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Post by Featherwing on Aug 15, 2016 22:23:32 GMT -5
he meets tigerstar and he no longer knows what is going on and what is his life.
//hums// going to go with part two. OOH. No I'll save Poppy anyway for whatever, but his first baby would be Daisykit. His mate could be... uhhh.... Ruewhisper? Yeah why not. doesn't matter, she's dead get it, rue means "to feel sorrow over"? He'll be feeling things for Tigerstar but he's gonna remember Ruewhisper and be all mournful and depressed and it'll be great. (not great because depression is a real thing and it's awful)
//slams open palm on desk// I'm going with timeline 2.
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Post by Scarpath on Aug 15, 2016 22:26:09 GMT -5
you should make Daisykit and Quailstep visit him from StarClan to guide him from time to time... just for the Angst.
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Post by Featherwing on Aug 15, 2016 22:28:50 GMT -5
I was thinking Daisykit would be lingering like an awful ghost. He'd see her in kits and apprentices, hear her laughter in the bubbling stream, and he'd see Ruewhisper (I changed the name because of flower meanings) in the clouds and hear her on the wind and it'd be awful. Or Tigerstar would remind him so bitterly of his mate that sometimes he has to go and 'cry' for a bit.
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Post by Deleted on Aug 15, 2016 22:30:44 GMT -5
WindClan { ♀ } - - { Peachstar | 56 Moons { A sleek lithe broad shouldered she-cat with a golden sleek pelt with tabby markings, and large owl like amber eyes. Peachstar's face is slim and feminine one of her ears has a tear in it. Her legs are athletic and strong, while her paws are small and petite in size. Her frame is slim with a little bit of muscle but not much. She has a small scar on her cheek, and on her leg. She has tiny white hairs on her forehead, chest, and a few on the tip of her tail. Peachstar is unnaturally kind. The golden she-cat rarely yells or raises her voice, she often goes with a calm approach even when she's angry. Although, when she snaps it's not pleasant because she just bottles up her anger instead of addressing it at times. Peachstar is also a bit of perfectionist everything has to be set in a way or she just freaks out. She often plans events in the Clan two days before they happen so she doesn't have to worry about it. The golden she-cat enjoys checking on the queens and kits before going about her business. Even though Peachstar is a perfectionist and doesn't talk about her feelings at times she is intelligent and thinks ahead instead of making brash decisions. The golden tabby never knew her actual parents. She only had a few glimpses of them, but they died by a badger and ever since Emberstar has taken care of her. { --Sуℓνєση-- { ♀ } - - { Petalsplash | 57 Moons
{ A sleek petite broad shouldered she-cat with almond shaped eyes. Her light cream pelt is soft and thick hiding her fragile frame underneath it. Her face is slanted with a long scar running down on her right eye causing blindness. She has patches of dark creams and splashes of white. Her good eye is the color of the forest when it's foggy. Petalsplash is a gentle soft spoken she-cat with a heart of gold. Petalsplash enjoys going out hunting mostly to go out for a walk around by herself and when she catches prey she gives a prayer to StarClan. She does it out of respect for her warrior ancestors and is very passionate about the Warrior Code. Petalsplash can be come across as uptight and a bit strict, but she believes that it's a warrior's duty to not only serve their Clan but also learn the ways of their ancestors. The cream tortie enjoys the company of apprentices and she teaches them what she knows and sometimes they teach her things. Although she can be quite the stickler and can come across as pushy when talking about her beliefs. Half the time she doesn't know that she's doing it, the other times she's doing is to annoy someone. Petalsplashes parents were kind to her and always believed in her, although she became respectful to not only her Clan but to StarClan as well. By the time Petalsplash turned forty-eight moons old her parents died from green-cough. After that, the cream tortie was extremely respectful to StarClan and smiles when the stars are out. { --Sуℓνєση-- { ♀ } - - { Amberhaze | 67 Moons { A sleek petite golden she-cat with large dark green orbs for eyes. Her golden pelt is short and soft like silk, she has white a white muzzle with a large white dot on her head. Her belly and chest is a light cream color that looks almost white, and white her paws are small and dainty. Her face is angular along with her shoulders and she has a sleek