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Pheonix
goodbye. I'm leaving the forums (for a while though I might come on here once a month or so)
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Post by Pheonix on Feb 16, 2021 13:52:57 GMT -5
this is all really good! Thanks! If you have any suggestions for the story let me know. ok will do
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Duskfire
"Winners focus on winning. Losers focus on winners." - Tom Brady, the GOAT
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Post by Duskfire on Feb 16, 2021 14:03:36 GMT -5
Thanks! If you have any suggestions for the story let me know. ok will do Just added a little blurb at the beginning and moved everything up there.
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Post by Deleted on Feb 16, 2021 16:10:00 GMT -5
why is there a gap between the end of ch.18 and beginning of ch.19?
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Duskfire
"Winners focus on winning. Losers focus on winners." - Tom Brady, the GOAT
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Post by Duskfire on Feb 16, 2021 17:16:17 GMT -5
why is there a gap between the end of ch.18 and beginning of ch.19? Basically Mud let Pantherstripe stay. They talked for a while and then the next morning starts Chapter 19. You know, maybe I should add that. I will see to doing that and when I do I will let you know.
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Duskfire
"Winners focus on winning. Losers focus on winners." - Tom Brady, the GOAT
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Post by Duskfire on Feb 16, 2021 18:58:24 GMT -5
why is there a gap between the end of ch.18 and beginning of ch.19? Basically Mud let Pantherstripe stay. They talked for a while and then the next morning starts Chapter 19. You know, maybe I should add that. I will see to doing that and when I do I will let you know. Ok. I added it. It's not much, but good idea. Thanks!
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Post by The One and Only Moongaze on Feb 17, 2021 12:47:56 GMT -5
I just started reading your fanfic....and it's GREAT!!!!!
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Duskfire
"Winners focus on winning. Losers focus on winners." - Tom Brady, the GOAT
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Post by Duskfire on Feb 17, 2021 15:01:25 GMT -5
I just started reading your fanfic....and it's GREAT!!!!! Thanks! In the beginning I was not sure if people would like it because I feel I don't do good with dialogue in general, but it has been going well! I am really trying to make the ending awesome and crazy but I'm not very good at making amazing stories xD. I hope it goes well!
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Cake
Pheonix
goodbye. I'm leaving the forums (for a while though I might come on here once a month or so)
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Post by Pheonix on Feb 17, 2021 15:30:03 GMT -5
i love it
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Post by Deleted on Feb 18, 2021 17:07:11 GMT -5
Well, I don't think my story is going to go that far through all of the books to when Rootspring and Bristlefrost start liking each other. Maybe I could add a special chapter at the end, that shows in the future they become mates and have kits? will you?
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Duskfire
"Winners focus on winning. Losers focus on winners." - Tom Brady, the GOAT
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Post by Duskfire on Feb 18, 2021 17:10:40 GMT -5
Well, I don't think my story is going to go that far through all of the books to when Rootspring and Bristlefrost start liking each other. Maybe I could add a special chapter at the end, that shows in the future they become mates and have kits? will you? Yes. I will add a chapter after I finish the main storyline about in the future, after TBC. It will be according to my predictions of what will happen related to warrior code changing/bramblestar coming back in TBC.
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Cake
Pheonix
goodbye. I'm leaving the forums (for a while though I might come on here once a month or so)
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Post by Pheonix on Feb 19, 2021 15:12:25 GMT -5
wow you write fast
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Post by Deleted on Feb 19, 2021 15:45:41 GMT -5
who’s the she cat?
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Duskfire
"Winners focus on winning. Losers focus on winners." - Tom Brady, the GOAT
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Post by Duskfire on Feb 24, 2021 13:01:00 GMT -5
Chapter 25 is posted guys! CHAPTER 25 SPOILERS: PLZ READ ONLY IF YOU HAVE READ CHP 25 Ok guys so I came up with this ridiculous logo made up of dashes and underscores for POV changes, and I might use them in future chapters.
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Post by Shadowflight on Feb 25, 2021 11:01:15 GMT -5
this is a good story!
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Post by Shadowflight on Feb 25, 2021 11:01:38 GMT -5
where do you find the patience?
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