Post by Katanaheart on Jan 2, 2023 0:05:02 GMT -5
Well, the first one received some attention. So I decided to post one with Sky. I’ve already read the first six chapters prior to posting this.
Chapter 1
Gullswoop is trying to be nice and seems to genuinely care for you, Sunbeam. (Everyone else, a bit much. But Gullswoop was trying to help much sooner!)
Kinda wish Sunbeam had went to see the kits, I
Would like to see Cinnamontail and her new litter.
And Rowankit’s sick. (I’m already aware that he dies, which sucks. I love the Rowan prefix and the narrative keeps messing with them specifically.)
Chapter 2
I don’t remember Lilyheart comparing you to Firestar.
Also you messed up your first attempt and that was entirely on you, it was not bad luck. You chose to go after more “challenging prey,” and chose to use “flashy moves.”
Birchfall, don’t be rude.
Ugh, Hollytuft should have paired up with Nightheart. You are both Firestar’s kin, for crying out loud.
Plumstone as one of mean girl vibe cats, of course doesn’t want to deal with him.
Birchfall: Had plan.
Plumstone: How obvious was it that I chose you on a whim?
Finleap: *Still deciding hunting spot.*
Lionblaze is an older warrior and leader of his patrol. He’s being pragmatic. (He also probably doesn’t want you up in a tree since his mate, Cinderheart broke her leg saving Mousewhisker as apprentices…)
Yes, he’s worried about you.
And it’s a good thing he sent you back so soon, if infection is setting in near the edges.
Yes, yes, you have turned your back on them, with your constant whining and snapping in River, when your sister was just trying to help you.
(Also worried for Brightheart of course, but I think the greencough only kills Rowankit so I’m not that worried. She’ll be fine.)
And that is incorrect Sparkpelt but okay. And she is the spitting image of a female Firestar, so maybe that’s why her fur is in a twist over this event?
Technically you kept nothing, Bramblestar gave you both of your new names.
(Once again wishing Sparkpelt had been killed by the dogs. So much missed drama in TBC and less headache now. Also side note, I wonder Sparkpelt named him Flameheart after the name she never got, Sparkfire. But naming him Firekit would have been too on the nose.)
Myrtlebloom says as she’s also related to Firestar.
You are both kin. Both adopted and literally blood kin.
You are both great grand kids of Firestar. (Myrtle being a great great great.)
I do kinda see Myrtlebloom’s overall point of Nightheart being seen as spoiled. (No one has ever complained about their prefix before. So this is very new territory and Nightheart gets his way with the name change because Bramblestar is his grandfather.)
I can see him even getting away with the name change under Firestar’s reign as well, ironically enough. (If he had injured his leg prior to being made a warrior, I can see Pinestar, who is also his kin, naming him Flameleg. Iirc, he is the one who named White-eye, White-eye.)
Chapter 3
Unfortunately a lot weighs on Frostpaw’s head. (While I would prefer they go grab Kestrelflight for help, they’re not going to do that…)
And if RiverClan is already falling apart, yeah that need a leader.
At this point, Mothwing and Frostpaw need to pull a Redscar and just choose someone.
(Also don’t trust Splashtail really. Also I’d prefer the cousins not get together since I think FrostXSplash is a popular ship.)
Kinda wish Frostpaw’s chaprer wasn’t so short compared to the others, or at least it feels shorter?
Chapter 4
It would have made plenty of difference, Tigerstar would have a bruised ego and launched a war on SkyClan.
And Snaketooth is being misgendered. I assume these lines were from Scorchfur, this sounds more like him than Snaketooth.
Yeah, a lot of my complaints are just Snaketooth being misgendered here or Scorchfur being used in her place.
Either one.
Chapter 5
Take a joke, Flipclaw’s doing his thing.
Also many cats made Firestar a joke, he was bullied and tormented for a while.
I also feel like Nightheart specifically trying to kill/killing squirrels for the past two Chapters may mean something. (*Glances at Squirrelflight)
How would Jayfeather know what he was capable of?
Nightheart, you got bit by a squirrel because you’re stubborn…
If you remained a stubborn cat as a loner, you’d be a dead one and the squirrels would make your corpse into a ceremonial spot to visit as they defeated one of their hated enemies, a cat.
Also he does a lot more than mix herbs, who else do you think can create a garden?
Ah, if Jayfeather could read your mind, you’d be a personal chew toy right now…
Chapter 6
Very helpful for everyone, Curlfeather.
The very not obvious choice is Mothwing herself.
(Or an apprentice but that seems the most foolish, tbh. Although other not obvious choices would be cats that would be breaking the code if they were chosen.)
