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Post by ʀᴀɪɴʟᴇᴀғ 🍁 on Aug 9, 2016 9:21:26 GMT -5
So, I'll be updating the rules again today. Hopefully it'll go through.
I'll also be working on layouts and seeing what looks good and is the easiest.
I need to do my intro and rewrite the summary for the plot.
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Post by Featherwing on Aug 9, 2016 9:46:49 GMT -5
Mmkay
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Post by ʀᴀɪɴʟᴇᴀғ 🍁 on Aug 9, 2016 10:04:43 GMT -5
Why is photobucket so slow? ;-;
So.. Ideas for intros? I have none and I don't want the typical RiverClan flood or an intro hinting towards the plot.
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Post by Featherwing on Aug 9, 2016 10:07:23 GMT -5
//rubs hands// let me take a crack at it while you work? I'll just come up with a barebones structure you can manipulate around.
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Post by ʀᴀɪɴʟᴇᴀғ 🍁 on Aug 9, 2016 10:08:37 GMT -5
Alright, thanks, Fea!
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Post by Featherwing on Aug 9, 2016 10:21:55 GMT -5
Mmmmkay. So, there's always this sort of intro:
The light is blinding as it filters into the den. You blink, hazy with sleep, or was it something else? Are you awake? Are you even here? Where is here, anyway? Looking around, the world is shiny, with tiny dancing globes. Dust, your mind conjures the word. The walls are.. plants? The ground beneath you, moss. A nest. You are in the medicine den. Why? An accident? Your mind stutters the response. You remember... You are RiverClan. Born of reed and rain, strengthened by the river that nourishes. But who are you?
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Post by ʀᴀɪɴʟᴇᴀғ 🍁 on Aug 9, 2016 10:31:33 GMT -5
So amnesia...
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Post by Featherwing on Aug 9, 2016 10:36:26 GMT -5
And then there's this:
"Time to wake up, it's morning" A sweet voice coos into the darkness. A kernel of light blinks into existence, far off from where you are. You pad towards it and more voices bounce in the shadows, "Silly, the sun is up so you should be too!" "Wakey wakey!" "GET UP! We have to move!" "Wake up, it's time for training." "–WAKE UP!" "Moon of my life, the sun is awake–" An endless sea of voices, rough and smooth, warm and cold, high pitched chirps and deep growls, all swarming the void around you like invisible smoke. Giggles and shouts twist in a tight, violent circle around your ears, closing in as your walk speeds up, anxious for something. For what? You're not sure. That first voice again, so loving that it fills your soul with a sort of giddy laughter and you start to run. "Wake up my sweet one, my baby. Time to open those beautiful eyes." You reach the light and blink into the bright world. "Good morning, my dearest love" Your mother purrs, and your life begins.
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Post by ʀᴀɪɴʟᴇᴀғ 🍁 on Aug 9, 2016 10:50:30 GMT -5
I may do the amnesia intro. I think I have the perfect cat for that, too. Thanks for the help!
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Post by Featherwing on Aug 9, 2016 10:51:05 GMT -5
It's kind of like a "customize your character!" sort of thing. You could work it however you'd like, it's just an example.
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Post by Featherwing on Aug 9, 2016 10:56:00 GMT -5
Glad I could help
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Post by ʀᴀɪɴʟᴇᴀғ 🍁 on Aug 9, 2016 11:07:50 GMT -5
I see it more as a very helpful prompt. :3
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Post by Featherwing on Aug 9, 2016 11:11:02 GMT -5
..ooooooh! Didn't think of it that way! Cool okay that works even better!
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Post by Deleted on Aug 9, 2016 12:47:27 GMT -5
Hello X3
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Post by Sand 🎃 on Aug 9, 2016 15:00:58 GMT -5
Hiii ~
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Post by ʀᴀɪɴʟᴇᴀғ 🍁 on Aug 9, 2016 19:27:18 GMT -5
This will obviously need to be edited and such.
Awaking to the evening song of cicadas, the RiverClan leader's vision blurred at first wink. It focused after the ginger tom blinked away the sleep, but he still felt the strong lure of resting more. The thoughts of wandering of to dreamland instantly faded at the harsh pain at the back of his head. The tom winced, gritting his teeth to suppress a yowl. His tightly shut eyes opened as he pushed through the pain and surveyed his surroundings. "Reeds." he noted. His eyes glowed with confusion, concentration, and determination as he tried to piece together something. Allowing his thoughts to be let go, the RiverClan cat tried to sit up. His strong front legs wobbling in a vain attempt to do so. They gave out, and he landed back onto the feather and moss nest with a soft thud. The sound was surely enough to alert the waiting cats outside of the den.
Padding into the den, a pale ginger tabby gazed softly at the tom with green eyes. Her fur was messy and her muzzle was tinged gray. The RiverClan she-cat looked worn and weary, as if she had not gotten enough sleep the night prior. Following closely behind, a brown tabby peered around, blue eyes wide with worry. She was much younger than the ginger tabby by several seasons. The brown tabby stepped out from behind the elder cat's shadow and tried to put on strong front. Her eyes betrayed her, as she still looked down worryingly.
