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Post by cowbird on Mar 28, 2020 19:19:46 GMT -5
สแดษชษดสแดแดา ๐- ok cool! I swear I read everything else ๐ญ๐ญ)) [ Duskflower ]- [45 moons]- [cowbird] Creamy brown she-cat with golden yellow eyes and black ears and tail. Rank: Queen Sexuality: Heterosexual Kin & Romantic Interest: open for mate, sister to Fallendawn Other: n/a, is very supportive of her brother โs sexuality and protective of him sometimes unnecessarily ( mother to Waspkit and Hornetkit, reserved names) [ Fallendawn ]- [ 45 moons]- [cowbird] Pure white tom with large pink-ginger patches and pale green eyes Rank: Warrior Sexuality: Homosexual Kin & Romantic Interest: brother to Duskflower, open to crushes either way Other: n/a
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Post by สแดแดสสแดสแดแด ยป on Mar 28, 2020 20:47:45 GMT -5
hey cowbird - i was looking over your forms bc rain is busy right now and i like to help her, and we noticed some things that we wanted to address.
1. we tend not to accept queens without a mate already, and we prefer that those relationships are developed in-rp so as to be more natural. duskflower would need to start as a warrior instead of a queen.
2. fallendawn as a name doesn't make a lot of sense, as far as describing him. if you'd like to change the suffix or prefix we'd be happy to help, but with thunderclan we're planning to make sure all names make sense. for instance, my cat flickerdawn - she's very bright and energetic, and a sweetheart. she 'lightens things up' like the sun when it rises at dawn. and stormbreak - he's very stoic and collected, and very broad/strong, so he's good at 'breaking' or injuring opponents
3. also regarding fallendawn, you mention that he's homosexual, but also that he's open to crushes either way - did you perhaps mean that he's bisexual? |
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Post by cowbird on Mar 29, 2020 12:16:36 GMT -5
hey cowbird - i was looking over your forms bc rain is busy right now and i like to help her, and we noticed some things that we wanted to address.
1. we tend not to accept queens without a mate already, and we prefer that those relationships are developed in-rp so as to be more natural. duskflower would need to start as a warrior instead of a queen.
2. fallendawn as a name doesn't make a lot of sense, as far as describing him. if you'd like to change the suffix or prefix we'd be happy to help, but with thunderclan we're planning to make sure all names make sense. for instance, my cat flickerdawn - she's very bright and energetic, and a sweetheart. she 'lightens things up' like the sun when it rises at dawn. and stormbreak - he's very stoic and collected, and very broad/strong, so he's good at 'breaking' or injuring opponents
3. also regarding fallendawn, you mention that he's homosexual, but also that he's open to crushes either way - did you perhaps mean that he's bisexual? 1. Ok so how will I incorporate the kits? Cause I didnโt have a storyline for her being a warrior set lmao and also I didnโt want to ask anyone to me her mate yet in case my form wasnโt accepted. 2. So Iโll call him Fallenleaf- his orange patches look like dying leaves on snow. Does that work? 3. I meant that he is open to the story of either him having a crush on a tom, or a tom having a crush on him. |
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Post by สแดแดสสแดสแดแด ยป on Mar 29, 2020 12:37:02 GMT -5
1. Ok so how will I incorporate the kits? Cause I didnโt have a storyline for her being a warrior set lmao and also I didnโt want to ask anyone to me her mate yet in case my form wasnโt accepted. 2. So Iโll call him Fallenleaf- his orange patches look like dying leaves on snow. Does that work? 3. I meant that he is open to the story of either him having a crush on a tom, or a tom having a crush on him. you could make them apprentices, and say their father died a while back? or wait to use then until she finds a mate in rp? storylines for cats should typically start in their apprentice-warrior stages to get a good feel for their personalities and attitudes, in my personal opinion, but thatโs just mine
fallenleaf works - is he a dilute mutation? since his markings are pink-orange or peach and heโs not a calico i wanted to be sure
ah, my bad! i misinterpreted what you meant haha |
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Post by cowbird on Mar 29, 2020 13:04:21 GMT -5
1. Ok so how will I incorporate the kits? Cause I didnโt have a storyline for her being a warrior set lmao and also I didnโt want to ask anyone to me her mate yet in case my form wasnโt accepted. 2. So Iโll call him Fallenleaf- his orange patches look like dying leaves on snow. Does that work? 3. I meant that he is open to the story of either him having a crush on a tom, or a tom having a crush on him. you could make them apprentices, and say their father died a while back? or wait to use then until she finds a mate in rp? storylines for cats should typically start in their apprentice-warrior stages to get a good feel for their personalities and attitudes, in my personal opinion, but thatโs just mine
fallenleaf works - is he a dilute mutation? since his markings are pink-orange or peach and heโs not a calico i wanted to be sure
ah, my bad! i misinterpreted what you meant haha I guess Iโll wait cause I wanted her to go through the queen phase cause it will mature both Duskflower and her brother. I didnโt want to make apprentices off the bat cause I find the phase to be extremely long lmaooo Also dilute is a good word to describe him. I wanted to use peach in his description but I wasnโt sure if that was reaching or not. |
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Post by สแดแดสสแดสแดแด ยป on Mar 29, 2020 17:26:15 GMT -5
alright! so we'll put her down as a warrior and reserve those prefixes for the future. |
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Post by cowbird on Mar 29, 2020 19:09:53 GMT -5
Cool!
