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Post by Jekyll on Jul 19, 2019 17:29:51 GMT -5
Or you can just take them out if you want))
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Post by ♡ Bun ♡ on Jul 19, 2019 18:57:03 GMT -5
☪ Ooc >> And that's okay that were made in a different clan, I do that all the time, use character's that were already made for a different clan you just have to be open to changing it to that clan's guidelines or details, and if you aren't open to that then use different cats.
I can shorten it for you, without taking out any of the key traits. Theres just a lot of filler words that don't need to be there, I will only take them out if your not up for shortening them, I've had to shorten my descriptions before on cats that were already made because the owner of the clan asked me too and I respected their wishes.
I've had a clan owner edit and change my forms without asking me first, I was upset which is why Im asking you... but they made my description in a way that actually better described my cat the way i wanted.
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Post by Jekyll on Jul 19, 2019 20:29:34 GMT -5
You can try to shorten them if you want to
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Post by ♡ Bun ♡ on Jul 20, 2019 5:24:13 GMT -5
☪ Ooc >> Jekyll are you able to find a picture that matches opalwish's description?☪ RP >>
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Post by Jekyll on Jul 20, 2019 13:53:57 GMT -5
no, that one I sent is the closest I can find
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Post by ♡ Bun ♡ on Jul 20, 2019 17:38:18 GMT -5
☪ Ooc >> Blaze ♡ Jekyll I just realized that some of your guy's cats don't have history's, could you guys please fill those out, that is not an optional part. Also please keep in mind that the clan is only on it's second generation. Thank you! ☪ RP >>
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Post by Jekyll on Jul 20, 2019 17:40:39 GMT -5
I was trying to think of history but I Can;t really. Can I get some help figuring it out on my babs??
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Post by ♡ Bun ♡ on Jul 20, 2019 18:01:43 GMT -5
☪ Ooc >> Of course!
okay so because they only have two generations, some of them will have to be rouge's/ loners or kittypet in there former life, preferably the older cats as the younger cats are clan born.
try to put some of their thought's and reasoning on why they act a certain way, I can only help with so much.
Silverdusk could have been a rouge or loner who went by the name silver, who was traveling to find the ocean but was found by Rosenectar in the territory, he didn't join right away so they met in secret and that's how they became good friends but once he joined the clan they became even closer friends.
also tatteredleg has to be 66 moons old cause Honeystar is 66 moons old,
For him I would put what happened to his leg in the history part not his description, and that he might have had a close relationship with Honey they still do, he just kinda shut her off a little bit more because of what happened to him.
Acronpaw you could put that she was the last kit to be out of the nursery, you could have had her a parent die or parents.
I gotta get going though, just thinking of anything that might have happened to them in past whether is be an injury and argument that them that way, or how the interactions of other cats have made them that way.
Tatteredleg
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Post by Jekyll on Jul 20, 2019 18:24:23 GMT -5
Okay. How about this.
Acornpaw: Acornpaw was one of the weakest kits in the nursery and the only kit of Tiredfall and Newmoon. Her mother had died giving birth to her while her father ended up leaving the clan shortly after the death of his mate. Having no one, the he-cat was often a bit wild and it only became worse once her personality disorder came into full view. The last of the kits to become a apprentice, she is now trying hard to catch up to the others.
Tatteredleg: Looked through and saw that I do have Tatteredleg's history typed out in the history section of his form.
Silverdusk: (This was in Silverdusk's description) Many don't know who his parents were, what his history is, or even if he was clanborn. The only thing anyone knows is that he was found right outside the camp as a newborn and was drenched in the clan's scent. Many believe he was abandoned by one of the queen's of that time because he was so small and weak, though the truth was never found out.
Opalwish: Opalwish is one of the first cats born into the clan, and one of the first of the second generation of the original clan cats. She grew as a kit and was found to be quite smart and had a knack for herbs. After receiving a sign from Starclan, she was made into the medicine cat apprentice and has now taken her place as medicine cat.
