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Post by ~5~Scarfire~5~ on Nov 18, 2016 10:47:29 GMT -5
I Am really looking forward to this fanfiction Aw, thanks! =) Right now, I'm trying to figure out exactly what style to write it in. I know I want the POVs to be from four cats in each clan and three kittypets and three rouges/loners. I just don't know when I write the chapters if I want a point of view from one cat in each area, or have all the points of view in one area, or simply just have one point of view for each chapter. Like either...
Chapter 1
~Yellowpaw of StoneClan~
blah blah blah
~Mosstail of LeafClan!
blah blah blah
ECT
OR
Chapter 1
(StoneClan)
~Yellowpaw~
blah blah blah
~Rosepaw~
blah blah blah
ECT
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Post by Deleted on Nov 18, 2016 16:07:07 GMT -5
I'm okay with that,it might mean Leafclan gets attacked hint hint Don't worry, they'll be plenty attacked. Mwhahaha!!! Is there anything in particular you wanted to happen for the prophecy? Meh maybe rouges take over leafclan? |
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Post by swiftstorm on Nov 18, 2016 18:53:03 GMT -5
I Am really looking forward to this fanfiction Aw, thanks! =) Right now, I'm trying to figure out exactly what style to write it in. I know I want the POVs to be from four cats in each clan and three kittypets and three rouges/loners. I just don't know when I write the chapters if I want a point of view from one cat in each area, or have all the points of view in one area, or simply just have one point of view for each chapter. Like either...
Chapter 1
~Yellowpaw of StoneClan~
blah blah blah
~Mosstail of LeafClan!
blah blah blah
ECT
OR
Chapter 1
(StoneClan)
~Yellowpaw~
blah blah blah
~Rosepaw~
blah blah blah
ECT
Oh I see, I like the idea on a point of view in each area each chapter but I can see how this could get confusing. Hmm I don't think only only one character point of view per chapter is a good idea if you want to get each clans point across, it could be hard to move the plot along, although it would be neat and less confusing. I also like the idea of all the characters in one areas point of view, it would leave us in anticipation for what the others think. What ever you end up doing I will still read it  . |
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Post by Deleted on Nov 18, 2016 19:03:48 GMT -5
Aw, thanks! =) Right now, I'm trying to figure out exactly what style to write it in. I know I want the POVs to be from four cats in each clan and three kittypets and three rouges/loners. I just don't know when I write the chapters if I want a point of view from one cat in each area, or have all the points of view in one area, or simply just have one point of view for each chapter. Like either...
Chapter 1
~Yellowpaw of StoneClan~
blah blah blah
~Mosstail of LeafClan!
blah blah blah
ECT
OR
Chapter 1
(StoneClan)
~Yellowpaw~
blah blah blah
~Rosepaw~
blah blah blah
ECT
Oh I see, I like the idea on a point of view in each area each chapter but I can see how this could get confusing. Hmm I don't think only only one character point of view per chapter is a good idea if you want to get each clans point across, it could be hard to move the plot along, although it would be neat and less confusing. I also like the idea of all the characters in one areas point of view, it would leave us in anticipation for what the others think. What ever you end up doing I will still read it . Can you do Sage or Oats point of view having a point of view when leafclan is being attacked would have a nice effect. |
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Post by ~5~Scarfire~5~ on Nov 19, 2016 15:49:51 GMT -5
Don't worry, they'll be plenty attacked. Mwhahaha!!! Is there anything in particular you wanted to happen for the prophecy? Meh maybe rouges take over leafclan? Rouge/loners will a have big part in this war and will add fuel to the fire. I know a lot of the physical conflict will be StoneClan attacking them and other stuff that would be spoilers. XD |
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Post by ~5~Scarfire~5~ on Nov 19, 2016 16:00:53 GMT -5
Aw, thanks! =) Right now, I'm trying to figure out exactly what style to write it in. I know I want the POVs to be from four cats in each clan and three kittypets and three rouges/loners. I just don't know when I write the chapters if I want a point of view from one cat in each area, or have all the points of view in one area, or simply just have one point of view for each chapter. Like either...