tail. Her legs are slim but still lean. Amberhaze has a loud booming voice and also has a temper. The golden she-cat enjoys going out boarding patrols more than hunting, while hunting is important she'd rather be patrolling the area looking out for any intruders. She despises apprentices who are rude, disrespectful, and/or boastful. She doesn't like disrespect and often times let it be known by her tail signals, growls, ears, and even her whiskers. Amberhaze doesn't like keeping quiet when things deliberately made her upset she would either get up in another cat's face or get into fights. This she-cat respects Peachstar, but thinks she's too nice and calm for her own good. Although, it's not her place to tell her leader what to do. When Amberhaze was an apprentice she wanted to show her mentor what she had. She wanted to be a warrior right then and there, she'd often sneak into the forest and hunt or train on her own. Her mentor was not pleased, but was gentle with her and let her know that things take patience and she should go out with her mentor and not by herself until she's a warrior. { --Sуℓνєση-- { ♂ } - - { Hailgaze | 17 Moons { A large muscular short-haired tabby with slanted dark amber eyes. His pelt is light gray with dark gray tabby stripes that runs around his bulky shoulders. He hs a white underbelly along with the tip of his tail, his face is masculine with a small scar on his forehead. His paws almost look like they belong to a bear, and always wears an intimidating expression. Hailgaze is a strong and hard working tom-cat. He enjoys patrolling the border patrols during sunrise to keep an eye out for any intruders. Although the gray tabby can be annoying by trying to act tough and all cool, he may be a good warrior but he's not that witty and cool as he thinks. Although, he is still young and has a lot to know about being a warrior and it takes a lot more work than just being strong. When Hailgaze was an apprentice he usually got himself into trouble by praising of how much prey he could get. His mentor didn't appreciate his attitude and often at times would give him talks about this, but it never stopped him until one day he didn't catch a rabbit. The other apprentices thought he was a laughing stock, he wanted to impress the other apprentices, but instead he had embarrassed himself. { --Sуℓνєση-- { ♂ } - - { Snowpaw | 6 Moons { A small pudgy tom-cat with large misty gray eyes. He has bulky shoulders and his pelt is white and soft and thick as snow. His facial features are plump while his paws are tiny while his tail is long and feathery. His tail is the fluffiest part of him, and he has small ear tufts. Snowpaw is a bit smaller than other apprentices, but he doesn't let that get him down. He is kind-hearted and willing to help the elders. He enjoys listening to their tales and also enjoys training with his mentor on battle moves. Hinting isn't his favorite, although he tries he can't keep his balance right and ends up falling on his side ending up scaring the prey away. His eye coordination isn't that great along with movements. He is quite clumsy and trips over his own paws on accident. When he feels down he goes back to the apprentice den and just wants to sleep the day away and ignore about how tiny or clumsy he is. As a kit he was always the runt of the litter, he was tiny and the medicine cat thought for sure he wouldn't make it. And yet, he survived and is full of life. Although he will go through some rough times he is thankful for the life has been given. { --Sуℓνєση-- { ♂ } - - { Dawnpaw | 7 Moons { A small lithe tom-cat with small light amber eyes. He has small shoulders and his pelt is dark brown with cream on his ears and muzzle while his chest, belly, paws, and the tip of his tail are white. His tail is average size and his facial features are lean and masculine. The tom has strong legs but not that fast nor light on his paws. Dawnpaw is quite intelligent and has often show that in his hunting training, however, his battle training is a little bit tougher since he can be quite predictable at times. The tom can be quite shy, but still, tries make conversation even if he seems awkward at it. Dawnpaw always looked up to the elders for advice especially Emberbreeze the retired leader. He enjoyed listening to her stories and wants to ask for help for his battle training but he begins to get nervous and thinks it may not be the best idea. While Dawnpaw is shy he wants to try and do things for himself before asking for help. Although, him asking for help isn't easy it's quite hard. When Dawnpaw was a kit he looked an exact copy of his mother except for his amber eyes, those he got from his father. The tom never actually knew his dad and hopes to meet him someday.