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Post by ♡ Bun ♡ on Jul 20, 2019 19:00:53 GMT -5
☪ Ooc >> I called off work so i don't have to go lol those look good.
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Post by Jekyll on Jul 20, 2019 19:03:03 GMT -5
okee))
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Post by Taiyou on Jul 22, 2019 12:36:00 GMT -5
Save, if okay. After class I will post my cats)
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Post by Taiyou on Jul 22, 2019 19:14:14 GMT -5
Russetblaze
32 Moons
|Abrasive & Stoic|
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Russetblaze is a slender tom with large green eyes. He has warm bronze ground color across his head, shoulder, outer legs, back and tail. The color is at its darkest at the "saddle" area, and from there the color lightens on the sides to tawny buff. His belly is a beautiful creamy ivory color, his nose is a brick red and ears have brown-black tips. Russetblaze is bold and appears stoic but has a terrible temper in certain situations, he's cautious around new things and others. He's very protective to those close to him but tries not to show it and willing to put other before himself. Russetblaze isn’t very outgoing after and has made himself distant although he does enjoy a little company from others. Russetblaze is blunt and outspoken but he does try to be nice and cheerful but he comes off rude. He isn’t bother what he might say to others and tends to have a lack attention to others feelings.
Taiyou
History(if you have any clan cats put experiences and realtionships and the drama here same with rouges and loners but will not be put on the main page so it can be pretty detailed. )
Sage
21 Moons
|Stubborn & Firm|
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Sage is a muscular black smoke she cat with a mane around her neck, a fluffy tail and copper eyes. Sage has a black overcoat that get lighter hints on grey and brown in some places. Sage is a bit rough around the edges, she would claw someone ears off if they approach her the wrong way. Sage is bold and headstrong although she tries mean well she was a habit of being overbearing and protective, especailly Birch as she tends to teat him as a kit. Sage is also rather prideful not willing to admit when she makes a mistake or if she's needs help. At times Sage can be understanding that violence isn't the answer to everything and will try a peaceful approach to situations, also helping those in need of help. Sage can be quite cheerful and friendly around cats she knows well and trust, once pass her hard shell Sage is a kind and caring staying loyal to those close to her.
Taiyou
Sage once lived with a small group of rogues lead by her parents Cobra and Stone. At the time she was their only kit and after sometime they had more kits, Birch and his siblings were born. Sadly after two moons later, her mother and two of the kits passed away, leaving Birch as the only surviving kit and a nursing queen gladly took him in at the time. During a terrible thunderstorm, Sage, Birch and Cobra got separated from the group and escaped to high ground as the rivers started to overflow but Cobra went back to help two cats cross only to be swapped away. Once the storm stopped Sage and Birch searched for Cobra and any survivors of the group but found no one, the two siblings traveled along until they settled down in Sunflowerclan territory.
Birch
9 Moons
|Brave & Courageous |
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Birch is a large muscular brown and white tom with a white mane around his neck, a fluffy tail and copper eyes. He is taller then most and towers over cats even those around his age. Birch has a white underbelly, long jaggered claws and his tail is mixed with black, brown and white. Birch is brave and caring, taking inspiration from his father Cobra, birch tries to help any cat who asks for his help but within reason. Although Birch can be blunt and straightforward, he doesn't care if he's rude to others, as he will disregard any authority, rules and challenge cats older then him as he is willing to fight any cat that may threaten him or his love ones. Birch temper can get the best of him and he'll lash out at other but with the right guidene Birch can beceome a formable, loyal, and loving cat.