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Post by mizzoctavia on Mar 31, 2020 18:02:39 GMT -5
hi! i am super interested in joining but i have a question, is it okay if i just have 1 cat to start off with instead of multiple?
(also, would the prefix "crescent" be allowed for a thunderclan cat?)
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Post by สแดษชษดสแดแดา ๐ on Mar 31, 2020 18:18:48 GMT -5
ย ย ย ย Hello! You certainly do not have to join with more than one cat unless you're wanting to make an apprentice. I'm not too sure on Crescent, but maybe the description can clear it up? If not then I can certainly help provide alternate options. |
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Post by mizzoctavia on Mar 31, 2020 18:23:43 GMT -5
oh okay! ty for the response, i wont use crescent then. MY FORM: [Branchfall] - [28 Moons] - [mizzoctavia]
a handsome brown and white tom with distinctive teal colored eyes.
Rank: Warrior
Sexuality: Heterosexual
Kin and Romantic Interests: N/A (But is open to having a mate and or siblings!)
Other: Though this tomcat is outgoing and friendly, he can also be depicted as flirty and stuck-up about himself. |
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Post by mizzoctavia on Mar 31, 2020 18:38:26 GMT -5
there it is! i am open to any changes that may be necessary. |
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Post by สแดษชษดสแดแดา ๐ on Mar 31, 2020 20:34:26 GMT -5
ย ย ย ย I apologize for not getting back on. I had something to take care of today. Branchfall looks good, though one thing is "teal" for his eyes. I keep thinking of the bright teal, would blue-green match what you're wanting to convey? |
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Post by mizzoctavia on Mar 31, 2020 20:39:45 GMT -5
no worries, and blue-green would do just fine! |
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Post by สแดษชษดสแดแดา ๐ on Mar 31, 2020 21:41:25 GMT -5
ย ย ย ย I'll add him tomorrow, then! Feel free to post on the page. :3 |
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Post by mizzoctavia on Mar 31, 2020 21:47:16 GMT -5
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Post by สัฯษชแดแดสษชฮทษข ฮทษชษขสแดัสฮฑษั ~ ~๐ป on Apr 1, 2020 7:03:52 GMT -5
Cyn SaveHeather, Finch, Acorn, Vixen, Wren [ Heatherdance ] - [ 24 Moons ] - [ @/cyn ] a blue-gray she-cat with white on the bridge of her nose and on her paws she has pale blue eyes. Rank: Warrior
Sexuality: Pansexual
Kin & Romantic Interest: Younger sister of Stormbreak
Other: N/A
[ Finchfeather ] - [ 37 Moons ] - [ @/cyn ] a calico tom with mostly black and orange with splashes of white he has firey amber eyes. Rank: Warrior
Sexuality: Homosexual
Kin & Romantic Interest: Open
Other: N/A
[ Acornfall ] - [ 38 Moons ] - [ @/cyn ] a spotted cream tabby tom with hetrochromic eyes one is blue while the other is amber. Rank: Warrior
Sexuality: Heterosexual
Kin & Romantic Interest: N/A
Other: N/A
[ Vixenheart ] - [ 43 Moons ] - [ @/cyn ] a russet ginger she-cat with a long fluffy tail she has a thick black mark that runs along the spine of her tail and flares out to the tip of her tail. She has soft golden eyes. Rank: Warrior
Sexuality: Heterosexual
Kin & Romantic Interest: N/A
Other: N/A
[ Wrenchaser ] - [ 12 Moons ] - [ @/cyn ] a silver tabby she-cat with icy blue eyes. Rank: Warrior
Sexuality: Homosexual
Kin & Romantic Interest: Silverblossom* + Echoclaw* = Wrenchaser