{ --Sуℓνєση-- I may change some stuff here.
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Post by Scarpath on Aug 15, 2016 22:31:02 GMT -5
oh my goodness that is amazing, i love it.
i need to work on the backstories and personalities of Bumblepaw, Ravenstorm, and Ferntail. anyone have any ideas?
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Post by ʀᴀɪɴʟᴇᴀғ 🍁 on Aug 15, 2016 22:31:49 GMT -5
What does Ruewhisper look like?
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Post by ʀᴀɪɴʟᴇᴀғ 🍁 on Aug 15, 2016 22:34:28 GMT -5
So, did we ever get SkyClan's territory together?
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Post by Featherwing on Aug 15, 2016 22:41:58 GMT -5
I think she'd be a tortoiseshell with green eyes. Perhaps she died during after the birth? I'm thinking she was slight and not built to withstand it at all. She was kind of expecting to die and Stormtrail was in serious denial when it happened. She'd be strong willed, playful– a contrast, but not too much. She didn't argue, she hated arguments and would give him this look when he tried to make her see his way. Stubborn.
Daisykit was a tortoiseshell like her mother but with her father's pale gold eyes. I'm thinking she died at 3 moons? Old enough to have a personality, for sure. Probably a bumbling, giggling little one. Baby Dory without the forgetfulness. I'm imaging her saying "okay Daddy!" and Stormtrail just melting like the softie he is.
As for SkyClan's territory, no we didn't. Not really. But I do have somethings. Give me a minute or two to find 'em okay?
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Post by Sand 🎃 on Aug 15, 2016 22:50:52 GMT -5
We had some things back in the pages. Shoooot, I came up with more names for characters and they're turning into tortoiseshells except for two >_< not that I don't like tortoiseshells, though I'm not sure if they'd be related.
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Post by Featherwing on Aug 15, 2016 22:50:58 GMT -5
SkyClan's Territory: Primarily a forest with patches of reedy, low lying bushes and rocks throughout. Rocky, but not too rocky. Camp is dip in the earth with boulders half fallen on one another, secured in their place by growing trees that support them. Dens are dug under the brambles that grow at the base of the rocks within the encampment.
Landmarks: Round Rock: A large boulder closer to the RiverClan section of the territory. Very smooth, an sphere-looking boulder. A patrol point. White Oak: An oak tree who's bark is completely stripped bare, so it grows white. A climbing tree, marked by all the apprentices past. Mossy Hollow: A spongy section of the territory, a hollow, where apprentices can train and collect moss. Thunder Stones: An line of broken boulders that mark the border for ThunderClan. Kind of like the Snake Rocks of ThunderClan, but more prone to minor rock slides. Golden Reeds: a golden field in the south, past the Round Rock. RiverClan border.
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Post by ʀᴀɪɴʟᴇᴀғ 🍁 on Aug 15, 2016 22:51:24 GMT -5
The thing is, Tigerstar is stubborn and would argue because she's still relatively new at leading.
DARN IT! I forgot Morningwatcher.
Sure!
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Post by Featherwing on Aug 15, 2016 22:59:32 GMT -5
The stubborn tendencies and argumentative nature of Tigerstar would definitely bring Stormtrail out of his shell. It'd be helpful and he wouldn't compare them much. Two different cats, but sometimes, there would be a moment where he is just so heavily reminded of what he lost– might not even be Tigerstar that reminded him but she might exasperate that feeling by being so her that he needs to hide for a bit.