Taiyou
Birch was born to Cobra and Stone in their second litter, with his siblings Thorn and Bramble. Sadly after two moons, his mother and siblings passed away but a nursing queen gladly took him in at the time. Birch grew up well with his foster siblings but enjoyed playing with Sage when he could. During the thunderstorm, Sage, Birch and Cobra got separated from the group and escaped to high ground as the rivers started to overflow but Cobra went back to help two cats cross only to be swapped away. Once the storm stopped Sage and Birch searched for Cobra and any survivors of the group but found no one, the two siblings traveled along until they settled down in Sunflowerclan territory. One day his curiously got the better him and Birch takes time out to watch the clan from a safe distance.
Sunflowers&Roses - Lilies & Daisies
I'll added another cat later or tomorrow. I hope these are okay.) |
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Post by ♡ Bun ♡ on Jul 23, 2019 0:16:43 GMT -5
☪ Ooc >> They all look great although would it be possible if you could make more relationships and friendships with other characters besides your own please? I want everyone to be connected ^^ Welcome to Sunflowerclan and I look forward to rping with you! : )
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Post by Blaze ♡ on Jul 23, 2019 2:24:00 GMT -5
Russetblaze could be Bronzeautumn's brother, if you like?
They would have to have the same history thou
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Post by Taiyou on Jul 23, 2019 10:12:58 GMT -5
Sure, I'm fine with that blaze. I will try to added more relationships for my other cats.)
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Post by Blaze ♡ on Jul 23, 2019 12:32:10 GMT -5
Cool!
I am pretty sure they are pretty close in age. I think I made Bronze 38 moons and I am totally cool with him being 32 moons instead. xD
here is what I put together for his history-
Bronze is a young tom of about three years of age, he has led a rather simple life. He was born a loner and spend most of his time with his mother and his two siblings before finally parting ways with them trying to see if he could make it out in the world by himself.
He wasn't completely successful, almost starved to death before he stumbled upon the clan during his teen-moons. He liked the idea of structure within the group so he decided to stay.
maybe Russet decided to fall Bronze and saw that his brother was lowkey-kinda dying and helped him travel until they found the clan?
what do you think about that idea? c: i am really flexible; so free feel to change everything or be more elaborate
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Post by Blaze ♡ on Jul 23, 2019 15:38:00 GMT -5
Echoriver
39 Moons
| Warm & Determined |
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She is a silvery grey she-cat with darker tabby markings and white paws. She has a white chest and light blue eyes. Her muzzle, legs, and spine is freckled with dark grey. She is of short stature and slender. Echo is level-headed feline, has a very calm presence and warm bearing. She has a huge heart and genuinely good in others and throughout the world. Others call her naive and a dreamer but Echo knows they are wrong, she is optimistic and determined. She knows the world is a hard place and everyone deserves a second chance.
@ blazeheart
History
Echoriver came to the clan as a young cat (kit or apprentice/undecided). She is really unsure about her past, doesn't have much collection of how she truely stumbled upon Sunflowerclan and only has a faint memory of her mother. The medicine cat wasn't sure if it was brain injury or just selective memory for Echo. She took to clan life easily, enjoying the closeness of the group and thrived.
She mated to Greyfeather and gave birth to three kits; Riverpaw, Sleepypaw, and Brightpaw.
She always wanted a large family; however, sadly Greyfeather passed away while she was still in the nursery with their first litter.
Sunflowers&Roses - Lilies & Daisies
maybe she could be siblings with silverdusk?
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i believe we decided to go with echo?
also when did grey die? xD I have no idea where to incorporate them so I just panicked and said he died when river, sleepy, and bright were still kits. Unless he died before they were born and then that is is super heartbreaking but I can handle that c; |
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Post by Jekyll on Jul 23, 2019 17:06:32 GMT -5
Blaze ♡Silverdusk's history doesn't really leave room for siblings. Perhaps they were brought to the lan around the same time and grew up together? And they feel as though they're like siblings?
