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Post by ƤαƖƖαѕ ✧ on Jul 2, 2019 5:13:40 GMT -5
Okay I wrote another thing for Amadrya’s death but I wrote it in the car on mobile so forgive if it’s short and full of typos
In terms of her reaction to the cameras, this is one of three potential scenarios; she might ask Everest to move in front of the cameras to stop her family and the Capitol being able to watch her die, she might break the camera, or she might yell at it. Not sure which to do yet)
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Post by ƤαƖƖαѕ ✧ on Jul 2, 2019 5:14:17 GMT -5
Amadrya Darrow
The fire-eyed maid of smoky war
She let out only a gasp at first as he hurt her, all of her breath taken away by the sudden pain. An excruciating pain the likes of which she had never experienced.
Her hand instinctively moved over the wound once the blade was removed. She could feel the hot, sticky blood already coating her hands. It was a deep cut; there would be no saving her. Her breathing was quick, shallow and ragged now.
She fixed her grey eyes on Everest, blinking away tears. Tears of pain, fear, betrayal. She would not let anyone see her cry.
She had been stupid really, to fall. She’d known the whole time that loving him would kill her. She had just never thought it would be him who would kill her.
“I always knew it would be me who got hurt,” she said, her voice quiet but sharp with pain and a little breathless.
She was sitting up now, propped up against the side of a building. That was good. She didn’t have the strength to stand and she certainly didn’t want to die curled up on the ground.
But now she was looking around, because she knew a camera would be on her somewhere. They didn’t like to miss this kind of thing. And that was when she saw it, the glassy glint of a lens nestled in the crack of a building.
“Oh, yeah, I hope you’ve all got your popcorn, I hope this is entertaining!” Amadrya raised her voice to the camera “I’m hope you’ll be satisfied, I’m sure the grief of my family is worth this shit for you. And you’ve been watching this knowing I was about to be betrayed by the boy I trusted so much. You knew I loved him.”
She knew they knew. Of course they did. But it didn’t matter because it told a good story, which was all the Capitol really wanted. A tragic love story was just the kind of thing they ate up.
She didn’t want to give them the satisfaction but there was nothing she could do. The cameras would be watching her from several angles, probably. They were everywhere. No way to stop her death being televised.
But that was when she realised that she had said to the cameras what she had not yet said to Everest himself, that she had admitted her feelings in a fit of anger. She locked her gaze on his again.
“Yeah, I loved you. But don’t feel sorry for me, don’t feel guilty. If anything I feel sorry for you. Go ahead, win this thing. Live with what you’ve done. I’ll forgive you, but my forgiveness is worth nothing if you don’t forgive yourself. And you won’t.”
Anger and betrayal burned in her gaze, but after a little they softened. He was just a scared kid, like her, and perhaps he had felt the same way all this time. Not that it mattered now. But she could already see the guilt on his face, the remorse.
In his emotions, his hit hadn’t been quite right. It wouldn’t give her the quick death she thought he had planned. Instead she would likely slowly bleed out.
“If you’re not going to go,” she said softly, “then stay and talk.”
She’d never admit it, but she was scared. She needed a distraction, and so did he. Neither of them wanted to face what was happening right now. Perhaps it would be easier if she could talk to someone. Besides, he seemed to need it to. It would assuage his guilt if he felt like he was helping her.
It would be over soon, anyway. Her heart would stop, her cannon would fire. A hovercraft would pick up her body, and a team in the Capitol would clean her up, redress her - probably in the clothes she had worn to the reaping - and then ship her back to District 7 in a simple wooden coffin. Her nightmare would be over, she would be home. Even if the nightmare for her family was only just beginning.
Still, she didn’t want to think about that right now. |
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Post by Sparky on Jul 2, 2019 5:40:28 GMT -5
[ ~cries~ ]
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Post by ƤαƖƖαѕ ✧ on Jul 2, 2019 6:12:39 GMT -5
(I know, I’m sorry xD)
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Post by Sparky on Jul 2, 2019 7:05:44 GMT -5
[ oh you know I'm gonna do like four different au deaths for Ari now ]
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Post by ƤαƖƖαѕ ✧ on Jul 2, 2019 7:27:40 GMT -5
Hahaha I’m intrigued XD)
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Post by Sparky on Jul 2, 2019 10:57:45 GMT -5
[ okay death scenes...
1. Hunted down by the career pack. When they find him the pack splits between Everest, Amadrya, and Ari vs. The rest of the careers. Battle ensues and Ari is fatally wounded. Dies in Amadrya's arms(would she cry? XD)
2. Arena caused death. Robin and Ari are at their base(a tall building) and the gamemakers decide to collapse it.
3. Same as one, but the pack splits rather peacefully and the Games go onward. The Everest/Amadrya/Ari group runs into trouble and he dies there.
4. I have literally no idea halp ]]
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Post by ƤαƖƖαѕ ✧ on Jul 2, 2019 10:59:56 GMT -5
(Oh my gosh I love all three of those but I have no idea for 4.
Also Amadrya may cry, she’d like shed a tear and probably be furious that she had because she doesn’t want to cry, she doesn’t cry. Plus she wants to reassure Ari and make sure he’s okay and if she’s crying that isn’t reassuring to him. I think Amadrya would go all protective and caring with him. Sure as hell she’d try and kill whoever killed him)
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Post by Sparky on Jul 2, 2019 11:09:46 GMT -5
[ that makes sense.
