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StarClan leader
Name Colour
Featherstar
She could now see that destiny alone could not save RiverClan. - Frostpaw, Wind
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Post by Featherstar on Aug 21, 2021 0:23:21 GMT -5
T H E S H A D O W S W I T H I N W A R R I O R S
Blurb:
One secret could destroy them all...
The Clans have lived in peace for many moons after the defeat of an evil rogue- but now, the Clans are in an uncertain place. One Clan leader blames another for past events and a old villain will return. If the Clans are to survive, they must defeat the threat within- before it's too late.
Table of contents: Prologue Chapter 1 Chapter 2 (Ongoing)
Prologue: A gray tabby tom walked up a slope towards a rocky place, his brother following behind. He knew some caves were up the hill from where he was at. He stopped and sniffed the ground in front of the cave.
“This better be good.” The tom grumbled.
“Oh Jayfeather, quit complaining. Your old friend called you here for a reason."
Jayfeather snorted. “I don’t know why or what he would need with us. The Great Battle is long over. He has done what he needed to do for us, Lionblaze.”
The two cats went into the cave where a hairless tom sat. “I have been waiting for you. It’s been a long time.”
Lionblaze twitched his tail but sat quietly, waiting for the hairless tom to explain what they were needed for.
“Get to the point! What do you want from us?” Jayfeather snarled.
“Great change is coming for the Clans, and you two will be very important in what will happen. The Clans must fight or die.” With that, a tingling sensation started creeping up the two tom's paws and before long, both of the tom's eyes went dark. "I have always wanted to do this but there was never the right time. But now you will be my tools to bring the Clans to the end of their time."
Chapter 1:
Leafstar woke up. It’s been quiet since we defeated Darktail. I’d like to keep it that way. She nosed her way out of her den and into the camp. Her deputy, Hawkwing, was organizing the morning patrol.
“Who’s on the morning patrol, Hawkwing?”, she asked.
“Plumwillow, Rabbitleap and Violetshine. I wanted them to check the ThunderClan border to make sure they haven’t tried to take land from us.” Hawkwing replied.
Surely ThunderClan wouldn’t take land from us? I know Firestar is dead and Bramblestar is leader but I don’t think that would be like ThunderClan.
“We should keep a lookout on all our borders. ShadowClan hasn’t been happy lately and RiverClan agrees with them.” Leafstar sniffed.
“I agree. It feels like a storm is about to break over the Clans right now. I’ll send a patrol over to the ShadowClan border later.” The SkyClan deputy mewed.
There will be a lot to do to continue to settle beside the lake but I know we will accepted at some point. We are one of the five Clans and I will not off the fur of any cat who says otherwise! Leafstar thought.
Chapter 2:
A white and brown tabby nosed his way though a bush of bracken, braiding on a long ago confrontation with a black she-cat.
Then if you return, I will kill you she had said. Glancing up at the stars in the night sky, he sighed. He layed down and curled up. It was going to be a long night.
Early the next morning, the old cat hunted for himself and when he had eaten; continued his journey. I wonder how the Clans have changed since I last saw them, he thought. Soon he came up to a familiar looking moor and stopped, taking in the view.
It's beautiful. I must be weary of Clan patrols. They still probably remember what I did the last time I was here.
Taking a deep breath, he headed down the slope. If I'm here again, I will be here as a honorable cat. I have changed since the old times. I was a Clan cat once, maybe I could be again.
Chapter 3:
Coming soon
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#8003F9
StarClan leader
Name Colour
Featherstar
She could now see that destiny alone could not save RiverClan. - Frostpaw, Wind
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Post by Featherstar on Aug 21, 2021 0:23:50 GMT -5
You may post here but I am still working on this.
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Post by mintedstar/fur🦇 on Aug 27, 2021 2:23:18 GMT -5
O: Heeeeeeeeeello!
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Post by phantomstar57 on Aug 27, 2021 12:48:43 GMT -5
Sounds interesting!
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#8003F9
StarClan leader
Name Colour
Featherstar
She could now see that destiny alone could not save RiverClan. - Frostpaw, Wind
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Post by Featherstar on Aug 27, 2021 18:30:44 GMT -5
Still working on it. Sorry if nothing else has appeared up there at the top of the page.
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Post by phantomstar57 on Aug 27, 2021 19:52:16 GMT -5
Its ok! I know how much work goes into posting a fic!
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#8003F9
StarClan leader
Name Colour
Featherstar
She could now see that destiny alone could not save RiverClan. - Frostpaw, Wind
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Post by Featherstar on Aug 30, 2021 17:04:45 GMT -5
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Post by mintedstar/fur🦇 on Aug 31, 2021 13:00:07 GMT -5
Nice!
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#8003F9
StarClan leader
Name Colour
Featherstar
She could now see that destiny alone could not save RiverClan. - Frostpaw, Wind
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Post by Featherstar on Sept 1, 2021 14:09:38 GMT -5
Bump!
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Post by mintedstar/fur🦇 on Sept 5, 2021 6:14:19 GMT -5
How've you been?
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#8003F9
StarClan leader
Name Colour
Featherstar
She could now see that destiny alone could not save RiverClan. - Frostpaw, Wind
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Post by Featherstar on Sept 10, 2021 12:03:24 GMT -5
Good. Tired from having to get up for school every day monday-friday at 7:30 am. How about you?
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#8003F9
StarClan leader
Name Colour
Featherstar
She could now see that destiny alone could not save RiverClan. - Frostpaw, Wind
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Post by Featherstar on Sept 14, 2021 15:07:26 GMT -5
Sorry, I have not been modavated enough to write Chapter 1.
