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Post by Aria on Dec 29, 2018 15:36:17 GMT -5
Could I snag warrior f and senior warrior B Hey Aria! Unfortunately, I'm only allowing people to claim up to three spots for the time being, and you already have Whitesea and Sootpaw. I'd be glad to reserve one of these spots for you, but I can't give you both. If you would still like one of them, let me know. ^^
^^ No worries, I could I please have Warrior F her name is Dawnstep. Oh and in the small bio for sootpaw I missed up and said his eyes where green when they most to be amber. Could you fix that,please? Warrior F -- Dawnstep A lovely calico she-cat with vivid green yes. Sickly. Depressed. Sweet. She is open to a new mate(Slow-burn) and other relationships
Dawnstep is lovely calico with splotches of orange,black,and white along her body. She shines bright as the sun no matter what time of the day is. She is smaller than size average cat but makes up from it her strength and speed. Dawnstep and Stonecreek were childhood friends and fell in love. They were so happily live in Puffinclan. One day while Dawnstep was doing some solo hunting in the forest a adder caught of her guard and Stonecreek just so happened to come look for her and took the blow. It struck him in the neck killing instant but allowed her escaped. She has never been the same since then. About two weeks later, still heartbroken and feel sick she went to medicine cat's den and found out she was pregnant with Stonecreek's kits. It was to her joy the was becoming a mother and dismay that would have their father at their. She raise as best she could but her heart never mended either did most of her internal wounds from the stressful birth. Since the day her kits were apprenticed, she has decided to become a nursery caretaker as she was deemed both emotional and physical to duties as normal warrior.
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Post by embercurse on Dec 29, 2018 15:46:50 GMT -5
Aria Of course. ^^ I do want to ask if you can change something in Dawnstep's form? Her past and everything is fine with me, but the part about her living in the medicine cat's den is something that I'd like to change. I'm okay with her being viewed as a cat that has been placed under a lot of emotional and physical stress, but I don't believe that Graystar or the clan would move her to the medicine cat's den because of it. Dawnstep would likely either stay in the warriors' den, and simply be regarded as a cat that has been through a lot, or to the elders' den if she truly isn't capable of performing warrior duties. She could also become a nursery caretaker and stay in the nursery to help the queens and their kits. Dawnstep could still visit the medicine den regularly, like for mental health check-ups and herbs to help keep her strength up, but unless she is currently injured or sick, I don't believe she needs to be a resident of the medicine cat's den. If you could just change that one part, that would be great. ^^"
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Post by Aria on Dec 29, 2018 16:00:01 GMT -5
Thank and fixed embercurse |
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Post by ✨ nissabug ✨ on Dec 29, 2018 16:46:53 GMT -5
[.p align="center"][.font color="#000000"][.strong]Senior Warrior A -- [.em][Speckleface][./em][./strong][./font][./p][.p align="center"][.font color="#000000"][.em]small brown-and-ginger tortoiseshell she-cat with yellow eyes. stubborn. cranky. big-hearted. Follow this with three personality or character attributes. (e.g. dark brown she-cat with green eyes. wise. patient. stubborn.)[./em][./font][./p][.p align="center"].
