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Post by Deleted on Jun 15, 2020 14:04:55 GMT -5
Night was cold. The grass felt wet from all the rain that poured. Outside from a cave a tall, gray Tom with one torn ear, and blue eyes waited outside of the den staring at the grass. The stars were shining making the sky more beautiful. A black she cat with purple eyes walked out of the den. "Congrats rushfur! You 're mate deleiverd two toms and one she kit." The black she cat announced happily. Rushfur stood up "may I see the kits?" He meowed softly. " yes of course! Though be careful you're mate is very tired. " the black she cat warned. Rushfur nodded "thanks darkpelt." Rushfur padded into the den. The air was fill with a milky scent. A light Gray she cat with a white tip tail and eyes closed laid in the den. Three kits suckled one was a dark gray tom, the second was a black Tom with a white tip tail, the last was a white she kit. The light Gray she cat opened her Orange eyes. "What do you think of them?" She asked quietly. Rushfur's eyes were brighten with joy. " t-their perfect... " rushfur meowed softly. The gray she cat looked up at rushfur. " I named them myself. This dark gray tom is stonekit, this black Tom here is nightkit, and last.. This she kit is snowkit. " rushfur smiled "those names are beautiful.." He meowed. "You did well lightstep" rushfur congrated. Lightstep purred softly then her eyes closed. As rushfur was about to leave he noticed darkpelt sitting in the right corner almost near lightstep staring at the white she kit. Rushfur tilted his head "anything on you're mind darkpelt?" Rushfur asked. Darkpelt glanced back at rushfur "no nothing is wrong" she answered. Darkpelt glanced back at the kits "you're kits are great" darkpelt meowed. Rushfur couldn't help something was on darkpelt's mind.
"What could it mean?" Rushfur thought.
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Post by Deleted on Jun 15, 2020 17:37:33 GMT -5
"My turn!" Nightkit mewed. Nightkit ran over to stonekit and pinned him. " You're it! " nightkit mewed happily. Snowkit sat beside the elders den watching as nightkit and stonekit played. Stonekit paused "this is boring we should play a different game!" He mewed. Snowkit ran to them " we should play clans! " snowkit mewed excitedly. Nightkit smiled "ok I'll be shadowclan leader!" He mewed puffing out his chest. " no fair! You were shadowclan leader last time I want to be shadowclan leader! " stonekit protested. Nightkit glared at stonekit. "I'm the bravest out of all of you I should be shadowclan!" Snowkit padded between the two. "I'll be riverclan leader!" Snowkit mewed. Stonekit paused. " why would you want to be riverclan they swim and eat fish?! " stonekit questioned. As nightkit was about to speak lightstep ran between them. "Look at you three! You're fur is messed up I just cleaned you three!" Nightkit paused. " But why should we get clean is it so important? " nightkit qeustioned. Lightstep glared at the three "yes it is important! You three are becoming apprentices today!" Lightstep meowed flicking her ear. " Apprentices!? " stonekit meowed happily. "I've always wanted to be a medicine cat apprentice!" Stonekit mewed hopping up and down. Nightkit glared " medicine cat?.. That's boring I'm becoming a warrior! " snowkit looked up a lightstep "Apprentices today!?" Snowkit thought. As lightstep was about to speak she was interrupted with a call. " all warriors old and young come together beneath the stone edge for a clan meeting! The leader hawkstar called. Hawkstar was a brown Tom with one white paw and green eyes. Every cat came the elders sat near their dens watching. The medicine cat sat beneath the stone edge while the queens sat at the entrance of the nursery with kits watching eyes found with curiosity. The rest of the warriors gathered beneath the stone edge. Lightstep sat next to her mate rushfur. The three kits sat next to each other. Stonekit looked exited, nightkit looked calm, snowkit watched the leader stand on the stone edge. "I wish I was leader one day" snowkit thought to herself. Hawkstar raised his tail for silence. "Today we bring you here with three special kits!" Hawkstar meowed. " Two warrior apprentices and one medicine cat apprentice"! Snowkit gaze was kept on hawkstar. "Stonekit come here"! Hawkstar called out. Stonekit ran near the stone edge enough to see his leader. "Stonekit until you earn your medecine cat name you're name will be stonepaw!" hawkstar dipped his head to darkpelt. " Darkpelt will be you're mentor. " darkpelt dipped her head I promise I will teach him well " darkpelt meowed. Darkpelt and stonepaw greeted each other and dipping their heads to each other. "Stonepaw stonepaw stonepaw!" The cats yoweld. Hawkstar then turned to snowkit and nightkit. "Snowkit and nightkit until you both get your warrior names you two will be known as nightpaw and snowpaw!" Hawkstar dipped to two cats near him. One was tigerstripe a Orange cat with black stripes and yellow eyes. The other was foxrush a black cat with orange eyes. "Foxrush you will mentor snowpaw and as for nightpaw tigerstripe will mentor you!" Snowpaw greeted foxrush. " I know you will be a great apprentice. " she meowed calmly. Nightpaw greeted his mentor tigerstripe. "Snowpaw nightpaw snowpaw nightpaw!" The clans yoweld. Snowpaw felt proud . "I promise I'll not let my mentor down." Snowpaw promised herself"
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Post by Deleted on Jun 15, 2020 23:22:47 GMT -5
The ceremony was over all the cats were minding their business now. "I can't believe I'm a apprentice finally!" Snowpaw thought to herself. Snowpaws stomach growled. Snowpaw glanced near the freshkill pile. Snowpaw rushed over and searched through of what to choose. Snowpaw then picked a robin to eat. Snowpaw grabbed the prey all warm and soft and she sanked her teeth into the prey feeling fresh, warm meat. As snowpaw was finishing the bird she felt something touch her shoulder. Startled she turned to see a young Orange Tom with blue eyes staring at her. "Hello there! You must be the new apprentice!" The Orange Tom meowed greetfuly. "The name is speedpaw I became a apprentice two moons ago!" Snowpaw stared "you're an apprentice?" She meowed confused. Speedpaw nodded " I saw you're ceremony congratulations! " he meowed. "And are stonepaw and nightpaw you're siblings?" Speedpaw asked. Snowpaw nodded " if you want I can show you the apprentices den. " speedpaw meowed. Snowpaw glanced at the grass for a second then back at speedpaw. "Well ok then sounds intresting!" She meowed. Speedpaw flicked his tail happily. "Cool then well when you're finished with you're prey meet me at the bottom of the stone edge also clean yourself there are feathers mostly on you're face." He meowed teasingly but in a friendly way. Speedpaw ran back. Snowpaw went back to her prey. Two minutes later the bird was fully gone. Snowpaw removed all the feathers off her and looked for the stone edge. "He seems like a friendly cat." Snowpaw thought. Snowpaw finally found the stone edge. Under it was the Orange Tom speedpaw. " You're finally here! " speedpaw meowed happily. Snowpaw smiled back greeting him. Speedpaw turned "come then follow me!" He ran snowpaw got to her legs and ran though speedpaw ran so fast snowpaw tried to catch up " maybe his name should be speedfoot" snowpaw thought we she ran. Finally speedpaw halted. "We're here!" He meowed. The apprentices den was a bush but good enough for apprentices to fit through the Bush was also protected with thorns. Snowpaw stared at the den. "That den is covered in thorns what if it pricks a kit!?" She thought worried. Speedpaw stared at the den. " the thorns are my favorite part of the den cause they prick any enemy cat who dares lurk near it! " he meowed. "True" snowpaw thought. The two cats walked in the inside was a bit dark but more bright the den. "This is were we sleep it's comfortable and nice!" Speedpaw explained. Snowpaw glanced. "The smell here is weird and not so milky as the nursery den" she meowed. "Don't worry! You will get used to it!" He meowed. He took a step towards the entrance . It was growing darker and darker. "Its turning night I guess you're first training starts tommorow!" Snowpaw glanced at speedpaw. " Is it okay if we train together tomorrow? " snowpaw asked. Speedpaw looked down at his paws "wish I could but I have to train somewhere different cause in two days is my assesment" he meowed sadly. He glanced back at snowpaw "We're friends though right?" He asked. Snowpaw nodded . Speedpaw smiled. Speedpaw stood up and padded towards his nest. Snowpaw looked for a place to rest "hey snowpaw wanna sleep with me for tonight?" A voice called . Snowpaw glanced back and nightpaw was staring back at snowpaw. "Sure I geuss." She meowed . She padded towards nightpaw and laid next to him. Snowpaw stared at the ceiling of the den. "Already on my first day I made my first freind." Snowpaw thought to herself. She glanced at speedpaw his eyes closed shut. Snowpaw yawned "guess he is right I should get some rest for my first training tomorrow" she thought. She let another yawn escape and she closed her eyes shut.
