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Post by Needlefrost on Dec 28, 2019 12:47:17 GMT -5
I hate sleekwhisker, but after reviewing her story, I decided to try and rewrite her character a bit. It’s a stretch, but I think it’s cool.
So sleekwhisker grew up in a very chaotic enviorment, and she was always anxious because no one knew what to do, not even her parents. Her father was busy with being deputy and when he dies, she begins developing anxiety and abandonment issues.
Cut to the needlepaw rebellion, where she clings to needlepaws side because it is the first time in her life she feels worth something, that she feels secure and safe. She gets jealous when violetkit comes into the picture because she takes up most of needletails time.
In thus time, sleekwhisker becomes co dependent on needletail because at this point she’s the only cat she has felt safe with. After needletail gets with Rain, she is “re traumatized” again as she feels needletail ended up just like her father.
She then clings to the next best thing, darktail. She kisses up to him, because she once again wants to feel that same security she felt with needletail. And it kinda works to an extent. The kin is a stable enviorment unlike ShadowClan, but she never gets the attention from Darktail she wants.
Finally, she snaps. She’s been left behind by everyone in her life. Lost her family, Clan, leader, and friend. She snitches on violetpaw to hopefully get Darktail to appreciate her more, but it ends with needletail sacrificing herself for violetpaw. Sleekwhisker, who is overcome by anger and resentment for being abandoned ends up killing needletail in a fit of rage.
When she comes to terms with what’s she’s done she runs away and takes her anger out on more cats. But with Ravens companionship, she seems to be a tad better off as she runs away, never to be seen again.
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