Chapter 1
~Yellowpaw of StoneClan~
blah blah blah
~Mosstail of LeafClan!
blah blah blah
ECT
OR
Chapter 1
(StoneClan)
~Yellowpaw~
blah blah blah
~Rosepaw~
blah blah blah
ECT
Oh I see, I like the idea on a point of view in each area each chapter but I can see how this could get confusing. Hmm I don't think only only one character point of view per chapter is a good idea if you want to get each clans point across, it could be hard to move the plot along, although it would be neat and less confusing. I also like the idea of all the characters in one areas point of view, it would leave us in anticipation for what the others think. What ever you end up doing I will still read it . I think I'll go with having one character per area POV per chapter. This might get confusing, but hopefully I'll make it clear when the POV is changing. Or possible also say where the character is that the moment. |
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Post by ~5~Scarfire~5~ on Nov 19, 2016 16:18:49 GMT -5
Oh I see, I like the idea on a point of view in each area each chapter but I can see how this could get confusing. Hmm I don't think only only one character point of view per chapter is a good idea if you want to get each clans point across, it could be hard to move the plot along, although it would be neat and less confusing. I also like the idea of all the characters in one areas point of view, it would leave us in anticipation for what the others think. What ever you end up doing I will still read it . Can you do Sage or Oats point of view having a point of view when leafclan is being attacked would have a nice effect. Of course, I'm still deciding all the main characters that we will hear from. I got most of the StoneClan's POV figured out. Half of LeafClans, and still needing to figure out ReedClan. Most of the kittypets I got figured out, and still figuring out the rouges/loners. |
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Post by ~5~Scarfire~5~ on Nov 19, 2016 19:54:38 GMT -5
Alright, so I got the first chapter up... sort of. I'm worried that writing from all the different areas might make each chapter very long. Unless I cut back in what I write for each POV. Should I make the sections smaller or only have two or three cat's POV per chapter?
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Post by swiftstorm on Nov 20, 2016 0:33:32 GMT -5
Alright, so I got the first chapter up... sort of. I'm worried that writing from all the different areas might make each chapter very long. Unless I cut back in what I write for each POV. Should I make the sections smaller or only have two or three cat's POV per chapter? It's really good!, I like your style. Maybe only do two cats per chapter, just don't over work yourself Ps. I love ashfangs sassiness |
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Post by Deleted on Nov 20, 2016 0:36:29 GMT -5
Alright, so I got the first chapter up... sort of. I'm worried that writing from all the different areas might make each chapter very long. Unless I cut back in what I write for each POV. Should I make the sections smaller or only have two or three cat's POV per chapter? Hmm no no i like it so far maybe when its a fight keep it locked on a certain pov-eg: a whole chapter in Leafclan for the battle And don't feel like you have to be focused on the same ocs all the time,still exited to see the first evil medicine cat in action. |
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Post by swiftstorm on Nov 20, 2016 2:46:11 GMT -5
Kittypet
Buttercup|| she cat|| large with long sandy coloured fur she cat with black tail tip.|| grumpy, does not get along with many others||
Andy|| Tom || small lean hairless cat. Often seen in a jumper as he easy gets sunburned.|| Playful and cheeky, a bit of a prankster||
Rouges
Chilli ||she cat|| small brown tabby with Amber eyes|| very hot headed and stubborn|| used to be a kittypet
Sky|| Tom|| large short furred white Tom, he as shredded ears.|| quite, thinks things out, does not trust others.
