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Post by Nutmeg the cat on May 22, 2020 19:22:13 GMT -5
so i have been writing this story and i'm currently on chapter 2 the story is this cat named ruby discovers their first medicine cat was not actually a cat but was from outer space and now she has to reveal what the medicine cat ginger spots really is before she kills her to keep her quiet. The creature ruby encountered is one i made myself its called a night flyer i know this is not important but fun fact about night flyers they have no lungs or blood because they don't need them because they naturally live in space.so what do you think of my story for my story.
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Post by Thunderheart57 on May 22, 2020 21:05:18 GMT -5
So, what I’m getting from your description is basically Warriors in Space? It’s an interesting concept, but without anything else to go off on, I’m confused on the setting this takes place in, characters, and if the plot grows from what you’ve described to include character arcs and stakes for the main character to solve. The Night Flyers seem like a cool villain for the protagonist to tackle.
I would love to see this be taken further. You clearly got some nice ideas, and I would like to see them be fleshed out more.
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Post by Nutmeg the cat on May 23, 2020 14:06:23 GMT -5
not quite there are only 2 clans
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Post by Nutmeg the cat on May 23, 2020 14:06:56 GMT -5
So, what I’m getting from your description is basically Warriors in Space? It’s an interesting concept, but without anything else to go off on, I’m confused on the setting this takes place in, characters, and if the plot grows from what you’ve described to include character arcs and stakes for the main character to solve. The Night Flyers seem like a cool villain for the protagonist to tackle. I would love to see this be taken further. You clearly got some nice ideas, and I would like to see them be fleshed out more. thanks
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