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Post by Deleted on Sept 17, 2016 14:07:17 GMT -5
Ooh awesome! I think I might go with Asterclan  Thank you!! I'll go edit the post. (let me know if you use/think of a different name. In the meantime your clan will be Asterclan, at least to me.) I just spent at least 7 minutes editing the post I made a little bit ago, but I think I'll just remove the editing and put it here so it will be seen more:
As for gender preference and personality added to the form, I was debating this with myself. I already made an alternate version of the form in a draft for my clan (working on minor things like symbols and heading while I wait for code, I posted on a thread before foxtrots came onto here). I'll put it here in case you want to see it: Form idea:🌟 Username (not screen name):
🌟 Cat's name:
🌟 Cat's gender:
🌟 Cat's basic appearance (describe like in the allegiances in the books):
🌟 Cat's age (in moons):
✪ Hunting: ✧ ✧ ✧ ✧ ✧
✪ Fighting: ✧ ✧ ✧ ✧ ✧
✪ Healing: ✧ ✧ ✧ ✧ ✧
✪ Parenting: ✧ ✧ ✧ ✧ ✧
✪ Leadership: ✧ ✧ ✧ ✧ ✧
Ability key: ✧ = bad ✦ = good 1/5 = mediocre 2/5 = average 3/5 = good 4/5 = excellent 5/5 = amazing The reasoning behind the skill ratings is to avoid making overpowered characters/mary-stus and gary-stus. I could potentially add more skills, seeing as not many med cat related skills are on there, but it's just an idea. It probably lacks many things, such as an option to add a characters relationships, origins, family, etc. EDIT: We should add a 'position in clan' part to the form. I thought I had one on both versions, but it seems like I don't have one on either... |
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Post by Deleted on Sept 17, 2016 14:57:26 GMT -5
Whoops XD XD I might use that too, if you don't mind! Also heres a list of commonly found animals in Georgia (At least ones I can remember) Prey: Squirrels Mice Pigeons Robins (Semi common) Cardinals (Semi common) Rats a couple of smaller birds Snakes Predators: Raccoons Deer (They're huge, could kill a cat) Foxes Rats Red Wasps Yellow Jackets snakes merp umm horses are common too, in stables. If we wanted a horseplace Interesting... I'll keep those animals in mind then. It's totally fine if you use the form. I'm going to make some changes and add more med cat related skills though. I'll probably add gender preference and personality in as well. So, I'd suggest using the final version once all of the forgotten things are added. |
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Post by Deleted on Sept 17, 2016 15:16:52 GMT -5
Here it is. It's so long... 🌟 Username (not screen name): 🌟 Cat's name: 🌟 Cat's position in clan: 🌟 Cat's gender: 🌟 Cat's gender preference: 🌟 Cat's basic appearance (describe like in the allegiances in the books): 🌟 Cat's age (in moons): 🌟 Cat's personality: 🌟 Cat's origins: ✪ Hunting: ✧ ✧ ✧ ✧ ✧ ✪ Fighting: ✧ ✧ ✧ ✧ ✧ ✪ Healing: ✧ ✧ ✧ ✧ ✧ ✪ Starclan Connection: ✧ ✧ ✧ ✧ ✧ ✪ Dream interpreting: ✧ ✧ ✧ ✧ ✧ ✪ Parenting: ✧ ✧ ✧ ✧ ✧ ✪ Leadership: ✧ ✧ ✧ ✧ ✧ Ability key: ✧ = bad ✦ = good 1/5 = mediocre 2/5 = average 3/5 = good 4/5 = excellent 5/5 = amazing Any things I should add or change? I would add a "cat's clan" part, but this will most likely be used on separate clan threads, not one big one. |
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Post by Deleted on Sept 17, 2016 16:07:42 GMT -5
Actually that looks really accurate. I think that we should keep it like that. Could this be a semi-advanced? Like having people try to post at least 3 sentences just for the sake of keeping the role-play going?? I'd agree, but we should probably hear everyone's opinion, since this would likely affect the basic rules, which will be included in every clan's rule set (as well as the clan's extra rules, if any) and will be utilized during gatherings. (speaking of those we haven't made them yet...) |
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Post by Deleted on Sept 17, 2016 17:24:35 GMT -5
My rule ideas:
*Please try your best to avoid making Mary-sues/Gary-stus
*Do not try to change the situation/state of the roleplay for the sake of your character. This especially applies in origin stories. (example: A medicine cat with kits who was never punished because "the warrior/medicine cat code became twisted over time" when this was not proven, stated, nor shown in roleplay.)