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Post by ~5~Scarfire~5~ on Nov 20, 2016 11:31:35 GMT -5
Alright, so I got the first chapter up... sort of. I'm worried that writing from all the different areas might make each chapter very long. Unless I cut back in what I write for each POV. Should I make the sections smaller or only have two or three cat's POV per chapter? It's really good!, I like your style. Maybe only do two cats per chapter, just don't over work yourself Ps. I love ashfangs sassiness Oh thanks! =) It was really fun writing her. lol She and Yellowpaw will continue to clash. XD |
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Post by ~5~Scarfire~5~ on Nov 20, 2016 11:32:29 GMT -5
Kittypet Buttercup|| she cat|| large with long sandy coloured fur she cat with black tail tip.|| grumpy, does not get along with many others|| Andy|| Tom || small lean hairless cat. Often seen in a jumper as he easy gets sunburned.|| Playful and cheeky, a bit of a prankster|| Rouges Chilli ||she cat|| small brown tabby with Amber eyes|| very hot headed and stubborn|| used to be a kittypet Sky|| Tom|| large short furred white Tom, he as shredded ears.|| quite, thinks things out, does not trust others. Thanks! =) |
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Post by ~5~Scarfire~5~ on Nov 20, 2016 11:39:24 GMT -5
Alright, so I got the first chapter up... sort of. I'm worried that writing from all the different areas might make each chapter very long. Unless I cut back in what I write for each POV. Should I make the sections smaller or only have two or three cat's POV per chapter? Hmm no no i like it so far maybe when its a fight keep it locked on a certain pov-eg: a whole chapter in Leafclan for the battle And don't feel like you have to be focused on the same ocs all the time,still exited to see the first evil medicine cat in action. Don't worry it wont be from the same oc everytime. There'll be four cats from each clan and three cats from each of the outsiders group telling the story. Their all connected in some form or at least will be connected. Silvershade will have a major role in this whole conflict. Mwhahaha!!! |
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Post by ~5~Scarfire~5~ on Nov 20, 2016 13:24:30 GMT -5
I added a bit of ReedClan's POV in the first chapter. Hopefully that didn't make it all too long. I'll start working on the second chapter which will include POV from the cats outside the clan. The first two chapters I'm basically introducing a few characters then we'll get into more of the meat of the story. =)
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Post by Deleted on Nov 21, 2016 2:56:25 GMT -5
I added a bit of ReedClan's POV in the first chapter. Hopefully that didn't make it all too long. I'll start working on the second chapter which will include POV from the cats outside the clan. The first two chapters I'm basically introducing a few characters then we'll get into more of the meat of the story. =) Is is too late too add more ocs if so you don't have too use them) Goldencloud|Reedclan Deputy |Golden she-cat| Hawktuft|Reedclan Medicine cat|brown tabby tom with one blue eye and one green eye| Cloudedpaw|Reedclan apprentice|a light grey tabby tom with distinctive black markings and icy blue eyes| Starlingpaw|Reedclan apprentice|dark ginger tabby with white paws| Skyflower|Reedclan warrior|white furred she-cat with blue eyes| Turtlepaw|Leafclan apprentice|Black and white tom with yellow eyes| Brimstone|Leafclan warrior|dark grey tom| Ashleaf|Reedclan warrior|light gray tom| Thunderpaw|Stoneclan apprentice|longhaired ginger and white tom Dewpaw|Leafclan apprentice|Russian blue tom| |
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Post by ~5~Scarfire~5~ on Nov 21, 2016 10:00:29 GMT -5
I added a bit of ReedClan's POV in the first chapter. Hopefully that didn't make it all too long. I'll start working on the second chapter which will include POV from the cats outside the clan. The first two chapters I'm basically introducing a few characters then we'll get into more of the meat of the story. =) Is is too late too add more ocs if so you don't have too use them) Goldencloud|Reedclan Deputy |Golden she-cat| Hawktuft|Reedclan Medicine cat|brown tabby tom with one blue eye and one green eye| Cloudedpaw|Reedclan apprentice|a light grey tabby tom with distinctive black markings and icy blue eyes| Starlingpaw|Reedclan apprentice|dark ginger tabby with white paws| Skyflower|Reedclan warrior|white furred she-cat with blue eyes| Turtlepaw|Leafclan apprentice|Black and white tom with yellow eyes| Brimstone|Leafclan warrior|dark grey tom| Ashleaf|Reedclan warrior|light gray tom| Thunderpaw|Stoneclan apprentice|longhaired ginger and white tom Dewpaw|Leafclan apprentice|Russian blue tom| I will gladly accept more characters! =) |
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Post by Deleted on Nov 21, 2016 15:57:35 GMT -5
Is is too late too add more ocs if so you don't have too use them) Goldencloud|Reedclan Deputy |Golden she-cat| Hawktuft|Reedclan Medicine cat|brown tabby tom with one blue eye and one green eye| Cloudedpaw|Reedclan apprentice|a light grey tabby tom with distinctive black markings and icy blue eyes| Starlingpaw|Reedclan apprentice|dark ginger tabby with white paws| Skyflower|Reedclan warrior|white furred she-cat with blue eyes| Turtlepaw|Leafclan apprentice|Black and white tom with yellow eyes| Brimstone|Leafclan warrior|dark grey tom| Ashleaf|Reedclan warrior|light gray tom| Thunderpaw|Stoneclan apprentice|longhaired ginger and white tom Dewpaw|Leafclan apprentice|Russian blue tom| I will gladly accept more characters! =) Thanks |
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Post by swiftstorm on Nov 21, 2016 19:34:21 GMT -5
Feel free to add me as a fan.
