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Post by Novi on Aug 25, 2020 18:57:04 GMT -5
bringing 'this' back to the forums O.O
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Post by Deleted on Aug 26, 2020 15:17:51 GMT -5
I love the story so far! I honestly don't know who I love more, Kodiak or Evankhell. I can't wait for part three! cx
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Post by Novi on Aug 29, 2020 12:46:58 GMT -5
thank you Fallow :3 maybe as you read more you can decide a favorite. haha
part 3 is up ^-^
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Post by Deleted on Aug 29, 2020 13:23:15 GMT -5
Ooo, Gideon is creepy. It's interesting that the mutated animals all have their own Gathering, of sorts.
And Grace's attribute is so cool! I always thought telekinesis (I'm assuming that's what it is) would be such an interesting ability to have cx
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Post by Novi on Aug 29, 2020 13:31:23 GMT -5
It's meant to resemble warrior cats in structure since I am posting it in the warriors fanfic forum ^-^ not just that the main character is a cat. Lol
Yup. Telekinetic :3
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Post by Novi on Aug 31, 2020 17:23:20 GMT -5
part 4 is up. I'm messing with the format a bit. tell me what y'all think.
i also added a poll and a regional map.
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Post by Deleted on Aug 31, 2020 18:17:42 GMT -5
I like the new format! c:
And oooh, I wonder what Gideon's plans are...
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Post by Novi on Sept 4, 2020 17:24:00 GMT -5
part 5 is up. and thus ends Evankhell's first day in Sherwood. which female do you prefer so far? Grace or Mahila?
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Post by Deleted on Sept 4, 2020 17:52:08 GMT -5
I think I like Grace just a bit more, but Mahila is really cool too!
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Post by Novi on Sept 4, 2020 18:42:51 GMT -5
Poor Mahila. Lol. Maybe you'll like her better later xD next part should be the end of chapter one
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Post by mintedstar/fur🦇 on Sept 7, 2020 16:08:41 GMT -5
Oooo! Just from the banner I am in. Very dramatic.
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Post by Novi on Sept 7, 2020 16:18:40 GMT -5
i mean, it is a post apocalyptic story xP hopefully you like it~
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Post by mintedstar/fur🦇 on Sept 7, 2020 16:22:48 GMT -5
Even better!
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Post by Novi on Sept 9, 2020 20:13:17 GMT -5
Well my computer has gone to poop so I might not be able to update for a while. We'll see if my baby tablet can do it, but normally whenever I try to write on it my coding goes wonk
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Post by mintedstar/fur🦇 on Sept 16, 2020 14:19:01 GMT -5
That's unsurprising, sadly. Proboards is a bit finicky about coding. *pats*
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Post by Novi on Sept 20, 2020 22:16:47 GMT -5
my computer has held on long enough for me to get part 6 up. More powers have been revealed and Evankhell has been granted safe passage between the different groups for one month what do YOU think the differences in ideology between the groups will be? additionally, i've been thinking about how i'll be writing in the future. in case it weren't obvious, i've been trying to stick to a warrior-esque vocabulary. ie: twolegs, dens, etc. but i've decided that, ultimately, it's not worth it to continue with this style. as the series continues and I introduce more species and the like, I just don't want to struggle to find a creative way of describing these things from a cat's perspective versus, say, a lizard's. because it's not necessarily a major part of the story. yes, they are animals. but the main narrator is a human owned cat. and these animals are now much more intelligent than what we, as actual humans, think of them to be. this will also make writing easier for me because i don't have to worry about whether or not a cat would know what X is or worry about how differently a cat and a fox would describe something. i'll still probably keep terms like leaders, deputies, gathering, denmates, etc. but you'll see me start to refer to dens as houses. younglings will start to become just children. i won't refer to the towns as camps or anything like that. it will just make it easier for me to stay consistent because ive already bounced between styles. at this point in time, what matters to me and most likely you as well, is the plot. so i don't want to waste time on terminology. maybe into the far future when the story is all said and done, i'll reword stuff and try to take a more animal perspective and turn each animals' P.O.V into something unique. i do intend to eventually back edit the past couple chapters for consistency purposes as well. just figured i'd say something so that way y'all don't get confused when things are different in the coming chapters also, while i'm making changes to the way i'm doing this story, would y'all prefer to see chapters as a whole or chapters as parts like i've been doing? the only difference is reading. you'll be getting larger chunks of text in one go if i take it chapter-by-chapter.
