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Post by Featherwing on Aug 12, 2016 14:57:55 GMT -5
Yay! //throws confetti//
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Post by Featherwing on Aug 12, 2016 15:01:57 GMT -5
Chose to just make a word doc instead of cluttering this page.
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Post by Sand 🎃 on Aug 12, 2016 15:08:10 GMT -5
//blasts confetti everywhere// ʀᴀɪɴʟᴇᴀғ 🍁 - I like the form >w<!
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Post by Scarpath on Aug 12, 2016 15:25:43 GMT -5
i'm seriously okay with whatever you guys want to do with me at this point; since i'm not leader, i can be deputy, secondary leader, medicine cat, whatever. i'm open to waiting as long as i have to for any of these positions, too! i'm going to develop some serious character stuff now or soon! i think i'll be sticking to WindClan, though? i also like SkyClan, but WindClan has always been my favorite.
also, Rain, i like that form! it's simple and pleasing to the eye.
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Post by Deleted on Aug 12, 2016 16:55:25 GMT -5
Whoo! I like the form Rainy X3
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Bisexual
#ffc5c5
Official Queen of Fan Clans
Name Colour
ʀᴀɪɴʟᴇᴀғ 🍁
Official ThunderClan & ElmClan Leader
Easing back in
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Post by ʀᴀɪɴʟᴇᴀғ 🍁 on Aug 12, 2016 16:58:55 GMT -5
Alright, so in a bit, I'll have to get off. But for now, I'll be working on the layouts and the graphics. Once they are done, I'll post them here and link you all to the page. This will be the discussion/plot planning page.
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Post by Sand 🎃 on Aug 12, 2016 17:05:22 GMT -5
Let me know if you need anything -- anyone.
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Post by ᴍɪsᴛғᴀʟʟ » on Aug 12, 2016 17:34:14 GMT -5
Sorry for my absence, I am currently not home at the moment- I will be back tomorrow.
I like that form so far~
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Post by Deleted on Aug 12, 2016 18:02:28 GMT -5
Hey Pap X3 it's okay.
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Post by Scarpath on Aug 12, 2016 21:25:20 GMT -5
hey! sorry for my absence but i am back and ready to talk about anything anyone needs!
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Post by Featherwing on Aug 12, 2016 21:57:09 GMT -5
Looking forward to the layouts and the graphics
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Post by Featherwing on Aug 12, 2016 21:57:30 GMT -5
SAVE For SkyClan intro. ---Intro 1--- "Time to wake up, it's morning" A sweet voice coos into the darkness. A kernel of light blinks into existence, far off from where you are. You pad towards it and more voices bounce in the shadows, "Silly, the sun is up so you should be too!" "Wakey wakey!" "GET UP! We have to move!" "Wake up, it's time for training." "–WAKE UP!" "Moon of my life, the sun is awake–" An endless sea of voices, rough and smooth, warm and cold, high pitched chirps and deep growls, all swarming the void around you like invisible smoke. Giggles and shouts twist in a tight, violent circle around your ears, closing in as your walk speeds up, anxious for something. For what? You're not sure. That first voice again, so loving that it fills your soul with a sort of giddy laughter and you start to run. "Wake up my sweet one, my baby. Time to open those beautiful eyes." You reach the light and blink into the bright world. "Good morning, my dearest love" Your mother purrs– and you wake up.
An odd dream, you think as you stretch lazily in your nest. Yawning, bleary eyes glance around an empty den. Wait a minute. An empty den. What was once bleary was now wide awake, wild with a frantic energy that screamed, "I'm late!" Apprentice or Warrior, in Skyclan, the earlier the better. Sleep is for the weak, no matter what dreams may come. ---End of Intro 1---
---Intro 2---Now, Stormtrail isn't a morning cat. Most steer clear of the prickly tom's nest before noon if they can help it. One of the things he could count on, as a youth, was his mother walking into the den every morning– regardless of if he was a kit or an apprentice– and waking him up. Her sweet, gentle voice cooing him into awareness, as she'd done even in his earliest memories. She was gone now, since his tenth moon. A fever took her one winter morning and that was that. Then his sister, Featherpaw, took over the waking until she too died. Not twelve moons old when a flash flood took her one dawn patrol during a torrential rainstorm. After that, well, it solidified his hatred of getting up early.