Yeah Amadrya could totally pull a Katniss and instantly kill whoever wounded Ari.
The fourth one could be some sort of sacrifice. Or maybe even he makes it to the final two and it's the fight between them? ]]
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Post by ƤαƖƖαѕ ✧ on Jul 2, 2019 11:11:55 GMT -5
(Hey, she’d try, she might not succeed. Especially if one of the others stops her. Or I kind of imagine she sees Ari get hit and is about to go crazy and kill whoever hurt him but then she realises he’s dying and she has more important things to focus on; she wants to comfort Ari rather than kill whoever kills him. I could see that equally happening.
Oh my gosh that’d be so sad if he was in the final two)
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Post by Sparky on Jul 2, 2019 11:30:18 GMT -5
[ whatever makes the audience cry the most:) ]
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Post by ƤαƖƖαѕ ✧ on Jul 2, 2019 11:31:27 GMT -5
I’d say protective mom mode engage. She lets the killer go so she can be with Ari instead
For the final two? Oh my god that would actually kill me no protect Ariiiii)
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Post by ƤαƖƖαѕ ✧ on Jul 2, 2019 11:32:20 GMT -5
(But I am totally happy to help with any of your writing for his and either respond with stuff for Amadrya or tell you how she’d react so you can add her in if you want)
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Post by 𝕊𝕙𝕒𝕕𝕠𝕨 on Jul 2, 2019 11:51:20 GMT -5
(My ideas for Robin’s death.
1: Arena Event that occurs prior to Ari’s death, she gets caught in it but he survives.
2: Ari dies before her and they get separated, she ends up avoiding all other tributes out of heartbreak of losing the one friend she had. Eventually an arena event/something like falling rubble kills her.
3: She dies around when Ari dies, but it’s by natural causes.
4: She dies, again after Ari dies, but it’s her choice and out of guilt at what she became she...jumps off the roof, it’s sad.
5: Dies when she’s with Ari, they’re on a roof or something, something starts crumbling and she pushes him away from it but gets killed in the process.)
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Post by ƤαƖƖαѕ ✧ on Jul 2, 2019 11:53:56 GMT -5
(Oh wow all of those are very sad  poor Robin I still haven’t finalised Amadrya’s death, still can’t decide whether she should yell at the cameras, destroy the cameras, or have Everest stand in front of them to block the view. I’ll figure it out. But what I wrote up there was only one of the potential options. I don’t think I’ll write out the others though because it won’t change it much so... XD) |
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Post by 𝕊𝕙𝕒𝕕𝕠𝕨 on Jul 2, 2019 12:07:49 GMT -5
(Oh, that’s exciting!
I’ve added two more options. I’m unsure what to do with her death other than it’s going to be caused by an Arena event.)
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Post by ƤαƖƖαѕ ✧ on Jul 2, 2019 12:10:36 GMT -5
(Ooh which do you think would fit Robin best? For example we do love a self-sacrificing character like you wrote for option 5 but I think whatever fits most with her personality and characterisation would be good for her x)
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Post by 𝕊𝕙𝕒𝕕𝕠𝕨 on Jul 2, 2019 12:36:47 GMT -5
(I honestly think all of them could fit.
I’m living my fir this Evedrya stuff though.)
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Post by ƤαƖƖαѕ ✧ on Jul 2, 2019 12:37:55 GMT -5
(Well you could always try it out and see which seem to fit  Haha thank you ) I love it too) |
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Post by 𝕊𝕙𝕒𝕕𝕠𝕨 on Jul 2, 2019 12:44:59 GMT -5
”And he finally reveals himself!” Robin mentioned as Ari came into view, her arms were crossed, an arrow in one hand.
For the most part, she didn’t awnser his questions or comments, she only smirked as she stared up. And then he asked about the alliance.
“I mean, people do better when in groups. What exactly are you going to do when the Career Pack find you, one person vs. all of them?” She shrugged, “Don’t think that’s going to over well at all. But two people?” She left the question open for a moment.
“Well, I think the chances improve, and I think both you and I want to get home.” Her voice shook some at that, and she cleared her throat to attempt and cover it, “For what it’s worth, I won’t kill you, that is, if you won’t kill me.”
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Post by ƤαƖƖαѕ ✧ on Jul 2, 2019 13:15:28 GMT -5
Anyway how are you guys?)
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Post by ƤαƖƖαѕ ✧ on Jul 2, 2019 13:50:50 GMT -5
Pretty good thanks x)
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Post by ƤαƖƖαѕ ✧ on Jul 2, 2019 14:01:51 GMT -5
Good x spotty WiFi so I’m scared to write anything long in case I lose it but otherwise okay xD)
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Post by 𝕊𝕙𝕒𝕕𝕠𝕨 on Jul 2, 2019 14:17:32 GMT -5
(Hey Friends!)
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Post by ƤαƖƖαѕ ✧ on Jul 2, 2019 14:32:43 GMT -5
Hey Chaos Oh, everyone, I plan on getting replies on the high school thing and in 1x1s and stuff soon coz the WiFi seems to be kind of on my side) |
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Post by 𝕊𝕙𝕒𝕕𝕠𝕨 on Jul 2, 2019 14:51:17 GMT -5
(I have had semi-romances with Pallas, and Elo. I may have one with Sparky with Zach/Leon on Stranded.
Leo, Buddy, I haven’t had one with you yet.
me literally selling out my characters like sl+ts.)
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poor Robin