*Cats caught breaking the warrior code/medicine cat code will be punished as their clan's leader sees fit. A clan leader cannot punish a cat of a clan they do not lead, unless given permission by that cat's clan to do so.
I've actually had the second one happen to me before when hosting a roleplay. That's where the example came from. XD
All rule ideas so far:
*Try to be on at least twice a week, preferably more if you can. High positions such as Leader, Deputy and Medicine Cat should be on at least once every other day/two days. The reason for this is these cats have the say so in the clans.
*Only make as many characters as you can manage and roleplay with effectively. Otherwise, you will freeze a lot of people.
*Please be respectful to others.
*No kit-stealing outside of roleplay.
*Clear any important or gigantic plots with at least one admin, preferably the admin(s) of what is most affected by the plot in roleplay.
*Please try your best to avoid making Mary-sues/Gary-stus
*Do not try to change the situation/state of the roleplay for the sake of your character. This especially applies in origin stories. (example: A medicine cat with kits who was never punished because "the warrior/medicine cat code became twisted over time" when this was not proven, stated, nor shown in roleplay.)
*Cats caught breaking the warrior code/medicine cat code will be punished as their clan's leader sees fit. A clan leader cannot punish a cat of a clan they do not lead, unless given permission by that cat's clan to do so.
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Post by Deleted on Sept 17, 2016 20:19:45 GMT -5
hmm lets see what else... I agree the last ones important cause that'd be hecka awkward if someone from Asterclan was punished by the Emberclan leader XD XD Also I was kinda hoping for Asterclan to be a little like Shadowclan, like a little distrusting of others and has an uneasy alliance with Emberclan but currently doesn't get along with Dawnclan at all?? Maybe one of the plots is a Loner steals some Asterclan kits and Foster thinks its Dawnclan and then the Loner steals Dawnclan kits to and a huge fight breaks out and since then things have been tense?That would be interesting... especially since I had plans to maybe introduce a character early on who they think was abandoned by a rouge or kittypet so that would probably make both clans suspicious if we were to go with that |
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Post by Deleted on Sept 17, 2016 20:22:04 GMT -5
that character happens to join Emberclan and then chaos will probably ensue |
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Post by Deleted on Sept 18, 2016 8:42:45 GMT -5
bump
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Post by Deleted on Sept 18, 2016 18:49:53 GMT -5
I'm just pasting this from the previous page XD The list of things we need to work on: (will be updated as things are completed and new things may be needed)✘ The basic rules (the ones that we all agree should be universal throughout the roleplay. Clans can make slight changes and add new ones, however. These rules will likely be used at gatherings.) [PRETTY MUCH DONE]✘ The clans' shared history ✘ The placement of the clans and specific locations ✘ How we'll manage time [SOMEWHAT DONE]✘ The First Prophecy ✘ The clan threads ✘ Specific or Unique clan customs and practices
EDIT: I got some form of way to get image urls unless it decides to do something annoying. XD  testing and then deciding to leave it there out of laziness. |
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Post by Deleted on Sept 19, 2016 14:02:54 GMT -5
Ooh I have an idea for the history from an old fanfic I wrote I have one too hehe
I'm trying to remake it bc its a bucket of trash thoughThat would be interesting to hear. |
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Post by Deleted on Sept 20, 2016 14:00:04 GMT -5
Hey same! I found a fanfic I did in sixth grade- it was into the wild from Dustpelts POV. Dear Starclan it was horrible! I'll post the synopsis soon changed into clan history lol I have a ton of HW tonight so probably tomorrow I'll post it?ok. the original was from sixth grade for my fanfic too
it was called Sunset Of the Clans: Dying Storm, because of Dawn of the Clans
then I changed the books name to Fading Storm in the remake for no reason whatsoever |
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Post by Deleted on Sept 21, 2016 13:26:03 GMT -5
bump