Also, Rue would have been long dead at this point. By at least 5 moons. Which means, Daisy died 2 moons prior to the rp taking place.
[ all of this can be changed, I'm literally just throwing things around. PLEASE help ]
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Post by ʀᴀɪɴʟᴇᴀғ 🍁 on Aug 15, 2016 22:59:44 GMT -5
So, I may make Running a female and move her to Thunder and make Swiftpaw Morningwatcher's son. Thoughts? Also, as previously stated, but not sure anyone saw, all my cats are open to relations, whether it be ships or blood ties.
Tiger is a brown tabby, blue eyes. Morning is ginger tom, blue eyes. Swift is a gray tabby and amber eyes. Tawny is a pale ginger/golden tabby, green eyes. Hickory is a reddish brown tabby and has amber eyes. Running is a gray tabby with green if I go with her.
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Post by ʀᴀɪɴʟᴇᴀғ 🍁 on Aug 15, 2016 23:05:36 GMT -5
The stubborn tendencies and argumentative nature of Tigerstar would definitely bring Stormtrail out of his shell. It'd be helpful and he wouldn't compare them much. Two different cats, but sometimes, there would be a moment where he is just so heavily reminded of what he lost– might not even be Tigerstar that reminded him but she might exasperate that feeling by being so her that he needs to hide for a bit.
Also, Rue would have been long dead at this point. By at least 5 moons. Which means, Daisy died 2 moons prior to the rp taking place. I can imagine them having a sweet moment, then he make it awkward and excuse himself and she realize that they were getting a little too close.
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Post by Featherwing on Aug 15, 2016 23:12:02 GMT -5
!! I love it. Like they're getting to the point where they understand each other and Storm immediately ruins it, creating that barrier again and Tiger being reminded that nothing could work because medicine cat and from two different clans.
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Post by Deleted on Aug 15, 2016 23:19:31 GMT -5
-flops in-
Sorry for my poof.
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Post by Featherwing on Aug 15, 2016 23:28:04 GMT -5
Cyn! Welcome back :3 how was the date?
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Post by Deleted on Aug 15, 2016 23:29:19 GMT -5
It was good X3 we talked and had dinner at DQ.
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Post by Featherwing on Aug 15, 2016 23:30:24 GMT -5
Sounds fun
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Post by Featherwing on Aug 15, 2016 23:33:36 GMT -5
I have two more descriptions to go before I'm done with characters. 5ever. At least until I kill some off. which i will.
out of all of them, Shaggywolf is my favorite. He's such a doofus XD
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Post by Deleted on Aug 15, 2016 23:36:24 GMT -5
He sounds amazing and adorable XD
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Post by Featherwing on Aug 15, 2016 23:48:55 GMT -5
I imagine a patrol going out and finding him wallowing in a field of flowers because he's had catnip and he thinks the flowers will rub off the colour onto his fur.
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Post by Featherwing on Aug 15, 2016 23:51:00 GMT -5
also, I'm loving Peachstar. She sounds perfectly precious.
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Post by Deleted on Aug 15, 2016 23:51:29 GMT -5
XDDD That would be amazing!
Awww thank you X3
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Post by Scarpath on Aug 15, 2016 23:54:43 GMT -5
hi, i'm back again - i tried to sleep, because it's lateish where i am, but couldn't. all of my cats are also open to family relations, they're all in WindClan and SkyClan, if anyone wants i can quote the post back here.