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Post by mintedstar/fur🦇 on Sept 14, 2021 22:49:12 GMT -5
No worries! //sends good vibes
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#8003F9
StarClan leader
Name Colour
Featherstar
She could now see that destiny alone could not save RiverClan. - Frostpaw, Wind
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Post by Featherstar on Nov 5, 2021 12:07:31 GMT -5
I've gotten to writing Chapter 1 finally.
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Post by mintedstar/fur🦇 on Nov 9, 2021 20:45:33 GMT -5
Congrats!
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Post by mintedstar/fur🦇 on Dec 6, 2021 1:59:29 GMT -5
How goes it?
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#8003F9
StarClan leader
Name Colour
Featherstar
She could now see that destiny alone could not save RiverClan. - Frostpaw, Wind
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Post by Featherstar on Dec 6, 2021 16:02:53 GMT -5
It's going well. I got part of Chapter 1 done. I just need to finish it. Hopefully it will be up soon.
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Post by phantomstar57 on Dec 6, 2021 16:15:49 GMT -5
I like it so far. Only thing I'd do in the future is to sepaarte paragraphs for each speaker so it doesn't get confusing. Like so:
A gray tabby tom walked up a slope towards a rocky place, his brother following behind. He knew some caves were up the hill from where he was at. He stopped and sniffed the ground in front of the cave.
“This better be good.” The tom grumbled.
“Oh Jayfeather, quit complaining.Your old friend called you here for a reason."
Jayfeather snorted. “I don’t know why or what he would need with us. The Great Battle is long over. He has done what he needed to do for us, Lionblaze.”
The two cats went into the cave where a hairless tom sat. “I have been waiting for you. It’s been a long time.”
Lionblaze twitched his tail but sat quietly, waiting for the hairless tom to explain what they were needed for.
“Get to the point! What do you want from us?” Jayfeather snarled.
“Great change is coming for the Clans, and you two will be very important in what will happen. The Clans must fight or die.” With that, a tingling sensation started creeping up the two tom's paws and before long, both of the tom's eyes were (went?) dark. "I have always wanted to do this but there was never the right time. But now you will be my tools to bring the Clans to the end of their time."
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#8003F9
StarClan leader
Name Colour
Featherstar
She could now see that destiny alone could not save RiverClan. - Frostpaw, Wind
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Post by Featherstar on Dec 6, 2021 16:21:22 GMT -5
I like it so far. Only thing I'd do in the future is to sepaarte paragraphs for each speaker so it doesn't get confusing. Like so:A gray tabby tom walked up a slope towards a rocky place, his brother following behind. He knew some caves were up the hill from where he was at. He stopped and sniffed the ground in front of the cave. “This better be good.” The tom grumbled. “Oh Jayfeather, quit complaining.Your old friend called you here for a reason." Jayfeather snorted. “I don’t know why or what he would need with us. The Great Battle is long over. He has done what he needed to do for us, Lionblaze.” The two cats went into the cave where a hairless tom sat. “I have been waiting for you. It’s been a long time.” Lionblaze twitched his tail but sat quietly, waiting for the hairless tom to explain what they were needed for. “Get to the point! What do you want from us?” Jayfeather snarled. “Great change is coming for the Clans, and you two will be very important in what will happen. The Clans must fight or die.” With that, a tingling sensation started creeping up the two tom's paws and before long, both of the tom's eyes were (went?) dark. "I have always wanted to do this but there was never the right time. But now you will be my tools to bring the Clans to the end of their time." Oh thank you! I felt like something was wrong. I'll edit the part that is up right now.
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Post by mintedstar/fur🦇 on Dec 6, 2021 22:01:51 GMT -5
It's going well. I got part of Chapter 1 done. I just need to finish it. Hopefully it will be up soon. Neat! Sounds fun. Good luck with that!
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#8003F9
StarClan leader
Name Colour
Featherstar
She could now see that destiny alone could not save RiverClan. - Frostpaw, Wind
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Post by Featherstar on Dec 6, 2021 22:02:42 GMT -5
It's going well. I got part of Chapter 1 done. I just need to finish it. Hopefully it will be up soon. Neat! Sounds fun. Good luck with that! I put a preview up for it! Hope you like it!
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#8003F9
StarClan leader
Name Colour
Featherstar
She could now see that destiny alone could not save RiverClan. - Frostpaw, Wind
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Post by Featherstar on Jan 1, 2022 21:21:49 GMT -5
Bump up.
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Post by mintedstar/fur🦇 on Jan 28, 2022 18:59:28 GMT -5
How goes it?
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#8003F9
StarClan leader
Name Colour
Featherstar
She could now see that destiny alone could not save RiverClan. - Frostpaw, Wind
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Post by Featherstar on Feb 6, 2022 23:39:58 GMT -5
It goes well. I am delaying on the rest of Chapter 1 right now. I just feel a little lazy on it. I'll get to soon. Most likely within the next week or two.
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Post by mintedstar/fur🦇 on Feb 23, 2022 23:50:26 GMT -5
Whatever works best! I'm excited though.
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#8003F9
StarClan leader
Name Colour
Featherstar
She could now see that destiny alone could not save RiverClan. - Frostpaw, Wind
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Post by Featherstar on Apr 9, 2023 19:30:36 GMT -5
I may get more help on this. I can't do it on my own. I still haven't progressed beyond Chapter 1.
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