Other: N/A
NPC [ Silverblossom] - [26 Moons at death] - [ NPC ] A silvery-gray tabby she-cat with piercing blue eyes; died from kitting. Rank:
Sexuality:
Kin & Romantic Interest: Mother of Wrenchaser; Sister of Cinderflower
Other:
[ Echoclaw ] - [ 32 Moons at death ] - [ NPC ] A peircing black tom with pale green eyes; died by a fox. Rank:
Sexuality:
Kin & Romantic Interest: Father of Wrenchaser
Other:
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Post by skree on Apr 6, 2020 0:38:44 GMT -5
[ Amberfoot ] - [ 26 moons ] - [ @/skree ]
golden tabby she-cat with dark hazel eyes, white paws, and two nicks in her left ear
Rank: Warrior
Sexuality: Heterosexual
Kin & Romantic Interest: Open
Other: n/a
[ Nightheart ] - [ 97 moons ] - [ @/skree ]
scraggly black tom with bright yellow eyes and a white patch on his chest
Rank: Elder
Sexuality: Bisexual
Kin & Romantic Interest: Open
Other: n/a
[ Petalface ] - [ 43 moons ] - [ @/skree ]
beautiful dilute calico she-cat with pale green-blue eyes
Rank: Warrior
Sexuality: Homosexual
Kin & Romantic Interest: Open
Other: n/a
Hopefully this is all good, but if it's not I'm 100% fine with editing anything! 
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Post by สแดษชษดสแดแดา ๐ on Apr 7, 2020 10:30:18 GMT -5
ย ย ย ย All forms are accepted. You don't wait for me to add you to role-play. Just a heads up there will be an announcement soon. |
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Post by Taiyou on Apr 7, 2020 11:37:58 GMT -5
Hey, I was wondering is it okay for me to make a cat that is a rogue that joins the clan later?)
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Post by สแดษชษดสแดแดา ๐ on Apr 7, 2020 11:50:20 GMT -5
How much later would they join? |
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Post by Taiyou on Apr 7, 2020 11:58:52 GMT -5
not sure, if you have a set idea of time they should join that works, I was thinking maybe like a moon or so. Would it be better if I just have them join and its been like two moons since the accepted them in.
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Post by สแดษชษดสแดแดา ๐ on Apr 7, 2020 12:51:25 GMT -5
I'm just thinking because of the plot we'll be starting soon includes prejudice against non-Clan born/half-Clan/etc. cats and I'm not sure if they'll be too occupied with it? If that makes sense?
One thought to combat a concern is that they could encounter one of the cats and they could hide your cat somewhere similar to how Cinderpelt hid Littlecloud and Whitethroat. With it being a moon, the cat would have to be super slippery to avoid multiple patrols if they stayed in ThunderClan territory the whole time and I don't find that exactly possible. |
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Post by Taiyou on Apr 7, 2020 13:34:05 GMT -5
so would it be best for them to already have joined the clan like firestar and others. that way we dont have to worry about hiding or anything, we can expand the time they been in the clan that works.
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Post by สแดษชษดสแดแดา ๐ on Apr 7, 2020 13:41:28 GMT -5
ย ย ย ย We can. I was just trying to find a way to how you suggested. |
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Post by Taiyou on Apr 7, 2020 14:07:26 GMT -5
it's fine, I didn't want it a crazy background and make it difficult for them to be in the clan. i'll start on my forms if I need to change anything let me know.