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Post by Deleted on Jun 16, 2020 13:35:21 GMT -5
"Wake up mouse brain!" A voice woke up snowpaw. Nightpaw was standing near the entrance his eyes wide with alert staring at snowpaw. Snowpaw noticed the other apprentices were gone. " Snowpaw how long did you stay up!? " nightpaw meowed in alert. Snowpaw looked concern. "Not much?" She awnserd . "Well you're late! The other apprentices are training and you're still sleeping!" Nightpaw hissed. Snowpaw looked shocked. " now get you're lazy lump up and get going! " nightpaw meowed in anger Nightpaw padded out the den. "Late but how?" Snowpaw thought. Snowpaw stood up and ran out the den. " Foxrush is going to kill me after this! " snowpaw thought in alarm. As snowpaw arrived foxrush was already waiting there "You slept in didn't you?" Foxrush meowed calmly. Snowpaw nodded slowly. Foxrush padded up to her " well since I'm a bit soft on young cats I'll give you another chance but if you're late again I'll have to send you to the elders den to pick ticks" foxrush meowed. Snowpaw almost barfed at thinking of picking ticks off for the elders. "Now come you're training starts now." Foxrush finished turned her back and padded lifting her tail for snowpaw to come. Snowpaw walked with foxrush they were heading towards the forest. " Why are we heading to the forest? " snowpaw thought. Two minutes later foxrush halted. "We're here" she meowed. "Are we gonna see the other clans" snowpaw meowed. Foxrush looked a tiny stunned. "No plus it's against the warrior code to trespass on other clan territorys." Foxrush explained. " anyway were in the forest to teach you how to hunt prey. " foxrush meowed. Snowpaw felt a prick of joy in her "hunting seems fun" she thought. "So do you smell anything odd?" Foxrush questioned . Snowpaw sniffed in the air smelling nothing but the forest "no" snowpaw meowed. "Keep sniffing" foxrush meowed. Snowpaw kept sniffing the air till she smelled something a bit odd "I smell something" snowpaw meowed. Foxrush nodded "that smell is mouse they are the easiest prey to catch" foxrush explained. Snowpaws ear pricked up she heard rustling near some leafs that laid next to a tree. Two seconds later brown pelt shows and a mouse pops out from behind a leaf holding a nut to eat. Foxrush nodded to snowpaw "try and catch it" foxrush meowed. Snowpaw crouched a bit and slowly walked towards the mouse. The mouse still chewed on the nut. But as snowpaw got more closer she stepped on a leaf which made a loud crunch sound. The mouse turned eyes shown fear and as quick as that the mouse runs away. Snowpaw hissed in annoyance. Foxrush padded near snowpaw "try making sure you watch were you step." Foxrush meowed. Snowpaw nodded looking down. As foxrush and snowpaw padded through the forest snowpaw spotted a squirrel sitting near a tree. Snowpaw crouched low and stalked towards it but the squirrel noticed her and fled up the tree. Snowpaw glared at the floor in anger. For the past thirty minutes snowpaw kept hunting but kept missing. All of the prey snowpaw ever saw she kept making a mistake and kept missing her prey. Foxrush looked at the sky "well.. Maybe we can try again tomorrow let's head back to camp and try practicing combat moves" foxrush meowed. Snowpaw looked at foxrush and walked with her. As they kept walking snowpaw felt a prick of sadness and worry snowpaw thought "All the prey I ever saw I couldn't even catch just one am i bad at hunting?"
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Post by Deleted on Jun 16, 2020 16:24:50 GMT -5
"You missed you're prey again!" Foxrush exclaimed. It's been seven days since snowpaw became an apprentice though whenever snowpaw praticed hunting she kept failing. Snowpaw looked at foxrush "I'm sorry.." Snowpaw meowed in shame. Foxrush shook her head slowly " we should call it a day have a piece of prey from the pile " foxrush meowed walking away. Snowpaw padded to the pile. She grabbed a squirrel and headed towards the medicine cat den entrance with plenty of shade. Snowpaw laid down, sniffed the squirrel and took a bite. As snowpaw was munching on the squirrel stonepaw came from the medicine cat entrance and sat next to snowpaw. "How is warrior training going"? Stonepaw asked. "Fine.. Well maybe I've been doing great in combat but not so much in hunting" snowpaw meowed. Snowpaw had worry in her eyes " do you think hawkstar won't make me a warrior cause I can't hunt well? " snowpaw asked. Stonepaw stared at snowpaw "I'm sure he will make you a warrior hawkstar has a soft heart for apprentices." Stonepaw meowed. " and if it makes you more better tonight's our first gathering" stonepaw meowed excited. Snowpaw pricked her ears up "gathering?" She thought. "I understand if you don't wanna go hawkstar will gladly let you stay" stonepaw meowed. Snowpaw glanced at stonepaw "I guess I can go" she meowed. Stonepaw nodded in approval and left. an hour past the squirrel was finished and as snowpaw was resting a call some her up. "All cats young and old come here beneath the stone edge for a clan meeting!" Hawkstar called. Every warrior gathered around snowpaw stayed near the medicine den and watched all the cats gather. " it's time to go to the gathering all my warriors can come! " hawkstar announced. "As for the apprentices speedpaw,snowpaw,nightpaw you three can go" hawkstar meowed "fox dung!" A white cat with a black tail and yellow eyes exclaimed hawkstar ignored and continued "as for the elders and queens they can stay and keep an eye on the kits!" most of the kits looked disappointed while the elders and queens nodded. Hawkstar leaped from the stone edge and all the warriors followed. Snowpaw followed. The cats walked through the forest and finally made it to the gathering. Cats were already there they all stared at the thunderclan cats some with hostile in their eyes others with greeting. " Are they clan cats? " snowpaw thought uncomfortable. Snowpaw sat next to nightpaw and some random other cats. In front of them a huge boulder was there four cats stood there. "You new here?" A voice called in her ear snowpaw turned to see a young gray tom with blue eyes. " My name is swiftpaw. " he meowed greeting. "I'm snowpaw" she meowed. "cool! What clan are you from?" He asked " I'm from thunderclan you? " snowpaw meowed. "I'm from windclan though I hate being there" swiftpaw meowed. Snowpaw smiled "cause their skinny?" She joked swiftpaw smiled " no cause they hunt rabbits and run on the moor rabbits taste weird and I get very tired from running on moors" swiftpaw meowed. Snowpaw stared at the four cats on the boulder "so who are they?" She asked. Swiftpaw stared at the four cats " that black she cat with yellow eyes is darkstar she is the leader of shadowclan. That brown tall Tom with black stripes is longstar he is the leader of my clan windclan. That gray cat with white spots is splashstar he is the leader of riverclan and I'm pretty sure you know the thunderclan leader. " swiftpaw explained. Snowpaw nodded and then stared at some of the riverclan warriors "wow riverclan is really fat." She joked swiftpaw almost laughed. " Would you two shut up the leaders are speaking! " a windclan tom hissed. Swiftpaw flicked his tail in annoyance "that's dustclaw he must of swallowed a rotten mouse" swiftpaw meowed. Snowpaw giggled a bit. swiftpaw and snowpaw talked for a bit then finally all the four leaders jumped from the boulder to gather their cats. "Well the gathering is over but snowpaw will you meet me by the moor tonight?" Swiftpaw asked. Snowpaw thought for a while " okay I guess I can meet you there" she meowed smiling. Swiftpaw smiled back it was nice meeting you snowpaw bye! " swiftpaw ran to join his clanmates. Snowpaw walked with her clanmates walking through the moor.
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Post by Deleted on Jun 16, 2020 22:18:50 GMT -5
"And from this moment on snowpaw will be known as snowstep!" Hawkstar meowed " snowstep, nightleap, snowstep, nightleap! " the cats yoweld. Moons have passed since the gathering snowstep was finally a warrior of thunderclan. Every night when snowstep was a "paw" snowpaw and swiftpaw would meet at the moor every night and greet eachother. Later when every cat was fast asleep snowstep woke up. "Time to meet swiftpaw" snowstep thought. She stood up and left the warriors den. Snowstep ran through the forest and after a long run she was finally on the moor. Swiftpaw stood there looking more taller and older then when they first met at the gathering. Snowstep ran to swiftpaw "hey swiftpaw!" Snowstep greeted. " nice meeting you two by the way my name is now swiftspeed" swiftspeed meowed greeting. "I also earned my warrior name it's now snowstep" she meowed. Swiftspeed looked happy and shocked "congrats though I thought hawkstar would make you a medicine cat cause you can't hunt well" snowstep nodded "Well I guess hawkstar was soft on me" she meowed. Hawkstar was now on his final life hawkstar lost 9 of his lives even before snowstep was born one to a fox two to greencough another to a rouge and three more to a badger and one to blood loss in a battle against shadowclan. Now hawkstar only had one life left it hawkstar died then bluefoot would become the next leader. Snowstep looked on the ground sad. "Stonepaw my sibling told me hawkstar only had one life left" snowstep meowed swiftspeed looked worried "ouch I feel sorry for him" he meowed. Snowstep sighed. As snowstep was about to speak she noticed behide swiftspeed the sun was coming up snowstep looked alarmed. "I gotta return to my clan the cats will wake up soon in a hour" she meowed. Swiftspeed looked disappointed "come on can't you stay for long? We haven't got a chance to talk about how prey is going!" Swiftspeed meowed. Snowstep shook her head sadly " I would but sorry I'll see you tonight though. " swiftspeed nodded, snowstep touched noses with him and runs. Swiftspeed called in goodbye and ran through the moor. As snowstep was running through the forest a strange scent touched her nose. Snowstep halted and sniffed again the scent was a bit strong it didn't smell like prey or a clan cat. "A rouge scent!?" Snowstep thought in alarm. When snowstep was a kit she heard nursery tales about rouges how they were very dangerous and hostile and one time a rouge battle happend before she was born. Snowstep was alarmed. Snowstep then ran through the forest "I need to warn my clan about this rouge!" Snowstep thought.
