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Post by ᴘᴀɪɴᴛᴇᴅᴛᴜɴᴅʀᴀ on Oct 21, 2019 10:38:55 GMT -5
- THE PLOT - A Clan cat named Foxwing falls in love with a kittypet. However, their relationship starts out as something of a nuisance: Foxwing doesn't want Strawberry near the territory, but Strawberry is insistent on pestering them with questions of the wild, fighting, etc. It gets to the point Strawberry is always present during the days Foxwing patrols, and secretly Foxwing, having warmed up a bit to Strawberry, has been taking the time to visit them. Of course, things aren't that "happily-ever-after." FjordClan is extremely aggressive and doesn't take outsiders well, thus threatening the life of Strawberry. ;; [ plot idea by: ᔕɿɱƿՆעᗰעς੮ע ] - THE MAIN CHARACTERS -
↳ She is a slender, pale orange Turkish Angora with black socks and light blue eyes and is 20 moons old. ↳ Despite being blind, she is known for being quite assured in her environment.
━ Foxwing ↳ He is a handsome slightly muscular Red furred Somali with yellow eyes and is 21 moons old. ↳ He is known for his bushy-like squirrel tail. ↳ [ role-played by ᴘᴀɪɴᴛᴇᴅᴛᴜɴᴅʀᴀ ] - THE MINOR CHARACTERS - ━ Coalstar ↳ He is a muscular and large black smokey maine coon with golden yellow eyes. ↳ He is 55 moons old. ↳ Lives: 5 ↳ He is the leader of FjordClan. ↳ Uncle to Foxwing and Ryewillow. ↳ Older brother to Poppythistle. ↳ [ role-played by ᴘᴀɪɴᴛᴇᴅᴛᴜɴᴅʀᴀ ]
Honeystep ↳ A small and pretty ragdoll cat with pale blue eyes. ↳ She is 20 moons old. Honeystep is Foxwing's kithood best friend. ↳ She has a crush on Foxwing. ↳ Deputy of FjordClan. ↳ [ role-played by ᴘᴀɪɴᴛᴇᴅᴛᴜɴᴅʀᴀ ]
Ryewillow ↳ A muscled she-cat with russet fur and green eyes. 21 moons. ↳ Foxwing's litter-mate (little sister). ↳ [ role-played by ᔕɿɱƿՆעᗰעς੮ע ]
━ Chloe ↳ A plump calico kittypet with striking green eyes. ↳ She's pregnant with Simba's kits. 28 moons. (missing) ↳ [ role-played by ᔕɿɱƿՆעᗰעς੮ע ]
━ Simba ↳ A massive yellow Maine coon kittypet. ↳ Father of Chloe's kits and close friends with Strawberry. 32 moons. ↳ [ role-played by ᔕɿɱƿՆעᗰעς੮ע ]
━ Poppythistle ↳ A pretty white Maine coon she-cat with a red fluffy tail along with green eyes. ↳ Mother to Foxwing and Ryewillow. ↳ Mate of Hawk, who was a rogue. ↳ Younger sister to Coalstar.
━ Hawk ↳ He was a handsome Abyssinian tom with olive green eyes. ↳ Father to Foxwing and Ryewillow. ↳ Mate to Poppythistle. ↳ Deceased.
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Post by ᔕɿɱƿՆעᗰעς੮ע on Oct 21, 2019 14:29:00 GMT -5
{ Hello, hello! Sorry for the wait - am a bit stuck with homework at the moment. I'll make her form similar to your setup~ Also I'm a little stumped on her name. The OC's name herself is Strawberryfield, but I never quite considered a name for her kittypet counterpart. Do you think it should just be Strawberry? I was thinking between Aphrodite and Justice, but I don't know if that's overkill :'d?
Name Here She is a slender, pale orange Turkish Angora with black socks and light blue eyes and is 20 moons old. Despite being blind, she is known for being quite assured in her environment.
As for the Clan's aggression, perhaps they have a strict hierarchy/something similar to Tigerstar's TigerClan in the Darkest Hour? Just throwing out some ideas ^^ }
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Post by ᴘᴀɪɴᴛᴇᴅᴛᴜɴᴅʀᴀ on Oct 21, 2019 14:41:01 GMT -5
[ Hello! && its alright hehe. Hmm... Well I like the name Strawberry for her since I feel some people give cats names that don't fit them really like how they look but maybe if she becomes a warrior her name could be Strawberryfield or maybe even Strawberrythorn/spots/bloom idk mostly because do the warrior cats in general know what a field is???
