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Post by ~Sapphire~ on Aug 31, 2020 15:57:15 GMT -5
Liking the new chapters! Things are really hotting up, wow The sick den scene was brutal but very good. I'm so glad Bramblekit and the others managed to escape, that would not be a nice place to be trapped in.
And very nice to hear from Milkpaw again! The flashback with his mum was honestly heartbreaking.
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Post by phantomstar57 on Sept 1, 2020 13:12:04 GMT -5
thanks for the ping! I haven't caught up yet, on this or other fics. Eyes issues (cataracts) are a pain that soon will be taken care of. But alwasy did love this fic.
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Post by mocatstar on Sept 2, 2020 0:00:24 GMT -5
Liking the new chapters! Things are really hotting up, wow The sick den scene was brutal but very good. I'm so glad Bramblekit and the others managed to escape, that would not be a nice place to be trapped in.
And very nice to hear from Milkpaw again! The flashback with his mum was honestly heartbreaking. Yeahyeah, we’re nearing the climax : )) I’m wondering where you got the impression that the rest of the cats escaped, only bramblekit was meant to escape. I think Milkpaw’s flashback is my favorite scene so far, to me it shows how much Shredpelt cares (or at least cared) about Creamfeather.
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Post by mocatstar on Sept 2, 2020 0:29:06 GMT -5
thanks for the ping! I haven't caught up yet, on this or other fics. Eyes issues (cataracts) are a pain that soon will be taken care of. But alwasy did love this fic. I’m glad you like it so much! My motivation has recently been returning, and I think I can put out a chapter at the end of the week! And I’m sorry about your eyes, hope you get better.
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Post by ~Sapphire~ on Sept 2, 2020 6:53:45 GMT -5
Liking the new chapters! Things are really hotting up, wow The sick den scene was brutal but very good. I'm so glad Bramblekit and the others managed to escape, that would not be a nice place to be trapped in.
And very nice to hear from Milkpaw again! The flashback with his mum was honestly heartbreaking. Yeahyeah, we’re nearing the climax : )) I’m wondering where you got the impression that the rest of the cats escaped, only bramblekit was meant to escape. I think Milkpaw’s flashback is my favorite scene so far, to me it shows how much Shredpelt cares (or at least cared) about Creamfeather. I can't read apparently xD The scene was pretty clear when I read it back. Yeah definitely! It adds some good nuance to Shredpelt's character
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Post by mocatstar on Sept 2, 2020 18:03:14 GMT -5
Yeahyeah, we’re nearing the climax : )) I’m wondering where you got the impression that the rest of the cats escaped, only bramblekit was meant to escape. I think Milkpaw’s flashback is my favorite scene so far, to me it shows how much Shredpelt cares (or at least cared) about Creamfeather. I can't read apparently xD The scene was pretty clear when I read it back. Yeah definitely! It adds some good nuance to Shredpelt's character
The more fleshed out characters the better!
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Post by mocatstar on Sept 9, 2020 21:53:35 GMT -5
Mostly just a filler chapter, but I promise that there's only a few more chapters left until it's finished! mintedstar/fur🦇~Sapphire~phantomstar57(Quick poll, should I post this fic onto ao3?)
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Post by ~Sapphire~ on Sept 14, 2020 17:46:41 GMT -5
Bramblekit and Milkpaw getting some... almost quiet time together was really nice to read. The action is all the more tense for the character moments in between. As for Ao3, go for it!
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Post by mocatstar on Sept 15, 2020 12:48:34 GMT -5
Bramblekit and Milkpaw getting some... almost quiet time together was really nice to read. The action is all the more tense for the character moments in between. As for Ao3, go for it! Me shipping my characters and then realizing that I’m the author and I can pretty much do whatever I want-Once I finish it I’ll start editing, and edited chapters will be going onto ao3!
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Post by mintedstar/fur🦇 on Sept 16, 2020 14:19:18 GMT -5
Wooooooh! That's amazing!
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Post by mocatstar on Sept 17, 2020 1:29:01 GMT -5
Wooooooh! That's amazing! The chapter or the fact that I’m close to finishing the story?
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Post by ~Sapphire~ on Sept 17, 2020 8:25:02 GMT -5
Shipping your own characters is absolutely the best feeling
Ahhh I like the new chapter! The battle scene is very tense, especially the part with Flamefur - super worried for Bramblekit right now...
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Post by mocatstar on Sept 17, 2020 17:32:41 GMT -5
Shipping your own characters is absolutely the best feeling
Ahhh I like the new chapter! The battle scene is very tense, especially the part with Flamefur - super worried for Bramblekit right now...