This day is no exception, so when he was awakened roughly with a nervous, "Stormtrail, you're needed in the Leader's Den," the male sat up, glared at the messenger until the youth scurried off, and sighed. Giving his chest a lick, pale gold eyes flicked to the den's skylight, gauging the time of day. Not too early, thank goodness. "Still too early" he mumbled, ears flattening as he stalked out and towards the short brown furred figure sitting outside of the Leader's Den. "You called, Branchstar?" Peering down at the munchkin cat, the maine coon tried and failed to hide his irritation. "We need to talk about your options, Grumpy." Ah, this again, Stormtrail's brow furrowed with frustration. "Sir, with all due respect, I'm not sure what you mean."
The only problem with being a good warrior is that the higher ups take notice. In this case, Branchstar had been pestering him about taking on more responsibility, hinting at a potential deputy position in the future. However, Stormtrail honestly wanted nothing to do with that rank, and he certainly didn't want the responsibility that comes with it. He'd never be able to sleep late again if he took that position. After all, look at Branchstar, with his hollow cheeks and his shaky stance. The short tom probably hadn't had a good night sleep since he became deputy, and becoming leader certainly didn't do any good for his sanity. "You're a smart boy, Grumpy. You know what this Clan needs. You know how to get things done," Branchstar was rambling now, gazing up at the sky with a distant expression, common on the forgetful leader. "You remind me of myself–" And that's when Stormtrail started to drift, glancing back at the warriors den with longing. "-That is why I'm sending you to RiverClan." Wait what? Double taking, Stormtrail's eyes widened, almost comically so. "Can you repeat that, Sir?" "I'm sending you to RiverClan to learn how to be a medicine cat. We've gone too long without one and you'd be a perfect fit."
Well, Stormtrail thought dizzily. No one ever accused Branchstar of being sane. [ WIP ] ---End of Intro 2---
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Post by Scarpath on Aug 12, 2016 22:09:16 GMT -5
i can't wait to read what you've all come up with!!
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Post by Deleted on Aug 12, 2016 23:11:03 GMT -5
I love the start of your intro Fea X3
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Post by Sand 🎃 on Aug 12, 2016 23:23:08 GMT -5
^^ as do I
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Post by Scarpath on Aug 12, 2016 23:26:38 GMT -5
ooh, it's very interesting and well-written! i also like it a lot.
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Post by Deleted on Aug 12, 2016 23:29:01 GMT -5
I ned some help I have no idea what to do my intro on, I don't want to dogs for WindClan. I don't know what to do DX
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Post by Scarpath on Aug 12, 2016 23:39:26 GMT -5
so we're trying to think of, like, a plot point for the Clans? Cyn, if you need help with WindClan's, i can lend some ideas.
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Post by Deleted on Aug 12, 2016 23:47:50 GMT -5
A little bit? I don't think they have too? But yes I would love some idea's X3
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Post by Scarpath on Aug 12, 2016 23:49:17 GMT -5
can i get a brief rundown of what the other Clans are doing, if anyone's saved it? i'm sure i could find it somewhere, but i'm a bit busy right now. if not, i'll go searching for it.
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Post by Deleted on Aug 12, 2016 23:58:24 GMT -5
-shrugs- I have no idea, to be honest. I understand I'm gonna probably head off gonna play a few games and stuff.
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Post by Scarpath on Aug 13, 2016 0:16:57 GMT -5
alright, i'll be thinking and hunting for ideas as you do!
