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Post by Novi on Jan 8, 2024 21:52:29 GMT -5
Plumpaw has been added. let's keep the godmodding to a minimum, Night. my original question got answered, but welcome to the world of RPing looks like Brownie gave you a good rule of thumb to prevent it. another suggestion for you: slow down and isolate interactions. give others a chance to respond. for instance, Stormberry first engaged Snakehowl. i'm sure you're welcome to RP with Nettle, so give them the chance to answer, yea? it'll help keep your godmodding down. and when i say slowdown: you poofed Stormberry from bumping into Snakehowl and immediately had her coming back to the camp with prey? i highly doubt enough time has passed for this to occur and you've excluded the whole hunting part, which could've offered opportunity to interact with other cats. and then Stormberry is already asking to join another hunting patrol? when you re-read it, it's all just very jarring. and it doesn't give Nettle anything to respond to. what would Snake say? "hi.. bye"? if it's not too much trouble: i'd like to see your reword Stormberry's starter and they can either interact with Snake or join Fog's patrol i like to think of RPing as this: we're building a story together. not everything is going to go the way you hoped (ooc planning aside ofc) because you don't control all the characters, but that's part of what makes it fun~ i'll get my own responses up soon!)
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Post by Novi on Jan 8, 2024 22:56:03 GMT -5
Cedarpelt had been waiting for the sun to rise, he had been awake for what felt like hours now. The tom pulled himself from his nest, his paws practically itching to get to work. He made no attempt to be quiet as he left the den, he really could care less if the other cats slept in as they should be getting up now too. He felt his stomach growl and he cursed himself for needing to get something in his stomach before the day began. He hoped that the hunters would have a good day today and the prey he chose would be replenished. He eyed the fresh-kill pile before finally deciding on a large mouse that had caught his eye. He settled in and began eating, doing his best not to inhale the food as he was eager to get to work. Being named the Head Guard was no surprise to him and he was grateful he had the authority to tell the lazy cats to get to work without it just being a snide comment. I'm just going to repost this I still need to post Dapplepool and Claystorm but I'll work on them later) Finished with his task, Lionsoul took a moment to shake out the dirt that had found its way into his pelt. There was no point in cleaning it this early, but he also didn't want to drag it everywhere he went. It seemed the rest of the clan was waking up and getting itself ready for the day. With a flick of his ear, he left them to it. The golden tom had been surprised to find the position of leader was a rather.. paws off kind of position. His duty as Spirit Guide, at least on the day to day, was to assist cats if they requested guidance. Of course, he could take it upon himself to reach out first. But, as he sifted through Soulmoon's memories, that wasn't always the best course of action. Spotting Cedarpelt eating off to the side, Lionsoul padded over to join him. "Sleep well?" He purred. Of course, he knew the Head Guard did not sleep very long. It was as if the tom couldn't bare to remain still long enough to get a full night's rest.
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Post by blizzardsfang on Jan 9, 2024 10:54:29 GMT -5
Cedarpelt eyes flickered to their Spirit Guide and he bowed his head to greet him. "I wish I could skip sleeping all together, it's just a waste of my time." The tom grumbled as he bit into his mouse. Of course, sleeping wasn't a waste of time as it was what rejuvenated him but Cedarpelt hated how long it took and how some cats enjoyed it far too much. His eyes moved over the cats of the clan with a slightly annoyed look "even when they're doing things it looks like a bunch of kits playing. They have no sense of urgency" He snorted and chewed rather aggressively. Although Cedarpelt was a sharp tongued cat with an inability to sit still he was a good guard and took his position seriously. He would die for the cats before him, that didn't mean he had to like them though.
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Post by Brownie on Jan 9, 2024 14:57:43 GMT -5
[[ OOC : ]]
Fogsnarl -x-----------x-
Fogsnarl waited for Galestep to retrieve his apprentice, Beetlepaw, and return. As she was waiting for Crowshade's response, Stormberry came up to the growing group. "What's going on?" the young grey hunter asked.
"Hunting patrol to the wetlands," Fogsnarl rumbled. She hesitated for a heartbeat. Stormberry was still an apprentice in her eyes, and the wetlands were far. She didn't want to be stuck kit-sitting, especially because they already had Beetlepaw along. But they did need another cat and Crowshade hadn't responded yet... "We do need one more," she finally said, conceding her hesitations.
Five cats would be a lot, but she did hope Crowshade would join the group. Fogsnarl would feel much more comfortable with another solid hunter on the trip.
