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Post by 🍁Searipple101🍁 on Apr 4, 2019 14:13:48 GMT -5
phantomstar57 Makes it all the more surprising! I just like to foreshadow events like that a lot in stories. For major details or events, there's always at least a tiny tidbit of foreshadowing. Even the most insignificant seeming detail can be a huge hint with me, lol. But dang, writing that scene was intense. But may I ask what your favorite scene was?
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Post by phantomstar57 on Apr 4, 2019 14:45:50 GMT -5
phantomstar57 Makes it all the more surprising! I just like to foreshadow events like that a lot in stories. For major details or events, there's always at least a tiny tidbit of foreshadowing. Even the most insignificant seeming detail can be a huge hint with me, lol. But dang, writing that scene was intense. But may I ask what your favorite scene was? Hmmm hard to choose as it was a gripping chapter, but probably when Tide tried to warn his Clan. . .
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Post by 🍁Searipple101🍁 on Apr 5, 2019 12:10:47 GMT -5
Might I ask why that scene? Personally, I found him having to choose between leaving Storm to die or going with her to be my favorite. I just loved writing the raw emotion and tension that came with it. It was very dramatic. What makes him trying to warn his clan your favorite?
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Post by phantomstar57 on Apr 5, 2019 13:05:09 GMT -5
Might I ask why that scene? Personally, I found him having to choose between leaving Storm to die or going with her to be my favorite. I just loved writing the raw emotion and tension that came with it. It was very dramatic. What makes him trying to warn his clan your favorite? Not really sure but at 1st I thought he was just running away but he was trying to do the right thing, and his clan acted like damned fools. The one where he had to choose to leave Storm was a vrey very close 2nd.
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Post by 🍁Searipple101🍁 on Apr 5, 2019 13:42:47 GMT -5
phantomstar57 true, lol. His clan was definitely not kind to him, ever. And it must be frustrating for them to really think about it because if they had listened then so many more would have survived.
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Post by phantomstar57 on Apr 5, 2019 14:03:42 GMT -5
phantomstar57 true, lol. His clan was definitely not kind to him, ever. And it must be frustrating for them to really think about it because if they had listened then so many more would have survived. Esp after he watched Storm fall to her doom, and he tried to do right, and they treated him like dirt . . .
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Post by 🍁Searipple101🍁 on Apr 5, 2019 14:32:12 GMT -5
Don't worry, things will (probably) get better now!
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Post by Wolfyy- on Apr 9, 2019 13:44:12 GMT -5
I can't wait to see what happens next!
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Post by mintedstar/fur🦇 on Apr 15, 2019 13:56:10 GMT -5
Boop!
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Post by 🍁Searipple101🍁 on Apr 16, 2019 17:22:00 GMT -5
Apologies for the hiatus, but I don't know when I'll be back with a new chapter. Story isn't ending by any means, but things are hectic in school right now. I just need time. Thanks, all!
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Post by mintedstar/fur🦇 on Apr 16, 2019 19:35:22 GMT -5
<3 Take the time you need, Sea! Love ya and wishing you well!
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Post by 🍁Searipple101🍁 on Apr 22, 2019 14:28:34 GMT -5
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Post by mintedstar/fur🦇 on Apr 24, 2019 10:26:06 GMT -5
How are you doing, Sea?
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Post by 🍁Searipple101🍁 on Apr 25, 2019 10:09:54 GMT -5
Generally, stressing the hell out. I have soooo many exams back to back, but I'm almost done.
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Post by mintedstar/fur🦇 on Apr 25, 2019 20:25:26 GMT -5
You can do it Sea! I believe in you! <3 *sends tons of crossed fingers and good luck vibes*
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Post by 🍁Searipple101🍁 on Apr 26, 2019 11:16:21 GMT -5
Thanks, buddy <3
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Post by 🍁Searipple101🍁 on Apr 29, 2019 15:03:12 GMT -5
Bump
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Post by mintedstar/fur🦇 on Apr 29, 2019 20:19:31 GMT -5
I finally started picking up reading this again today and I think I'm in love with all the characters.
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Post by 🍁Searipple101🍁 on Apr 30, 2019 9:51:13 GMT -5
Whoo! Who's your favorite, I must ask? :3 But also, how are you?
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Post by mintedstar/fur🦇 on May 1, 2019 12:29:02 GMT -5
Our ghostly friend Storm, probably. XD I'm doing well! This semester has been my toughest so far - and the classes aren't even that hard. But I do have a job now and a fair amount to do. But I'm still managing to come on here, which was what I wanted and that's good. How are you?
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Post by 🍁Searipple101🍁 on May 3, 2019 9:34:00 GMT -5
That is good! Mind me asking what you do at your job?
I'm pretty decent. In the midst of finals week, so that's a thing. But doing my best.
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Post by mintedstar/fur🦇 on May 3, 2019 14:47:12 GMT -5
I'm an English tutor. So tutoring English for the most part, though I also run errands and couple other tasks. Same here. Finals week is intense. I have to finish studying for my math test and hoping to get out of the class with the same grade I have. But right now I'm free a bit. So I'm trying to draw.
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Post by 🍁Searipple101🍁 on May 3, 2019 23:09:46 GMT -5
Nice! I was pretty good at English in high school; still kind of am. Nice of you to tutor.
I get that. That's what I like to do when I have enough free time, too. I crave drawing.
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Post by mintedstar/fur🦇 on May 4, 2019 0:12:31 GMT -5
It's fun! I like helping people. I started doing a doodle on scrap paper today, ha ha.
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Post by 🍁Searipple101🍁 on May 5, 2019 18:40:26 GMT -5
Helping people is honestly great. That's part of the reason I chose my major, because it's all about helping people. You're definitely a good person if you wanna help others. :3
Doodle of what?
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Post by mintedstar/fur🦇 on May 6, 2019 14:31:15 GMT -5
Oh? What's your major?
A character called Jochen. Just the body shape at this point, but I forgot I had my notebook with me at the time. XD
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Post by 🍁Searipple101🍁 on May 6, 2019 14:37:21 GMT -5
Physical therapy assistant. Been waiting almost 4 hours to take my final and still waiting.
Nice! Body shape is definitely something good to practice, though.
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Post by mintedstar/fur🦇 on May 6, 2019 14:44:22 GMT -5
O.O That's a long time to wait for a finals.
It is! I need to practice expressions though. My anatomy is really starting to come together, but I need to work on facial expressions. Any tips or suggestions?
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Post by 🍁Searipple101🍁 on May 12, 2019 13:50:42 GMT -5
Only tips - keep practicing and analyze how others do it.
Also, story is still going! Really haven't had time to write, as I am in the home stretch for the next couple months before really graduating. I start clinical extremely soon, and I have to also study a lot more, too. The story may be in a hiatus now, but it is far from over!
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Post by mintedstar/fur🦇 on May 12, 2019 21:23:55 GMT -5
So, so far I've finally found a style of eye I like. Lets see if I can keep it for any length of time. XD Keep up the hard work, Sea!
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