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Post by Deleted on Jun 17, 2020 14:54:43 GMT -5
Snowstep ran through the forest, the forest was now light snowstep ignored the pricks of tiny sticks that poked her paws. "I must warn them!" She thought. Snowsteps kept smelling the scent of a rouge it was strong but as she ran to camp the scent kept fading till snowstep only smelled the forest and her camp. Finally she was back cats were around talking even hawkstar was up. Rushfur then spotted snowstep and ran to her " snowstep you're here were we're you at? " rushfur meowed in shocked and worry. Snowstep thought of an excuse "I was hunting" she lied though rushfur looked unconvinced. "Well I see you catched no prey plus it's early and you can only hunt when hawkstar tells you!" Rushfur groweld. lightstep ran between the two "rushfur calm down what matters is that she's back" Lightstep meowed. Rushfur glared at lightstep " she's a warrior not a kit she should know better then to run off like that! " rushfur hissed. Snowstep stared at rushfur her own father in shock. Snowstep then walked away from the two arguing cats and then spotted hawkstar talking to two cats. Snowstep ran to warn hawkstar. "So who will be hunting today?" The brown and black Tom meowed. " Today I will be hunting alone today. " hawkstar meowed snowsteps eyes widen in shock "not now!" Snowstep thought. The brown and black Tom worried a bit " are you sure hawkstar? We could hunt if you like" he meowed. "I know you're trying to be nice speedlight but I'm hunting alone for today" hawkstar meowed calmly. Snowstep felt as if her pelt would rise in fear of knowing that hawkstar only had one life left and that in the forest a rouge lurked around and hawkstar was going to hunt alone. Hawkstar padded out of the entrance and snowstep felt a prick of worry. Two minutes later without hesitation snowstep sneaked out of the entrance without anycat noticing. Snowstep quietly followed hawkstars trail scent finally after one minute she finally found hawkstar. Snowstep hid behind a bush and coverd her scent a bit. Hawkstar was crouching low and next to him were 2 mice and 1 bird. Snowstep sniffed the air and the rouges scent was stronger then ever. Then as snowstep watched hawkstar she noticed a figure stalking slowly towards hawkstar. Snowsteps eyes widen she wanted to yowl but it was to late the rouge striked at hawkstar knocking him over. The rouge hissed hawkstar got up and hissed back at the attacker. Hawkstar unsheathed his claws and flung himself to the attacker. But the rouge dodges his attack and hawkstar lands on some leafs. The rouge jumps at hawkstar and claws his back hawkstar yowls in pain and quickly shakes the attacker off. Blood was poring off from his back dripping to the grass. As the rouge flings himself to hawkstar to make another move hawkstar quickly dodges and the attacker lands on his feet in shock. Hawkstar then flings himself at the rouge clawing his ears. The attacker hisses and then the rouge claws at hawkstars back legs. Hawkstar yowls once more then the rouge pins hawkstar to the ground. Hawkstar was about to yowl but the attacker covers his mouth with his paw. The rouge uses his other paw claws out and finally the rouge deleivers the death blow on his neck. Blood spills from his neck and some cover on the attackers paw. The rouges paw was still covering hawkstars mouth. A tear rolled down hawkstars cheek and finally hawkstar layed still hawkstar was dead. Snowstep crouched behind the bush blinded by horror and fear. Hawkstars body laid there blood was poring from his neck. The rouge was licking blood off from his paw sastifaction was shown in his eyes. As quick as lightning snowstep ran she needed to warn the clan. Snowstep kept running and running not looking back she still kept thinking about hawkstars dead body. Finally she was back at camp she ran across the camp and finally stopped. Cats stared at her in confusion and worry nightleap ran to snowstep in confusion. "Snowstep what's wrong? We're is hawkstar?" Nightleap asked. Speedflight looked worried " strange hawkstar should've been back from hunting by now " speedflight meowed. As other cats began to question her snowstep then looked at the stone edge to see a tall figure standing there. As snowstep took a few steps to see who it was she realized it was the cat that killed hawkstar.
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Post by Deleted on Jun 17, 2020 19:12:35 GMT -5
Snowstep was horrified what stood on the stone edge was the rouge that killed hawkstar. Snowstep remembered how the rouge pinned hawkstar giving him the death blow to the neck while covering his mouth making hawkstar unable to yowl in pain. One by one all the clan cats noticed the rouge some were glaring most were hissing and little looked worried. The rouge was a dark brown tom with two black ears, a black striped tail and yellow eyes. The rouge took a step on the stone edge "hello cats my name is slashear" he spoke. Bluefoot took a step forward "why are you on our territory?" He spoke glaring. Slashear sneered " I've been watching you're clan for a while and I noticed how weak and pathetic you're leader was so I killed him" slashear meowed. All the cats gasped and some hissed in anger. Slashear ignored the responses and continued. "I could be a better leader then he ever was" he meowed then he turned serious "since you're leader is dead I will be leader I will rule you're clan but not the same way as that pathetic cat ruled it" slashear continued more " you will all obey me you will all respect my rules and never disobey me I will one day also rule the other clans but for now I will rule this clan" slashear meowed. Lightstep took a step forward "I'm not obeying you! You're not our leader!" She hissed. Slashear flicked his ear he looked calm then he jumped from the stone edge and walked towards lightstep. Snowstep looked worried. As slashear was close to lightstep he stared at her for a few seconds then as quick as lightning he unsheathed his claws and slashed lightsteps stomach open. Lightstep shreiked in pain eyes very wide. All the cats stared in horror "NO!" rushfur yowled. Snowstep stared in horror as lightstep was dying slowly slashear stared expressionless though snowstep spotted a glimpse of satisfaction in his eyes. Finally after two minutes lightstep layed still on the grass dead tons of blood was spilling from her stomach and guts were near lightstep. Slashear then turned to the other cats " this is what happens to cats who disobey me anyone else want to join her!? " slashear growled. Every single cat stared in horror and dared not make a move or sound. Slashear then continued "so if anyone disobeys me they will get killed or if you're lucky maybe hurt" slashear sneered. "For now on I will rule this clan!" He growled . Bluefoot stared at slashear in shock "but I'm hawkstars deputy I should be leader" he meowed. Slashear slowly turned to bluefoot and unsheathed his claws and narrowed his eyes "do you wish to end up like her?" He meowed quietly his tail pointing to lightsteps lifeless body. Bluefoot looked in horror and shook his head quickly slashear sneered " that's what I thought" he meowed mockling. Slashear then ran up to the stone edge and glared at every single cat "From now on starting today everyone will do as I say and I'll be sure to change most of the rules here have a nice day.." Slashear sneered. Snowstep stared in horror she knew this was the start of a new clan.
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Post by Deleted on Jun 18, 2020 9:55:18 GMT -5
So many things have changed ever since slashear took over the clan. Many cats were seen with wounds, limping, and starving. The fresh kill pile was low so every cat was starving. Slashear though had a huge pile of prey in his den though he only gives to the strong. Snowsteps belly was full with the bird she just had she glanced at all the other cats some were limping others were starving some looked more skinny then the rest. As snowstep was about to rest in her den she glimpsed a skinny white Tom walk in slashears den. Snowstep was worried so she followed the white Tom till she stopped and hid near the entrance. Inside slashears cave it smelled horrible it smelled like dirty bedding and rotting freshkill. Snowstep took a look near the entrance and spotted slashear laying on his bedding staring at the white Tom snowstep noticed how dirty his bedding was "does this cat ever take care of himself!?" Snowstep thought. Behind slashear was a huge pile of prey though snowstep saw that some of the prey was rotting no wonder the den smelled awful. " Leader we need to eat the freshkill pile is very low and all of us are starving if we continue to starve some of us will die" the white Tom meowed. Slashear flicked his ear "so? What do you want me to do about it?" Slashear meowed. The white tom glanced at the floor then back at slashear " can't you atleast spare some food for all of us? " the white Tom meowed. The white tom looked desperate though slashear stared at him then he unsheathed his claws and slashed the white toms eye out. The white tom yowled in pain half of his face was bleeding alot blood was dripping on the ground snowstep stared in horror "whiteheart!" Snowstep thought snowstep wished she could of helped slashear then took a step towards whiteheart " you dare come to my den just to ask for food!? " slashear growled. "You don't just ask me for food! You earn it by being the strongest but since you screamed in pain when I slashed you're eye out it seems you ain't strong yet so no food for you!" Slashear hissed the white Tom stared at slashear his paw covering his bloody face. " If you ever ask me this question again I'll take more then just your eye do you understand!? " slashear meowed. Whiteheart nodded and slashear stood up "good. Now I want you to go to rushfur and hunt on the moor" slashear meowed. Whiteheart eyes widen " but that's were windclan is its against the warrior code to trespass! " he meowed. Slashears eyes narrowed "I'm the leader now I make and change the rules!" He hissed. "Now get rushfur and hunt near the moor when you come back give it all to me and just maybe it you do a good job I'll give a piece of prey to you" he meowed. Whiteheart nodded and ran out the entrance. Snowstep was sneaking away until slashear noticed her " what were you doing hiding there!? " he meowed. Snowstep looked worried she was about to speak but was cut off but slashear "whatever anyway I like you to train the apprentices today claws unsheathe understood?" He meowed. Snowstep was shocked " but we're supposed to train with claws sheathed" she thought though she dared not backtalk to slashear and nodded slowly. Slashear nodded and went back into his den. Snowstep looked worried.
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Post by Deleted on Jun 18, 2020 18:45:34 GMT -5
Slashear padded near the entrance all the warriors and apprentices were behind the most of them were skinny some though were plump from freshkill. Slashear lifted his tail as he walked through the entrance the other warriors followed snowstep felt sick feeling that a rouge was going to be at a gather a killer rouge that killed lightstep and hawkstar. Snowstep padded through the trees all the other warriors followed three minutes later they finally reached the gathering were all the clans were there. Most of the warriors from other clans stared at some of the thunderclan warriors in shock.