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Post by Deleted on Sept 21, 2016 19:28:38 GMT -5
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Asexual
sweetclover1
Hi loves, like my posts so I'll reply faster <3
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Post by sweetclover1 on Sept 22, 2016 18:21:29 GMT -5
Clever,Stream, and Blue. Ok so im not gonna use my fanfic, or at least all of it lol. Okay, so here it is: Back in the old forest there were three warriors, Cleverheart, Streamsong, and Blueshadow. All three cats where incredibly brave, loyal warriors who would do just about anything for their clans. They where from Windclan, Riverclan, and Shadowclan (Okay these can be interchangeable), and one day each respective medicine cat from the clans received a prophecy about how these cats where destined to create a new, strong clan far away from where the forest was. So, the three where sent off (not very happily, I must add), along with a few friends who insisted on taking the journey with them. With Cleverheart, there was Aspenpaw, Sootfeather, and Spidertail. With Streamsong there was Lightshadow, Sunspark, and Pebblepaw, and with Blueshadow there was Darkfern, Ripplefur, and Smallpaw. As they began the journey, the three where in clearly separate factions, each still showing the hostility to each other that was shown when they were in their old clans. As the journey progressed, they each got closer, even to the point where Streamsong and Sunspark became mates, until they reached the land in which they where to start this new clan. Instead of working together just as they did, cracks became apparent within their systems. Both Cleverheart and Streamsong insisted on allowing other cats, loners, rogues, and even kitty pets, into the mix in order to make their clan stronger. Blue shadow was more hesitant on allowing outsiders in, as it would be difficult to have them accept the ways of clan life. To make matters worse, they couldn't decide on where exactly their territory would be. Cleverheart, being from Shadowclan, insisted that the swamp would be an ideal place, while Streamsong, a Riverclan cat, thought that a camp near the creak would be best. Blue shadow wanted the moors much like her home clan, Windclan. They eventually couldn't agree and all went to their respective "Camps" starting their own clans, each of the clan cats splitting up to where they could eventually be. Each received nine lives, and lived peacefully for many seasons. (I can do more basic history- wars, cats having mates outside of the clan, etc etc ) |
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Post by Deleted on Sept 22, 2016 19:00:10 GMT -5
Clever,Stream, and Blue. Ok so im not gonna use my fanfic, or at least all of it lol. Okay, so here it is: Back in the old forest there were three warriors, Cleverheart, Streamsong, and Blueshadow. All three cats where incredibly brave, loyal warriors who would do just about anything for their clans. They where from Windclan, Riverclan, and Shadowclan (Okay these can be interchangeable), and one day each respective medicine cat from the clans received a prophecy about how these cats where destined to create a new, strong clan far away from where the forest was. So, the three where sent off (not very happily, I must add), along with a few friends who insisted on taking the journey with them. With Cleverheart, there was Aspenpaw, Sootfeather, and Spidertail. With Streamsong there was Lightshadow, Sunspark, and Pebblepaw, and with Blueshadow there was Darkfern, Ripplefur, and Smallpaw. As they began the journey, the three where in clearly separate factions, each still showing the hostility to each other that was shown when they were in their old clans. As the journey progressed, they each got closer, even to the point where Streamsong and Sunspark became mates, until they reached the land in which they where to start this new clan. Instead of working together just as they did, cracks became apparent within their systems. Both Cleverheart and Streamsong insisted on allowing other cats, loners, rogues, and even kitty pets, into the mix in order to make their clan stronger. Blue shadow was more hesitant on allowing outsiders in, as it would be difficult to have them accept the ways of clan life. To make matters worse, they couldn't decide on where exactly their territory would be. Cleverheart, being from Shadowclan, insisted that the swamp would be an ideal place, while Streamsong, a Riverclan cat, thought