I'm so glad Hollowpaw survived! I really don't trust Yelloweye. Maybe I'm being overcautious, but possessing Hollowpaw without asking and the second time Hollowpaw doesn't even remember what she did? Not promising.
Fair enough. Good reasons not to trust somebody, but adrenaline is also a hell of a thing. You'd be surprised what people do and not remember in the heat of the moment. Not saying that's what it is, but it's a possibility. And I can't have my main character dying so soon, of course...yet.
I'm just fine, currently. Thank you for asking. How about yourself?
Of course Dappleleaf's backstory is sad! Seems like she really misses her eyesight. But I guess it helped to mould her into the medicine cat we all know and love... Loving the way you're mixing character moments with the action in this fic, by the way!
I'm glad you're fine. I'm pretty bored, I guess, but otherwise alright.
They could be. Gives me an interesting idea, I must say. But, like everything else, that will have to come later. And I can say already that Gravelpaw is very fun to write for, so you'll definitely be seeing more of him later.
We have answers! I guess we know why Gentlestripe is interested in Hollowpaw, if he's her grandfather. (Although that still leaves the question of why Yelloweye's involved...)
As for Sootbreeze's story, it makes me more sad than anything else. You've got to feel sorry for her - abandoning Hollowpaw was absolutely the wrong decision, but she must've felt she had no other options.
We have some of the answers. But yet so many questions still to come, also. Hehehe.
True. I can see where you're coming from, but even as the writer I'm so mad at Sootbreeze for what she did. She definitely did it out of fear of being abandoned by her family, but it also was not okay to dump her kit. She didn't even try to see if the clan would still accept her or not; she just assumed they wouldn't. Mistakes were made.
Thanks! Hollowpaw's reaction was another thing I wasn't sure about how well I was conveying it. I've never had to experience such emotions (thankfully) so writing it down was honestly pretty difficult. Always good to know it turned out well and realistic
Post by mintedstar/fur on May 5, 2020 14:59:39 GMT -5
Nope! Just finished the semester. And it's only kinda sorta because technically there's still this week and next week, but I have all the assignments done and only have two more classes that I have to turn up for. So really, nothing much that I have to do.
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🍄🎶✨Brambleheart✨🎶🍄: least favourite real life cat? probably a mean calico i met who up and scratched 7 year old me out of nowhere when i was trying to pet it (it seemed 100% fine with me beforehand).... so real life mapleshade lol
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