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Post by mintedstar/fur🦇 on Sept 23, 2020 16:46:51 GMT -5
I love how much consideration you're putting into the world!
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Post by Deleted on Sept 23, 2020 18:09:33 GMT -5
I like having the chapters broken up into parts, just because it's easier to read than everything all at once
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Post by Novi on Sept 25, 2020 20:36:33 GMT -5
thank you Mint and Fallow for motivating me to keep going small comments make all the difference to me~ chapter 2 part 1 is now up! my intentions for each chapter is to have most of it be in Evankhell's P.O.V but there will be one chapter from a different one. the potential 'guest narrators' are all picked out before hand, but which one you actually get will be up in the air for a number of chapters until i actually start to write that part. i know the chapter just started and i haven't introduced another potential narrator yet, but what are y'alls thoughts so far? do you think you'd be interested in bouncing back to Grace and seeing how Sherwood is doing or taking a look into the mind of a Restless resident? let me know
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Post by mintedstar/fur🦇 on Sept 28, 2020 17:51:14 GMT -5
You got this!
Also, the idea of guest narrators is great!
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Post by Deleted on Sept 28, 2020 19:27:32 GMT -5
Of course, I love the story so far! c:
As for POVs, I personally liked Grace's because I feel like she has a rather mysterious character and it would be interesting to learn more about her. But at the same time I wouldn't mind hearing from someone in Restless Shire!
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Post by Novi on Sept 28, 2020 21:38:52 GMT -5
chapter 2 part 2 is up! this part is a bit longer than the past ones. Evankhell finally has answers as to what drove the groups to split in the first place. nothing like leader conflict to send people their separate ways. what are your thoughts on each leader's stance? which one would you follow if you had to choose? i decided to change Arlo's name to Dimitri and gave the name "Arlo" to a new character, so dont be confused. i went back and changed it in part 1 as well. New-Arlo is a guest narrator so let me know which P.O.V you want next: Arlo or Grace? again, which one you choose wont affect the plot. it'll just change what parts of the story you'll get. edited in: ive changed the thread's poll. also, i havent mentioned the character list in a while. are you up to date with it?
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Post by Novi on Sept 29, 2020 12:33:42 GMT -5
chapter 2 part 3 is now up ^-^
ive been feeling good about the story lately and im excited to get to where i want to be which means ive been binge writing. lol. next chapter will take a break from Evankhell's P.O.V so be sure to vote on who you want to see. unless you dont have a preference 0-0 ill give it a couple days before picking
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Post by Deleted on Sept 29, 2020 19:04:04 GMT -5
Ooh, backstory! Honestly, I think I'd stay in Sherwood; Restless Shire seems too militaristic for me xP
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Post by Novi on Sept 29, 2020 20:43:04 GMT -5
I probably would too tbh. Lol. But we'll see what you make of the moonlit villa :3 What are your thoughts on arlo's appearance? I think he looks the cutest so far
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Post by Deleted on Sept 29, 2020 22:22:38 GMT -5
I love how Arlo looks! And the idea of being able to make shields is really cool xD
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Post by Novi on Sept 30, 2020 2:37:07 GMT -5
It's based off his namesake, Arlo from UnOrdinary. Although that Arlo is anything but weak 😏
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Post by mintedstar/fur🦇 on Oct 2, 2020 21:57:55 GMT -5
I see those sneaky eyes.
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Post by Novi on Oct 4, 2020 22:04:06 GMT -5
Me? Sneaky? never
My new laptop is due to arrive Saturday so y'all can expect updates then :3
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Post by mintedstar/fur🦇 on Oct 5, 2020 0:44:28 GMT -5
Awesome! Hope you enjoy your new laptop!
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