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Post by Glatisant on May 2, 2020 15:30:47 GMT -5
I have an idea for an AU type rp but I have no idea how interested people would be. I'll post the plot I had in mind as well as what I think could be a good first arc for the rp. For context the rp would take place in an AU where Fives convinced The Jedi that the Inhibitor Chips were part of a conspiracy against both the Jedi and the Republic.
Following further investigation by the Jedi it was determined that the Kaminoans had cooperated with the Sith Lord Darth Sidious to enact a plot to destroy both the Jedi and the Republic. The Jedi would act swiftly upon discovering the identity of Darth Sidious and confronted Chancellor Palpatine. Though unsuccessful in killing the Dark Lord they were able to prevent him from enacting Order 66 and pushed him off planet. While this occured millions of clones were immediately operated on causing an immediate standstill of Republic advances throughout the Galaxy. Fearing a counterattack by Separatist forces the Senate passed an emergency funding bill to recruit hundreds of mercenaries to fight on the side of the Republic. They also signed a bill sanctioning the Kaminoans and demanding that the Cloning Facilities be handed over to the Republic. They of course refused. The Kaminoans revealed a secret Clone Army prepared for such an eventuality making it necessary to invade Kamino.
The first arc would start with the invasion of Kamino while the Jedi dealt with the aftermath of Palpatine being revealed as Darth Sidious and deciding the fate of the Senate.
I need some help with rules and would like help with the formatting of the rp and possibly a banner though I might make one myself.
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Post by 𝕊’𝕞𝕠𝕣𝕖 on May 2, 2020 19:01:04 GMT -5
Hi I saw clone wars and came running
None of my friends are into Star Wars so I have no one to scream about it with and I am screaming about the last season so this sounds????? Perfect, ngl
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Post by Glatisant on May 2, 2020 19:17:16 GMT -5
Sweet! None of my friends are into Star Wars like I am either... Anyways, what do you think of the plot and the idea I had for the first 'arc' so to speak? Anything that doesn't make sense or that should be clarified?
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Post by Glatisant on May 2, 2020 20:07:19 GMT -5
I went and created an armor scheme for the Clone Brigade that I have planned for the RP using a template I found online. Here it is
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Post by 𝕊’𝕞𝕠𝕣𝕖 on May 2, 2020 23:13:38 GMT -5
I think it makes sense so far, I didn’t get confused by any of it
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Post by Glatisant on May 3, 2020 8:08:33 GMT -5
That's a relief, sometimes I omit certain information assuming most people will understand when really they don't. So it's always nice to have someone read over what I wrote and point out what they didn't understand. Anyways, I made a public draft page here and I want to know if I should go with a seperate Character/Joining page or not? What do you think?
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Post by Glatisant on May 3, 2020 15:26:20 GMT -5
Okay, I just got finished writing the introduction of the rp. I tried writing like those opening speeches to every episode of the Clone Wars. Tell me what you think 𝕊’𝕞𝕠𝕣𝕖Betrayal! Following the discovery of Inhibitor Chips containing the order to kill Jedi stored within by ARC Trooper Fives; the Jedi Council launched an investigation into the origins of the Clone Army. A horrendous truth was soon discovered. The ancient enemy of the Jedi - the Sith - had not only infiltrated the Senate but had also installed one of their own as Chancellor! Chancellor Palpatine - in reality the Sith Lord known as Darth Sidious - was confronted by members of the Jedi Council and driven off world. Meanwhile, the Republic issued an ultimatum to the co-conspirators of the Sith - the Kaminoans. Hand over the Cloning Facilities to the Republic or face invasion!
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Post by Glatisant on May 3, 2020 18:10:11 GMT -5
Also got a joining form. Should there be any changes made to it?
Name // Age // Gender // Allegiance // Profession // Species // Appearance // Personality // Equipment (Armor, weapons, etc.) // History // Other
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Post by 𝕊’𝕞𝕠𝕣𝕖 on May 3, 2020 21:26:00 GMT -5
I really like the intro!