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Post by 🅃🄴🄼🄿🄾 on Jan 10, 2024 16:52:36 GMT -5
Crowshade's ear twitched at the sound of Fogsnarl's voice. It barely registered in her mind that she'd been talking to her. She suddenly jumped once she realized the command was made to her. She quickly rose to her paws and scurried over to the group of cats. "Sorry," she replied, "I didn't quite understand what you'd said until now. Mornings." Crowshade gave herself a minute before replying again, "Sure, I'll come." [ Brownie, Junospower, Hawkeyes258] -------------------- With a sigh, Boulderpaw padded out of the apprentice den. "Do we really have to train before dawn?" He wasn't a huge morning cat, and even more so when he was awoken before dawn. "What're we training today," he asked in a tired tone. A huge yawn escaped his mouth once he was done talking. [ lazzylake] (Apologies for the later responses.)
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Post by aquatail on Jan 10, 2024 18:13:55 GMT -5
Snowpaw yawned as she woke. Getting out of her nest she stretched. Even though it was fairly early the camp was bustling with cats. She went outside the apprentice den and saw her mentor. "Hi " she said "are we training today?"
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Post by lazzylake on Jan 11, 2024 0:01:56 GMT -5
Saffronblaze
Saffronblaze's only response to Boulderpaw's yawn was a roll of her eyes. "Well, if you wanna be the best of the best, there's no better time to get moving than before the sun shines through. That's how you know you're starting off on the right paw." She glanced over her shoulder at her apprentice's tired appearance and snorted. From her view of camp, Saffronblaze noticed Cedarpelt chatting intently with... Lionsoul. The Spirit Guide. How lucky for him. Two cats of the highest authority in GhostClan lazily yapping instead of working their duties. Typical. "I'll give ya something to be urgent about." The calico remarked snidely, overhearing Cedarpelt's gruff comment, and reeling with the fact she caught him while he was eating. "Boulderpaw's up and ready to go. No clue where Brackenpaw could've gone, though. Suppose she slipped through the cracks and disappeared." She answered with a shrug before changing the subject. "Was wondering if you have anything planned with us three for now. If not, I doubt it'll be hard for me to think of something." She knew the fact the head guard did not like his authority questioned, but Cedarpelt didn't scare Saffronblaze one bit. She squared her shoulders a tad defensively as she awaited the mighty guard's resonse. ( 🅃🄴🄼🄿🄾 blizzardsfang Novi hope y'all don't mind me dropping Saffronblaze here!)
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Post by Hawkeyes258 on Jan 11, 2024 0:15:29 GMT -5
Beetlepaw waits patiently for the patrol to get together. He hoped he could impress most of the older cats. He wasn't the best hunter but he was getting better! Maybe I can catch something big! All he had to do was stay focused!
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Post by Junospower on Jan 11, 2024 17:42:09 GMT -5
Galestep - In Camp - Hawkeyes258 ; Brownie ; 🅃🄴🄼🄿🄾Galestep lead his apprentice back to the gathering patrol. He tipped his head in greeting when he noticed that Crowshade had joined the patrol. “Well now, it seems like everyone’s here and ready. Shall we get going?” he mewed with a friendly chirp in his voice. He was always eager to go hunting and he can’t quite recall if he’s ever taken Beetlepaw to the wetlands yet or not. Either way, it was still a learning opportunity.
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Post by Novi on Jan 12, 2024 0:17:25 GMT -5
Lionsoul shook his head. He'd tried to impart the importance of rest to his apprentice, but to no avail. "Not everything has to be urgent." His tail swept across the ground to curl around his paws neatly. "Hasty paws makes for silly mistakes." It was a saying passed on to him from his own mentor. Unfortunately, most of his clanmates seemed to be on opposite ends of the extreme: either unmotivated or far too motivated.
Momentarily, his attention drifted to the group of cats gathering. It was an interesting group. He was pleased Fogsnarl had offered a position to Stormberry. The newest hunter could learn a great deal on a long hunt. With Crowshade off, surely Twistpaw would follow. Same went for Galestep and Beetlepaw. It was a good hunting group, especially for getting a good headstart on leaf-fall. Still, numbering 2 apprentices and a new hunter, Lionsoul was going to suggest Cedarpelt go with them for guard coverage when Saffronblaze trotted over.
The challenge in the calico's voice was evident. Inwardly, he sighed. As Head Guard, normally he had let his guards sort out their egos amongst themselves. So long as such blows didn't cause unnecessary damage should the clan come to need their protection. But his duties as Spirit Guide urged him to redirect the conversation. Whiskers twitched and he wondered, once again, if these thoughts were his own or those of cats come before him. For now, he would wait.