[./font][./p][.p align="center"][.font color="#000000"]Speckleface has long fur, but it's wispy and soft instead of thick. Her pelt is dark brown and dappled with bright ginger, especially on her face. Her tail is feathery, but half of it is missing from a fight with a fox many seasons ago. She's slender and small under all her fur, with round features, and soft yellow eyes. Speckleface already acts like an elder, but when you ask her about retirement she gets snappy. She grumbles about anything that's even slightly annoying, but won't do much about it. She also enjoys picking on others, but she never means any real harm, as she's a big softy on the inside. However, she'd rather ramble on about the young cats than show it off. [./font][./p][.p align="center"][.font color="#000000"]
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i kinda want her mate to be a she-cat too lol but that's up to whoever claims them of course
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Post by embercurse on Dec 29, 2018 17:16:35 GMT -5
✨ nissabug ✨ I have no issue with her mate being a she-cat, but I do want to point out that speckleface and her mate have a kit--warrior n. So, in the event that the person who claims speckleface's mate also creates a she-cat, i'll change the family tree so that warrior n is their adopted kit instead. if whoever claims speckleface's mate makes a tom, then warrior n will remain as their biological kit. does that sound fair? ^^" |
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Post by ✨ nissabug ✨ on Dec 29, 2018 17:20:54 GMT -5
yep that's fine!! that's how i figured it would go :3
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Post by ʙᴜᴍʙʟᴇʙᴇᴇ » on Dec 29, 2018 17:36:17 GMT -5
featherwish and robinkit are done i think! unless i need to expand on them more ^.^' seastorm will hopefully be done soon! |
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Post by embercurse on Dec 29, 2018 17:54:51 GMT -5
ʙᴜᴍʙʟᴇʙᴇᴇ » nah, i don't think you need to c: i do have a question though--you mention a Cardinalflight in Robinkit's description, was that intentional? i just want to make sure i'm not missing anything ^^; |
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Post by ʙᴜᴍʙʟᴇʙᴇᴇ » on Dec 29, 2018 18:00:24 GMT -5
ah, yes! sorry, i should have explained! cardinalflight is who i believe rain decided to use for warrior n, as robinkit's unknown father ^.^ i think that's the right name, but i know for sure it was cardinal- something |
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Post by embercurse on Dec 29, 2018 19:27:59 GMT -5
ohh, that makes sense c'x thanks for clarifying! i'm excited to read rain's description for him |
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Post by willowsprint on Dec 30, 2018 14:20:27 GMT -5
May I claim Elder A and Apprentice H, this looks like fun!
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bumbleking
"you seem in an awful hurry to die," he meowed
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Post by bumbleking on Dec 30, 2018 17:09:15 GMT -5
*kicks down the door* DID SOMEBODY SAY LESBIANS
anyway this is my way of claiming senior warrior b cause *eyes emoji*
graystar: lesbians, what is your wisdom?
speckleface: world hard and cold
senior warrior b: girlfriend soft and warm
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Transgender
bumbleking
"you seem in an awful hurry to die," he meowed
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Post by bumbleking on Dec 30, 2018 18:09:01 GMT -5
Senior Warrior B -- Cloudstep tall white she-cat with blue eyes. levelheaded. mischievous. taciturn.
Cloudstep is an elegant, long-limbed she-cat with short, pure white fur and blue eyes. Her face is narrow with a long muzzle, wide ears, and a pink nose. The fur on her tail is feathery and slightly longer than on the rest of her body, and she often holds it wrapped neatly over her paws where she sits. Cloudstep is the reserved, thoughtful sort, who tends to observe goings-on quietly from the sidelines and keep her opinions to a murmur. It's not shyness that holds her tongue--when asked she speaks her mind freely and without reservation--but a simple calmness she's always possessed. A cat could be forgiven, then, for not knowing of her sense of humor. She doesn't take herself very seriously and, contrary to her somber, somewhat severe appearance, is very lenient when it comes to the rules. An apprentice could defy a direct order to her face and, so long as it makes her smile, she will let it be.
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Post by embercurse on Dec 30, 2018 20:25:25 GMT -5
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Post by willowsprint on Dec 30, 2018 23:12:09 GMT -5
[.p align="center"][.font color="#000000"][.strong]Apprentice H -- [.em][Hawkpaw][./em][./strong][./font][./p][.p align="center"][.font color="#000000"][.em]Light brown tabby she-cat with white muzzle, throat, belly and paws. She has big green eyes. Hot-headed. Ambitious. Vengeful.[./em][./font][./p][.p align="center"].
[./font][./p][.p align="center"][.font color="#000000"]Hawkpaw is a small brown tabby she-cat with white muzzle, throat, belly, and paws. She has big green eyes. Hawkpaw believes her parents to have been weak and that’s why they died, she holds PuffinClan responsible for her parent’s deaths , and seeks revenge on her clanmates causing Hawkpaw to have no parents and practically raise herself. Hawkpaw is ambitious to make PuffinClan a better place and to one day lead the clan into victory. She is quick to anger when any cat mentions her parents and her past no matter how harmless the comment was. She is currently hiding her true intentions until the time to strike comes.[./font][./p][.p align="center"][.font color="#000000"]
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Post by ʀᴀɪɴʟᴇᴀғ 🍁 on Dec 31, 2018 4:32:24 GMT -5
ah, yes! sorry, i should have explained! cardinalflight is who i believe rain decided to use for warrior n, as robinkit's unknown father ^.^ i think that's the right name, but i know for sure it was cardinal- something Cardinalflight is right! I plan on finishing him today. <3 |
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