"Why are they skinny?" " they should have plenty of prey to eat" "Are they having trouble with hunting?" Snowstep padded last through some cats and finally found swiftspeed. "Swiftspeed!" She called swiftspeed stared at snowstep in shock then happiness . "Snowstep it's good to see you! But.. Why haven't you visited me yet? Why are some of the thunderclan cats skinny? Who is that rouge?" Swiftspeed asked. Snowstep told swiftspeed everything about the rouge that killed hawkstar, how he took over the clan, and that slashear starved some of the cats swiftspeed looked shock. " I'm so sorry that all that happend! " swiftspeed meowed. Snowstep nodded then turned to the four leaders. Slashear stared at all the cats below with satisfaction in his eyes knowing he could rule all of them one day. Darkstar was about to speak then she noticed slashear and her eyes glared. "Who is that!?" She hissed the two other leaders noticed as well looking shocked and angry. Slashear ignored darkstar and stared at all the cats below. " I am slashear leader of thunderclan hawkstar is dead I killed him" he meowed. All the cats gasped some hissed the three other leaders looked shock. Longstar took a step towards slashear "wait shouldn't bluefoot be leader he was deputy before hawkstar?" Longstar meowed. Slashear hissed at longstar " I killed hawkstar I'm leader! " he hissed at longstar. Slashear then continued "since hawkstar was dead I became leader of thunderclan and since most of the rules were weak I changed most of them anyone who seems strong to me I give them freshkill while the weak can starve for all I care" he meowed. Darkstar hissed "You have no right to be leader!" She yowled. Slashear glared at darkstar then continued " since I made thunderclan strong I also want the other clans to join in if all the clans join we could be stronger then ever then all the kittypets and rouges could fear us we would be the most feared in the forest! " slashear yowled in satisfaction. Splashstar glared while longstar and darkstar hissed in anger. Slashear then turned to splashstar "splashstar will you combine your clan with ours you could be leader with me and rule our clan together plus we would also have a lot of fish" slashear meowed. Splashstar glared "what your doing is wrong even if I wanted to join I don't trust that you would make me leader still so no riverclan declines!" Splashstar meowed. All the riverclan warriors yowled in agreement slashear glared then turned to darkstar " what about you shadowclan is fierce thunderclan can use shadowclan in battles" slashear meowed. Darkstar hissed "join you!? I would rather die then join you! You killed hawkstar just to gain control and now you expect me to join shadowclan declines also!" Darkstar hissed once more. Slashear then finally turned to longstar "what about you windclan are fast runners they can catch prey and you would have first pickings in the fresh kill pile" slashear meowed longstar growled "why would I want to join you? You killed hawkstar my best friend I would never let windclan combine plus looking at you in pretty sure you would never let me pick first all you care for is for power windclan declines!" Longstar hissed. Slashear growled " fine! If all of you are gonna decline I will have to force you all to accept you all will regret the day you all declined my offer! " slashear hissed. Slashear then jumped from the huge boulder, gathered his warriors and ran from the gathering entrance. While snowpelt was walking through the forest she had a bad feeling that slashear would battle windclan first she worried he might kill swiftspeed or gain control in windclan.
CHAPTER 10 A day has passed since the gathering, everything was still different But not as bad as those other times.
Snowstep layed there staring at all the other cats All skinny all weak "I wish I could save my clanmates and get rid of slashear but I can't think how.." Snowstep thought .
Snowstep spotted slashear padding out his den bluefoot walked up to him "Should I send some hunting patrols?" Bluefoot asked. Slashear shook his head "no not now I have something important I just share with my clan" slashear meowed.
"It wasn't even his clan in the first place!" Snowstep thought growling to herself.
Slashear stepped on top of the stone edge "attention all cats may I gather your attention!" He meowed.
All the cats gathered around beneath the stone edge. Snowstep spotted a tiny bit of sastifaction in his eyes "What's he up to now?" Snowstep thought.
"As you all may know all the clans declined my deal and I refuse to let that slide! " slashear hissed in anger.
"It took me a while to decide which clan to go after for first and I finally choose...... Windclan!" Slashear meowed.
"Windclan!?" Snowstep thought " if slashear wins then windclan will join in his deal I must help windclan even swiftspeed! " snowstep thought.
Slashear continued "the reason why I choose windclan is cause they have plenty of rabbits to eat and more territory plus windclan will be easier to take over first their nothing but scared, skinny, little rabbits!" Slashear hisssd.
" Tomorrow at sunrise we raid all of you train tomorrow and don't kill windclan either we need them alive so we can make them join be prepared for tomorrow! " slashear hissed.
Slashear leaped from the stone edge and padded into his den. Snowstep stared at the ground in fear and shock.
"Ok so tommorow at sunrise they attack this gives me plenty of time to think of how to help windclan!" Snowstep thought
Tomorrow was a big day.
CHAPTER 11
"Wake up snowstep it's time!" Snowsteps eyes widen rushfur stood in front of her
"Get up snowstep! Everyone else is awake and were about to raid windclan now get up!" Rushfur hissed.
Snowstep glared at rushfur "Are you seriously gonna let slashear rule you!? He killed hawkstar and my mother!" Snowstep hissed.
Rushfur glanced down "I'm sorry but now that hawkstar is dead and slashear is leader we have no choice but to obey him" rushfur meowed.
Snowstep got up glaring at rushfur for a second then passing out the warriors den.
"No choice!? They do have a choice their just to afraid to make the right choice! " snowstep thought.
Slashear lifted his tail gathering all the warriors and apprentices even the newest ones.
Bluefoot glanced at slashear worried "sir are you sure you should take our newest apprentices they might die" bluefoot meowed.
Slashear glared at bluefoot "I can take any cat I want we need them for our raid!" Slashear hissed. Bluefoot nodded silently and gathered some other cats. Snowstep stood beside some of the warriors slashear glared at all the cats.
"Now today is our raid today! You all had time to train your all ready! If any of you disappoint me then I will be forced to train you harder!" Slashear hissed.
Slashear lifted his tail and all the warriors followed him they walked through the forest.
Snowstep could smell windclan by miles they were almost near. Finally they were on the moor They continued and finally windclans scent was strong they were here.
Slashear and some of the other warriors padded near the edge of their camp the windclan cats below and spotted The thunderclan warriors. "Longstar a raid thunderclan is here!" A black and white Tom called. Longstar padded out his cave and hissed at slashear "what do you want slashear!?" He hissed.
"This is your last chance longstar combine your clan with ours or we will make you!" Slashear hissed.
longstar glared "I think you just heard me wrong at that gathering I clearly said no and if we have to fight then so be it!" Longstar hissed. Slashear sneered "warriors attack!" He yowled lifting his tail all the thunderclan apprentices and warriors charged into windclan camp.
The battle begun it was now a blood bath warriors charged at each other.
Rushfur was fighting against a brown windclan tom
Snowstep padded across the windclan camp swiftspeed ran to snowstep his cheek had a bloody scratch on it.
"Snowstep why is thunderclan fighting us are you in on this!?" He meowed
" Not now I have an idea to save some of the windclan cats just gather the queens, kits, elders, and injured warriors and meet me back behide the medicine cat den! " snowstep hissed.
Swiftspeed nodded and ran
Snowstep padded behide the medicine cat den stepping on some grass coverd in warrior blood.
Snowstep hid behind the medicine cat den spotting all the warriors fighting.
Slashear was fighting against longstar, longstar was a bit bruised and his left ear was bloody and he has one cut on his paw
While slashear only had two scratches on his back and one scratch on his eye blood was dripping on the grass.
Meanwhile the rest of the warriors were fighting windclan looked strong while thunderclan was almost beaten.
Snowstep spotted swiftspeed with some elders, queens , kits and injured warriors some were limping.
"There I gathered some now take them to hide!" Swiftspeed meowed
" What about you!? " snowstep hissed swiftspeed glanced back "I'll be fine I promise now go take them!" He hissed.
Snowstep nodded she lifted her tail and all the cats followed her
Snowstep spotted a large tree trunk with a medium bush beside it.
"All of you can hide there follow me! " snowstep meowed
They all padded behide and crouched behind some of the elders and queens stared at her.
"Thank you so much" an elder croaked A queen nodded in agreement.
Snowstep watched the battle to on it took a while screeches filled the air of battling cats.
Slashear begin to notice most of his warriors were loosing
"Thunderclan retreat this is not over windclan!" Slashear hissed and yowled.
All the thunderclans began running away some were limping.
Snowstep ran with them and just like that battle was over.
CHAPTER 12
The battle with windclan was over, windclan has won. thunderclan was padding across the forest bloody and injured
slashear had three scratched on his back a scar on his left eye and a torn ear that was bloody. snowstep helped windclan a bit by hidimng the kits,elders,queens and really injured warriors.
finally thunderclan made it to camp,
stoneheart and darkpelt padded out of the den to treat some of the warriors.
snowstep watched with guilt as most of her clanmates even her family were getting treated with care "im sorry clanmates I had to help windclan from getting their clan destroyed!" snowstep thought.
snowstep spotted nightleap limping snowstep padded up to him "do you need any help?" snowstep asked him nightleap turned to snowstep "I dont need your help!" he hissed.
nightleap padded away snowstep glared at nightleap "i was just trying to help!" snowstep thought
"YOU!" a voice yowled at snowstep.
snowstep turned to see slashear glaring at her
slashear leaped at snowstep pinning her down claws digging into her chest.