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Post by Protractor on Jul 23, 2019 17:59:55 GMT -5
Cactusclaw
19 Moons
|Loud & Obnoxious |
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Appearance :He has a muscular build.His claws aren't as sharp as others and take more effort to pierce skin with.This is why his resorts to kicking and smacking.He also stabs a rock into his tail before battle to have an advantage.He got so used to it he doesn't feel it anymore.His fur is a russet colour with a few splats of brown here and there.His good eye is a dark blue that looks more like a violet.He's nice,doesn't snap,and doesn't complain.He thinks of himself as Icefur's better half.She just calls it stupidity.He doesn't judge others by their abilities and always asks for help and to help when needed.He doesn't give up or let things ruffle up his fur.
@3xp Skeleton
History-Dolphinpelt came from the beaches and was rather happy there.He enjoyed the sun and the scent of the water.That was until a massive wave knocked his out and floated him away from his home.He woke up on a piece of drift wood and was slowly floating towards land.When he finally dragged himself onto land he finally realized his leg was missing.At that he passed out and then woke up in the clan,unknowing of how he got there.
Sunflowers and Roses - Lilies and Daisies
Crowsong
19 Moons
|Cheerful & Skittish |
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He is fully black with light gray stripes on his back.He has a gray circle around his left eye.His eyes are blue.He has a small tail with short fur,like the rest of his pelt.He is the complete opposite of what his pelt portrays.He is friendly,social,and never seems to be sad.Most people don't think of him as these things cause they take one look at him and place him under:moody,grumpy,and closed.
@3xp Skeleton
History-Crowsong comes from a long line of long black cats.He used to live with a rather extreme group of rogues that only let black cats stay with them.When having to chose with a young black cat with a scratched leg or a brown elder who was starving they'd chose the black cat.This is why Crowsong left and came to Sunflowerclan.
Sunflowers and Roses - Lilies and Daisies
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Post by Protractor on Jul 23, 2019 18:01:54 GMT -5
I'll have to get the pictures up later when my phone decides it wants to work
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Post by Taiyou on Jul 24, 2019 10:48:27 GMT -5
I fine with that idea)
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Post by Blaze ♡ on Jul 24, 2019 11:49:48 GMT -5
Blaze ♡ Silverdusk's history doesn't really leave room for siblings. Perhaps they were brought to the lan around the same time and grew up together? And they feel as though they're like siblings? |
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Post by Taiyou on Jul 24, 2019 12:37:59 GMT -5
Aspenwing
46 Moons
| Easy Going & Humble|
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Aspenwing is a dark grey tabby she cat with pale green eyes. She has white paws, chest, and muzzle, the stripes on her body are loose gray mackerel. Aspenwing has a pink nose, a scar under her right eye, a notch in her left ear. Aspenfur is cautions, she always seem to be on watch for something. Around cats she doesn't know well, Aspenwing is quiet and reserved, she does not like being around to much trouble or commotion and tries to keep a small group of friends who she is more cheerful and outgoing with. Aspenwing is loyal and brave, wishing to serve and protect her clan anyway she can.
Taiyou
Aspenwing came to Sunflowerclan during the early days as the clan was forming, with her family. Her family only agreed to stay for a few days and Aspen took interest in the clan ways and decide to learn much as she could. The pervious day before they left Aspenwing decide to join the clan believing her life would be better in the clan, after since that day Aspenwing has been happy to call the clan her family and glad she did stay behind. Aspenwing as a crush oh Crismonberry and open to more relationships.
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Post by Protractor on Jul 25, 2019 22:13:34 GMT -5
Ight so its taking a bit to find the photos.I had them somewhere but no I can't find them.
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Post by ♡ Bun ♡ on Jul 29, 2019 20:43:19 GMT -5
☪ Ooc >> Protractor, alright about dolphinpelts name and history, There aren't any shores for him to wash up on and the cliff's are super super steep to where no cats can climb down or up. But because his history ties to his name that wont work. The cats of sunflowerclan also dont know what dolphins are. Then your punctuation needs fixing, after those are fixed welcome to Sunflowerclan!! ☪ RP >>
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Post by Protractor on Jul 30, 2019 8:03:23 GMT -5
hfhrefe'eebner.I'll get on that
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Post by Hawkeyes258 on Sept 11, 2019 12:27:26 GMT -5
(Would having an Imgur account be best to post the pics of my cats?)