Ooh she looks soooo pretty <3
Great idea! Though i don't remember much from the very first series lol ]
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Post by ᔕɿɱƿՆעᗰעς੮ע on Oct 21, 2019 14:55:07 GMT -5
ᴘᴀɪɴᴛᴇᴅᴛᴜɴᴅʀᴀ - - { Strawberry it is then! As for if they know what a field is - I am assuming so, because WindClan lives on a moor, which is a fancy term for field. It doesn't quite matter since Strawberry'field' was actually a fodder ^^! Since I didn't want to put Strawberry'blank', I just came up with the first thing that came to mind. I want her full name to be a surprise, since I think it'll be endearing if one day she announces she made up a warrior name all by herself to a surprised Foxwing :0
Thanks so much! It's one of my fave claims to use ;a; I love Somalis, so Fox is quite a lovely tom ^^~
Ahh, neither do I LOL! But I do like to recall the final battle. And TigerClan/BloodClan were both quite the spectacle. Perhaps where FjordClan's territory ends, maybe there's a brick wall splitting them from the human settlements? This particular day I see Strawberry chilling atop this brick wall, as one of her friends have gone missing (May or may not have to do with FjordClan. Whatever you like >:3) and she meets Foxwing there? }
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Post by ᴘᴀɪɴᴛᴇᴅᴛᴜɴᴅʀᴀ on Oct 21, 2019 15:02:53 GMT -5
[ Oh yeah I forgot about Windclan living on a moor hehe && true. Aww her surprising Fox with her own warrior name is such a cute idea! <3
I think if I remember correctly Somalis' are known as the fox cat, probably because of their tails lol.
Ooh how spooky. But yeah all that works. ]
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Post by ᔕɿɱƿՆעᗰעς੮ע on Oct 21, 2019 15:12:24 GMT -5
ᴘᴀɪɴᴛᴇᴅᴛᴜɴᴅʀᴀ - - { Thanks! Honestly I live off cute fluff ;a; But you can't have cute fluff without a plot, some drama, and mystery - or at least I like to think so >:3 I'm mostly a dark writer, so I really love putting in some thriller elements - but nothing too intense ofc in respects to the forums ^^. Ooh, I didn't know they were nicknamed the the fox cat! That's so cool ;a;! Also I don't want to seem like I'm hogging all the ideas - I'd be more than happy to hear yours if you have anything to contribute <33
Also, before I forget, would you like me to start or should you? }
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Post by ᴘᴀɪɴᴛᴇᴅᴛᴜɴᴅʀᴀ on Oct 21, 2019 15:26:20 GMT -5
[ Same! Fluff is my fav next to love triangles lol. But I do enjoy drama and suspense/mystery. && yeah you can't have fluff without darkness >:3. I've always found myself as a sad writer like I like writing sad things which can't be good for my mental health but it's what i like and whatever o: LOL I actually just looked up Somali cat's because I wanted to make sure I got the fur color right, the more you know ;3.
You're fine honestly, I've never been good with coming up with ideas. But um... I actually just added minor characters to the top. If you have any you would like to add? I feel sometimes minor characters help with the plot sometimes. Also what if at some point Strawberry's owner traps Foxwing inside her house or something thinking he was hurt or lost?
I can start c: ]
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Post by ᔕɿɱƿՆעᗰעς੮ע on Oct 21, 2019 15:52:05 GMT -5
ᴘᴀɪɴᴛᴇᴅᴛᴜɴᴅʀᴀ - - { Love triangles are honestly the best, especially the drama that comes along with them >:3 I see you Honeystep >:33 Honestly I don't mind writing sad things - especially for the angst - but reading them can get me so down LOL. But yeah! I'll commit the lil somali trivia to memory :0
And sure, I have some OCs I can include. Tell me if you need more ^^
Ryewillow - a muscled she-cat with russet fur and green eyes. 21 moons. Foxwing's litter-mate (If that's okay with you!)
Chloe - a plump calico kitty-pet with striking green eyes. She's pregnant with Simba's kits. 28 moons. (missing)
Simba - a massive yellow maine coon kitty pet. Father of Chloe's kits and close friends with Strawberry. 32 moons.
Alright, I'll wait on your starter ^^ My responses might be slow as I'm trying to complete an essay at the moment </33. }
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Post by ᴘᴀɪɴᴛᴇᴅᴛᴜɴᴅʀᴀ on Oct 21, 2019 16:00:01 GMT -5
[ Love triangles just make everything more exciting to me. Honeystep is definitely going to be a problem for Foxwing and Strawberry in the future. hehe >:333 I ended up crying one time writing up an angsty thing for a cat in the past. :3.
The OCs are great!
Ugh I was never good at essays when I was in school. Good luck on it. ]
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Post by ᴘᴀɪɴᴛᴇᴅᴛᴜɴᴅʀᴀ on Oct 21, 2019 16:15:05 GMT -5
Soft feet, running through wet pine trees dripping with rain water. Retreating into unfamiliar territory, peeking this way and that with fluid yellow eyes, narrowed against the drizzle that escaped the net of branches above. A matte pink nose outlined in black wrinkled, unable to distinguish any one scent from another. He knew he was nearing the edge of FjordClan territory, because nothing was looking like the comforting swampland of FjordClan or even the now-familiar sweeping moors of CrowClan. Still, he was determined to find a place to rest and remain. It had to be far away from the others, secluded. Normally Foxwing wouldn't have gone for such isolation, but lately all he wanted was to be alone.