Young cats without an apprentice. (I may compile a list later of potential “not obvious options.”)
Chapter 1
Gullswoop is trying to be nice and seems to genuinely care for you, Sunbeam. (Everyone else, a bit much. But Gullswoop was trying to help much sooner!)
Kinda wish Sunbeam had went to see the kits, I
Would like to see Cinnamontail and her new litter.
And Rowankit’s sick. (I’m already aware that he dies, which sucks. I love the Rowan prefix and the narrative keeps messing with them specifically.)
Chapter 2
I don’t remember Lilyheart comparing you to Firestar.
Also you messed up your first attempt and that was entirely on you, it was not bad luck. You chose to go after more “challenging prey,” and chose to use “flashy moves.”
Birchfall, don’t be rude.
Ugh, Hollytuft should have paired up with Nightheart. You are both Firestar’s kin, for crying out loud.
Plumstone as one of mean girl vibe cats, of course doesn’t want to deal with him.
Birchfall: Had plan.
Plumstone: How obvious was it that I chose you on a whim?
Finleap: *Still deciding hunting spot.*
Lionblaze is an older warrior and leader of his patrol. He’s being pragmatic. (He also probably doesn’t want you up in a tree since his mate, Cinderheart broke her leg saving Mousewhisker as apprentices…)
Yes, he’s worried about you.
And it’s a good thing he sent you back so soon, if infection is setting in near the edges.
Yes, yes, you have turned your back on them, with your constant whining and snapping in River, when your sister was just trying to help you.
(Also worried for Brightheart of course, but I think the greencough only kills Rowankit so I’m not that worried. She’ll be fine.)
And that is incorrect Sparkpelt but okay. And she is the spitting image of a female Firestar, so maybe that’s why her fur is in a twist over this event?
Technically you kept nothing, Bramblestar gave you both of your new names.
(Once again wishing Sparkpelt had been killed by the dogs. So much missed drama in TBC and less headache now. Also side note, I wonder Sparkpelt named him Flameheart after the name she never got, Sparkfire. But naming him Firekit would have been too on the nose.)
Myrtlebloom says as she’s also related to Firestar.
You are both kin. Both adopted and literally blood kin.
You are both great grand kids of Firestar. (Myrtle being a great great great.)
I do kinda see Myrtlebloom’s overall point of Nightheart being seen as spoiled. (No one has ever complained about their prefix before. So this is very new territory and Nightheart gets his way with the name change because Bramblestar is his grandfather.)
I can see him even getting away with the name change under Firestar’s reign as well, ironically enough. (If he had injured his leg prior to being made a warrior, I can see Pinestar, who is also his kin, naming him Flameleg. Iirc, he is the one who named White-eye, White-eye.)
Chapter 3
Unfortunately a lot weighs on Frostpaw’s head. (While I would prefer they go grab Kestrelflight for help, they’re not going to do that…)
And if RiverClan is already falling apart, yeah that need a leader.
At this point, Mothwing and Frostpaw need to pull a Redscar and just choose someone.
(Also don’t trust Splashtail really. Also I’d prefer the cousins not get together since I think FrostXSplash is a popular ship.)
Kinda wish Frostpaw’s chaprer wasn’t so short compared to the others, or at least it feels shorter?
Chapter 4
It would have made plenty of difference, Tigerstar would have a bruised ego and launched a war on SkyClan.
And Snaketooth is being misgendered. I assume these lines were from Scorchfur, this sounds more like him than Snaketooth.
Yeah, a lot of my complaints are just Snaketooth being misgendered here or Scorchfur being used in her place.
Either one.
Chapter 5
Take a joke, Flipclaw’s doing his thing.
Also many cats made Firestar a joke, he was bullied and tormented for a while.
I also feel like Nightheart specifically trying to kill/killing squirrels for the past two Chapters may mean something. (*Glances at Squirrelflight)
How would Jayfeather know what he was capable of?
Nightheart, you got bit by a squirrel because you’re stubborn…
If you remained a stubborn cat as a loner, you’d be a dead one and the squirrels would make your corpse into a ceremonial spot to visit as they defeated one of their hated enemies, a cat.
Also he does a lot more than mix herbs, who else do you think can create a garden?
Ah, if Jayfeather could read your mind, you’d be a personal chew toy right now…
Chapter 6
Very helpful for everyone, Curlfeather.
The very not obvious choice is Mothwing herself.
(Or an apprentice but that seems the most foolish, tbh. Although other not obvious choices would be cats that would be breaking the code if they were chosen.)
Young cats without an apprentice. (I may compile a list later of potential “not obvious options.”)