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Post by mintedstar/fur🦇 on Jun 15, 2019 22:33:49 GMT -5
From how the characters tend to go I never will be.
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Post by mintedstar/fur🦇 on Jun 23, 2019 19:23:53 GMT -5
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Post by ~Sapphire~ on Jun 26, 2019 9:41:52 GMT -5
Love the new chapters! Seems like it's going to be an interesting Gathering... And I'm totally not imagining Bloodclaw as War from Good Omens
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Post by mintedstar/fur🦇 on Jun 26, 2019 16:19:13 GMT -5
Please totally do. She basically is. XD
It is, it is.
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Post by mintedstar/fur🦇 on Jul 4, 2019 23:36:12 GMT -5
I'll update this on Sunday or Monday.
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Post by ~Sapphire~ on Jul 19, 2019 16:44:29 GMT -5
I'll update this on Sunday or Monday. 0.0
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Post by mintedstar/fur🦇 on Jul 19, 2019 18:29:55 GMT -5
Wooooow. Yeah. It's certainly been past then. XD
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Post by mintedstar/fur🦇 on Jul 20, 2019 4:49:30 GMT -5
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Post by ~Sapphire~ on Jul 20, 2019 16:47:55 GMT -5
Argh, the tension! I love how well you show the threats from all those different directions Interesting how the different Clans seem to be dealing with the not-dead cats... And how Jayfeather's becoming so close to Bane... And an interesting terrifying question, how will everyone react when Hawkfrost and the other cats behind the dark forest attack return?
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Post by mintedstar/fur🦇 on Jul 20, 2019 19:12:28 GMT -5
Hopefully the answers to that will be up sooner than my last update was. XD
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Post by mintedstar/fur🦇 on Aug 1, 2019 2:30:26 GMT -5
Boop on my end to remember to update tomorrow.
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Post by phantomstar57 on Aug 1, 2019 19:56:26 GMT -5
Finally caught back up! This looks to be a very tense Gathering. . ..
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Post by mintedstar/fur🦇 on Aug 1, 2019 22:51:40 GMT -5
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Post by mintedstar/fur🦇 on Aug 15, 2019 2:32:53 GMT -5
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Post by mintedstar/fur🦇 on Aug 15, 2019 3:35:12 GMT -5
Good news. I edited all the rest of this story. I think I have to polish up the epilogue a bit, but otherwise I don't have to worry about the rest of it.
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Post by ~Sapphire~ on Aug 26, 2019 17:13:35 GMT -5
This is late, I'm sorry, but the new chapters are great! I love how you show the 3's reactions to Ashfur - I feel so sorry for them tbh. And there's only going to be more of those situations unless someone finds a way to stop them...
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Post by mintedstar/fur🦇 on Aug 26, 2019 22:28:22 GMT -5
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Post by ~Sapphire~ on Aug 27, 2019 7:05:31 GMT -5
There was a small stretched of silence. Then I said, "Good." This line really hit me. Poor Firestar...
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Post by phantomstar57 on Aug 27, 2019 14:12:10 GMT -5
TY! Will read it asap
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Post by mintedstar/fur🦇 on Aug 27, 2019 16:47:17 GMT -5
Yeeeeeeeeeep, Sapphire. Me too. Me too.
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Post by mintedstar/fur🦇 on Sept 16, 2019 12:44:08 GMT -5
Oh. I was unaware the pictures were hosted on Tinypic. o.o
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Post by phantomstar57 on Sept 16, 2019 12:56:55 GMT -5
Oh. I was unaware the pictures were hosted on Tinypic. o.o I had to change all the pics in NEW BLOOD because of Tinypic's demise. I used Imgur which several people recommended and now have New Blood's illustrations there. I had to reload every single one. . .
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Post by mintedstar/fur🦇 on Sept 16, 2019 12:58:03 GMT -5
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Post by mintedstar/fur🦇 on Sept 16, 2019 12:58:52 GMT -5
Ouch! I'm sorry to hear that, Phantom!
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Post by phantomstar57 on Sept 16, 2019 15:30:05 GMT -5
If I recall right it was last year sometime when TinyPic started to become a problem. Thanks for the Ping! Will read asap!
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Post by ~Sapphire~ on Sept 16, 2019 17:24:12 GMT -5
More revelations! And I'm glad Hollyleaf gets to be one of the counterparts this time. This paragraph made me smile a whole lot
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Post by mintedstar/fur🦇 on Sept 17, 2019 19:06:57 GMT -5
I'm pleased to hear it!
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Post by mintedstar/fur🦇 on Sept 21, 2019 17:59:10 GMT -5
~Sapphire~phantomstar57And that's a wrap! This was a three chapter update - 20, 21, and Ep. But apparently there was a typo in the last thread title that said I had released chapter 20. Sooooo ye. We're done with book 2. FUN FACTS – + Bane is a play on the fact that Death tends to name himself off really obvious things – like ‘Door’. Since The Banes is the collective name for the Four Horsemen catified in Greebo’s fic it was also a nod toward that in case I didn’t decide to call the collective ‘The Banes’. + Senkis is just a slightly misspelled form of the word sickness … backwards. Turns out Illfur isn’t too good at on the spot name invention either. (Siknes) + Ashfur would have agreed with Hollyleaf about returning the dead back to life. + Return the dead to the dead: Hollyleaf, Jayfeather, Bane, Bloodclaw, Firestar In the middle: Dovewing (kept in the dark about the plans), Senkis, Lionblaze (kept in the dark about the plans) Against it: Ivypool, Brackenfur
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Post by ~Sapphire~ on Sept 26, 2019 12:06:32 GMT -5
My brothers are coming, and you aren’t ready for them.” This is such a good (and ominous) ending! Things are ramping up on pretty much every front - the horsemen, the prey running out, Hawkfrost's return (I can think of a lot of cats who are going to have a bone to pick with that) - and I can't wait to find out how they all resolve... I have to say, I did not expect Hollyleaf to be the one critical to stopping everything but I'm really enjoying it! Do you have a title planned for book three?
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Post by mintedstar/fur🦇 on Sept 26, 2019 14:04:34 GMT -5
I have the final ramp up for book 3. Which ... may or may not clock in at 50t rather than the roughly 25t I've been hitting. I'm not sure yet. I'm only in the drafting stages right now.
The epilogue is also purposefully rushed ... if you noticed it was rushed. If it didn't look rushed then never mind!
Yeeeee. I've had this story kind of plotted for several years now. I still have some old comic pieces - which is interesting because I've almost caught up to where my outline runs out on the old draft. But even version one of this fic had Hollyleaf as a pivotal role.
Book 3 is currently titled: Land Divided It's subject to get a bit fancy but the core idea will remain the same.
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