He couldn't understand his leader Coalstar's thoughts nowadays. He seemed to have changed since the destruction the flood that came upon the two clans, 2 moons ago. And he still couldn't believe all of the killing his clan had done because of Coalstar's deranged thoughts that outsiders that lived on the other side of the brick wall were nothing but obstacles in his way of controlling the entire west side of the land. He stops a few meters from the brick wall and huffs in annoyance. Glancing back at where he had just come from.
[ ugh its kind of a gross start but ehh I need to practice more. ]
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Post by ᔕɿɱƿՆעᗰעς੮ע on Oct 21, 2019 18:00:41 GMT -5
Strawberry ❝ ━Don't let yesterday take up too much of today. ♛
Rainwater clung heavy to wispy strands of peach-colored fleece, occasional droplets gliding off like silver beads in the wake of her urgent trot. Plop, plop. The rhythm of the noise fell in tempo with the pitter-patter of soft paws and quickening heartbeat.
“Chloe?” she risked a breathy shout; more question than assertion.
As before, there came no familiar goofy reply or silly laugh of a cat merely playing a piece of mischief. Instead the wind continued to howl ominous words of contempt, rattling overhead branches and bowling over nearby trash cans. It spared none from its wrath, and curled its clawed paws deep within her soaked fur, seeping across exposed skin and aching muscles to prompt a cold-induced shiver. Still, the molly pursued the foreign path without cease, meeting the wind head-on in a valorous act of defiance, or was it stupidity? Strawberry couldn't tell. Though the weather was indeed grave, it had let up remarkably since her initial steps outside the comforts of home. Now the wind couldn’t help but angrily call out to the playmate that had left it—the rain having long since diminished into the puddles it itself created.
Her gait slowed to a walk and a sigh slipped through pursed lips. It wasn’t like Chloe to up and vanish, especially with pregnancy factoring further into self-preservation. Sure, her friend had occasionally enjoyed an adventure now and again, but it had never been to the extent of endangering her unborn kits. Something had to have spooked her for her to simply leave in such a storm, but what it was was still an enigma to Strawberry. She just hoped the queen was safe somewhere, perhaps beneath the roots of a tree or a welcoming cavern. In her haste, the femme nearly slammed headfirst into the brick-wall, though the sharp scent of baked clay was quick to draw her back to her senses. But it wasn’t just baked clay. Despite the rain having washed the majority of smells, Strawberry could pick up the briefest rosy fragrance of her dear vanished friend.
A thought occurred and she briefly wondered if the missing she-cat had crossed the border between captivity and the wilderness. It would explain why, out of the many cats covering the neighborhood in search, not one had stumbled across the jarring idea Chloe had left them. Or someone had taken her. The notion of wild felines was not at all a novel concept to Strawberry. In fact, it had been constantly drilled into her mind since kit-hood even to adolescent: never, under any circumstance should you confront a warrior. They were said to be dangerous creatures, maybe even cannibals in their own right.
Strawberry didn’t hesitate jumping the brick-wall.
She landed as elegantly as a blind cat could atop the barrier, sitting flat against the carved terra-cotta and granite. That’s when she noticed another smell nearby—unfamiliar, with a touch of forest. Cranium angling towards the smell, her unseeing eyes fell across Foxwing, staring unblinking in the warrior’s general direction.
A curious prick of her ears, followed by a query: “Who goes there?”
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Post by ᴘᴀɪɴᴛᴇᴅᴛᴜɴᴅʀᴀ on Oct 21, 2019 18:12:54 GMT -5
{ Ooh, I'm excited for Honeystep to cause problems >:00 Honestly, Ryewillow (since I see her as an follower of Coalstar's ideals) would def ship Honey and Fox, since that's what's "expected" of him. And nooo </3 It must've been a super sad story!
Thank you!
And low-key have writer's block so I've barely gotten anything done ;a; I've been procrastinating with a reply to you instead, which is defo bad but I couldn't help myself lol! Nonsense, I quite enjoyed your starter. <33 } [ Yeah lol She's kind of like a female Ashfur but slightly more persistent with her flirting and trying to get Foxwing to love her. I feel Ryewillow would be a follower of Coalstar defiantly. I mean one of the siblings has too lol whoops. But Foxwing still loves his sister. Family is forever and the two red cats are all each other has after all.
I think it had to do with like some sort of friend death but it was sad. No problem! && LOL. I totally understand that mindset. Aw thanks!
I for some reason want to make Rye and Fox distant niece and nephew to Coalstar but I'm still not sure. /: ]
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Post by ᴘᴀɪɴᴛᴇᴅᴛᴜɴᴅʀᴀ on Oct 21, 2019 18:15:39 GMT -5
[ OMG what if in the end Foxwing killed Chloe? Because Coalstar threatened that if he didn't, his sister would die? Chloe ended up wandering into FjordClan looking for help because she got hurt or something??? ]
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Post by ᔕɿɱƿՆעᗰעς੮ע on Oct 21, 2019 18:54:31 GMT -5
ᴘᴀɪɴᴛᴇᴅᴛᴜɴᴅʀᴀ - - { Oh frick, a more persistent Ashfur is not going to end well >:0 Yup! Family forever! What if Honeystep is actually the deputy? In that sense, Rye wanting her brother become mates with Honey would be more along the lines of her wanting him to be more respected in the Clan, since she think he deserves that!