(not at all lazzy :3)
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Post by Brownie on Jan 12, 2024 1:09:35 GMT -5
[[ OOC : ]]
Fogsnarl -x-----------x-
Fogsnarl nodded, glanced around at the growing group of cats. She knew they'd need quite a few to brave such a long trip, but she really hadn't wanted it to be a huge... thing. Fogsnarl rarely did well in large groups. Too loud, too much. But she supposed that's what she deserved, asking to go to the wetlands.
At least Crowshade agreed to come, Fogsnarl thought with a dip of her head towards the black molly. "Let's," she replied to Galestep.
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Post by [~Ghost Writer~] on Jan 12, 2024 10:14:58 GMT -5
((Fallenstone | 35 moons | guard | Ghost Writer
Fallenstone is a mostly light grey tom with white speckles by his blight blue eyes. He has tuffs of cheek fur and a feathery tail, but the rest of his pelt is smooth. He's rather small for a guard, but makes up for it with his unusually large paws for his frame. His chest fur and paws are white as well and he has two darker grey spots that make him look like he has eyebrows that make him always look angry and irritated.
He isn't the kind of cat that enjoys small talk and can be rather blunt. Others might see it as him being rude, but to him, he feels being honest is him showing others that he cares. Otherwise, he'd say nothing back to them. He also enjoys leaning about herbs and other useful ways to help his clan. Maybe he'll have a soft spot if the right cat comes along))
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Post by Novi on Jan 12, 2024 19:25:45 GMT -5
added! Fallenstone will mentor Brackenpaw welcome~ )
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Post by [~Ghost Writer~] on Jan 14, 2024 15:12:45 GMT -5
added! Fallenstone will mentor Brackenpaw welcome~ ) Awesome! I think Brackenpaw is the perfect apprentice for Fallen!)) What cats are open right now?))
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Post by 🅃🄴🄼🄿🄾 on Jan 14, 2024 16:32:56 GMT -5
( [~Ghost Writer~] I have Gorseleap and Larchfang open if you'd like to interact with either of them!)
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Post by [~Ghost Writer~] on Jan 15, 2024 17:13:55 GMT -5
-Fallenstone- {@ tempo}
Fallenstone's blue eyes watched as everyone hustled to their duties. He let out a satisfied huff of air, thankful for the seemingly peaceful day. His ears perked up as he watched Brackenpaw scurry into the apprentice den, looking a little nervous. She always seemed to have a hard time talking to others and kept to herself. She reminded the guard of himself when he was younger, very hard working but socially not very experienced. It was something he had to work on to this very day. If he was to be a good mentor for her, he knew he'd have to push himself to be more extraverted as well.
He snapped out of his thoughts when he spotted a ginger and white tabby pass by. He shook his light grey pelt and padded over to Larchfang. What better time to practice talking to others than now?
"Larchfang." Fallenstone greeted. "I was about to head to the freshkill pile to get a bite to eat before starting my duties. But I don't think I have the appetite to finish a whole rabbit. Mind helping me?" He flicked his fluffy tail to encourage him to join. "It would be nice to hear what adventures you've been up to lately too."
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Post by amberflight on Jan 15, 2024 18:30:11 GMT -5
AuroraCloud| 24 moons | Guard | amberflight a beautiful cat with light cream fur with faded spots on the snout, legs and tail. short fur and elongated tail. She's granddaughter from a cat from twolegs that's why she looks a lot as a siamese. She's shy but when gain confidence she talks a lot and is very kind.
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Post by lazzylake on Jan 16, 2024 23:03:14 GMT -5
(Bump! Noticed this got pushed back a bit with all the new fanclans being made. Heck, I'm starting to make lore for my own soon. Just waiting for a couple more responses before I type something for Saffronblaze up again)
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Post by Novi on Jan 18, 2024 0:13:24 GMT -5
Sorry for the delay. Weekdays are long for me. Auroracloud will be added when I can find the chance to do so might- not be until the weekend
And thanks for the bump :3 it's nice to see the forums poppin
I've got Tigerpaw open~ )
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Post by Novi on Jan 19, 2024 1:04:42 GMT -5
updated the front page for aurora. slightly modified Tigerpaw starter below :3 )
Tigerpaw was awake. Great stars, how could she not be? It was like others cats had no cares as to who worked the evening patrols. Getting up and making so much noise she could hear it in her dreams. With effort, she curled up into a tighter ball, tail resting over her nose. But it was no use. Now, she was awake. Argh. Getting up, she shook out her pelt before picking her way around her denmates. At least she tried to let them sleep.