Form looks pretty good to me too!
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Post by Glatisant on May 3, 2020 22:01:14 GMT -5
I was thinking of having the rp primarily follow two different clone battalions. I already came up with one and was wondering if you would be at all interested in creating your own
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Post by 𝕊’𝕞𝕠𝕣𝕖 on May 4, 2020 3:59:28 GMT -5
Ooooo, I would be Tbh my Clone Wars Oc is a Jedi Knight and her crew of clones and droids, this feels like a good place to flesh her out a little more before I eventually get around to writing the fanfiction idea I have for her
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Post by Glatisant on May 4, 2020 10:11:42 GMT -5
Alright, I'm going to post a description of my Battalion so we can avoid too much overlap in our Battalion's roles 144th Phalanx Battalion
Part of the larger 12th Assault Corps, 202nd Rapid Assualt Brigade, and 33rd Advance Landing Regiment the 144th Phalanx Battalion is led by Jedi General _____ and Commander Haast. The 144th specializes in advancing through choke points and areas with little cover. They accomplish this with special tactics and equipment. Their single most important piece of equipment is the HV-4 mobile blast shield - a blast resistant shield that can also be deployed to form a quick defensive perimeter. Due to the high weight of the shield most troopers can only use a blaster carbine or blaster pistop in conjuction with it. It also leaves the battalion vulnerable to artillery and field canons. The 144th has a long history and has participated in some of the most important battles of the war including the First and Second Battles of Geonosis as well as the Battle of Kamino Do you want your battalion to be part of the same Regiment/Brigade/Corps or just be different altogether? Because from what I can tell Battalions have different patterns from one another but all have the same color as their Brigade/Legion while different Brigades/Legions in a Corps tend to have similar colors
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Post by Glatisant on May 4, 2020 10:30:22 GMT -5
I changed the form a little and went ahead and filled out a form for one of my ocs that I'll post here so you can get a feel for what it should be like Name // Age // Gender // Species // Allegiance // Profession // Appearance // Personality // Equipment (Armor, weapons, etc.) // History // Other Clone Battalion Commander CT-2144 "Haast" // 14 // Male // Human (Jango Fett Clone) // Republic // Clone Battalion Commander / ARC Trooper // Haast has a buzz cut with a thin line shaved into it that runs from front to back and maintains a neatly trimmed beard. He also has a tattoo on his face in Mando'a that reads Dral meaning might in Mando'a. He has scars on his right eyebrow and right side of his lip after he was caught in an explosion // Haast is a loyal soldier to the Republic and a steadfast defender of the values it stands for. He has gained a reputation as a rule bender and for finding loopholes in treaties that alllow him to circumvent some aspects of Republic law when needed. He has quite a dry sense of humor that resulted in his nickname - "Haast" - which means dry in Mando'a. His leadership style is a mix between more careful by-the-book tactics and daring attacks. He can quickly identify and exploit enemy weaknesses and keeps his soldiers incredibly disciplined. He goes into most situations expecting the worst results so that he can plan accordingly // He wears the standard Phase II Clone Armor in the style of the 144th Phalanx Battalion with a few of his own changes. He has made additions to the armor however. For extra protection he wears a kama and a pauldron that protects his right shoulder. He has a range finder equipped to his hemet and a long range radio transceiver attached to his left pauldron. He modified his right vambrace to contain a repulsor and flame thrower. A vibroblade is store on the left side of his breastplate. Like most of the 144th Phalanx Battalion he uses a mobile blast shield though he uses a DC-15 with it. He also has a DC-17 blaster pistol for a sidearm // Haast was among the first Clones bred and served in the First Battle of Geonosis though he served as regular trooper. Not long after the battle began the entire leadership of the 144th Phalanx Battalion was killed and leading him to take control of the battalion where he would go on to lead the battalion for the rest of the battle. Following this he would be given the rank of Battalion Commander and continue to lead it. Later on he would recieve training as an ARC Trooper. // During his training as an ARC Trooper he would be exposed to much more of the Mandalorian Culture of which he took a great interest in. He also began to study more of galactic history and politics where he began to study the various treaties regarding war. He leads the 144th Phalanx Battalion as well as personally leading Sandstorm Company
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Post by Glatisant on May 4, 2020 11:56:52 GMT -5
So I modified the standard 144th Armor a little and made a unique set for Commander Haast 144th Armor- Haast's Armor-
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Post by 𝕊’𝕞𝕠𝕣𝕖 on May 4, 2020 12:55:26 GMT -5
Hm, I might have mine be different altogether? That way I can figure out different colors and stuff
Also that form looks great, I can try to fill it out for my characters later today!