I can see them being distantly related, sure! Their coloring could've been a telltale sign they were sired by a rogue? (maybe because Coalstar's sister (which I'm assuming would be their mother) wanted to leave the clan, but was intercepted before she could leave. Her mate is killed and she is now kept as a low-ranking member of the clan as a result of her betrayal? It could be a reason to Coal's paranoia towards outsiders ("if they tried to take my cats, maybe they'll take our territory next"). If we go this route, this would also explain Rye's want for Fox to be mates with Honey - it'll make his status a lot higher than mere "illegitimate child".
And that would also explain Coal's threatening of Rye! He might've initially felt bad when they were kits, but honestly could care less now that he can see their father more vividly in them. Fox killing Chloe would honestly be so interesting, because Strawberry would eventually have to find out and oh geez that would be something. Should she have kitted before he killed her, however? Perhaps one of them survived? Up to you ^^ }
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Post by ᴘᴀɪɴᴛᴇᴅᴛᴜɴᴅʀᴀ on Oct 21, 2019 18:55:54 GMT -5
An unfamiliar voice from above caused Foxwing to spin around, as he looks up at where the sound of the voice came from. He takes in the long-haired pale orange she-cat with a mixture of curiousity and caution in his eyes. With all of the violence and anger throughout the woods (mostly from his leader), he wasn't sure whether it was dangerous for him to be near this feline or not. After all this female smelled of kittypet, yet she didn't seem threatening at all but he wanted to be careful anyway.
The red tomcat takes a step back so as to get an even better view of the she-cat. His yellow eyes narrow slightly, ❝Foxwing. And you miss?❞ Yes. He decided to give her his name. He wasn't going to be rude unlike his sister back home would have been. Honestly he was hardly ever rude. A proper gentlemen. His mother would have had his tail if he ever disrespected a female. She raised him better than that. Or at least what little time him and his little sister had with her to teach him.
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Post by ᴘᴀɪɴᴛᴇᴅᴛᴜɴᴅʀᴀ on Oct 21, 2019 19:10:19 GMT -5
ᴘᴀɪɴᴛᴇᴅᴛᴜɴᴅʀᴀ - - { Oh frick, a more persistent Ashfur is not going to end well >:0 Yup! Family forever! What if Honeystep is actually the deputy? In that sense, Rye wanting her brother become mates with Honey would be more along the lines of her wanting him to be more respected in the Clan, since she think he deserves that!
I can see them being distantly related, sure! Their coloring could've been a telltale sign they were sired by a rogue? (maybe because Coalstar's sister (which I'm assuming would be their mother) wanted to leave the clan, but was intercepted before she could leave. Her mate is killed and she is now kept as a low-ranking member of the clan as a result of her betrayal? It could be a reason to Coal's paranoia towards outsiders ("if they tried to take my cats, maybe they'll take our territory next"). If we go this route, this would also explain Rye's want for Fox to be mates with Honey - it'll make his status a lot higher than mere "illegitimate child".
And that would also explain Coal's threatening of Rye! He might've initially felt bad when they were kits, but honestly could care less now that he can see their father more vividly in them. Fox killing Chloe would honestly be so interesting, because Strawberry would eventually have to find out and oh geez that would be something. Should she have kitted before he killed her, however? Perhaps one of them survived? Up to you ^^ } [ I mean I was never a fan of Ashfur to begin with but ehh. And nope >;3, Honey may even try and harm Fox. Ya know the whole 'If I can't have him. No one will' kinda thing. No one's gonna expect her because she's so sweet and small lol. Oh yes I like that! Of course Fox isn't happy with that and gets into a bunch of arguments with his sister because of it. The boy could care less about status.
Oooh I love it! Maybe their mother (who I'm naming Poppythistle ) has to live with the elders but is still treated like garbage? Also what if their father ( Hawk ) tried to reason with Coal and challenge him or something which could explain why he was killed. Yes to it all! C:
Coal would see more of Fox as a threat because he honestly refuses to go along with anything he says. So like a mini mommy and daddy of sorts. Fox and Rye may argue and fight a lot but they love each other to the ends of the earth. Fox would do anything to protect his little sister.