Ahhh, I know! That realization when two of your characters go together I’d just wonderful!
Thank you, I wish I could’ve made the scene longer but I didn’t know what else to write..
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Post by mintedstar/fur🦇 on Sept 17, 2020 23:47:26 GMT -5
Wooooooh! That's amazing! The chapter or the fact that I’m close to finishing the story? Close to finishing the story. I haven't gotten to read the new chapter yet, but I'm sure it is wooooh too. XD
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Post by mocatstar on Sept 18, 2020 21:26:21 GMT -5
The chapter or the fact that I’m close to finishing the story? Close to finishing the story. I haven't gotten to read the new chapter yet, but I'm sure it is wooooh too. XD Merci! I'm super excited about finishing it too!
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Post by mocatstar on Sept 19, 2020 20:13:37 GMT -5
Chapter fourteen is up, which also means we're finished! Wow, this was a rollercoaster of a fic, but it's something that I'll treasure forever. Starting out with a character inspired by a warrior cats roleplay on roblox and with some inspiration from reading 1984 I never really expected to write something of this scale, especially something that looks to be loved by quite a bit of people. I give out thanks to everyone who stuck with this fic from the beginning, your feedback is really what kept me working at this thing until I finally completed it. Without you, I think this would've ended up right next to Moxie and Spruce's story where it'd never be touched again. I plan to take a small break from writing warriors while I plan out my next story, which will be a sequel explaining Copperstar's motivations. And in between that, I will be updating edited Brambleberry's silence chapters on ao3, which I promise will have a better story since I came into with absolutely no plan but managed to make something out of it. Au revoir! Auf wiedersehen! I will return with a brand new story soon, so please, take care in my absence! - ~Sapphire~- mintedstar/fur🦇- phantomstar57
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Post by mintedstar/fur🦇 on Sept 19, 2020 23:56:34 GMT -5
Awesome! Congrats! //throws sparkles and confetti
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Post by mocatstar on Sept 20, 2020 1:31:17 GMT -5
Awesome! Congrats! //throws sparkles and confetti EEEEE! I’m so excited that I finished this!
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Post by ~Sapphire~ on Sept 22, 2020 6:23:45 GMT -5
Congrats on finishing!! And what a finale I'm just so happy Bramblekit finally gets to be Bramblepaw. And that Flamefur can't do any more harm
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Post by mocatstar on Sept 22, 2020 13:39:59 GMT -5
Congrats on finishing!! And what a finale I'm just so happy Bramblekit finally gets to be Bramblepaw. And that Flamefur can't do any more harm Thank you! ) I had the climax in mind before I even started the story, and in retrospect I wish I could have put more into the scene where the light pours into the clearing and bramblepaw realizes that he can see in light again.
The whole thing where Bramblekit wasn’t able to see clearly in light is not only a symptom of a bad concussion but also as a symbol of his trauma, and when that symptom clears it would only be when the cause of his trauma is gone.
In the edited chapters I’ll definitely put more emphasis on that detail. (Sorry for explaining the entirety of the story’s secret meaning lol)
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Post by mintedstar/fur🦇 on Oct 5, 2020 17:35:47 GMT -5
How are you?
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Post by mocatstar on Oct 6, 2020 0:35:08 GMT -5
I’m good, thank you. Why do you ask?
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Post by mintedstar/fur🦇 on Oct 6, 2020 0:42:17 GMT -5
Just checking in. I like talking to people.
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Post by mocatstar on Oct 6, 2020 14:26:56 GMT -5
Just checking in. I like talking to people. Ah okay, I’m just glad that I actually finished this.
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Post by mintedstar/fur🦇 on Oct 6, 2020 16:44:24 GMT -5
That is a really good feeling. I love it.
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Post by mocatstar on Nov 25, 2020 19:45:14 GMT -5
The edited version is here! I was lying about uploading the edited chapters on ao3 because I didn't touch Brambleberry's Silence until today when I just went screw it and edited the entire thing in one sitting. Soo.. yeah. Here's the final version, quite a few important things were changed and scenes were added, so if you'd like to reread then go right ahead! Ping list: ~Sapphire~phantomstar57mintedstar/fur🦇
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Post by phantomstar57 on Nov 25, 2020 21:38:43 GMT -5
I'll e happy to once I get my cataract surgery in Jan. I did like this story!
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Post by mocatstar on Nov 25, 2020 21:41:43 GMT -5
I'll e happy to once I get my cataract surgery in Jan. I did like this story! Thank you! It means a lot ) and I hope your surgery goes well
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