Spotting the Head Guard chatting with the leader and another guard, she kept to the edges of the cavern before slipping out. No thank you. Glancing around, she wondered if Mistcloud was awake yet...
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Post by Hawkeyes258 on Jan 23, 2024 21:53:14 GMT -5
(Bump)
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Post by 🅃🄴🄼🄿🄾 on Jan 30, 2024 17:37:35 GMT -5
Larchfang's ears perked as Fallenstone spoke to him. He hadn't really realized that he hadn't eaten yet until Fallenstone mentioned sharing a rabbit. "Sure," he replied with a smile, "I don't mind sharing a rabbit. I haven't even eaten yet, so I'm starving!" Larchfang thought for a moment. He hadn't actually been on any exciting adventures lately. Mostly just patrols. "I can't promise that I'll have any good stories too tell." [ [~Ghost Writer~]] (Apologies for the VERY late reply. My motivation went on vacation.)
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Post by Novi on Feb 20, 2024 19:47:58 GMT -5
i'll give it one final bump before i consider the clan a lost cause either way, i thank everyone for their interest! <3 and hope to see y'all in other RPs
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Post by Brownie on Feb 20, 2024 20:03:48 GMT -5
I'm down to unfreeze either character and do something~ I do like the concept
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Post by Brownie on Feb 20, 2024 20:05:29 GMT -5
[[ OOC : Throwing up a few starters uwu
Silverpaw camp - open
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There were always more chores to do in GhostClan's camp. Yesterday, he'd spent nearly all day untangling dried plant matter from the camp's main clearing, detritus from a flood that hadn't even reached the lower dens. Today, he planned to fix the camp's entrance as he hadn't looked over the weave in over a moon and it was starting to become ragged with the many pelts brushing against the stems.
Silverpaw groomed his fur in a patch of sunshine, preparing himself for the busy day ahead of him. His stomach growled lightly but he pointedly ignored the fresh-kill pile--he'd eat at sunhigh, after the cats that were leaving on patrol got their share. He and hunger were good friends.
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Being a theater kid
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Post by 🅃🄴🄼🄿🄾 on Feb 23, 2024 18:46:17 GMT -5
Larchfang's ears perked as Fallenstone spoke to him. He hadn't really realized that he hadn't eaten yet until Fallenstone mentioned sharing a rabbit. "Sure," he replied with a smile, "I don't mind sharing a rabbit. I haven't even eaten yet, so I'm starving!" Larchfang thought for a moment. He hadn't actually been on any exciting adventures lately. Mostly just patrols. "I can't promise that I'll have any good stories too tell." (Reposting my reply. I have Gorseleap open if anybody is interested. I'm not sure if Boulderpaw is open or not at the moment.)
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Post by Novi on Feb 25, 2024 14:22:46 GMT -5
[[ OOC : Throwing up a few starters uwu
Silverpaw camp - open
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There were always more chores to do in GhostClan's camp. Yesterday, he'd spent nearly all day untangling dried plant matter from the camp's main clearing, detritus from a flood that hadn't even reached the lower dens. Today, he planned to fix the camp's entrance as he hadn't looked over the weave in over a moon and it was starting to become ragged with the many pelts brushing against the stems.
Silverpaw groomed his fur in a patch of sunshine, preparing himself for the busy day ahead of him. His stomach growled lightly but he pointedly ignored the fresh-kill pile--he'd eat at sunhigh, after the cats that were leaving on patrol got their share. He and hunger were good friends.
-x-----------x- Tigerpaw was awake. Great stars, how could she not be? It was like others cats had no cares as to who worked the evening patrols. Getting up and making so much noise she could hear it in her dreams. With effort, she curled up into a tighter ball, tail resting over her nose. But it was no use. Now, she was awake. Argh. Getting up, she shook out her pelt before picking her way around her denmates. At least she tried to let them sleep. Spotting the Head Guard chatting with the leader and another guard, she kept to the edges of the cavern before slipping out. No thank you. Glancing around, she wondered what she could do before her mentor rose. If she was going to be up and about, she might as well do something with her time. Spotting Silverpaw, she bounded over. "G'morning. Need any help to start?" The perma-paw was nice enough. Far easier to get along with than the Head Guard.
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