I got the idea from that scene from Brother Bear where Kenai had to tell Koda he killed his mother. So thanks Disney. hehe. Yeah one of the kits should survive so at least Simba still has a little of Chloe left in the world. Maybe hoping to get Strawberry to forgive him he brings the kit to her home (because he doesn't really know where Simba and Chloe lived). ]
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Post by ᔕɿɱƿՆעᗰעς੮ע on Oct 21, 2019 23:34:59 GMT -5
ᴘᴀɪɴᴛᴇᴅᴛᴜɴᴅʀᴀ - - { Finally done with the essay >.<! Yeah, Ashfur was pretty toxic, but he does make for interesting drama, which is why I'm so interested to see what Honey does. She already reminds me of an older version of Darla Dimple from the movie 'Cats Can't Dance'. But yup, attacking Fox sounds about right. Though I can also see her going after Strawberry, since she'd probably think a kitty pet is an easy target? But the question is, how does she find out >:333 Yay to siblings drama! I can totally see Rye pushing her agenda on him would cause tension between the two, but in her mind she thinks she's doing what'll make him happiest, even though she's wrong 100%.
Aww, Poppythistle is such a cute name! And I love Hawk <33 Yes to both ideas! Hawk challenging Coal is maybe what pushed him off the edge of "all outsiders are bad" mentality, perhaps because he lost a life or even almost lost one? Ofc this was after Coal maybe attacked Hawk and he had to fight back? And it's like "oh shoot, if a random nobody cat can come in and nearly kill me, that means there's others out there, right?" And it just spirals into madness, sometimes even using Poppy's status as "garbage" elder as an outlet to calm down a bit. "Ha, see what happens when you mess with me!?"
And aww, I like that! Yes, red siblings are the best even though they sometimes don't understand each other ;a;!
Oh geez that scene devastated me as a kid! Especially when Koda ran off, horrified. But that would be perfect for this role-play, I love it! And yesss, a mini Chloe! We'll just have to see what he can do to have Strawberry understand and forgive him >:33 Which reminds me, I was thinking but- should Simba have been an ex-clan cat? Could give Chloe's death a double meaning behind it :0 }
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Post by ᔕɿɱƿՆעᗰעς੮ע on Oct 21, 2019 23:52:05 GMT -5
Strawberry ❝ ━Don't let yesterday take up too much of today. ♛
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Ears swiveled forward to catch the tom’s words, the soft pink of delicate cartilage glistening with dancing beads of stubborn rain. His voice fell unfamiliar to her otherwise enduring memory, prompting the tautening of muscles and air of caution, alert and attentive to this stranger. Initially dismissing the unfamiliarity of smell on the technicalities of wet weather, Strawberry knew full well a voice was something else entirely—and her ears never failed to warn of danger.
Still, she collected her bearings, a calmness embracing the slender figure as she settled down across the clay surface in a relaxed repose. The femme did not react immediately to the tom’s introduction, instead taking the time to ruminate over every detail; down to even the slightest of inflections. Foxwing was definitely not a name she recalled, not even in passing. It was definitely odd, the two words forming an implausible compound. A fox, with wings? She doubted a human would’ve named a feline such a way, but nothing was past the realm impossibility. Humans were, after all, weird creatures.
But no, what truly caught her regard was his scent. It tickled her nostrils, bringing in musky smells of swamp and cat. Wherever he had came, there were many more in a like situation as he. Her audit did not take long, however, so the lapse in time seemed more of an awkward standby than anything worth puzzling over.
“I'm Strawberry,” she replied, equally cordial, though not without a hint of wariness that purposely oozed into her accentuation. She readjusted her cranium, trying to pinpoint Foxwing’s face by tracing back to where she had heard him first speak. Her unseeing gaze awkwardly found his mouth and she fixated onto that particular point; remaining there unwaveringly. The molly had a suspicion to what was awry, though had only one way to test her hypothesis; coaxing out an answer as smoothly as she asked it:“Though I must ask, how did you manage to convince your housefolk in letting you out in this storm? Are you looking for Chloe too?”
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Post by ᴘᴀɪɴᴛᴇᴅᴛᴜɴᴅʀᴀ on Oct 22, 2019 9:13:01 GMT -5
ᴘᴀɪɴᴛᴇᴅᴛᴜɴᴅʀᴀ - - { Finally done with the essay >.<! Yeah, Ashfur was pretty toxic, but he does make for interesting drama, which is why I'm so interested to see what Honey does. She already reminds me of an older version of Darla Dimple from the movie 'Cats Can't Dance'. But yup, attacking Fox sounds about right. Though I can also see her going after Strawberry, since she'd probably think a kitty pet is an easy target? But the question is, how does she find out >:333 Yay to siblings drama! I can totally see Rye pushing her agenda on him would cause tension between the two, but in her mind she thinks she's doing what'll make him happiest, even though she's wrong 100%.
Aww, Poppythistle is such a cute name! And I love Hawk <33 Yes to both ideas! Hawk challenging Coal is maybe what pushed him off the edge of "all outsiders are bad" mentality, perhaps because he lost a life or even almost lost one? Ofc this was after Coal maybe attacked Hawk and he had to fight back? And it's like "oh shoot, if a random nobody cat can come in and nearly kill me, that means there's others out there, right?" And it just spirals into madness, sometimes even using Poppy's status as "garbage" elder as an outlet to calm down a bit. "Ha, see what happens when you mess with me!?"