"you little traitor! you helped windclan your supposed to be on my side you little traitor!" slashear hissed at snowstep.
cats gatherd around slashear and snowstep watching with shock and anger
"i had to help windclan you were gonna take over it!" snowstep hissed back filled with rage.
slashear glared at her then digging his claws deeper into her pelt more.
"Well mouse brain I hope your happy cause you made thunderclan loose and wounded and you even caused two of our apprentices to die thanks to you!" slashear hissed.
snowstep hissed in outrage "My fault are you bee brained!? you lead thunderclan into the battle and you say this is my fault! i did what was right if i didn't help then windclan would die and cats would be killed just like how you killed hawkstar and lightstep you're not loyal to this clan!" snowstep hissed.
slashear paused then sneered
"you realise you're not loyal to your clan either" slashear meowed.
snowstep paused "what do you mean?" she meowed in confusion
slashear continued "do you think im stupid? do you think i would not notice?" he meowed.
"i saw you the momment i killed hawkstar you were hiding behide a bush horrified and then you ran" snowstep gasped in shock "he saw me?" she thought in shock.
slashear continued "and i also saw you that other day when i slashed out whitehearts eye" slashear meowed.
every cat gasped in shock staring at snowstep
nightleap flattend his ears "is this true snowstep?' he meowed.
"it was all true and wanna know the worse part?" slashear asked "snowstep just stood there without helping at all!" slashear meowed making a fake gasp.
all the cats gasped more in shock "yes when i killed hawkstar she just stood there not attacking me she says im not loyal when really.... were both not loyal" he meowed.
snowstep glared for a second then lowerd her gaze "there was nothing i can do i wanted to stop him but i-" she was cut off as slashear glared at snowstep.
"snowstep since you betrayed me and your clan you are exiled!" slashear hissed
snowstep stared at him in shock
"since snowstep suffered enough for her actions I wont kill her ill let her leave in peace" he meowed.
slashear then turned to snowstep with his threatning glare "but the next time you come back snowstep i will make you suffer the most slowest and most painful death ever understood?"
snowstep gazed at him for a second then nodded "I understand.." she meowed.
slashear lifted his claws from snowpelt
" NOW GET OUT OF MY SIGHT BEFORE I KILL YOU!" slashear yowled and snowstep ran
snowstep had no clan now .
CHAPTER 13
snowstep was padding through the forest two hours have passed ever since snowstep was exiled from thunderclan.
It was hard being alone in the forest
as snowstep was walking she looked up
dark clouds were covering the sky "oh great it's going to storm how perfect" snowstep thought in annoyance.
snowstep looked for any empty dens to rest at sadly there were none
"I guess the only place i can rest at is at a clan" snowpelt thought with a prick of nervous.
snowstep padded through the forest and was now on the open moor
snowstep sat waiting for a patrol to come.
finally after five minutes of waiting four windclan cats ran through the moor and spotted snowstep
"intruder!" a black tom with purple eyes yowled.
the patrol padded to snowstep and a brown tom with green eyes and black spots on his back padded towards snowstep
"hello there white she cat, what brings you on our territory?" the brown tom meowed.
snowstep felt nervous for a second then finally spoke "I am snowstep from thunderclan I must speak with your leader" snowstep meowed.
the black tom bristled "thunderclan!? your clan attacked ours and your clan is now being led by a tyrant! your a spy lets drive her out!"
the black tom hissed.
The brown tom took a step between the two
"now hold on nightpelt this cat means no harm plus she did help our cats a bit" the brown tom meowed
nightpelt glared at the tom for a second then glanced on the floor
"your so soft on cats" he meowed.
the brown tom ignored him then turned to snowpelt "sorry about nightpelt he must of ate a shrew this morning, yes we will take you to longstar"
the tom meowed snowstep dipped her head.
the tom turned to the two other cats behide him a white and black she cat with green eyes
and a dark gray tom with orange eyes
"stonefoot, flightspeed come" the brown tom meowed flicking his tail
the two nodded and followed the brown tom.
snowstep followed the others "I hope longstar accepts me" snowstep thought.
CHAPTER 14 Snowstep and the others padded through the moor
it took a while and finally snowstep smelled windclan camp near.
finally after two minutes they were at windclan base
snowstep padded through camp
she watched as most of the windclan cats stared at her some were glaring.
"I helped some of their cats do they not remember?" snowstep thought glaring
snowstep and the others padded into longstar's den
longstar glanced at snowstep and dipped his head.
"Hello there snowstep, what brings you to windclan?" longstar meowed greeting
snowstep glanced at the floor for a second then back at him
she was about to speak when the brown tom interrupted her
"she wishes to speak to you sir" he meowed. snowstep glared at the tom for a second then glanced back at longstar dipping her head
"very well, what is it that you ask?" longstar meowed
snowstep took a step forward "I wish to join to you're clan!"
snowstep meowed.
stonefoot and flightspeed looked shock the brown tom stared at her in confusion
while nightpelt bristled a bit untrusting.
longstar's eyes widen a bit
"and why is that? I thought you were in thunderclan" longstar asked
snowstep glanced at the floor feeling a prick of sadness as she knew how her father and siblings still stayed in thunderclan
while she was the only cat exiled from her clan.
"I was exiled by slashear, I promise ill be loyal to you're clan please.. let me join"
snowstep begged she prayed to starclan that longstar would accept her.
finally after a few seconds of silence longstar finally spoke
"Well I feel sorry for you that you got exiled by that uncaring waste of space, and you did us a favor by hiding our queens and elders during the raid, I guess I can let you join windclan"
longstar meowed in agreement.
snowstep smiled a bit feeling happy she was in a real clan that was not being led by a cruel cat
"thank you longstar! I promise I wont let you down" snowstep meowed feeling a prick of pride.
Nightpelt glared at longstar "but she could be a spy sir! sure she helped our kits but maybe that-"
longstar glared at nightpelt and flicked his tail
nightpelt was about to speak but froze then he just said nothing.
"It will take time for the others to accept you but I promise we will help and protect you"
longstar meowed snowstep dipped her head she was finally in windclan.
CHAPTER 15
Snowstep padded through camp getting use to her new surroundings,
"windclan camp looks diffrent from my camp.." snowstep thought.
Snowstep stared at some of the other windclan cats near the fresh kill pile
some glared at her while others hissed at her including nightpelt,
"back at thunderclan camp cats treated me well..." snowstep thought then she glared at them "well these cats have to get use to me for a bit whether they like it or not!"
snowstep thought.
snowstep felt hungry so she padded to the freshkill pile
she liked birds the most though the pile had none
she guessed that there were no birds in windclan since there were no trees in windclan.
snowstep spotted a plump rabbit to eat,
she grabbed it and carried it in her jaw,
"these windclan cats would maybe hate it if I ate next to them.." snowstep thought with a prick of worry.
snowstep spotted the medic den she padded near the entrance with some shading.
as she was about to eat swiftspeed ran to her
"I heard the news! you're in windclan now congrats!" swiftspeed meowed in excitement.
snowstep nodded a bit
swiftspeed sat next to her
"now we can hang out for as long as we want to!" he meowed
snowstep looked back a bit while munching on a peice of meat.
"ar-are you ok? you dont look well.." swiftspeed meowed looking worried snowstep turned to him "well we can only hang out for a little bit" she meowed.
swiftspeed tilted his head in confusion and worry
"what do you mean snowstep?".
snowstep turned to swiftspeed
"im leaving windclan soon" snowstep meowed in guilt
swiftspeed looked hurt and shocked.
"leaving? what do you mean?" he asked
snowstep glanced down
"well it's just... I like you and all really I do the moment we met at our first gathering it was blessing, but... my real home is thunderclan, I was born in it my family and freinds are there im returing home soon.."
snowstep meowed.
swiftspeed glanced down
"are you sure?.. you could stay here and talk with me as much as you want, are you sure you should leave?"
swiftspeed asked.
snowstep stared at swiftspeed for a few seconds finally she answered "yes im sure, im sorry but we can still talk if you want" she meowed.
swiftspeed glanced at his paws for a second then turned to snowstep nodding in agreement smiling, as snowstep was about to speak the light on the grass was growing darker and darker and
then she realised it was turing night.
"it's nighttime, atleast it will give me time to think" she meowed.
"think? about what?" swiftspeed asked in confusion
snowstep glanced at longstar's den "im going to speak to longstar in the morning of a way to drive out slashear for good, he exiled me, caused deaths and almost destroyed you're clan, I dont know what he is planning next but I must find a way to stop this madness before it gets worse"
snowstep meowed.
"but how will you drive him out?" swiftspeed meowed
snowstep glanced up at the sky, the stars shined bright "I dont know.. but I will figure out a way I promise" snowstep meowed.
swiftspeed nodded, they both padded into the warriors den
"you want to sleep with me tonight?"
swiftspeed asked
snowstep stared at him for a second then smiled a bit
"well okay I guess" she meowed.
swiftspeed padded near a moss bed and layed down giving some space for snowstep,
she padded near swiftspeed and laid down next to him feeling his warm, soft fur.
snowstep closed her eyes welcoming the darkness.
CHAPTER 16
Snowstep's eyes open a bit it was morning,
snowstep stretched a bit then when she got up she realized every cat was gone then all of a sudden it turned night "whats going on!?" snowstep thought with alarm she padded out the den the camp was empty.