"Morningstar, how do you feel?" the ginger she-cat rasped softly. Her green eyes flickered to the bundle of cobwebs at the back of Morningstar's head. His ginger fur had clumps of cobweb all over, all freshly changed. The signs of battle were obvious. The RiverClan leader looked up at the she-cat, puzzled by her questions. He stuttered, then clamped his mouth shut to form an answer. Before he could do so, the brown tabby spoke.
"Tawnyfern. Something isn't right. How he hit that rock, how he's looking at us.." she broke off, hanging her head as she looked at the ground with concern. Only her eyes looked up, meeting the amber gaze of the RiverClan leader. Tawnyfern gaze a comforting glance at the young she-cat. A slight flicker of the same worry appeared in her eyes. The two were thinking the same thing.
"Morningstar, where are you?" she asked, turning back to the leader. All warmth had vanished and her expression turned cold with a serious air. "Who are you parents? And who is this lovely warrior next to me?" Tawnyfern continued on. The shadows of the den grew darker as a moment passed. The time seemed to drag on before the tom could answer.
The ginger tom attempted to answer, trying hard to remember. He remembered being born to Flameheart and Speckledshell. He was the only surviving kit of his litter. The two were quite proud of him, as he showed bravery and determination. The ginger tom looked up at the brown tabby as she began to speak.
"Morningstar, you became leader a few seasons ago. I was a kit. Remember? Then you gave me my warrior name and after Sunstream died, you made me deputy. You must be kidding about not remembering. It's not funny, everyone is worried about you. We lost Sunningrocks to ThunderClan. We had to retreat because-" the brown she-cat spewed.
"Enough." Tawnyfern hissed. "I get that you're young and have a lot to learn. You're no where near ready to lead, but given his current state, he might not be able to anymore. Now calm down as we figure this out." the she-cat's words were followed by silence. Morningstar had no idea what was going on. "What's wrong with my current state? Everything is fine!" The pain he had become distracted from crept back, making the tom wince again. He thought long and hard about what they told him. As he became consumed with his thoughts, the two she-cats arguing attracted the attention of the Clan. RiverClan quickly became aware of Morningstar's condition.
"Morningstar!" The ginger tom stared ahead, still thinking. "Morningstar!" He shook his head and looked up at the brown she-cat calling his name.
He stared at her, blinking. His voice was strong as he answered her. "I'm not Morningstar. My name is Morningwatcher."
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Post by Sand 🎃 on Aug 9, 2016 19:32:30 GMT -5
*-* Holy wow, Rain.. Your introduction is amazing! I really like how you took the amnesia idea Fea gave you and spun it.
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Post by Featherwing on Aug 9, 2016 22:09:12 GMT -5
O_O i love it.
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Post by Deleted on Aug 10, 2016 14:14:06 GMT -5
You did a wonderful job Rain X3
And I'm really sorry for not being on yesterday we lost phone and internet. So there are two possibilities when the guys from AT&T came out to change the wiring they have accidently sliced ours or our router is bad. So hopefully when I return home tonight our internet and phone is working. Currently I'm at my boyfriends house.
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Post by Deleted on Aug 10, 2016 16:53:59 GMT -5
Possible SkyClan Landmarks?
SkyClan Camp - SkyClan's camp is surrounded by large trees that cover the camp. The grounds of the Clan are covered in rich soft grass; this clan is easy to defend.
Large Boulder- This is for apprentices to practice climbing before moving onto trees it's close to a row of tree's although apprentices are not allowed to climb trees without their mentors and/or warriors.
This is all I got from Cloudstar's Journey although, I may re-read it in case I missed some other potential landmarks. Just let me know what you think of what I have down!
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Post by Sand 🎃 on Aug 10, 2016 17:07:34 GMT -5
I like these landmarks; I don't think we need anything overdone or complicated. The camp could have like a tree where the leader announces meetings and what not from o3o. Great job, Cyn!
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Post by Deleted on Aug 10, 2016 17:11:53 GMT -5
Hmmm good point X3 and thanks! If I have any idea's I'll probably post them X3.
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Post by Featherwing on Aug 10, 2016 17:54:36 GMT -5
👍
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Post by Deleted on Aug 10, 2016 17:58:47 GMT -5
Ello X3 how are you?
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Post by Featherwing on Aug 10, 2016 18:11:49 GMT -5
Goood, and you?
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Post by Deleted on Aug 10, 2016 18:16:28 GMT -5
I'm good, just waiting for my boyfriend to get done eating. We may do something afterwards when he is done.
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Post by Featherwing on Aug 10, 2016 18:35:06 GMT -5
Nice! Have fun! I'm just cooking some spaghetti and doing a quick paint.
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Post by Deleted on Aug 10, 2016 18:37:07 GMT -5
Mhm X3 I will. I'm gonna get off and go I'll back on later hopefully.
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Post by Featherwing on Aug 10, 2016 19:18:08 GMT -5
WAIT. THE RULES! Did someone put something in there about No Kit-stealing, or styling or herb stealing/styling?
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Post by peach ⋆ on Aug 10, 2016 19:26:20 GMT -5
Hey guys. I'm really sorry to say this but I think I can't be a helper anymore. I'm going through a lot of personal stuff right now and I think it's in my best interest to disconnect myself from technology, so to speak. If everything clears up I would really like to be a part of this roleplay later as a non-helper member but for now I have to focus on myself and my responsibilities. I hope you all understand..
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