And aww, I like that! Yes, red siblings are the best even though they sometimes don't understand each other ;a;!
Oh geez that scene devastated me as a kid! Especially when Koda ran off, horrified. But that would be perfect for this role-play, I love it! And yesss, a mini Chloe! We'll just have to see what he can do to have Strawberry understand and forgive him >:33 Which reminds me, I was thinking but- should Simba have been an ex-clan cat? Could give Chloe's death a double meaning behind it :0 }
[ I mean I haven't really planned out how Honey is going to attack, It won't be to kill possibly. A warning if you will. At first >:3 Honey could possibly just eavesdrop on a conversation the two siblings are having mostly about how Fox is being stupid that he would fall for a kittypet of all cats or something. I just love good ole sibling rivalry. Thanks! I usually use the name Poppythistle for a calico but ehh it fit her as well. && yes Hawk is so pretty isn't he? :3. Coal is just all full of mental issues isn't he whoops. Hawk could have taken Coal's sixth life after Coal tried to kill him for "brainwashing" his sister, which of course freaked the large tomcat out realizing such a smaller cat could do such a thing to him. But that's all good. Poppy could still be in contact with her kits still, maybe Rye gives her an attitude because she has become one of Uncle Coal's followers but Fox being nice to his mother. But hopefully I can do deranged Coal justice when I have to rp him. Yes 0x0 Even though they disagree they are the best of friends. Yeah I just thought it would be the perfect hint go angst and guilt. But I felt so bad for little Koda luckily Kenai ends up staying with him as a bear . I don't think fox at the point of being so in love with Strawberry could deal with her never forgiving him but he would understand why. I mean he DID kill her friend after all. OH I love that idea! Such mystery! ]
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Post by ᴘᴀɪɴᴛᴇᴅᴛᴜɴᴅʀᴀ on Oct 22, 2019 10:47:54 GMT -5
Upon hearing the small female introduce herself it caused a tilt of his head. Strawberry? What in Starclan was that? Whatever it was it didn't sound dangerous. It had to be one of those weird names a twoleg gives its prisoner. At least that's what his Uncle Coalstar told him as a kit that the two walkers tended to give their prisoners strange and unusual names to help identify the hostage. He adjusts his footing so he could look up at her better without straining his neck only to notice her eyes. They looked like Juniperlight's eyes. His yellow eyes widen upon realizing this cat was blind as well. Was it a disease? Could he catch it? No that was silly thinking. Of course he couldn't catch it. He's been around Juniperlight a bunch of times and still had his sight.
The Somali's ears have to strain a bit to hear her because of how high the wall was. He ends up taking a step to the left a tad only because his back right foot squished into a muddy puddle. As he flicks his paw of the mud he responds, ❝I don't know what this housfolk thing is you speak of but I came here on my own.❞ He looks up at her after finally getting the mud off full confusion on his face and in his tone of voice. ❝What's a Chloe?❞
[ sometimes my replies may be bad. whoops ]
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"This wasn't a vicious beast, but an intelligent, gentle creature."
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Post by ᔕɿɱƿՆעᗰעς੮ע on Oct 22, 2019 10:55:38 GMT -5
ᴘᴀɪɴᴛᴇᴅᴛᴜɴᴅʀᴀ - - { Yeah! In my mind, an attack from her would limit his options, because if he did report back to his Clan, I'm assuming nobody would believe him. I see 'dearest and pure' Honey just spinning the tale that "oh, perhaps it rogue similar in looks. Don't you see he's scared, Coalstar?" And Coalstar is just nodding in blind agreement. Rye would probably not believe him at first (maybe the day Honey overhears him confessing to liking Strawberry causes some doubt in Rye?), but then starts to manage poking holes in Honey's story. Idk! I just love these ideas going back and forth between us, it's really entertaining <3! Plus I get to practice idea-building!
No problem! Coal is all sorts of problems, but that'll make this plot even more interesting. But yeah, defo to them still being allowed to see their mom! Ofc, like you said, Rye would probably avoid her since she doesn't want to be associated with what the Clan would view as a traitor, thanks to Coal's slanderous input. Maybe Fox can comfort his mother by explaining Rye doesn't hate her, just is being misled? Up to you ^^!
Ooh, using the movie's ending to hint Fox saving her from something, perhaps >:33? But yeah! Communication is key to every great relationship. Time just has to heal the wound such a revelation would have on poor Strawberry. We'll see! So far this has been excellent plotting! We've come up with so much ^^ }
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Post by ᴘᴀɪɴᴛᴇᴅᴛᴜɴᴅʀᴀ on Oct 22, 2019 11:32:01 GMT -5
[ ᔕɿɱƿՆעᗰעς੮ע ; LOl it's like that meme or something where one person is telling another person about hula-hoop tricks and the other person asked them why are you telling me this and they go "because no one will believe you". Honey is going to be a little sneaky vixen and maybe at one point Fox doubts himself about being able to actually be happy and be able to be with Strawberry something like that. Coalstar deep down I mean deep deep down loves his niece and nephew and just wants the best for them. For them to be safe and happy. But of course he thinks that getting rid of outsiders is the way to go. Dummy dumb.