Leafclan
Hollyclaw|| she cat|| warrior|| long black fur and blue eyes, small but strong|| strong and a fierce fighter
Mudpaw|| Tom|| apprentice|| fluffy brown tabby Tom with green eyes|| playful a little childish
Silverflower|| she cat|| warrior|| silver tabby she cat with thick fur and Amber eyes|| good listener
Stoneclan
Icepelt|| Tom|| warrior|| light grey almost white tom, has short spiky fur|| serious and loyal
Lionpelt|| tom|| warrior|| large light ginger tabby with scruffy neck fur|| a bit of a goofball
Crowfoot|| tom|| warrior|| small black Tom with a white chest and green eyes|| quick and witty.
Brokentooth|| Tom|| elder|| old thin furred black Tom with blue eyes|| loves to tell tales
Willowheart|| she cat|| elder|| small long furred light grey with patches she cat|| happy to give advice to those who ask
Reedclan
Brackentail|| Tom || warrior|| slender brown Tom with a very bushy tail, has Amber eyes|| loyal and calm
Splashheart|| she cat|| warrior|| a large fluffy ginger and black tortoiseshell with Amber eyes|| calm and motherly
Tornpelt|| she cat|| elder|| grey tabby she cat with scar littered pelt|| she tends to over exaggerate , good humoured .
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Post by ~5~Scarfire~5~ on Nov 22, 2016 12:38:04 GMT -5
Feel free to add me as a fan. Leafclan Hollyclaw|| she cat|| warrior|| long black fur and blue eyes, small but strong|| strong and a fierce fighter Mudpaw|| Tom|| apprentice|| fluffy brown tabby Tom with green eyes|| playful a little childish Silverflower|| she cat|| warrior|| silver tabby she cat with thick fur and Amber eyes|| good listener Stoneclan Icepelt|| Tom|| warrior|| light grey almost white tom, has short spiky fur|| serious and loyal Lionpelt|| tom|| warrior|| large light ginger tabby with scruffy neck fur|| a bit of a goofball Crowfoot|| tom|| warrior|| small black Tom with a white chest and green eyes|| quick and witty. Brokentooth|| Tom|| elder|| old thin furred black Tom with blue eyes|| loves to tell tales Willowheart|| she cat|| elder|| small long furred light grey with patches she cat|| happy to give advice to those who ask Reedclan Brackentail|| Tom || warrior|| slender brown Tom with a very bushy tail, has Amber eyes|| loyal and calm Splashheart|| she cat|| warrior|| a large fluffy ginger and black tortoiseshell with Amber eyes|| calm and motherly Tornpelt|| she cat|| elder|| grey tabby she cat with scar littered pelt|| she tends to over exaggerate , good humoured . Thanks! =) I'll add you |
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Post by ~5~Scarfire~5~ on Nov 22, 2016 12:39:19 GMT -5
I sadly wont be able to work on the second chapter until finals week is over. I have many school projects that I need to give attention to. So expect the second chapter coming in December.