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Post by Glatisant on May 4, 2020 12:59:02 GMT -5
Okay! Do you want the link to the template I used? That way you can edit it yourself?
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Post by 𝕊’𝕞𝕠𝕣𝕖 on May 4, 2020 14:27:44 GMT -5
Sure!
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Post by Glatisant on May 4, 2020 15:16:16 GMT -5
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Post by 𝕊’𝕞𝕠𝕣𝕖 on May 4, 2020 17:36:29 GMT -5
Awesome! I’ll have to work on it later!
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Post by Glatisant on May 5, 2020 22:14:02 GMT -5
Sorry for not getting anything done today, I just got Jedi: Fallen Order so I ended up getting sucked into that
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Post by Glatisant on May 8, 2020 16:57:21 GMT -5
I beat the game so I've gotten back to work on this rp. I've also edited the introduction for the rp and changed the scenario a bit.
Betrayal! Following the discovery of Inhibitor Chips containing the order to kill Jedi stored within by ARC Trooper Fives; the Jedi Council launched an investigation into the origins of the Clone Army. A horrendous truth was soon discovered. The ancient enemy of the Jedi - the Sith - had not only infiltrated the Senate but had also installed one of their own as Chancellor! Chancellor Palpatine - in reality the Sith Lord known as Darth Sidious - was confronted by members of the Jedi Council and was ultimately killed by Anakin Skywalker. Having lost confidence in the Senate the Jedi Order seized control of the Republic and its Grand Army. Following this the Jedi issued an ultimatum to the co-conspirators of the Sith - the Kaminoans. Hand over the Cloning Facilities to the Order or face invasion!
So, as you can see Palpatine is dead and the Jedi seized control of the Republic. I thought this would make the situation alot more interesting. It should also hint at what direction I plan on taking the rp. I should also clarify that I plan on having the rp be centered around the Invasion of Kamino at first and then the rp will open up and be far more decentralized
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Post by 𝕊’𝕞𝕠𝕣𝕖 on May 8, 2020 20:52:56 GMT -5
Ooo I like that, I’ll try to work on my stuff soon, though I’m probably not gonna be on this weekend tbh. I’m here for tonight but afterwards, I’m not sure
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Post by Glatisant on May 8, 2020 20:56:58 GMT -5
It's cool, I'm not in any particular rush to get the rp out. I think I enjoy making rps more than actually rping lol
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Post by 𝕊’𝕞𝕠𝕣𝕖 on May 8, 2020 21:28:14 GMT -5
Okay but that’s such a mood ngl
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Post by Glatisant on May 11, 2020 16:38:11 GMT -5
I had a bit of a brain blast and decided to make a new armor set for my clone unit. Here's their new armor Basic Trooper Armor Haast's Armor
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Post by Glatisant on May 16, 2020 3:44:43 GMT -5
Okay, I'm think I want to get the rp up within a week. I've been dragging my feet along with getting work done on rhe rp page itself. I feel like I've come up with some cool plots though. Also, I modified Haast's armor yet again. Here's my newest change
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Post by Glatisant on May 18, 2020 6:42:25 GMT -5
I need some help on whether I should put a post on the rp page with the factions and the characters in them or if I should stick it in either a lore page I plan on creating or make a character/joining page with all that information in it. Maybe a hybrid of the last two? Like give a brief description of the factions and the characters in them and then they could be explained in more detail in a lore page?
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