Rye will eventually start to ship Straw and Fox soon enough. Hopefully. Yeah I like the idea of Fox still trying to keep Rye in the good light around their mother. Like the Rye he knew as a kit all happy and free spirited is still in there. She just got lost in the path of darkness spread onto the land by Uncle Coal. Also I know in Warrior cats they don't do nicknames but I think I just think it's cute. Like Ryewillow being nicknames Rye. Idk.
OOOh like maybe the ending of The fox and the hound? Like Fox stands over Strawberry trying to protect her or something maybe thinking another twoleg is going to hurt her? idk. we still have a loooong way to go. ]
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"This wasn't a vicious beast, but an intelligent, gentle creature."
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Post by ᔕɿɱƿՆעᗰעς੮ע on Oct 22, 2019 12:29:19 GMT -5
ᴘᴀɪɴᴛᴇᴅᴛᴜɴᴅʀᴀ - - { Lol! Yeah I can def see that meme being associated to this. Honestly can't wait for Honey and Coal's characterization. This'll be interesting >:33 Especially Coal's conflict between ridding all the outsiders but also deep down caring for the offspring of the outsider that managed to drive his paranoia home? Oofity oof!
Yeah, hopefully >:33 I have Rye's lil character header ready. But yeah! Exactly what I was going for. Poor Poppy has to deal with it tho </33 And that'll be cute! I wouldn't mind. Them calling one another Rye/Fox is quite endearing. I'm wondering if Coal would see that as a problem tho :0? I know they'd do it all in good fun, but Coal might take it as them as using "rogue-like" names, similar to Hawk. Idk if I'm looking too much into this tho LOL.
Aww that'll be too cute! Yeah we can def do something like that, but like you said - there's a ton of writing still left to get there ^^! All the more exciting. }
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"This wasn't a vicious beast, but an intelligent, gentle creature."
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Post by ᔕɿɱƿՆעᗰעς੮ע on Oct 22, 2019 12:37:34 GMT -5
Strawberry ❝ ━Don't let yesterday take up too much of today. ♛
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“So you are a Clan cat.” Lilting, mellifluous, the words stirred in the air, lingering for a moment in the static before dissipating into a draft of wind. A pause, sharply defined against the initial inquisitive outburst. “Or, at least a stray.”
Raising from the loose coils of recumbency, the house-cat gave a stretch—spine momentarily arching downward to allow a bout of relief to tired joints and muscles. Running the length of the neighborhood in an angry storm had been nothing short of difficult; her mental blueprint of the town had been thrown off kilter by the chaotic and turbulent atmosphere, rendering her sense of smell basically moot. Still, her hearing was as sharp as ever, and she couldn’t help but give a giggle.“It isn’t ‘what’s a Chloe’ it’s ‘who’s Chloe.’ It’s a name, dumb-dumb!” Her tone held no trace of malicious intent, instead carrying a friendly, albeit teasing, note. “She’s a friend of mine. Soft fur and a gorgeous voice. Smells of milk?” Strawberry paused, uncertain how much she could let-on. Simba had warned how territorial these Clan cats were. What if the tiniest notion of a feline on their land prompted a witch-hunt? So she decided to omit the part where Chloe’s scent led into the territory, concerned in part for the queen and in part for the kittens she carried. Despite numerous accounts to how cruel Clan life was, Strawberry doubted they would harm a pregnant she-cat. …Would they?“She’s pretty harmless,” she decided to add, for safe measure. “Her housefolk have an hamster and she’s super gentle with him. In fact, I don’t think she’s ever harmed a fly, but not that I could ever see. Anyways! I have never smelled your kind this near the brick-wall. Are you looking for someone too?”
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Post by ᴘᴀɪɴᴛᴇᴅᴛᴜɴᴅʀᴀ on Oct 22, 2019 12:58:08 GMT -5
ᴘᴀɪɴᴛᴇᴅᴛᴜɴᴅʀᴀ - - { Lol! Yeah I can def see that meme being associated to this. Honestly can't wait for Honey and Coal's characterization. This'll be interesting >:33 Especially Coal's conflict between ridding all the outsiders but also deep down caring for the offspring of the outsider that managed to drive his paranoia home? Oofity oof!
Yeah, hopefully >:33 I have Rye's lil character header ready. But yeah! Exactly what I was going for. Poor Poppy has to deal with it tho </33 And that'll be cute! I wouldn't mind. Them calling one another Rye/Fox is quite endearing. I'm wondering if Coal would see that as a problem tho :0? I know they'd do it all in good fun, but Coal might take it as them as using "rogue-like" names, similar to Hawk. Idk if I'm looking too much into this tho LOL.