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Post by swiftstorm on Nov 22, 2016 22:36:14 GMT -5
I sadly wont be able to work on the second chapter until finals week is over. I have many school projects that I need to give attention to. So expect the second chapter coming in December. Good luck with your school work, hope you ace it |
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Post by ~5~Scarfire~5~ on Nov 23, 2016 10:23:23 GMT -5
I sadly wont be able to work on the second chapter until finals week is over. I have many school projects that I need to give attention to. So expect the second chapter coming in December. Good luck with your school work, hope you ace it Oh thanks! =) |
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Post by ~5~Scarfire~5~ on Dec 6, 2016 12:39:06 GMT -5
Finals are done! =) I'll be working on the second chapter this week.
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Post by ~5~Scarfire~5~ on Dec 7, 2016 18:39:22 GMT -5
Alright, I think I have it mostly figured out of who is our main characters and who we are hearing from. I am just wondering if I should post on the front post something like "Meet the Main Characters" and briefly explain who they are, since we'll be jumping from their POVs so often it might help the confusion. It might look something like this...
*this may give spoilers and just cause this characters are telling the story, doesn't mean they wont die within
~Meet the Main Characters~
StoneClan
Yellowpaw~ A six moon old arrogant grump who doesn't listen to anyone expect his hero, Scrotchfrost. Scorchfrost is not only his mentor and a father-like figure to him, but the StoneClan deputy on top of that. When the war starts will Yellowpaw figure out what a hero is?
Rosepaw~ A quiet and timid medicine cat apprentice who doesn't want to cause any trouble. However her mentor, Silvershade the medicine cat of StoneClan, gives false prophecies or the incorrect herbs to cats she doesn't like. Rosepaw knows that Silvershade had something to do with the banishment of the former deputy, Sparrowbite. Will Rosepaw gain the confidence to do what's right?
Flarestar~ Highly ambitious leader of StoneClan. All she ever wanted was to lead and she is good at it. Life if going good, she mate is the deputy and her clan is well. Till she finds out that's pregnant, and Silvershade tells she either has to decide whether to be mom or a leader.
Palestreak~ LeafCLan born, he is a loyal and brave warrior who wants the best for StoneClan. He joined StoneClan when he was a young apprentice after a betrayal and harbors bitter feelings towards LeafClan ever since. When he clan leader puts him on a mission to spy on LeafClan with Crowfoot, will Palestreak succeed or will he be discovered?
LeafClan
Mosstail~ This quiet yet cheerful she-cat's dream is to one day be a mother. She and her mate Waspstar have been trying for kits, but after three miscarriages, they have almost lost hope. When finally an opportunity for them to be parents comes around they have to make a choice, whether to be parents or for their clan to fight for their lives. What will she chose?
Sagepaw~ A reckless and cocky apprentice who comes from a big family. Always feels like he has to do something extra to get noticed especially if it's dangerous. When war hits and his family is endanger, will Sagepaw learn what it means to be a hero?
Beestripe~ A life of danger and being a warrior is over for this elder, or at least she thought. Her one daughter left the clan to become a kittypet and has no immediate kin within the clan. As she is enjoying the peaceful retired life, she meets her grandson at a gathering. Will she be the kind of grandma her grandson needs to be or will the war drive them further apart?
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ReedClan
Antblaze~ The clumsiest warrior in all the clans. This tiny tom can't seem to do anything right. He's too easily flustered and impatient for hunting, and too easily spooked and unsure for fighting. Some time back, he thought it would be best for the clan if he left and became a kittypet. But it wasn't long till his heart brought him back to ReedClan. When his former mate, a kittypet, dumps their son on to Antblaze, he finds himself trying to raise a son with a lot of angst. Will he be able to be a father, or will he run away from this too.