"hello? anyone here?" snowstep called just as she padded she heard a voice inside her ear "greetings snowstep"
snowstep paused "who said that!?" she hissed in alarm.
from behide a tree a cat walked to her snowstep at first didn't know who this cat was untill the cat got closer she realized
It was hawkstar.
his brown pelt was covered in sparkling stars hawkstar's eyes were all black he smiled at her.
snowstep smiled back
"hawkstar you're okay!" she meowed with joy
snowstep ran to hawkstar to greet him.
"Well yes everything is fine for me in starclan the prey runs well" he meowed
then hawkstar lifted his tail and sat down "but im not here to stay I must tell you something" hawkstar meowed turning serious.
snowstep paused and sat down
"snowstep you're clan is in danger you must get rid of him" he meowed.
snowstep widen her eyes a bit "you mean get rid of slashear?" she meowed
hawkstar nodded
snowstep felt a prick of worry 'but how? I can't get rid of him alone all my clanmates fear slashear if I try to fight him alone my clanmates will attack me and then slashear will kill me" she meowed.
hawkstar smiled a bit "windclan will help you" he meowed
snowstep paused
"windclan?" she meowed
hawkstar nodded "if windclan helps you, then you can get rid of slashear"
hawkstar meowed.
hawkstar started to fade away "No! hawkstar come back!" she yowled.
when hawkstar was gone she was starting to be surrounded by darkness.
"well If hakwstar says that windclan will help then Ill be able to return to thuderclan and rid slashear".
CHAPTER 17
Snowstep woke up her eyes wide open she was in the den.
as she got up she realized every cat woke up snowstep could hear talking outside
"how long have I been asleep for?" snowstep thought.
snowstep remembered the dream she had last night how she got to see hawkstar and then how he told her that windclan would help drive out the tyrant slashear.
"I need windclan to help me but how..? they all don't trust me" she thought.
Then an idea popped into her head she could talk to longstar about the idea
snowstep stretched and got up, she padded out the den.
some of the windclan cats stared at her awkward while the others ignored her and continued as if she never existed.
As snowstep was walking to longstar's den a sudden weight fell on her
snowstep was on the ground, the weight finally was gone. she got up to see swiftspeed staring at her with a smile
"Good morning sleepy head! I thought you would never wake up it's noon right now" he meowed.
"Noon how long was I asleep for!?" snowstep thought her orange eyes wide with shock and alarm.
"well not only can you not catch prey but you also like to sleep in alot" swiftspeed meowed joking a bit.
snowstep shook her pelt a bit and padded away with a bit of annoyance in her
swiftspeed ran to her
"snowstep don't take what I said hard I am bad at some stuff to, sorry if I made you mad wanna talk?" swiftspeed meowed. "no, no, I'm not mad but... I can't talk right now I must speak with longstar" she meowed.
swiftspeed nodded "well ok good luck!" he called running away
snowstep dipped her head,
she padded into longstar's den, longstar was busy munching on a half eaten rabbit.
he then noticed snowstep and paused
"hello snowstep what can I do for you?" he said.
snowstep sat down "Hello longstar sorry If i disturbed you" she meowed.
longstar shook his head "no, no, it's all right what is it that you need?" he asked.
"well I need to talk to you" she meowed longstar stared at snowstep for a few seconds then nodded "okay what is it you need to talk to me about?" he asked.
snowstep stared at the ground for a few seconds worried that longstar would reject then she gathered her words and finally spoke
"well it's just I like staying at you're camp really I do but.. I need to return to thunderclan, But I need slashear gone he is destroying thunderclan slowly and if we let him continue he will destroy the other clans as well, I want to drive out slashear But.. I can't do it alone..., I need windclan's help, please.. slashear killed hawkstar and lightstep and he also caused other cats to die during the raid, I need you're help longstar, please.." snowstep begged.
longstar stared at her for a few seconds then glanced at the floor
"Hawkstar was my best friend... both our clans never fought we both got along just well, Me and hawkstar were best friends ever since we were both apprentices" he meowed.
Longstar paused for a few seconds feeling grief wash him a bit but he continued
"Then when hawkstar was dead I was upset, I always wanted to rip the flesh off of that waste of space slashear, He killed my best friend and I would do anything to kill slashear!" longstar hissed.
longstar stood up
"I will help you're clan snowstep, I want to avenge hawkstar" he meowed.
Snowstep stood up feeling a bit of joy that longstar would help
they just needed their clanmates to agree then they could get rid of slashear.
CHAPTER 18 Snowstep padded outside with longstar, "I hope these cats understand and help us" she thought.
Longstar jumped onto a large boulder
"Cats of windclan young and old gather beneath the boulder for a gathering!" longstar called.
As soon as longstar called most of the windclan warriors came, the queens and kits stayed near the nursery entrance
while the elders came out from the elder den and sat near some of the warriors.
Snowstep sat next to the boulder "This better work..." she thought.
Longstar raised his tail for silence
all the cats saw and became quiet
"As you may all know, slashear a rouge has taken over thunderclan, he has been causing trouble for thunderclan and raided our camp in attempt to make us join him, I say we get rid of him" longstar meowed.
some of the windclan warriors narrowed their eyes while others kept their gaze on longstar.
"I say we raid thunderclan tomorrow and drive out slashear for good! today all the warriors will train their apprentices to fight for today then tomorrow we wake up early and sneak into thunderclan camp while everyone is asleep and then we attack and drive out slashear!" he meowed.
Snowstep stood up longstar gazed down on her
"Snowstep is the one that gave me the idea, she will take the lead tomorrow!" he meowed.
Some of the windclan warriors hissed while most glared at her
"Are you crazy longstar!? you're taking orders from a thunderclan warrior now!?" A black and white she cat hissed
"We can't trust her, her clan attacked ours she is trouble!"
A brown tom with yellow eyes hissed in anger
"Longstar do you have bee's in you're brain!?" nightpelt hissed.
Snowstep glared she felt the blood boil in her "How dare they question their leader!" she thought in anger
as snowstep was about to speak longstar spoke first.
"ENOUGH!" longstar yowled all the windclan cats fell in silence.
"How dare you question me! Im leader of windclan, I'm trying to restore thunderclan and yet all of you disagree and still be not trusting!" he hissed in rage.
Snowstep stood up, she jumped on the boulder and stood next to longstar
"I know I may seem not worthy to trust but my clan is in danger! My family might get killed lightstep died in slashear's claws, I need help from windclan if we let slashear continue to rule thunderclan then he will destroy the other clans one by one! I know i'm from thunderclan and I know that they raided you're camp but should windclan blame us for attacking? No You all should blame slashear he is the real reason behide the attack, We should drive out slashear for good and end this war!"
snowstep meowed.
All the windclan warriors were silent for a second then one cat turned to longstar "we will help drive him out tomorrow" the cat meowed
after that all the cats started to agree and started yowling in agreement.
Longstar dipped his head "The gathering has ended" he meowed.
Longstar leaped from the boulder the other warriors started gathering their apprentices to train them,
as snowstep leaped from the boulder she heard someone call her name.
"snowstep, snowstep!"
she turned to see swiftspeed near her "That was amazing of what you said back there!" he meowed.
snowstep nodded a bit "well I need all the cats I can get to help me get rid of slashear" she meowed
"i'll help you fight tomorrow" he said.
snowstep stared at swiftspeed for a second then smiled "Thank you.." she meowed grateful.
swiftspeed nodded "see you in battle tomorrow!" he called running to his den.
snowstep smiled then stared at the sky "Oh starclan I hope we win.." she thought.
CHAPTER 19
"Snowstep wake up, time to go!" a voice called in her ear snowstep woke up to see swiftspeed standing over her.
"get up everyone is about to go, come!" he meowed snowstep's eyes widen today was the battle.
As soon as snowstep was done with her fresh kill she gathered the warriors and gathered two aprrentices and she took them near the entrance.
Longstar padded in front of them "Attention all warriors, today is the battle we all been waiting for!, Remember you're training and fight" he meowed.
every warrior nodded snowstep dipped her head
"I promise to drive out slashear" she thought. "Lets move!" longstar yowled
The warriors followed longstar on the moor snowstep lead her clanmates behide longstar,
They ran through the moor snowstep felt the wind breeze on her fur.
Finally they marched through the forest
snowstep could smell thunderclan a little bit finally they were inside the border.
All the windclan warriors gathered near thunderclan camp Snowstep could hear the thunderclan cats sleeping in their dens peacefully
"Okay As soon As I yell charge we all charge into camp and attack got it?" longstar whispered every warrior including snowstep nodded
"Okay The first patrol will attack first then when we need backup patrol two and patrol three will attack" longstar meowed.
Then after they waited one minute longstar finally spoke "CHARGE!" he yowled
as soon as longstar yowled patrol one ran to camp
the thunderclan cats padded out of their dens looking shocked including slashear
"Windclan how dare you attack our camp!" he yowled in rage.
Longstar ran to slashear and slashed his cheek causing blood to pour down.
Finally patrol one and thunderclan battled
nightleap ran to longstar and kicked him
"need help?" nightleap sneered at slashear, Longstar then clawed at nightleap's legs nightleap yowled in pain Whiteheart and stoneheart protected the nursery
rushfur was locked in combat with nightpelt
"How dare you attack us!," rushfur yowled "You attacked us first!" nightpelt hissed scratching rushfur.