Aww that'll be too cute! Yeah we can def do something like that, but like you said - there's a ton of writing still left to get there ^^! All the more exciting. } [ ᔕɿɱƿՆעᗰעς੮ע ; I just hope I don't screw them up. LOL. I've only ever roleplayed a cat with Schizophrenia and that wasn't very good anyway but I tried. Yeah Coal is gonna start acting like he has a devil and angel on his shoulders oof.
Isn't there a saying like even if you're child hates you a mother still loves and protects them to the end? probably not but eh. Sibling cuteness. <3. Coal would definitely not like his kin using 'rogue-like' names. It would make him go even more crazier worried his "followers" including his niece and nephew were plotting against him, planning his downfall. Planning to kill him. I might even make him talk to himself at times. idk. LOL
Yay <3 but yeah the plot is just starting hehe. ]
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Post by ᴘᴀɪɴᴛᴇᴅᴛᴜɴᴅʀᴀ on Oct 22, 2019 13:11:05 GMT -5
Foxwing finds himself glaring at the she-cat. So what if he was a Clan cat? There wasn’t anything wrong with being one. At least besides having to kill other cats. But that’s in self defense… most of the time. He huffs in annoyance only to crouch and leap up towards the wall actually having to unsheath his claws to help grip ahold of the side of the top part of the wall. He still glares at her with a grunt as he pulls himself up now sitting up top with her. He shakes out his fur getting rid of some stray droplets of water that landed on his pelt. ❝Haven’t seen her.❞ he states as he swiftly licks his left paw lifting it and swipping it over his left ear.
As he puts his paw back down on the grey gravel top he just stares at her bewildered at hearing the word hamster. ❝You really have bees in your brain, huh?❞ he retorts with a head tilt. He shakes his head. Of course he had to meet a blind cat who was crazy. He coudln’t meet somecat who at least knew that any cat who ventured out into the woods was usually never seen again. Either joined one of the 4 clans or got killed by a fox or badger. ❝No. I’m not looking for anyone. Yet I stumbled upon you.❞ he says with a light laugh.
[ my muse is all wacky today. ]
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Post by ᔕɿɱƿՆעᗰעς੮ע on Oct 23, 2019 11:59:28 GMT -5
ᴘᴀɪɴᴛᴇᴅᴛᴜɴᴅʀᴀ - - { Hello, hello! Sorry for the poof - this week is going to be really busy for me, so I unfortunately might have to limit my replies to once a day. I'll try to get them in though! -- Nonsense, I don't think you'll screw them up ^^ You're already doing so well with Fox!
I think there might be a saying like that - it's what moms are known for. They usually love you till the end, even if sometimes you might treat them like garbage ;a; Ooh interested how Coal is going to go out, since he still has 5 lives >:33 But then oh no, another crazy is gonna become leader in Honeystep, unless you have something planned for her also >:33 But that's a long way coming and something to look forward to ^^ }
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"This wasn't a vicious beast, but an intelligent, gentle creature."
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Post by ᔕɿɱƿՆעᗰעς੮ע on Oct 23, 2019 12:16:27 GMT -5
Strawberry ❝ ━Don't let yesterday take up too much of today. ♛
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Tufted ears pricked, elevated and proper against the femme’s elegant cranium, listening, heeding to the tom’s new positioning amongst the brick-wall. As a general rule of thumb, Strawberry kept a reasonable distance to those noted as unfamiliar, so the sudden proximity was jarring, not to mention mildly discomforting. She could feel each hot breath of every word, laced with the scent of something unequivocally wild, untamed. Any other house cat would’ve most likely retreated by now. And though the she-cat shuffled a few steps back, she did not turn tail and flee. In fact, her added spacing between the two of them had not even been fear-induced, but rather one out of tactical caution.
Again, Strawberry once again couldn’t distinguish between her own bravery and stupidity.
“Bees in my brain? Is that an insult where you come from?”
Instead of feeling offended, the molly held a tone of interest. “I wouldn’t know what I did to deserve such an jibe, I've been rather good-mannered, haven't I? Unless you're unfamiliar with my 'kittypet' terms. That's what wild cats like you call us, right?" Her cranium tilted slightly to the right and she remained with the same air of curiosity, though it had hardened slightly into a challenge. Simba told stories of how much Clan cats discriminated against human-owned cats as soft, lazy nobodies. And honestly she had always thought the ruling unfair and unwarranted, especially because it was due to their differing lifestyles. They were all cats here - a little decency here and there didn't cost much.
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Post by ᴘᴀɪɴᴛᴇᴅᴛᴜɴᴅʀᴀ on Oct 23, 2019 13:14:55 GMT -5
[ ᔕɿɱƿՆעᗰעς੮ע ; That's perfectly fine. No need to rush yourself or anything with them C:
Aww thanks!
I mean I've watched some crime videos where children and severely harmed their parents and the parents still forgive them and love them sooo.. ;a; I'm keeping it all a mystery and the fact that it's a long ways away lol && same ]
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