Oatpaw~ Oatpaw holds a lot of angst. He was raised as a kittypet and when it looked like his twoleg folks were wanting to keep him, his mother forced him out and sent him to live with his father in ReedClan. Not only is he half kittypet, his mother was also former LeafClan and his father is a doofus. The other apprentices make fun of him and bullied, especially by Fogpaw the son of Ripplestar. Will this apprentice defend his home that he hates when war hits?
Brakentail~ As a young kit he wanted to be a medicine cat. Strong faith in StarClan and wants to heal not to cause harm. Before he could express his desires, he misgivious littermate went off on adventure outside of camp as a kit and got hurt badly. After the ReedClan medicine cat saved his brother's life. His brother loudly pronounced that he wanted to be a medicine cat. Not wanting to cause conflict with his brother Brackentail kept silence as his brother became the medicine cat apprentice. Will Brakentail become a healer or a warrior in this fight?
Goldencloud~ Moons of peace have dull her sense of authority. (to be continued)
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Post by swiftstorm on Dec 9, 2016 6:12:50 GMT -5
Alright, I think I have it mostly figured out of who is our main characters and who we are hearing from. I am just wondering if I should post on the front post something like "Meet the Main Characters" and briefly explain who they are, since we'll be jumping from their POVs so often it might help the confusion. It might look something like this...
*this may give spoilers and just cause this characters are telling the story, doesn't mean they wont die within
~Meet the Main Characters~
StoneClan
Yellowpaw~ A six moon old arrogant grump who doesn't listen to anyone expect his hero, Scrotchfrost. Scorchfrost is not only his mentor and a father-like figure to him, but the StoneClan deputy on top of that. When the war starts will Yellowpaw figure out what a hero is?
Rosepaw~ A quiet and timid medicine cat apprentice who doesn't want to cause any trouble. However her mentor, Silvershade the medicine cat of StoneClan, gives false prophecies or the incorrect herbs to cats she doesn't like. Rosepaw knows that Silvershade had something to do with the banishment of the former deputy, Sparrowbite. Will Rosepaw gain the confidence to do what's right?
Flarestar~ Highly ambitious leader of StoneClan. All she ever wanted was to lead and she is good at it. Life if going good, she mate is the deputy and her clan is well. Till she finds out that's pregnant, and Silvershade tells she either has to decide whether to be mom or a leader.
Palestreak~ LeafCLan born, he is a loyal and brave warrior who wants the best for StoneClan. He joined StoneClan when he was a young apprentice after a betrayal and harbors bitter feelings towards LeafClan ever since. When he clan leader puts him on a mission to spy on LeafClan with Crowfoot, will Palestreak succeed or will he be discovered?
LeafClan
Mosstail~ This quiet yet cheerful she-cat's dream is to one day be a mother. She and her mate Waspstar have been trying for kits, but after three miscarriages, they have almost lost hope. When finally an opportunity for them to be parents comes around they have to make a choice, whether to be parents or for their clan to fight for their lives. What will she chose?
Sagepaw~ A reckless and cocky apprentice who comes from a big family. Always feels like he has to do something extra to get noticed especially if it's dangerous. When war hits and his family is endanger, will Sagepaw learn what it means to be a hero?
Beestripe~ A life of danger and being a warrior is over for this elder, or at least she thought. Her one daughter left the clan to become a kittypet and has no immediate kin within the clan. As she is enjoying the peaceful retired life, she meets her grandson at a gathering. Will she be the kind of grandma her grandson needs to be or will the war drive them further apart?
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ReedClan
Antblaze~ The clumsiest warrior in all the clans. This tiny tom can't seem to do anything right. He's too easily flustered and impatient for hunting, and too easily spooked and unsure for fighting. Some time back, he thought it would be best for the clan if he left and became a kittypet. But it wasn't long till his heart brought him back to ReedClan. When his former mate, a kittypet, dumps their son on to Antblaze, he finds himself trying to raise a son with a lot of angst. Will he be able to be a father, or will he run away from this too.