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Post by Taiyou on Apr 7, 2020 14:27:32 GMT -5
[ Mottleblaze ] - [ 58 moons ] - [ Taiyou ]
A wiry dark ginger and white tom with amber eyes.Rank: Senior Warrior
Sexuality: Heterosexual
Kin & Romantic Interest: Open
Other:
[ Kestreldapple ] - [ 43 moons ] - [ Taiyou ]
A slender silver she-cat with busy tabby spots and large green eyes.Rank: Warrior
Sexuality: Heterosexual
Kin & Romantic Interest: Open
Other:
[ Birchpaw ] - [ 8 moons ] - [ Taiyou ]
A large dark brown and white tom with thick neck fur, a feathery tail and copper eyes.Rank: Apprentice
Sexuality: Heterosexual
Kin & Romantic Interest:
Other:
Long Forms Mottleblaze | 58 moons [ Aggressive & Determined & Brave ] Mottleblaze is a wiry dark ginger tom with amber eyes, he has a white underbelly, muzzle and tail tip and dark stripe pattern runs through his fur . While Mottleblaze is loyal to the clan, he is also known to be quite aggressive and he's always seems to be looking for a fight. Mottleblaze is very serious, fierce, and ambitious. He is fearless and courageous in battle, but he is also extremely arrogant and allows his ruthless ambition to drive his actions. Mottleblaze ambitious also drive him to be respected or feared by others, and wanting to be leader or deputy, he doesn't care which position he gets as long as he's leading over other cats. Mottleblaze refuses to back down from any challenge and also willing break the rules himself if it suits his own personal agenda. Taiyou Rank: Senior warrior
Sexuality: Heterosexual
Kin & Romantic Interest: Open
Other:
Kestreldapple | 43 moons [ Strong-willed & Outgoing & Hard-working ] Kestreldapple is a slender silver she-cat with busy tabby spots and large green eyes. Kestreldapple has pale silver across the head, shoulders, outer legs, back, and tail. Her underside is a brilliant pale silver, with markings of paler under color charcoal with white to pale silver. The back of her ears are grayish pink with black tips and her nose is a brick red. Kestreldapple is energetic and outgoing. Although She's a little reserved, not one to speak out on some events or situations she find stressful, Kestreldapple has an open mind and enjoys running around to staying in one place. Kestreldapple is loyal, and brave, willing to risk her life for another in danger though she isn't one to ask for help when she needs it. Taiyou Rank: Warrior
Sexuality: Heterosexual
Kin & Romantic Interest: Open
Other:
Birchpaw | 8 moons [ Abrasive & Outspoken l & Bold ] Birchpaw is a large muscular brown and white tom with thick neck fur, a feathery tail and copper eyes. Birchpaw has a white underbelly, long jagged claws, black tabby stripes, a white muzzle with three scars running across it and chest spot, his paws are also white and his tail is a mix of brown and black with the tail tip being black. Birchpaw is brave and fierce. Birchpaw can be blunt and straightforward, he doesn't care if he comes off rude to others, as he will disregard any authority, rules and challenge any cat regardless of their position. When faced with difficult challenges, his temper can get the best of him and he'll lash out at others even his friends and family. Birchpaw doesn't like when unnecessary risks are taken and will stand against anything he doesn't believe is right or fair.
Taiyou Rank: Apprentice
Sexuality: Heterosexual
Kin & Romantic Interest:
Other: Born outside the clan to a rogue, who left him on the border and watched a patrol take him back to camp.
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Post by สแดแดสสแดสแดแด ยป on Apr 7, 2020 16:00:56 GMT -5
Taiyou your cats are accepted! welcome to thunderclan!
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Post by ๐๐๐ฅ on Apr 7, 2020 18:59:48 GMT -5
[ Mothcatcher ] - [ 38 moons ] - [ ๐๐๐ฅ ]
a long furred, ash grey tabby tom with a white chest and pale green eyes.
Rank: Warrior
Sexuality: Homosexual
Kin & Romantic Interest: Open to both!
Other: If it is alright, I'd like him to be half Shadowclan, if not, that's okay!
Mothcatcher | 38 moons [ Wistful & Gentle & Light-Hearted ] a long furred, ash grey tabby tom with a white chest and pale green eyes.
๐๐๐ฅ Rank: Warrior
Sexuality: Homosexual
Kin & Romantic Interest:
Other: He is a half-clan cat, his mother from Shadowclan and his father from Thunderclan. He was born into Shadowclan and trained there for half of his apprenticeship before joining Thunderclan permanently instead.
[ Hickorybreeze ] - [ 26 moons ] - [ ๐๐๐ฅ ]
an athletic, ruddy brown tabby tom with lighter highlights and golden eyes.
Rank: Warrior
Sexuality: Heterosexual
Kin & Romantic Interest: Open to both!