Snowstep spotted slashear fighting with unknown brown tom
"Patrol two charge!" longstar yowled more windclan cats ran through the bushes and charged at thunderclan
snowstep ran.
she finally spotted slashear through the fighting cats as she was about to pounce she felt a hard weight shove her to the grass then she felt a cat pin her down
"Traitor are you with windclan!?" the cat hissed
snowstep shook her head quickly "NO! im here to attack slashear!" she meowed in fear.
the cat looked shock for a second then ran
snowstep saw slashear, got into a crouching pose and finally she leaped on slashear.
snowstep clawed his back slashear yowled in rage and tried to shake her off
finally slashear bit snowsteps leg she hissed
slashear kicked her off and then pinned her down, staring at her in anger
"You again? I thought I exiled you?!" he meowed then he sneered "No matter since I got you pinned Ill make sure Ill not let you go unharmed" he sneered.
snowstep eyes widen
as slashear was about to bite her throat longstar shoved him off.
Longstar then clawed at slashear, slashear yowled and then the two cats were locked in combat.
Then finally slashear was pinned by longstar
"slashear you ruled over thunderclan to long, now you must leave, we won" he hissed.
The cats stopped fighting and stared at longstar and slashear
snowstep layed on the grass watching them "Why should I leave!? I'm leader of thunderclan, I'm making thunderclan perfect!" he meowed
Longstar hissed in rage "Perfect!? this is not perfect!, Windclan has won the battle, If you don't leave in the next five seconds I will kill you!" he hissed.
snowstep stood near longstar glaring at slashear finally slashear got up
"Fine.. Ill leave thunderclan.. but this is not over.. You may think it is but.. you are wrong" he hissed blood was pouring near his back and on his face.
as slashear was leaving nightleap followed
snowstep ran to him "were are you going brother?" she meowed
nightleap clawed at the ground
"ever since slashear joined he has taught me one thing, that power and leadership is everything, I was happy to be alongside slashear, he was right the clans were weak, now since he is leaving im leaving to" he meowed his yellow eyes glaring.
snowstep stared in shock as he left with slashear
"My own brother!?" she thought snowstep glared for a second then turned to thunderclan.
As windclan was leaving swiftspeed ran to her "It was nice seeing you here in windclan with me" he meowed
snowstep nodded
"goodbye snowstep" he meowed padding away.
snowstep ran to thunderclan rushfur padded to her
"well I geuss we got a lot to clean up now that slashear is gone" he meowed
snowstep looked around
there were bones everywere, rotting corpses were piled up, and darkpelt was dead.
"Oh darkpelt... Im so sorry..." she wispered she felt a little grief in her
stoneheart was also watching he had more grief in him watching darkpelt's dead body.
"wait who will be leader?" whiteheart meowed in confusion
bluefoot stood up "I will" he meowed.
"I was deputy when hawkstar was alive I will take his place" he meowed
"And tigerstripe will be deputy" he meowed
tigerstripe dipped his head "ill do my best" he meowed.
Snowstep stared at all of them she felt a prick of pride
Thunderclan was back.
CHAPTER 20
Two days have passed since the battle with windclan and thunderclan.
bluefoot went to the moonstone and now has nine lives making him bluestar.
Cats were still cleaning up the place, some of the warriors buried darkpelt
Meanwhile others were throwing away bones and getting rid of the rotting corpses.
"Great starclan these bodies smell horrible!" rushfur exclaimed carrying the bodies with speedflight.
Bluestar and tigerstripe were busy discussing things with each other
"Okay tigerstripe I want you to lead a hunting patrol, Take whiteheart,Foxrush and Lionroar" bluestar meowed tigerstripe nodded "yes sir" he meowed padding away.
Snowstep sat there watching most of thunderclan warriors
"I know that thunderclan is healing but... Will it be the same?" she thought.
Rushfur padded up to snowstep
"You okay daughter? Is something on you're mind?" he meowed.
snowstep stared at rushfur then stood up "No.. I'm okay Ill just rest in the warriors den" she meowed padding away.
snowstep was walking through camp and finally made it into the warriors den
"Yes.. Maybe I can rest and forget about my problems.." snowstep thought
she curled up in her nest shutting her eyes and finally fell asleep.
Snowstep's eyes opened she was on a random grass platform there were only three trees and one bush there was nothing else not even a den.
"were in the name of starclan am I at?" she thought
snowstep tried to find a place to escape but she saw no signs of other lands and if she tried walking away she would fall into the void.
just as snowstep was about to call for help A cat padded out from behide the tree it was hawkstar.
"Hawkstar? you're here! but.. why am I here?" she asked
"You must finish you're task" he meowed.
"task?" she thought
snowstep stared at him in confusion "What do you mean task? Are you talking about slashear?" she asked.
Hawkstar nodded "But We drove him out! thunderclan Is healing! what more could you want?!" she meowed in confusion.
Hawkstar stood up all he said was
"finish you're task" he meowed, then he started to walk away.
snowstep tried to run after him but she could not move,
finally she woke up, she was in her nest.
snowstep stood up she felt a bit of fear and confusion in her
"what did hawkstar mean finish you're task?" she thought.
CHAPTER 21
Snowstep stood up from her nest and stretched
she could not get that dream out of her head the dream about hawkstar saying she needed to finish her task.
"Maybe if I go hunting and maybe talk to swiftspeed I might forget about it.." she thought with hope.
snowstep walked out of the warriors den and spotted bluestar talking with tigerstripe,
"Bluestar! may I go hunt alone?" snowstep asked.
Bluestar looked at her in confusion "Why though? are you sure you don't want any cats with you" he asked.
snowstep nodded, "Now hold on you can only hunt if Bluestar says so or if-" tigerstripe was cut off when bluestar stood between the two
"Well if snowstep wants to hunt alone then so be it" he meowed.
snowstep dipped her head and ran away
she padded through the forest, looking for a prey scent to touch her nose.
finally she scented mouse, snowstep turned to see a mouse chewing on a nut,
snowstep got into a hunters crouch, but as she got closer she felt the wind breeze and then the mouse turned and saw her.
the mouse quickly ran away
snowstep hissed in anger
"why am I so bad at hunting!?" she thought with anger.
as soon as snowstep took a step forward and new scent touched her nose but it was not a prey scent,
"whats that smell?" she thought with confusion.
as snowstep kept sniffing she realized it was slashear's scent.
"slashear!? but what's he doing here, we drove him out!" snowstep thought with alarm.
as snowstep sniffed again a new scent touched her nose they were rouge cats.
"so many of them" she thought with alarm and panic.
"slashear has rouges with him!" she thought
snowstep felt alarmed slashear was gonna attack thunderclan with his rouges.
"I need to warn the clan I can't let bluestar or anyone else die!" snowstep thought.
CHAPTER 22
Snowstep ran through the forest still smelling slashear and his rouges scent.
finally after three minutes she was back at camp,
rushfur and lionroar were talking some of the cats were near the fresh kill pile
and others were resting.
snowstep padded through the cats and finally spotted bluestar with tigerstripe
"okay tigerstripe I want you to send a border patrol take rushfur,whiteheart, and foxrush" bluestar meowed,
tigerstripe nodded.
"wait!" snowstep yowled as she was running to them.
tigerstripe paused
"snowstep whats wrong?" bluestar meowed.
snowstep sat down "while I was hunting I scented something bad!" she meowed.
tigerstripe tilted his head while bluestar looked a bit calm still "and what is it that you scented?" he meowed.
"I scented slashear! but not only did I scent him I also scented alot of rouges near the thunderclan border!" she meowed in fear.
Bluestar and tigerstripe looked like they did not believe her
"snowstep are you sure you did not just scent prey, you know we drove out slashear right?" bluestar meowed
"they don't believe me!" snowstep thought with alarm.
"But I did scent them! there near our border!" snowstep hissed
tigerstripe narrowed his eyes "snowstep, slashear or rouges is something you should never joke about" he meowed
snowstep unsheathed her claws into the ground feeling dirt
"I'm not joking! slashear might come back!" she hissed.
bluestar flicked his tail in annoyance
"Look snowstep, I might send a border patrol to check the scent out but, we did drive out slashear for good and like tigerstripe said that's something you should never joke about, we will look for the scent but untill then we both don't believe you" bluestar meowed.
bluestar and tigerstripe both padded away into their dens
snowstep just stood there with shock and fear
"they don't believe me! I need them to but how? slashear is coming!"
CHAPTER 23
A day has passed snowstep kept thinking about the scents yesterday "what is bluestar is right? what if I only scented prey.." she thought.
she stared outside from her den,
bluestar was sending hunting patrols
snowstep stared for a second then she glared "No! i'm not crazy.. maybe I can check the borders again" she thought.
snowstep stood up and padded out of her den
snowstep saw the entrance with two guards
snowstep walked near the entrance and on guard a big brown tom with yellow eyes and black paws noticed her
"were are you going she cat?" the cat meowed.
snowstep froze then spoke "bluestar sent me on a border patrol alone" she lied
the cat narrowed his eyes and stared at her for a second then nodded
snowstep padded through the entrance.
she walked through the forest, trying to scent slashear and his rouges.
as she kept walking she scented something it was slashear and his rouges but something was wrong,
the scent was stronger and now was on thunderclan border.
snowstep then heard whispering and cats moving,
snowstep looked to her right and then she saw cats walking they were heading to thunderclan camp.
"their coming! I must warn my clan!" she thought with panic and alarm
snowstep ran through the forest, ignoring the scents that were strong as ever
she then saw thunderclan camp near and finally she was back.
snowstep ran through camp and spotted bluestar.
"Bluestar I must warn you!" she yowled.
all the cats stared at her like she was crazy and bluestar sat in front of her.