Oatpaw~ (will finish later)
That is a awesome idea, it will prevent confusion and give new readers and idea of what to expect. I say put on the front page! |
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Post by ~5~Scarfire~5~ on Dec 9, 2016 11:13:39 GMT -5
Alright, I think I have it mostly figured out of who is our main characters and who we are hearing from. I am just wondering if I should post on the front post something like "Meet the Main Characters" and briefly explain who they are, since we'll be jumping from their POVs so often it might help the confusion. It might look something like this...
*this may give spoilers and just cause this characters are telling the story, doesn't mean they wont die within
~Meet the Main Characters~
StoneClan
Yellowpaw~ A six moon old arrogant grump who doesn't listen to anyone expect his hero, Scrotchfrost. Scorchfrost is not only his mentor and a father-like figure to him, but the StoneClan deputy on top of that. When the war starts will Yellowpaw figure out what a hero is?
Rosepaw~ A quiet and timid medicine cat apprentice who doesn't want to cause any trouble. However her mentor, Silvershade the medicine cat of StoneClan, gives false prophecies or the incorrect herbs to cats she doesn't like. Rosepaw knows that Silvershade had something to do with the banishment of the former deputy, Sparrowbite. Will Rosepaw gain the confidence to do what's right?
Flarestar~ Highly ambitious leader of StoneClan. All she ever wanted was to lead and she is good at it. Life if going good, she mate is the deputy and her clan is well. Till she finds out that's pregnant, and Silvershade tells she either has to decide whether to be mom or a leader.
Palestreak~ LeafCLan born, he is a loyal and brave warrior who wants the best for StoneClan. He joined StoneClan when he was a young apprentice after a betrayal and harbors bitter feelings towards LeafClan ever since. When he clan leader puts him on a mission to spy on LeafClan with Crowfoot, will Palestreak succeed or will he be discovered?
LeafClan
Mosstail~ This quiet yet cheerful she-cat's dream is to one day be a mother. She and her mate Waspstar have been trying for kits, but after three miscarriages, they have almost lost hope. When finally an opportunity for them to be parents comes around they have to make a choice, whether to be parents or for their clan to fight for their lives. What will she chose?
Sagepaw~ A reckless and cocky apprentice who comes from a big family. Always feels like he has to do something extra to get noticed especially if it's dangerous. When war hits and his family is endanger, will Sagepaw learn what it means to be a hero?
Beestripe~ A life of danger and being a warrior is over for this elder, or at least she thought. Her one daughter left the clan to become a kittypet and has no immediate kin within the clan. As she is enjoying the peaceful retired life, she meets her grandson at a gathering. Will she be the kind of grandma her grandson needs to be or will the war drive them further apart?
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ReedClan
Antblaze~ The clumsiest warrior in all the clans. This tiny tom can't seem to do anything right. He's too easily flustered and impatient for hunting, and too easily spooked and unsure for fighting. Some time back, he thought it would be best for the clan if he left and became a kittypet. But it wasn't long till his heart brought him back to ReedClan. When his former mate, a kittypet, dumps their son on to Antblaze, he finds himself trying to raise a son with a lot of angst. Will he be able to be a father, or will he run away from this too.
Oatpaw~ (will finish later)
That is a awesome idea, it will prevent confusion and give new readers and idea of what to expect. I say put on the front page! Thanks, I was just worried about giving too much away. I'll finish it and put it on the front post. =) |
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Post by swiftstorm on Dec 14, 2016 20:39:48 GMT -5
Yay! You started chapter two.
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Post by ~5~Scarfire~5~ on Dec 24, 2016 19:11:12 GMT -5
Yay! You started chapter two. is the keyword. XD I'll continue it soon. I didn't know how busy I'd been during the holidays. |
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Post by Owlmoon on Jan 25, 2017 15:48:48 GMT -5
Name suggestions:
Mosscloud
Brackenfuzz
Owltalon
Lionmane
Ivyflower
Jayflight
Moonshine
Grassbreeze
Lilacsong
Mintstreak
Sageleaf
Jokes:
Sunshine
Nutcrack
Use as little or many as them as you want.
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