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Post by Deleted on Aug 15, 2016 23:56:35 GMT -5
Sure Scar X3 and I am sorry you couldn't sleep ;~;
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Post by Scarpath on Aug 16, 2016 0:00:17 GMT -5
> WindClan Characters <
{ ♀ } - - { Ferntail | 32 moons { Ferntail is a long, lithe, light brown she-cat with soft green eyes. She is not solid brown, rather, she has a lighter brown muzzle and chest, which is hardly noticeable. She also has a darker brown tail tip and ear tips, but those are also hard to see unless one is looking for them. Her fur is very short, but rather soft, and her eyes glint like they can see past the cat she's looking at, and into their soul. Her body build, besides being rather skinny and long, is average; her muscles aren't too large nor to small, she's not short nor tall, and she doesn't have many distinguishing features, besides her eyes. Other than that, her tail is a bit long for her body; hardly noticeable, but it gives her an advantage for balance - meaning she's decent at climbing, though she doesn't necessarily need to. She appears quiet and wise, and often intimidating to those who don't know her well. { Scarpath
{ ♂ } - - { Pebblepaw | 9 moons { Pebblepaw is a short, small, black-and-white splotched tom with amber eyes. His pelt is medium in length, and you can often find some kind of burr or thorn stuck in it. His pelt is mainly white - distinguishing spots are the one that covers a good part of his head and completely covers one ear, and another large spot that spreads across his right haunch. He has a scar on his right foreleg; he forgets where he got it, but it must've been from goofing around and snagging on a thorn or other sharp plant. His ears are a bit too big for his head, giving him a funny-looking body, overall. His legs are very short, and his whole body is rather small, which gives him a disadvantage hunting on WindClan's territory, because he's not very fast. Despite being short, his body is rather thin, and the beginnings of hard muscles can be seen underneath his medium length, splotched pelt.
{ Scarpath
> SkyClan Characters <
{ ♂ } - - {Ravenstorm | 49 moons
{ Crowstorm is a dark gray tom with glinting amber eyes. His pelt is short, and if you're not close enough to him, you might see him as being completely black. His body is typical of a SkyClan cat - thick, strong back legs for jumping and a long, thin tail for balance. His ears are large, and his muzzle is long and narrow, and his expression is usually one of disapproval. He has many scars - probably from scraps with trespassing loners or rogues, maybe other battles as well. His largest scar crosses his right hindleg, starting at his haunch and ending halfway down his leg. He also has a nicked left ear, along with a scar on his right cheek, and a few more scattered here and there. He carries himself in a manner of an important cat, as if he's looking down on the ones he crosses; and this is only exaggerated by his firm muscles, usually stony expression, and hard eyes.
{ Scarpath
{ ♀ } - - { Bumblepaw | 12 moons
{ Bumblepaw is a very large, thick, gray tabby she-cat with light blue eyes. Her pelt is long and thick, light gray with darker gray stripes in a classic tabby pattern. She has the typical tabby markings on her face, as well. Her underbelly is lighter gray than the rest of her body, and her blue eyes tend to blend in with the reset of her pelt, and are not a distinguishing feature. Keeping her long pelt well-groomed is a task, but she does it quite effortlessly. She is large for her age, with long legs and muscles that are developing quite well during her training, especially in her hind legs. Her tail is also longer than the average cat, even for SkyClan, and is a fluffy plume sticking off of her body, which is good for balancing. Despite her size, she does not appear menacing - in fact, her expression is mostly naive and clueless, making it easy for other cats to approach her. { Scarpath
CURRENTLY A WIP here they are!! they don't have any history and they have barebones personalities right now, so if someone wants to hop in as a parent or sibling, that would be awesome. if not, i can still work with them... haha.
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Post by Featherwing on Aug 16, 2016 0:05:12 GMT -5
Yooo, I'd offer Sweetrose to be Bumblepaw's mom? They don't look alike but we can say that Bumblepaw takes after her dad? Dunno, it's an option.
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Post by Deleted on Aug 16, 2016 0:08:08 GMT -5
I was gonna offer Rabbitfoot XDD as the dad since he will be a darker gray XD but one of Fea characters can be the parents X3
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Post by Featherwing on Aug 16, 2016 0:10:54 GMT -5
Sweetrose never sticks with the dad, so it could work as long as you're chill with it Cyn? She's a love 'em and leave 'em lady. Does not care for them at all, and sometimes her dalliances result in kits. This could have been one of them?
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