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Post by mocatstar on Jul 8, 2019 15:52:33 GMT -5
No problem!
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Post by ~Sapphire~ on Jul 19, 2019 16:41:20 GMT -5
Awesome chapter! I love how you show Bramblekit processing (or not) his feelings about what has been revealed - the way you show emotions is so evocative, and imo his reaction is more realistic than simply believing what the RiverClan cats say. Well played! Oh, and please do add me to your pinglist!
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Post by mocatstar on Jul 19, 2019 18:45:51 GMT -5
Awesome chapter! I love how you show Bramblekit processing (or not) his feelings about what has been revealed - the way you show emotions is so evocative, and imo his reaction is more realistic than simply believing what the RiverClan cats say. Well played! Oh, and please do add me to your pinglist! Thanks! I'll sure add you to the ping list.
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Post by Deleted on Aug 8, 2019 6:35:24 GMT -5
The writing for this is great. o: I'll be watching for future chapters.
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Post by phantomstar57 on Aug 10, 2019 19:50:15 GMT -5
I am intrigued and have read thru chap seven. Put me on your ping list and do fan me.
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Post by mocatstar on Aug 11, 2019 16:25:10 GMT -5
I am intrigued and have read thru chap seven. Put me on your ping list and do fan me. I shall add you. (I also need to update this so excuse me for a second)
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Post by mintedstar/fur🦇 on Jan 12, 2020 18:37:29 GMT -5
Yessssssssss! You're back!
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Post by mocatstar on Jan 12, 2020 18:38:56 GMT -5
Yessssssssss! You're back! Yes, sorry for the absence I kinda lost interest in warriors since I hadn't got any of the new books and I was avoiding the warriors general
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Post by Deleted on Jan 13, 2020 1:03:52 GMT -5
Oh yay your back.
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Post by mocatstar on Jan 13, 2020 1:05:33 GMT -5
Oh yay your back. I'M ALIIIIIIIVE
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Post by mintedstar/fur🦇 on Jan 13, 2020 1:37:47 GMT -5
Well, know you are welcome here. I don't think any of the WFF even hang out in Warriors General. I know I don't.
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Post by mocatstar on Jan 13, 2020 1:39:40 GMT -5
Well, know you are welcome here. I don't think any of the WFF even hang out in Warriors General. I know I don't. Well, I've always liked debating things and discussion. It's why I love forums, and I guess once I get the new books I'll delve into that hellhole once again.
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Post by mintedstar/fur🦇 on Jan 13, 2020 1:51:55 GMT -5
A plan is a plan. My strength goes out to you!
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Post by mocatstar on Jan 13, 2020 1:52:48 GMT -5
A plan is a plan. My strength goes out to you! Thank you! Your strength is greatly appreciated! 😊
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Post by phantomstar57 on Jan 13, 2020 12:14:14 GMT -5
Well, know you are welcome here. I don't think any of the WFF even hang out in Warriors General. I know I don't. I just hang out here in the Fan fic section and occasionally stick my head in other areas .
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Post by ~Sapphire~ on Jan 24, 2020 11:48:18 GMT -5
I'm also pretty sure that not everyone here is caught up on the new books either...
Love the new chapter by the way! Really interesting to see the contrast between Milkpaw's and Bramblekit's views of the situation
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Post by mocatstar on Jan 24, 2020 13:17:58 GMT -5
I'm also pretty sure that not everyone here is caught up on the new books either... Love the new chapter by the way! Really interesting to see the contrast between Milkpaw's and Bramblekit's views of the situation The contrast is important, it helps distinguish between the two characters. (Tbh, it's this contrast that I think the POW and OOTS lacked in their povs)
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Post by ~Sapphire~ on Feb 7, 2020 7:29:52 GMT -5
I'd agree with that! (OOTS also fails hard on not giving the main characters proper arcs, which makes it worse.)
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Post by mocatstar on Jul 28, 2020 20:20:03 GMT -5
Chapter nine is up, finally! I know I've never been exactly, uh, good at updating consistently, but motivation has never been one of my strong suits. However, though I have no idea why, I've gotten a sudden burst of motivation to write another chapter today and so here we are! Hope you enjoy! mintedstar/fur🦇 ~Sapphire~ phantomstar57
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Post by ~Sapphire~ on Aug 3, 2020 16:59:04 GMT -5
Nice chapter, and good to see this back! I like the hints of backstory, and I'm definitely curious (and pretty concerned) about what Bramblekit's dad's agenda is...
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Post by mocatstar on Aug 3, 2020 22:22:32 GMT -5
Nice chapter, and good to see this back! I like the hints of backstory, and I'm definitely curious (and pretty concerned) about what Bramblekit's dad's agenda is... Thank you, glad to know that you’re enjoying this even after so long.
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Post by ~Sapphire~ on Aug 4, 2020 7:57:00 GMT -5
No worries, I'm glad to see you around again. How've you been?
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Post by mocatstar on Aug 4, 2020 10:05:30 GMT -5
I've been fairly good, still trying to piece together the motivation to finish this since I came up with a new fanfic idea that could take place as like a prequel to this or something.
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Post by ~Sapphire~ on Aug 5, 2020 6:40:38 GMT -5
I'm glad c: I wouldn't worry, sometimes having two projects on the go can increase your motivation in the long run since you can skip between projects if writer's block hits. What's the new idea about?
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Post by mocatstar on Aug 6, 2020 21:06:02 GMT -5
I'm glad c: I wouldn't worry, sometimes having two projects on the go can increase your motivation in the long run since you can skip between projects if writer's block hits. What's the new idea about? I have a lot of projects lying about and to be honest it just makes it worse- I had two ideas actually. One would be to make a story fleshing out copperstar and explain her motivations, and the other would be about a rogue manipulating a young, naive warrior in order to take over a clan.
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Post by ~Sapphire~ on Aug 7, 2020 7:53:12 GMT -5
Ahhhh I'm sorry Both of those sound super interesting! I'd definitely like to find out more about Copperstar...
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Post by mocatstar on Aug 9, 2020 17:56:05 GMT -5
Ahhhh I'm sorry Both of those sound super interesting! I'd definitely like to find out more about Copperstar... A prequel if you’d will! I think I’ll be able to get an idea for how that’ll go by the end of this story, so stay tuned
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Post by ~Sapphire~ on Aug 10, 2020 15:30:52 GMT -5
I'll look forward to it!
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Post by mocatstar on Aug 19, 2020 15:41:16 GMT -5
Chapter Ten is here! And just like this double-digit chapter this one's pretty long, so bear with me! ~Sapphire~ mintedstar/fur🦇phantomstar57
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