that a camp near the creak would be best. Blue shadow wanted the moors much like her home clan, Windclan. They eventually couldn't agree and all went to their respective "Camps" starting their own clans, each of the clan cats splitting up to where they could eventually be. Each received nine lives, and lived peacefully for many seasons. (I can do more basic history- wars, cats having mates outside of the clan, etc etc ) Cool! Maybe we can mix the two fanfics, if you like my fanfic, otherwise yours is good. I'm still writing mine, and have plans to bring it to this forum, probably when it reaches chapter 5. (heck, I might actually do it in like 5 minutes. It really just depends on when I feel like it.) So here's the very basic (yet very long) summary,, with events that haven't happened yet modified to fit Brave Hearts and its clans. (that mostly goes for arc 2): There was a prophecy:
"A darkened spirit and a fiery evil... destruction and death... now is a time that will bring upon the clans a sunset of which they will never see the next dawn."
Given by Starclan, foretelling something terrible to come. The young warrior, Nightshade, is a loyal Shadowclan cat, but she notices the other clans struggling around her, one by one. [up to here is where the writing so far ends]
~First was Thunderclan, struck down by a strange mutation of Greencough
~Next was Riverclan, who was destroyed by a flood that affected all of the territories
~Next was Skyclan, who had moved to the lake soon before Riverclan was destroyed, and had caused many fights due to them taking over Thunderclan's old teritory. One final fight cost them their existence. The few survivors dispersed among the clans or became rogues and loners.
~Windclan fell shortly afterward, due to the injuries from the battle and the rapidly scorching drought that followed the floods. The few survivors either joined Shadowclan, still wanting to be in a clan, or became kittypets.
~Shadowclan's territory began to lose life, and monsters came to rip out the trees and pave over the area like in the forest they had left so long ago.
After almost all of the clans have been destroyed...
*Shadowclan began a long trek to their new home, which, if we decide to do this, can be the new territory.
*The foxes who had lived there before fought back at the cats trying to claim their territory.
*After the foxes were driven off, there were arguments about whether or not this was the place they should be, and that Starclan had abandoned them.
*Arguments caused the fragile clan to disband.
[This would be arc 2, detailing the origins of at least my clan, if allowed, all. Originally, this was planned to go way differently in the bucket of trash one]
~Small groups began to form, when a prophecy came to a young cat:
"Seek out the wise, for only they know the life of the past."
~And the young cat did, starting from elders and working their way down to the smartest of kits. The elders could recall things from the past of the clans, and eventually, after all of the trouble, a new clan was born. originally Cleverclan in the bucket of trash, pretty weird right?
More prophecies, maybe one of the clans forms on their own, and so on, until we get to a good place to end it. Would it be a good idea? |
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Post by Deleted on Sept 22, 2016 19:27:03 GMT -5
Ooh yeah! That's a great idea!! Hmm do you want to mix them?? If so let's brain storm how... Idea 1: Maybe the three cats are from the first clan after the events of my fanfic, and the prophecy is given, and the cats are sent out. They then create the clans that haven't been created yet. OR... Idea 2: The dying Shadowclan receives a prophecy. They have to send a few of their last remaining loyal warriors (some of which came from the other clans). Shadowclan instead dies from the foxes and the journeying cats create the new clans. If do one of these, maybe you could write arc 2 (if we decide to write past arc 1), seeing as most of that part is you fanfic? I wouldn't want to do something out of character for the characters (or botch things completely), and it also would show that the story and this roleplay were created using teamwork. I really think it would be cool to write out the story, that way joiners/roleplayers can have something interesting to read and a better grasp of the backstory of the roleplay. more lore for everyone |
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if we wanted to write it of course!