, a firey name or desert related one -Metor Showers are rather common, and seen as a sign of StarClan saying: You've pleased us, enjoy this sight and the peace you have. -Before an apprentice is turned into a warrior rank, they have to be trained by a guard in special Scorpion Fighting, if they are not training to be a gaurd. Each apprentice is also given basic medicene training and how to avoid the rare, but deadly, quicksand.
Territory Desert. all that needs to be said XD too lazy to do landmarks rn. -Scorpion Stones, a large pile of rocks that are rumored to have fallen when the earth itself shook, since then many scorpions have moved into these rocks, and therefor, many apprentices are advised to stay away untill one of the guards has taught them Scorpion Fighting. -Hollow Tree, This tree is home to many burrowing owls, and is a great spot to catch these smaller birds for prey, the Hollow Tree is said to be twoleg-made long ago, close to the time [Clan's prefix]star founded the land. It's brother tree is on the other side of the territory, this tree is called the Lightning Oak. -Shade Rock, similar to how the Scorpion Stones were created, this area came from a Rockfall, although not caused by the great Earthshake, this rockpile has a large flat rock on top, creating a large, sheltered area underneath, this is a prime spot to relax after a long, hot day.
StarClan contact Mooncliff - a high point in which is close to the stars, and is why its the best spot to contact them, on this spot there is an odd, large rock (Geode) that the moon shines on at night, cats sleep next to it to walk in StarClan, would work well with canyon territory
Other -my plot ideas: rescent loss of their last medicene cat, Fennecfur, none of the new kits show any intrest in herbs, although one has an exceptionally strong conection to dead cats, they chose this cat, and they train under deccessed medicene cats, although this new apprentice grows bitter, they never wanted to be a medicene cat, the apprentice soon leaves and finds a large group of twolegs that have many kittypets and loners around, the apprentice learns battle moves then starts to lead the band of rouges (mixs of kittypets and loners, mainly loners tho probally) that repeatedly attacks the clan. Second idea: The leader dies and a warrior takes over the clan rather then the recent deputy, which the new leader killed secretly, basically this cat wreaks havoc on the clan, tearing it apart from the inside. Third idea: A large group of rouges finds the clan and joins them, however after the deputy dies one of these rouges is chosen as the new one, dispit there being another cat that would suite being the deputy better, the leader does this to try and pull the clan together, but it ends up tearing them apart, recently they've lost all StarClan contact, theres a side of the clan that thinks it's due to the rouges joining, and one that thinks its because not everycat excepts these new clan members, after the leader demotes the fomer rouge from deputy, the clan pulls farther apart as now the second group is unhappy the clan leader is unsure of what to do as their clan falls apart right beneath their paws. Last and my favorite idea: Twolegs invade their home, capturing cats and leaving the remaining ones to search for a new home, they face many dangers along the journey and finnally find a new home, where one of the plot ideas above starts to take place, the reason this one is my favorite is because it can include both camps, as they leave the canyon and find the oasis, then the clan has to adapt to no more water gatherers, even though said water gatherers dont want to change jobs, eventually the clan falls into place with the water gatherers either leaving, or taking on a new role, this could esspccially work well with my third idea, as the clan has less cats, from the journey, canyon twolegs, and water gatherers leaving, the rouges could be seen as a sign from StarClan of 'This is you home, and here are more cats to help, even though we haven't contacted you yet' while the group that thinks that there is no sign, and the loss of StarClan contact is due to the rouges joining. -looks: these cats often have fur colors in shades of brown and orange, although white, grey, blue, and black isn't uncommon. All of these cats have dense fur that lessens the normal tempture that cats with normal length coats would feel, due to this, hairless cats are much more common then normal clans.
Now what plot(s) will we do?
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Post by ﮩ٨ـﮩﮩ٨ـevīأdīทⲟﮩ٨ـﮩﮩ٨ـ on Aug 8, 2024 14:51:48 GMT -5
So most of the plots you mentioned is like cats turning against each other- which is fine, but i think we should do something that goes with the fact that they live in the desert. Drought, rockslide, ect Or a fight with a band of cougars/pack of desert wolves that has a tragic/dramatic hurt or death scene would be good I love to write those But maybe we have like three chapters that starts off kinda calm, you know letting the reader latch on to somebody and become into it
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Post by ﮩ٨ـﮩﮩ٨ـevīأdīทⲟﮩ٨ـﮩﮩ٨ـ on Aug 12, 2024 9:56:42 GMT -5
Bump? idk if its too early but just in case.....
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Post by ﮩ٨ـﮩﮩ٨ـevīأdīทⲟﮩ٨ـﮩﮩ٨ـ on Aug 12, 2024 10:49:53 GMT -5
my charecter :3
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