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Post by Sand 🎃 on Aug 13, 2016 0:23:18 GMT -5
can i get a brief rundown of what the other Clans are doing, if anyone's saved it? i'm sure i could find it somewhere, but i'm a bit busy right now. if not, i'll go searching for it. Basically this-- ThunderClan, ShadowClan and WindClan are in on a plot that deals with parasites and bugs that'll spread a sickness. RiverClan has a murder plot where the medicine cat begins killing cats. SkyClan doesn't have a plot we know of yet.
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Post by Scarpath on Aug 13, 2016 0:27:15 GMT -5
hmm, so WindClan already kinda has their plot? i was thinking they didn't have one yet. i don't think Cyn is on, or i would ask her, but what kind of ideas are still needed for WindClan - or any of the Clans, that is?
thanks for your help!!
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Post by Deleted on Aug 13, 2016 1:14:05 GMT -5
OOOOH I'M SORRY I MISUNDERSTOOD THE QUESTION XDDD I THOUGHT YOU MEANT INTRO IDEA'S I'M SO SORRY SCAR! XDDD
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Post by Deleted on Aug 13, 2016 1:42:24 GMT -5
Rain and I won't be on much on the forums tomorrow.
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Post by Featherwing on Aug 13, 2016 10:39:58 GMT -5
RIGHT. So for the most part, Rain and I worked out the kinks of SkyClan's plot, which has quite a bit to do with RiverClan early on. [ Also I've kind of fallen in love with Branchstar, I dunno if I want to kill him anymore ; _ ; ]
SkyClan is missing both a deputy and a medicine cat. The deputy– well, Branchstar keeps forgetting to appoint one. The medicine cat hasn't been dead for long but it's been long enough that with winter coming it's dangerous to go for much longer without one. The former healer never had the chance to appoint an apprentice before they died, figuring they'd have more than enough time. So, Stormtrail is sent to SkyClan's ally– RiverClan, to learn from Crowstumble. Meanwhile, SkyClan is having a bit of trouble within, presumably some are fed up with Branchstar's scatterbrained ways. I'm imagining a couple of the young, hot headed warriors are getting angry that not only is there no clear successor, but that SkyClan is falling apart at the seams because of Branchstar's failing mental health. I'm thinking the old man has a form of Alzheimers– he's forgetful, can't remember what he'd been doing, personality changing, volatile reactions, odd behavior and needs to be constantly watched in case he wanders off. Regardless, most of the clan gets turned over to their side and presumably there are only a handful loyal to Branchstar.
Eventually, definitely before he completes his training, Stormtrail is summoned back because something has happened to Branchstar. [ I'm thinking murder? A coup? Either way, Branchstar is either murdered or displaced. ] There is a vote of sorts for candidates for leadership and Storm is appointed leader. But they still have no medicine cat and Storm hasn't appointed a deputy yet so the same problem as before. There still is a problem with the hot heads because the ringleader might have coveted the leadership position for themselves even though they weren't even eligible to be a candidate. I'm also thinking that there is a shortage of young cats, presumably apprentices, which makes the whole medicine cat thing an even bigger problem.
[ Rain said around this time is the Crowstumble thing, so when SkyClan goes back to RiverClan wondering if they could train a younger cat to be medicine cat– well, we didn't get much farther than that in discussing. ]
PLEASE feel free to add things/change things/inquire more. I've just got this basic outline that's still got a TON of gaps.
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Post by Fallen Stars on Aug 13, 2016 11:05:16 GMT -5
I really like the whole plot idea for Skyclan Fea~ o: If you don't want to kill off Branchstar yet then I'd suggest doing the coup, so maybe he's forced to step down and become an elder?
Also for the intro things I see people working on, are those the introductions that people will see in the beginning? So I'm assuming they are more for the what plot is going on?
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Post by Featherwing on Aug 13, 2016 11:07:19 GMT -5
I might just keep that "prompt" part for the intro everyone will see. Not sure if I'm liking the huge "rp-like" section.
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Post by Featherwing on Aug 13, 2016 11:08:27 GMT -5
That would definitely be a route to take, I'll keep that in mind Thanks Fall!
Also yeah, it's what people see when they first open the page.
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