Other: N/A
Hickorybreeze | 26 moons [ Reckless & Loyal & Brave ] a rather handsome young tom, you'd never guess how bedraggled this young warrior was as a kit, his fur a consistently an impossibly tangled mess that the warrior is thankful to have grown out of... mostly. the tom still has a very dense coat of ruddy brown fur, with occasional paler brown high-lights and thick, dark tabby striping along his flank. his eyes are a pale amber shade and the tom's ears are tattered from his frequent antics. though physically unassuming, hickorybreeze is strong and athletic warrior without being bulky.
confident and out-going, hickorybreeze is a brave young cat, although depending on who you ask, some prefer the term "down-right idiot". he often crosses the line into cocky and reckless, his courage often bordering imprudence. he has always been eager to learn and quick to show off, although it's not always for the right reasons. he'll do anything on a dare or to protect his reputation as "coolest guy around" and he's more keen on blazing his own trail than following orders. this arrogant streak causes him to butt heads with authority figures at times or get himself into unnecessary danger, but the tom has a big heart and cares for his clanmates deeply. he's incredibly loyal and makes a dedicated friend, always there to have your back or stand up for you, even if he knows you're in the wrong, and ever rooting for the underdog.
๐๐๐ฅ Rank: Young Warrior
Sexuality: Heterosexual
Kin & Romantic Interest:
Other:
[ Foxfreckle ] - [ 22 moons ] - [ ๐๐๐ฅ ]
a long-legged, marbled ginger tabby she-cat with yellow eyes.
Rank: Warrior
Sexuality: Bisexual
Kin & Romantic Interest: Open to both!
Other: N/A
Foxfreckle | 22 moons [ Naive & Easy-Going & Bubbly ] a long-legged, marbled ginger tabby she-cat with yellow eyes.
๐๐๐ฅ Rank: Young Warrior
Sexuality: Bisexual
Kin & Romantic Interest:
Other:
[ Sandpaw ] - [ 9 moons ] - [ ๐๐๐ฅ ]
a skinny, pale ginger she-cat with light green eyes.
Rank: Apprentice
Sexuality: Heterosexual
Kin & Romantic Interest: Open to both!
Other: N/A
Sandpaw | 9 moons
[ Critical & Feisty & Hard-Working ]
a skinny, pale ginger she-cat with light green eyes.
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Sexuality: Heterosexual
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Post by สแดษชษดสแดแดา ๐ on Apr 8, 2020 16:17:28 GMT -5
๐๐๐ฅ, you're accepted! Mothcatcher can be half-ShadowClan. (I feel like this nice little alliance with ThunderClan and ShadowClan is going too well.  ) |
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Post by โก Bun โก on Apr 9, 2020 3:57:37 GMT -5
[ Ravenflower ] - [ 52 moons ] - [ โก Bun โก ] a fluffy satin black she cat with pale blue eyes. Rank: Warrior
Sexuality: Straight
Kin & Romantic Interest: looking over possible kin and romantic interest.
Other: n/a
[ Goldenbear ] - [ 64 moons ] - [ โก Bun โก ] a large, long haired golden tabby tom with golden yellow eyes. Rank: Senior warrior
Sexuality: Straight
Kin & Romantic Interest: looking over what will fit.
Other: n/a
[ Rainsong ] - [ 42 moons ] - [ โก Bun โก ] a lethal pale grey she cat with white accents, white toes, who has one amber eye and one blue eye. Rank: Warrior
Sexuality: Straight
Kin & Romantic Interest: Looking into for good possiblities.
Other: n/a
[ Hazeldawn ] - [ 24 moons ] - [ โก Bun โก ] A small, short haired honey colored tabby she cat with hazel eyes. Rank: warrior
Sexuality: Straight
Kin & Romantic Interest: Looking ibto best possible matches
Other:
-------------------------------- Long forms Ravenflower | 52 moons [ sassy & collected & gracious ] Description. โก Bun โก Rank: Warrior
Sexuality: Straight
Kin & Romantic Interest: Wip
Other: none
Goldenbear | 64 moons [ quick tempered & confident & warm ]
Goldenbear is a large tom, with long thick fur. He is a golden brown tabby, gold being his base and his stripes are a deep brown.
โก Bun โก Rank: Warrior
Sexuality: Straight
Kin & Romantic Interest: Wip
Other: none
Rainsong | 42 moons [ worrywart & courteous & humble ] Description. โก Bun โก Rank: Warrior
Sexuality: Straight
Kin & Romantic Interest: Wip
Other: none
Hazeldawn | 24 moons [ naive & curious & polite ] Description. โก Bun โก Rank: Warrior
Sexuality: Straight
Kin & Romantic Interest: Wip
Other: none
It is very late, I will work on longer forms tomorrow! I hope the names are okay! There are two Im having trouble with. Let me know If I need to make my gender's too as wrll as anything that needs to be changed.
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