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Post by ♡ Bun ♡ on Sept 11, 2019 15:17:00 GMT -5
OOC ➺ Ahh you don't actually need an imgur account to post pictures, but yes imgur is the easiest site to post pictures, In my opinion you don't have to use it. I'll pm you on how to use it if you need. You can always just post a picture with the url like normal.
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Post by Hawkeyes258 on Sept 12, 2019 23:28:39 GMT -5
 Dawnfeather 38 moons |Loving and Naive| ✦ ✦ ✦ ✦ ✦ ✦ ✦ ✦ ✦ Dawnfeather has long, ginger fur with some white on her muzzle, chest and underbelly. She has a fluffy tail and does her best to keep her fur smooth and clean. Dawnfeather has a lean build underneath all that fur. She has pale green eyes. Dawnfeather is a sweet and compassionate cat. She does her best to put others first and help out those who need it. She has a optimistic view on the world and is known to be pretty laidback. She is a bit of an airhead and is prone to believe things easily. She gets flustered easily especially if cats flirt with her. Dawnfeather loves to play with kits and would love to have her own some day. @screenname History: Dawnfeather was born and raised as a kittypet. She grew up hearing stories about wild cats and longed to meet them someday. She has a curious and adventerous nature and started growing bored of her kittypet life. Eventually, she decided to leave and never look back. Dawnfeather came across a patrol and after some convincing, she managed to be taken to camp was given a chance to prove herself. She had a rough start at first but managed to prove herself as a capable warrior. Dawnfeather may or may not have a crush on Crimsonberry Daisies and Lilies - Joining form -  Thornshade 40 moons. |Fearless and Stubborn | ✦ ✦ ✦ ✦ ✦ ✦ ✦ ✦ ✦ Thornshade has light brown fur with black tabby stripes. He has a little bit of white on his muzzle and chin. He has yellow eyes and a muscular looking build. Thornshade is a fierce and tough cat. He is a little rough around the edges and dislikes many things. Thornshade doesn't care much for outsiders and will challenge any who set foot on Sunflowerclan territory. He is always ready for a fight and has been known to be quite ruthless. Thornshade is not the best at expressing his feelings and prefers actions over words. He is known to be sarcastic and witty occasionally. There is some kindness buried somewhere in there. Hawkeyes258History: Thornshade was born to a rogue mother while his father was a clan cat. His father ended up taking him to the clan and made him believe he was born there. His father Stonefang pushed him to be the strongest cat in the clan and would berate him constantly. This would later cause him to have a rocky relationship with his father. Even now, he wonders if he will ever be good enough. (I'm down if anyone wants their cats to be his rival/friendenemy or even to have a long time quarrel lol) Daisies and lilies - Joining form -  Ivyfrost 27 moons |Cunning and selfish | ✦ ✦ ✦ ✦ ✦ ✦ ✦ ✦ ✦ Ivyfrost has all black fur with a small white fleck on her chest. She has pale yellow eyes and a slender build. Ivyfrost is a cynical and opportunistic cat. She likes doing things her way and doesn't care what others think. Ivyfrost is rather manipulative and likes making cats do things for her. She is the type to hold a grudge and seek revenge. She loves nothing more than to lay in the sun and take a nap. You can never quite tell what she will do next. She has trouble trusting others and believes she can only trust herself. Hawkeyes258 History: Ivyfrost was born and raised as a rogue. Her mother ended up leaving her with a small group and went on her way. She learned a lot from this group until they ended up leaving her as well. Ivyfrost was on her own for a while until she came across the clan and decided to join. She likes clan life well enough but often wonders if she will have to leave that behind or if her clanmates will turn their backs on her as well. Daisies and Lilies. (Another tom coming later) |
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