"Yes snowstep?" he meowed
"slashear, he is coming! I saw him but with a ton of rouges, and their heading straight towards thunderclan!" she hissed in panic.
bluestar glared at her "I thought we talked about this yesterday, you must of scented prey we drove him out for good" he meowed.
snowstep glared at bluestar "But I saw them! you must get prepared!" she hissed
"No snowstep You must of spotted something else that's all" bluestar meowed.
snowstep glared at him "why won't you believe me! slashear is coming you must get prepared!" she hissed in anger
bluestar glared at her and unsheathed his claws "That's enough snowstep! you don't dare speak to you're leader like that! you have no proof that slashear is here you-"
bluestar was cut off by the sounds of cats making panic meows and gasps.
"what's going on!?" he meowed
snowstep turned around and on top of their camp rouges gathered around their camp and slashear was among them.
"It's to late... there here" she meowed in a whisper.
CHAPTER 24
bluestar's pelt rose in fear slashear made an evil smile showing his sharp teeth
"You're leader of thunderclan? last time I checked I was thunderclan leader" slashear sneered.
snowstep stared at the rouges in horror
"There are so many of them we can't fight them at all" snowstep thought with horror.
just as snowstep was about to speak she heard yowls behide her she saw
darkstar leader of shadowclan and longstar leader of windclan behind them were their warriors swiftspeed was among them.
slashear hissed "well.. look who showed up.. longstar and a new little friend darkstar" slashear meowed.
longstar flatten his ears "slashear what are you doing here? we drove you out!" he hissed
slashear grinned even more "I don't think you heard me right, I said that this was not over and I made sure I was clear" he meowed.
darkstar took a step forward "Longstar scented you and you're cats so he came to warn me, even if riverclan is not here we are" she hissed.
slashear glared at them
"If I win this war I will rule you all even starclan themselves!" he hissed.
snowstep took a step "slashear, why do you hate the clans so much? why do you wanna destroy them?" she asked. slashear paused then he glared at snowstep and after a long moment of silence he spoke,
"I was never always like this," he meowed
snowstep pricked her ears up a bit "what does he mean by that?" she thought
"I used to be a warrior of thunderclan under hawkstar's leadership when he was on his second life, I loved thunderclan it was my home but there was one thing I never understood, I never understood the warrior code how you're not supposed to kill cats or trespass I knew that if we let the clans live on they would destroy my clan, my home! so one day during a thunderclan and shadowclan battle I killed a shadowclan warrior which ended the battle"
slashear meowed.
"then when we got back I was exiled from thunderclan! I begged hawkstar for a second chance but he refused! and so I was exiled! I swore I would take over thunderclan and the others and I would change the warrior code!
when this battle ends I will rule thunderclan and the others and one day including starclan!" slashear yowled.
"that won't happen slashear! the warrior code protects us and the clan, if it was gone then the clans would fall apart!" longstar hissed
darkstar nodded "he is right and if you want to battle then so be it!" darkstar hissed.
slashear unsheathed his claws
"As you wish!" slashear meowed
"ROUGES ATTACK!" slashear yowled
"WARRIORS ATTACK!" the three leaders called. and so the battle has begun.
CHAPTER 25
screeches filled the air, cats were fighting everywere.
rushfur glared at a black rouge
"Get out of our land you pest!" he hissed
rushfur launched himself at the rouge clawing him.
snowstep ran through the fighting cats
"I must help my clanmates!" she thought,
she then spotted stoneheart being clawed at by a white she rouge
blood was pouring on stoneheart.
snowstep launched herself at the rouge and started clawing her face, the rouge yowled in pain and ran away,
stoneheart got up blood covering his face a bit "thanks.." he meowed snowstep nodded and ran away.
slashear was fighting with longstar, just as longstar was about to make a move, slashear clawed at his leg,
he hissed in pain slashear smiled a bit "what's wrong longstar? you beated me two times before but now you're looking a bit.. tired" slashear sneered, longstar hissed "I'm never tired.. I will drive you out again like last time!" he hissed.
whiteheart was fighting nightleap
snowstep ran near them and glared at nightleap
"he betrayed me and his clan!" she thought with anger, snowstep then launched herself at nightleap pinning him,
nightleap then kicked her off and then pinned her, "I see my sibling is trying to fight me, such a shame that she has to die though.." nightleap sneered.
all of a sudden whiteheart launched at nightleap then whiteheart bit down on his throat,
nightleap yowled trying to struggle from whiteheart, then nightleap layed motionless.
"goodbye brother.." she thought with a bit of grief
stoneheart protected the nursery, standing guard
darkstar was fighting two rouges snowstep then noticed swiftspeed being pinned by a rouge
snowstep glared "don't hurt him!" she yowled
snowstep leaped at the rouge and finally chased it off, swiftspeed got up "thanks.." he meowed
"anytime swiftspeed" she meowed. meanwhile some rouges were dead while others kept fighting
rushfur stood on a body, blood was dripping from his mouth,
darkstar had lost a life but she got back up now having 6 lives left.
longstar layed on the grass blood was pouring from his back
swiftspeed glanced at snowstep "My leader.. he is almost dead!" he hissed then he glared at slashear "i'm going to kill him!" he meowed.
snowstep felt a bit of panic "no swiftspeed!" she hissed swiftspeed glared at snowstep "he is about to kill my leader! I need to kill slashear!" he hissed then swiftspeed ran through the fighting cats, snowstep watched.
just as slashear was moving swiftspeed launched himself at him
the two cats battled then slashear paused "hello there swiftspeed... I see you dare take on a leader me!" slashear meowed
swiftspeed glared at him "i'm going to kill you, you snakeheart!" he hissed.
just as swiftspeed was about to make a move slashear quickly launched at swiftspeed knocking him over,
"no swiftspeed you must win!" snowstep thought with alarm.
swiftspeed got back up and as slashear launched himself at him, swiftspeed dodged him slashear landed on the grass, then swiftspeed clawed at slashear's left eye
slashear yowled in pain "GAH! my eye!" he yowled in rage. just as swiftspeed was about to move slashear quickly pinned him,
"you messed with me to much! now.. i'm going to end you.." he growled, then slashear bit down on swiftspeed's throat
"NO!" snowstep yowled, swiftspeed tried to struggle away but then he gave up, slashear dropped his body to the ground and padded away,
snowstep ran to swiftspeed "swiftspeed..?" she meowed, swiftspeed turned slowly near her "finish...him." he whispered
"what about you though!" snowstep hissed, swiftspeed smiled a bit "i'm sorry snowstep.. I tried my best for you.. I love you.. I will always.. watch you in starclan.." he whispered
then swiftspeed's head dropped snowstep felt alarmed "swiftspeed? swiftspeed! please get up!" she hissed.
snowstep felt grief wash on her she sat near swiftspeed's body
then snowstep remembered what swiftspeed said "finish him.." snowstep then glanced at slashear, rage filled in her, she unsheathed her claws and leaped at slashear. slashear yowled kicking her off the two cats were stuck in battle mode
snowstep scratched at slashear's back slashear yowled and tried to aim at snowstep though he only had one eye now so it was hard for slashear to battle
then just as snowstep was about to make a move slashear slashed at snowstep's cheek she felt pain on her cheek then she was pinned
"hello there snowstep.. it's been while since our last chat... I saw you griefing over swiftspeed, don't worry though you will join him in a second" he sneered
just as slashear reminded her of swiftspeed rage filled in her just as slashear was about to bite down snowstep kicked him off
snowstep then launched herself at him and finally she bit his throat slashear yowled in pain he kept trying to struggle but snowstep kept him in his place
"this is what you get.. for killing my leader, my mother, and.. for killing swiftspeed!" snowstep growled. finally slashear was not moving he was now dead snowstep stood on him
some of the rouges noticed and started to run in panic
some of the rouges were caught and killed thunderclan has won the war.
"thunderclan has won!" bluestar yowled
most of the cats cheered snowstep nodded a bit then looked at swiftspeed's body she felt a bit more grief wash on her
"may starclan light you're path swiftspeed..." she whispered, rushfur padded near her
"are you okay snowstep? we won the battle" he meowed
snowstep glanced at rushfur then nodded slashear was finally dead snowstep avenged the cats that were killed in slashear's claws
thunderclan has won the war.
THE END
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Post by Brownie on Jun 19, 2020 12:27:32 GMT -5
Hey! its great to see more fanfic out there, but it would be helpful if you posted the story on one thread instead of making a new one for each chapter. Use the reply and put the chapters there, or better, edit your first post once you write more. that way readers don't have to search for the other chapters, its all in one place. and it doesnt clutter the first page so that other writers can be seen too!
good luck on the fic
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Post by Sand on Jun 19, 2020 18:54:24 GMT -5
Hi, maddiek! I have moved all of your posts and included them in one thread, that way Warriors Fan Fiction will avoid thread flooding on its front page. I advise that you post the rest of your chapters on this thread that way they are all on one thread and you can keep track of them.
If you have any questions or concerns, feel free to let me know!
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Post by ☾ѕησσzє☽ on Jun 19, 2020 19:02:26 GMT -5
Hey there! (: Looks good so far, wanna say thought it might help if you break paragraphs up. Also when a new character speaks making it a new paragraph kinda like
"Silverfoot, you are in patrol, take Hawksky and Foxfur with you." Yellowstar spoke, turning her gaze upon the she-cat.
"Okay, will do." Silvefoot quickly replied, gathering the cats mentioned.
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